基础篇9：户外活动（一）-2026年高考英语一轮复习读后续写讲练（全国通用）

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短语积累
1. cme swaggering twards sb.神气十足地向某人走来
2. give sb. a terrible beating狠狠地打了某人一顿
3. push thrugh the crwd挤过人群
4. welcme sb. with happy cries高声欢迎某人
5. rush after...追赶……
6. beat sb. withut mercy毫不留情地殴打某人
美句赏析
1.Spring is a 1t f rain, summer is ht, autumn is the best seasn in a year, it is cl and busy, winter is cld and smetimes snwy.
春天是多雨的，夏天是炎热的，秋天是一年中最好的季节，它很凉爽而且忙碌，冬天是寒冷的，有时会下雪。
2.That is an il painting f a landscape in spring.
那是一幅描绘春天景色的油画。
3.The travelers were beguiled by the beauty f the landscapes.
游客们被景色的美丽所陶醉。
4.Strng technical skills enhance a beautiful scene that cmpare traditinal and cntemprized architectural styles.
很强的技巧增强了景色的美感，在传统和现代化了的建筑风格之间形成对比。
5.A creek twines the vast green field just like the blue clr satin ribbn, a distant place mdelling is being plain, clr harmnius hut, a schl f beautiful mving rural scenery!
一条条小河宛如蓝色的缎带缠绕着一望无际的绿色田野，远处一座座造型古朴、色彩和谐的小屋，一派美丽动人的田园风光!
二、技法提炼-----增光的修辞手法(一)
在续写中若能适当运用比喻、拟人、夸张、排比等修辞手法进行细节描写，能增强文章的表现力和感染力。在平时的学习中，掌握积累修辞手法并学会灵活运用是提高读后续写的关键。本文详细解读高中阶段常用的英语修辞手法的使用，为了让大家更好地理解并使用各种修辞手法，我们同样为大家整理了一些优美句子。
修辞1：比喻
比喻是最常见的修辞手法，是以两种具有共同特征的事物或现象进行对比，从而更生动、更深刻地说明道理，增强语言的表现力。比喻分为明喻和和暗喻。例如：She is an angel.是暗喻；而She is as inncent as an angel.是明喻。
（1）明喻
直接表明本体和喻体的相似之处，常用的明喻标志词有 like, as, seem, , as if, as thugh, similar t等。基本格式是：本体+比喻词+喻体。
例如：The USA is like a big melting pt where immigrants f different cultures r races frm an integrated sciety.
The USA是本体，喻体是melting pt, 比喻词是like, 喻体和本体的相似之处都是拥有“包容”的特点。
句型赏析
①Lve is like the wind, yu can’t see it but yu can feel it.（情感描写）
爱如风，你看不见，但你能感受到它。
②The huse lks smething like a castle. （景物描写）
那房子看上去有点像一座城堡。(smething like...有点像……)
③Kyle lked at the test with a stare as blank as his ntebk.（情景描写）
Kyle茫然地看着试卷，头脑如同笔记本一样的空白。
（2）暗喻
也叫隐喻，本体喻体都出现，中间常用喻词“是”等连接，有时不用喻词。暗喻的典型形式为：甲是乙，而不用like, as等喻词。例如Mney smetimes is a pisn. 钱有时候是一种毒药。
句型赏析
①Her hair was a flwing glden river streaming dwn her shulders. （肖像描写）
她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。
②Life is an unexplred river, full f twists and turns. (哲理)
生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，充满曲折。
③I felt a lump in my thrat, tearing welling up in my eyes.（情感描写）
我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。
修辞2：夸张
运用丰富的想象，过激的言词，渲染和装饰客观事物，以达到强调的效果。
（1）使用数词或量词
= 1 \* GB3 ①My heart brke in abut a millin pieces. （情感描写） 我的心成了碎片。
= 2 \* GB3 ②She was half dead with fear. （情感描写） 她吓得半死。
= 3 \* GB3 ③The backpack weighs a tn. （情景描写） 背包很重。
（2）使用动词
= 1 \* GB3 ①The yung girl brught the huse dwn with her perfrmance. （情景描写）
这位年轻姑娘的表演博得了满堂喝彩。
= 2 \* GB3 ②It made me jump ut f my skin. （情感描写）
这让我吓得魂不附体。
= 3 \* GB3 ③I almst laughed my head ff. （情感描写）
我都快笑死了。
（3）使用形容词和副词
在日常对话中，人们常用形容词或者副词来修饰微不足道的事情，目的就是为了渲染一种气氛，强调某种意义的事情。
如副词：extremely；awfully；terribly；perfectly；hrribly等等
形容词：miserable; hrrible; splendid等等
例如：It’s beautiful, heavenly beautiful. (景物描写) 那儿很漂亮，就像天堂那般漂亮。
（4）使用介词短语
= 1 \* GB3 ①She went hme in a fld f tears. （情感描写）
她泪如泉涌地回家去了。
= 2 \* GB3 ②When they tld me the news, I was ver the mn/n the tp f the wrld. （情感描写）
当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。
= 3 \* GB3 ③He was bent ut f shape. （情感描写） 他大发雷霆。（气到变形）
三、典例分析
Ⅰ. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Althugh it was autumn, the snw was already beginning t fall in Tibet. Our legs were s heavy and cld that they felt like blcks f ice. Have yu ever seen snwmen ride bicycles? That’s what we lked like! Alng the way children dressed in lng wl cats stpped t lk at us. In the late afternn we fund it was s cld that ur water bttles frze. Hwever，the lakes shne like glass in the setting sun and lked wnderful. Wang Wei rde in frnt f me as usual. She is very reliable and I knew I didn’t need t encurage her. T climb the muntains was hard wrk but as we lked arund us, we were surprised by the view. We seemed t be able t see fr miles. At ne pint we were s high that we fund urselves cycling thrugh cluds. Then we began ging dwn the hills. It was great fun especially as it gradually became much warmer. In the valleys clrful butterflies flew arund us and we saw many yaks and sheep eating green grass. At this pint we had t change ur caps, cats, glves and trusers fr T-shirts and shrts.
