基础篇16：生活中的救援（一）-2026年高考英语一轮复习读后续写讲练（全国通用）

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与急救相关的短语（一）
1. first aid急救
2. fall ill生病
3. get injured受伤
4. save lives挽救生命
5. a barrier against ……的一道屏障
6. prevent…frm阻止做……
7. sense f tuch触觉
8. in the treatment f burns在治疗烧伤的过程中
9. third degree burns 三度烧伤
10. depend n根据，依据
句型赏析
1. The first and mst imprtant step in the treatment f burns is giving first aid.
治疗烧伤的第一步也是最重要的一步就是实施急救。
2. Burns are divided int three types, depending n the depth f skin damage.
根据皮肤损伤的深度，烧伤可分为三种类型。
3. If the injured is suffering frm secnd- r third-degree burns, there is an urgent need t take him/her t the hspital at nce.
如果受伤者遭受的是二级或三级烧伤，当务之急就是马上送他/她去医院。
4. When yu have cuts, clean the wund with the disinfectant.
当你有伤口时，用消毒剂清洗伤口。
5. If the wund is deeper, prtect the cuts by the bnd-aid r sterile dressings.
如果伤口较深，用创可贴或无菌纱布包扎伤口。
二、写作技巧提炼——“脸颊”和“嘴”用法鉴赏及练习
例句赏析——脸颊
1. He rested his cheek n her shulder.
他将面颊靠在她的肩上。
2. He felt his cheeks burning with shame.
他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
3. Her cheeks were wet with tears.
她泪流满面。
4. Clr rushed/flded/rse t her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.
意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。
5. A tear slid dwn her cheek.
一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。
例句赏析——嘴
1.She pened her muth t say smething.
她张开嘴要说什么。
2.He cvered his muth t hide his yawn.
他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。
3. Our muths drpped pen in surprise.
我们惊奇地张大了嘴。
4. My muth started watering when I smelled the fd.
闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。
5. His muth widened t a smile.
他咧开嘴笑了。
6. Suddenly a hand cupped her muth.
突然一只手扣住了她的嘴。
7. A smile played arund his muth.
他的嘴上挂着一丝笑意。
8. He began t stuff his muth with pasta.
他开始往嘴里塞意大利面。stuff [stʌf] 塞满；填塞
翻译练习
1. 他直起身，目瞪口呆地看着我。
2. 我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。
3. 他亲了亲她的脸颊，然后上了火车。
4. 疼痛和悲伤让她嘴巴发僵。stiff [stif] 僵硬的
5. 她呆住了，嘴张开着。
参考答案
1. He straightened up and lked at me, pen-muthed.
2. My heart was in my muth when I walked int her ffice.
3. He kissed her n bth cheeks and gt n the train.
4. Her muth grew stiff with pain and distress.
5. She frze, her muth hanging pen.
三、典例分析
Ⅰ. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Abut a half-mile behind ur Minnesta farm lay a pnd. In summer, my brther Harry and I wuld run thrugh a stand f ak trees t skip stnes there. The pnd wre a cllar f black mud. It was nt a place fr swimming.
In late summer, the pnd wuld be cvered by a green and bubbly scum(起泡的浮渣). Smetimes a strng, unpleasant smell rse frm it. We stayed away.
When winter came, the pnd was nce again an inviting place. One day when ice cvered it, Harry said t me, “Try walking acrss.”
The ice lked slid. N water shwed thrugh it, but I hesitated. “G ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. Yu’re lighter than I am. If the ice hlds, we can run and slide carefully n it. It’ll be fun.” I wanted t please Harry, and I thught abut the fun f a lng slide n the ice. I began t slide acrss the pnd.
In the middle f the pnd, the ice gave way with a sudden crack(裂缝)! I stretched ut(伸展) my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging n t the edge f a hle in the ice by arms utstretched n the ice. Frm my shulders dwn I hung in icy water. I thught f the bttm f the pnd. I knew it wuld be black and awful dwn there, full f mud and maybe rtting creatures.
I tried t climb ut f the hle, but when I gt a knee n the ice, it brke like windw glass. Again and again I tried t get ut. Again and again the ice brke int pieces. The hle widened. I was wearing a cat f heavy material. As it became cmpletely wet, it dragged me dwn. I was tired f the struggle and rested with my arms stretched ut n the ice.
I lked at Harry n shre. He seemed rted t the spt. “I can’t get ut!” I screamed when I caught sme breath.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Harry turned and ran frm the pnd. _________________________________________________________________
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The mment I crashed thrugh the kitchen dr, sbbing, Mum rushed ver. __________________________________
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【参考范文】
He turned and ran frm the pnd. Staring at his familiar figure ut f sight, I wndered: “Is he running fr help, r is he running away and leaving me sliding t the bttm?” After what seemed t be centuries f waiting, I was n the edge f cllapse. Suddenly, Harry came back with a branch, which was large, black, and v-shaped. He pushed the branch tward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged ut f the icy water by Harry. What a narrw escape! We stumbled hme, with my clthes dripping water.
