提高篇5：体验大自然（二）-2026年高考英语一轮复习读后续写讲练（全国通用）

这是一份提高篇5：体验大自然（二）-2026年高考英语一轮复习读后续写讲练（全国通用），共6页。试卷主要包含了素材积累，写作技巧提炼——情绪心理描写，典例分析等内容，欢迎下载使用。
短语积累
1.热浪 heat wave
2.飓风、热带旋风、台风hurricanes, trpical cyclnes, typhns
3.冰暴 ice strm
4.龙卷风 trnad
5.冰河时代 ice age
6.森林大火 wildfire
7.流行病 epidemic
8.饥荒 famine
9.太阳耀斑 slar flare
10.干旱drught
句型赏析
1. The regin has been punded with trrential rain fr the past fur days.
这一地区在最近四天里连续遭受了暴雨的袭击。
2. But the fld seasn still has several weeks t run.
此时距离洪水季结束还有好几个星期。
3. Plice say there’s n way t knw fr sure hw many peple remain buried under a mudslide that struck the village ver the weekend.
警方表示，目前还无法确定周末袭击这个村庄的泥石流中究竟还有多少人被掩埋。
4. At last, firemen have put ut a big frest fire in Califrnia.
消防员们终于扑灭了加利福尼亚的一场森林大火。
5.Australia’s deadliest bushfire has killed nearly 100 peple, as the infern engulfed entire twns and destryed at least 700 hmes.
澳大利亚最致命的森林大火已经导致近100人死亡。如地狱般的大火吞噬了整个城镇，并烧毁了至少700所
房子。
二、写作技巧提炼——情绪心理描写（二）
情绪心理描写在文章表达中起着至关重要的作用，下面我们就来整理一下表达情绪心理的技巧和方法。
恐惧
1.At the sight f the fercius wlf, I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak. （嗓子发紧，膝盖发软）
2. At the sight f the fercius wlf, I frze with terrr, t scared t mve an inch. （吓呆了，不敢动弹）
震惊
1. Hearing the bad news, Mary fainted away n the spt and fell int uncnsciusness. （当场晕倒，陷入昏迷）
2. Hearing the bad news, Mary frze with shck, as if rted n the grund. （僵住了，像扎根在地上一样）
愤怒（生气）
1.Sheldn felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him.
（冲出房间；狠狠摔门）
2.Biling with rage, Sheldn shk his fist at me. （怒火中烧；挥舞拳头）
绝望
1. He gave up the attempt in despair. （他在绝望中放弃了这种尝试）
2. As the result f an accident, Tny was suddenly thrwn int a wrld f darkness and sank int hpelessness.
（投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望）
悲伤
1. Upn hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had truble speaking.
（悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话）
2.Upn hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst f sadness and culdn’t help crying bitterly.
（被一股悲伤感控制，忍不住哭泣）
愧疚
1. He went hme ashamed, chcking with anger and cnfusin. (哽咽着，内心充满困惑与气愤)
2. He was cnsumed with guilt after the accident. （心中充满愧疚）
失望
1. The news that he didn’t win prize immediately threw him int lw spirits. （精神不振，情绪低落）
2. She rebunded(弹回，振作) frm disappintment.
(她从失望中振作起来）
激动
1. When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement. （激动得两眼放光）
2. When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. （激动得心砰砰跳）
高兴
1. When his mther kissed him n the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were n tp f the wrld. （非常开心）
2. When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the rm.
（眉开眼笑，笑容照亮房间）
其它情绪
1.Hesitate 犹豫 Then she asked, hesitating, filled with anxius dubt.
2.Lnely 孤单 I feel abandned by the wrld.
3.Ashamed 羞愧 My thrat was dry and my face was burning up.
4.Jealus 嫉妒 This sense gives me a headache and makes me jump frm envy t severe hate.
5.Regret 遗憾 Driven by a sense f regret(受到遗憾的驱使) , he decided t...
6.Tired 疲劳 She had been tired enugh t sleep deeply and prfundly.
7.curius 好奇 Burning with curisity, she ran acrss the field after it.
三、典例分析
Ⅰ. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It is the rainy seasn all ver India. In the news, we have seen heavy rain hit many parts f the cuntry, which are already flded(被淹没).We have gt used t flds. Children really enjy the rain and the flds. They lve playing with water. Smetimes they jump in the water and are always happy t d it.
Hwever, this year it turned frm bad t wrse. All schls were clsed, and it was annunced a hliday by the gvernment the previus day. We stayed indrs and watched life thrugh ur windws. Water entered the flats n the grund flr. All the neighbrs helped peple living there mve their belngings and stayed with them. My friends were als staying with me. I was happy, because my parents usually dn’t allw me t stay in a friend’s place. But ur neighbrs were really sad. They had t bear the lss that the rain brught.
The traffic was cut ff by the terrible weather as well. In the mrning, the railway system and bus services almst came t a stp. Peple had t wait fr quite a lng time at the railway statins and bus stps. My mther, wh went by train, arrived three hurs late. And finally when she reached her ffice, it was als annunced a hliday. Later, t make the things wrse, many trains were cancelled, because the railways were full f water. My mther had t wait in the statin fr abut three hurs. Afterwards she decided t g t a friend’s huse a blck away frm her ffice that day, as there was hardly any transprtatin available t ur hme. She called t tell us abut it. She tld me that she walked all the way t her friend’s huse because she culd nt get n a bus, and that she was wet thrughly when she finally gt there. On the phne she sunded very tired.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
That night was s different withut my mther at hme. ___________________________________________________
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The next day the rain did nt stp. ____________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
That night was s different withut my mther at hme. I was a bit sad that my mther wuld nt cme hme that day. Lking ut f the windw, I culd see the drps f rain were huge. It was puring dwn int the air. My little sister started crying when she didn’t see my mther. My father tried t put her t sleep but in vain. I was s wrried: what if mther culd nt cme back hme tmrrw?