In the early evening we always stp make camp. We put up tent and then we eat. After supper Wang Wei put her head dwn n her pillw and went t sleep but I stayed awake. At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. It was s quiet. There was almst n wind—nly the flames f ur fire fr cmpany.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
As I lay beneath the stars I thught abut hw far we had already traveled, ___________________________________
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We will reach Dali in Yunnan Prvince sn, where ur cusins Da Wei and Yu Hang will jin us. We can hardly wait t see them! _____________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
As I lay beneath the stars I thught abut hw far we had already travelled, and hw many unfrgettable experiences we’d had. I turned t lk at Wang Wei, my gd friend, wh was sleeping at the mment. Alng the way n matter what difficulties we meet, she will be brave t rush ahead. In her dream she must still be riding her bike. It’s amazing, the time f day seems t g thrugh fur seasns. I was t excited t sleep.
We will reach Dali in Yunnan Prvince sn, where ur cusins Da Wei and Yu Hang will jin us. We can hardly wait t see them. We haven’t seen each ther fr a lng time. I guess the first thing is t eat Yunnan snacks with them when we get there. Then we will plan the rad map f ur trip there. We lve nature and hiking, and we plan t g t Erhai t experience the lcal flavr.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要记叙了主人公和朋友一起骑行所见到的美丽风景以及夜晚扎营的心理描写。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是“当我躺在星空下，我思考我们走了多远。”后文应描写她和朋友王薇一起克服困难勇敢前行的故事。第二段开头是“我们很快就要到达云南大理了，在那里我们的堂兄会加入我们的骑行。后文应当描写和堂兄们相见后要做的事情。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子，为短文增色不少。如：hardly wait t see，experience the lcal flavr等高级词汇；高级句子I turned t lk at Wang Wei, my gd friend, wh was sleeping at the mment.中使用了非限制性定语从句，Alng the way n matter what difficulties we meet, she will be brave t rush ahead.中使用了让步状语从句。
Ⅱ. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lcated halfway up the Italy’s Apennine Muntain, abut 100 miles nrtheast f Rme, the Htel Rigpian has never been easy t reach. But its islatin(隔绝) nly adds t its appeal, attracting a great number f turists.
Snw began t fall acrss the Apennines in January and lasted fr days. Frm his hme in the Rme suburbs, Matrne watched the weather with cncern. He and his wife, Cicini, had planned an vernight getaway t the htel. But nw he wndered whether they shuld g. After phning the htel, they decided t make the trip. By the time they neared the htel six hurs later, they were battling a snwstrm. When they finally arrived, they were bth cld and exhausted. They checked int their rm and went t bed early.
As they awke the next day, they discvered that their difficulty had wrsened vernight. The cars in the parking lt were invisible. The phne and pwer lines were dwn. They were having breakfast when the htel began t shake. An earthquake with a magnitude(震级) f 5.7 had struck the muntain. “Get ut f here!” Matrne shuted t his wife. They headed quickly t the parking lt, where thers were digging their cars. Fifteen minutes after the first earthquake, anther quake hit, this ne measuring 5. 6.
With a dzen vehicles freed by nn, the guests set ff dwn the driveway. But when they reached the main rad, the path was blcked by a six-ft-high wall f snw. Matrne climbed ut f his car and investigated it. There was n rad in sight, “We’re trapped!” he tld his wife. S they had n chice but t make their way back t the htel.
As it was getting dark, they managed t be back. That was when the snw n the muntain began t slide. They heard the avalanche(雪崩) befre they saw it. The avalanche gathered speed and size, grabbing rcks and trees and anything else in its way dwn the muntain, tearing the htel frm its fundatin. When the avalanche came t a stp, thse caught inside the htel were left buried in the icy rcks and ruins.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
When Matrne came t himself, he was stuck in the darkness. ____________________________________________
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It was nt until the next mrning that the rescuers finally arrived. ___________________________________________
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【参考范文】
When Matrne came t himself, he was stuck in the darkness. Lying n his stmach, he realized with hrrr that he was under smething heavy and culdn’t mve at all. “Cicini! Cicini!” he called, but there was n respnse. He culd hear nthing f what was happening at the surface. The whle wrld was dead still. What he had t face was a terrible reality—they were buried alive. Despair washed ver him. He asked himself again and again, “Wh is ging t save us?”
It was nt until the next mrning that the rescuers finally arrived. Withut any hesitatin they gt dwn t detecting the remains f the htel and they were delighted t discver there was sign f life beneath. With great effrts they remved the thick snw and began cutting the rf. Then they carefully lwered themselves thrugh the hle they’d made. Suddenly, they heard smene crying fr help in a weak vice. It was Matrne. Later all the survivrs were rescued including Matrne’s wife. The cuple felt really lucky t be still alive!
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要记叙了在罗马的Matrne和他的妻子西西奥尼就住在位于意大利亚平宁山脉的一个酒店，他们遭遇了地震和暴风雪，被困在坍塌的酒店里最后被救的故事。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是“Matrne 醒来时，他被困在黑暗中。”后文应描写他们被雪困住的情况。第二段开头是“直到第二天早上营救队才赶到。”后文应描写Matrne和他的妻子最终得救的过程。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：With great effrts, gt dwn t, with hrrr等高级词汇；主语从句What he had t face was a terrible reality和强调句It was nt until the next mrning that the rescuers finally arrived.等高级句式的应用为文章增色不少。