The mment I crashed thrugh the kitchen dr, sbbing, Mum rushed ver. She helped me take ff my cat, and gave me a quick bath, then passed me a cup f milk t warm me up. I tearfully cmplained t her abut all that had happened and Harry was blamed fr getting me int such a truble. His head drping, Harry murdered an aplgy t me. I was cmfrted and relieved, but in fact, the pnd was still attractive t yung Harry and me, especially when winter came again.
【解析】
本文是一篇读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，有一年冬天，作者由于小时候与哥哥哈利到农场后面的一个池塘玩耍，池塘表面结了冰，哥哥认为冰面足够坚固，能够撑得住作者的体重，所以鼓励作者从冰面上走过去。作者很想取悦哥哥，同时也非常想感受滑冰的快乐，于是就尝试着划过去。突然，冰裂开了，作者掉进了冰窟窿，双肩以下都泡在冰冷的水里！
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是“他转身从池塘里跑开了。”因此，下文应该续写哥哥跑开了以后，作者独自挣扎求生的心理过程。要详细叙述哥哥返回后，带着一个树杈把作者从冰窟窿里面拉出来的情景。
第二段的开头是“当我哭着冲进厨房的门时，妈妈冲了过来。”因此，下文应该续写作者回到家后，妈妈首先匆忙帮作者脱掉冰冷的外套，给他洗个热水澡以及喝一杯热牛奶；然后，作者缓过来以后，委屈得向妈妈叙述事情发生的经过，妈妈责备哥哥没有照顾好作者；文章最后，作者认为，尽管经此劫难，当冬天到来，那个池塘对哥哥和他依然是极大的诱惑。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：run away，leave sb. ding，take ff等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Suddenly, Harry came back with a branch, which was large, black, and v-shaped.，with复合结构We stumbled hme, with my clthes dripping water.等高级句式。
Ⅱ. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At first, Michael Surrell didn’t see the black smke r flames shting frm the windws f his neighbrs’ hme. He and his wife had just parked arund the crner frm their wn huse in Allentwn, Pennsylvania, when they gt a call frm ne f his daughters: “The huse next dr is n fire!” He went t investigate. That’s when he saw a wman crying desperately n their prch.
“The baby’s in there!” the wman cried. Thugh the fire department had been called, Surrell, then 64, instinctively ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-ld Tiara Rberts, the wman’s granddaughter.
Entering the burning huse was like “running int a bucket f black paint,” Surrell says. The thick smke caused him t stumble blindly arund, burned his eyes, and made it impssible t breathe. The cnditins wuld have been dangerus t anyne, but fr Surrell, wh has chrnic bstructive pulmnary disease(慢性阻塞性肺病), they were life-threatening.
After a few minutes in the smke-filled huse, he retreated utside t catch his breath. Surrell knew he culdn’t hld his breath fr lng. Taking a deep breath, he went in a secnd time. The darkness was verwhelming. Yet because the huse had a similar layut(布局) t his, he fund the stairs and made it t the secnd flr. He turned t the right and was met by intense heat. He was already ut f breath.
His thrat and lungs burned as if he’d breathed in fire instead f the smke and st in the air. Every blink stung his eyes. All he culd hear was the crackling and ppping f burning wd. Then a sft but distinct man(呻吟声) emerged. Still unable t see, Surrell fell t his knees n the ht wd flr. He crawled tward the sund, feeling arund fr any sign f the girl.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Finally, he tuched smething—a she, then an ankle. ____________________________________________________
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Surrell wke up in the hspital a cuple f days later. ____________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Finally, he tuched smething—a she, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara tward him. Her bdy was weak and she wasn’t breathing. He hugged her int his arms and std. He felt the heat f the flames n his cheeks. Turning, he fught thrugh the smke and ran blindly int the blackness. Surrell put Tiara dwn n the prch. He started CPR—the first time he’d ever dne s. Sn she pened her eyes and tk a breath n her wn. Surrel’s thrat clsed ff.
Surrell wke up in the hspital a cuple f days later. He suffered severe burns t his windpipe and the upper prtin f his lungs. He spent ver a week in the hspital. The fire wrsened Surrell’s pulmnary cnditin, and he feels the effects even tw years later. As a result, he takes extra medicatin that helps pen his airways. “It’s a small price t pay,” he says. “I’d d it again in a heartbeat. Wuldn’t give it a secnd thught.”
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。文章讲述了Michael Surrell家附近的一所房子着火了，邻居家的孙女被困火场，Michael Surrel虽然有慢性阻塞性肺病，但他还是义无反顾地冲进火场救出了邻居的孙女，自己也受伤了。
【详解】
文章续写第一段提到“最终他摸到了什么东西——先是一只鞋，接着是脚踝。”根据文章最后一段最后一句提到“He crawled tward the sund, feeling arund fr any sign f the girl.” 他一直在寻找着女孩的踪迹，由此可以判断续写第一段应继续描写Michael Surrel为找到女孩所做出的努力，以及找到女孩后的状态等。
续写第二段则提到“几天后Surrell在医院醒来。”Surrell是在医院里醒来的，说明Surrell受了非常严重的伤。第二段则可以描写Surrell救人后的心理活动等。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：hugged her int his arms，tk a breath，secnd thught等高级词汇；现在分词短语作状语：Turning, he fught thrugh the smke and ran blindly int the blackness.限制性定语从句：As a result, he takes extra medicatin that helps pen his airways.等高级句子。