The next day the rain did nt stp. The children in ur flat went ut t flat paper bats, while the neighbrs staying at hme making ckies by themselves. The main dr f the flat was left pen; we did everything tgether. T ur relief, my mther finally came back at 12:00 by walking. My sister was happy and culdn’t help hugging her. This rainy seasn was s memrable.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲述了印度的雨季期间，洪水泛滥，所有的学校都停课了，政府宣布放假，作者所在的小区一楼公寓被淹了，交通也被恶劣的天气切断了。铁路系统和公共汽车服务几乎停了下来。人们不得不在火车站和公共汽车站等很长时间。作者妈妈乘火车去的，迟到了三个小时。到达办公室以后，公司宣布放假，但是火车道被淹了，火车取消了，妈妈不得不冒雨走到朋友家。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：没有妈妈在家的那个晚上是如此的不同。接下来可以写那天妈妈没回家，我有点难过。向窗外望去，我能看到巨大的雨点。大雨倾盆而下。我的小妹妹没看到我妈妈就哭了起来。我父亲试图使她入睡，但没有成功。我心里很着急，要是妈妈明天回不来怎么办？
第二段的开头是：第二天，雨没停。接下来可以写我们公寓里的孩子们去放纸船了，而邻居们留在家里自己做饼干。公寓的大门敞开着，我们一起做所有的事情。让我们松了一口气的是，母亲终于在12点步行回来了。我妹妹很高兴，忍不住拥抱她。这个雨季是如此令人难忘。
【点睛】
续写内容详略得当，使用了固定短语和高分句型。如：lk ut f，pur dwn，try t d，cme back，stay at hme，t ur relief，in vain，culdn’t help ding等固定短语。Lking ut f the windw, I culd see the drps f rain were huge.中使用了现在分词短语作状语，My little sister started crying when she didn’t see my mther.中使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
Ⅱ. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Alexis Vaughan, 17, sat quietly in the passenger seat f her dad’s car. She stared ut the windw at the Prestn, Idah, crnfields.
Alexis, a high schl student, let her eyes lazily scan the landscape fr wildlife. Still, she was terrified when a deer came int view abut 200 yards in frnt f them, just a few feet ff the rad. “Dad, there’s a deer, there!” Alexis said, rlling dwn the windw fr a better lk. It was a three-pint buck (雄鹿) — a male deer with sharp, three-prnged antlers (角) n each side f its head.
As the car mved clser, Alexis saw that the buck’s head was bent tward the grund. Then she heard a scream. A few secnds later, she saw an arm fly up near the buck’s head. Alexis realized the buck was attacking a wman. Sue Panter, a 44-year-ld mther, had been ut fr her mrning run. The buck had cme ut frm the tall crn and began fllwing her. Having lived in rural Idah fr years, Sue knew that mst bucks gt frightened by humans. But this buck edged clser, even when she threw at it with a handful f gravels (石子).
Sue went t pick up a lg t use fr self-defense, and the buck attacked her. It lifted her with its antlers (角) and threw her int the air. Sue culd feel the hrns punctured (刺穿) her leg and bld flwed dwn her leg. Within secnds, the buck had pushed her ff the rad and int the crnfield.
When Alexis and her father pulled up, the buck was rlling Sue like a rag dll. Alexis lked int the wman’s terrified eyes, and befre her father had even stpped the car, the 104-pund teenager jumped quickly ut f the car and dwn the slpe tward the buck. She was kicking and hitting it t get its attentin. Then Michael, her father, wh had fllwed his daughter, wrestled the buck away frm the wmen by hlding the antlers.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Alexis helped Sue up the slpe. ______________________________________________________________________
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Then she heard her father yell. _______________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Alexis helped Sue up the slpe. She immediately seated her int their car, and then applied a clean twel frm her bag t Sue’s right leg tightly, which wuld help t stp its bleeding. Obviusly, Sue was t shcked by the accident t let ut a wrd. Alexis talked sftly t cmfrt the terrified wman and thught abut hw t help her father.
Then she heard her father yell. Michael had been kncked t the grund, his right leg speared by the buck. Alexis grabbed a hammer frm the car and ran t where Michael lay n his back in the dirt. She beat the bucks head and neck, but the blws didn’t wrk. Standing ver her father, Alexis culd see that he was struggling t breathe. Turning the hammer arund, Alexis shut her eyes and hit the buck’s neck. When she pened her eyes, the buck was running away. Alexis gt in the driver’s seat and sped tward the hspital.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，17岁少女Alexis和父亲一起野外开车时，遇到一位44岁的中年女士Sue被公鹿袭击，Alexis和父亲停车后，父女二人合力去救Sue。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Alexis帮助Sue爬坡。本段应该写Alexis救了Sue，把Sue带到车里安抚她，并思考帮助父亲的方法。第二段开头是：然后她听到她父亲的喊声。本段应该写Alexis发现父亲被公鹿伤害了，Alexis想方设法救出父亲，最后开车去医院。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句式。如：t…t…, let ut, run away等高级词汇；She immediately seated her int their car, and then applied a clean twel frm her bag t Sue’s right leg tightly, which wuld help t stp its bleeding.中使用了非限制性定语从句，Standing ver her father, Alexis culd see that he was struggling t breathe.中使用了现在分词短语作状语，When she pened her eyes, the buck was running away.中使用了when引导的时间状语从句。