高考英语备考一轮复习资料读后续写破解与篇章讲义

这是一份高考英语备考一轮复习资料读后续写破解与篇章讲义，共18页。
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受伤
"He bit me!" Bruce hissed, the wrds muffled arund the thumb shved in his muth.
“他咬我!”布鲁斯嘶嘶地说，他的话因为含在嘴里的手指而模糊不清。
Ivan elbwed him sharply in the ribs and Gilbert clutched his side, cughing and wincing.
伊凡狠狠地用胳膊肘捅了他的肋骨，吉尔伯特按住他的侧腹，咳嗽着畏缩。
Gayley had dubled ver int smething like the fetal psitin, his hands pressing n the wund. It wasn't ding much gd. He was lsing a lt f bld. He graned, nly semi-cnscius. They wuldn't be able t mve him.
格利弯下腰来，蜷缩成胎儿状，双手压在伤口上。这并没有带来什么好处。他正在大量失血。他呻吟着，只是半清醒的状态。他们无法移动他。
Gayley stirred. With a wheeze f pain, he turned his head, facing in the same directin Lucifer was staring.
Gayley动了一下。伴随着一阵痛苦的喘息，他转过头来，面对着路西法注视的方向。
Clint had just gtten back frm a missin gne wrng. Arm in a sling, paler than ne wuld cnsider healthy and plagued with a terrible sunding cugh, Bartn shrugged ff his teammates cncern – as always.
克林特刚从一个失败的任务中回来。手臂吊着绷带，面色苍白，咳嗽严重。巴顿像往常一样，对队友的关心不屑一顾。
France suddenly swned, nearly cllapsing, and had t be caught by Britain.
弗朗西斯突然昏倒，几近崩溃，不得不被亚瑟抓住。
It started small.
There was a nagging ache in his chest, phantm pain frm where the bullets had pierced his flesh, in the verwritten timeline that never will be.
刚开始只是轻微的疼痛。
他的胸口有一种挥之不去的疼痛，那是在被重写的时间线里子弹穿过他身体的地方产生的幻觉般的疼痛。
He stumbled back frm the cunter, lungs burning, and flailed t grab nt the edge f the kitchen island, barely able t keep balance. Five squeezed his eyes shut, and desperately willed himself t stp, t get his bdy back under cntrl, even as he shk with tremrs.
他从柜台上踉踉跄跄地走了回来，肺里火辣辣的。他拼命地想抓住岛式厨房的边缘，几乎无法保持平衡。五号紧紧地闭上了他的眼睛，拼命地强迫自己停下来，让自己的身体恢复控制，尽管他在颤抖。
The pain struck him again, stabbing deep in his chest, cutting him ff mid-sentence. He chked n a breath and brke dwn with rattling cughs, shaking as his bdy rebelled against him.
疼痛再次袭来，深深刺进他的胸膛，打断了他的话。他喘不过气来，咳嗽得直打颤，身体在反抗。
And then, everything, the pain, the nise, the terrr, all f it slipped int the dark, as the blackness dragged him under.
然后，所有的一切，痛苦，噪音，恐惧，所有的一切都消失在黑暗中，黑暗将他拖入水中。
生病
Dean lked awful, a light sheen f sweat cvered his frehead, his eyes lked sunken and had dark purple bags underneath, he lked pale as a sheet. Sam brught the back f his hand t his lder brther's frehead and frwned at the excessive warmth. He didn't need a thermmeter t knw Dean was running s fever.
迪安看上去很可怕，额头上冒出了一层淡淡的汗珠，眼睛深陷，下面是深紫色的眼袋，脸色苍白得像一张床单。萨姆把手背放在哥哥的额头上，对这种过分的温暖皱起了眉头。他不需要温度计就知道迪安在发烧。
被吸血鬼咬了
It was a cl night, but I felt like I was n fire. My arm culd have been saking in acid. It up my bdy, sucking any air frm my lungs - it hurt s fucking bad. Hurs past. I was gasping like I was a fish n dry land; I was sweating, crying, my head ached like a bitch, the stars were spinning while the trees started flding in n me. Vices frm the camp were s lud, but the light was s far away. My arm where he bit me went cld, unmvable, and I just gaped up at the sky. I was s tired. I remember feeling s heavy, but I was flating. I was alne...
那是一个凉爽的夜晚，但我感觉自己像着火了一样。我的胳膊可能浸在酸里了。它爬上了我的身体，吸干了我肺里的空气——疼得他妈的厉害。几个小时过去了。我像一条在陆地上的鱼一样喘着气;我满头大汗，嚎啕大哭，头疼得像个婊子，星星在旋转，树木开始向我靠拢。营地里传来的声音那么大，但灯光又那么远。我那被他咬了一口的手臂变得冰冷，无法移动，我只能目瞪口呆地望着天空。我太累了。我记得我感到很沉重，但我在漂浮。我独自一人……
恐慌发作
"What's the matter, dearest?" But the pale man just shk his head, drpped his cigarette and clung t him—burying his face in the blnd's neck, his shulders shaking, hands clutching at fabric. The blnd man blinked, expressin shifting frm awkward t wrried and Jdy mved frward, cncern in her vice, hands mving t help.
“怎么了，亲爱的?”但那个苍白的男人只是摇了摇头，扔掉了香烟，贴着他——把脸埋在金发男人的脖子上，肩膀颤抖，双手抓着布料。那个金发男人眨了眨眼睛，表情从尴尬变成了担心。乔迪走上前，声音里透着关切，伸手想要帮助他。
移动
With a grunt and a frustrated sigh, Tny cntinued t army crawl thrugh the vent.
托尼哼了一声，沮丧地叹了口气，继续从通风孔里爬过去。
Frst glittered n the grund as he slwly, absently placed ne ft after the ther n the dimly lit path in St. James’s Park.
他慢慢地、漫不经心地一步步走在圣詹姆斯公园灯光昏暗的小路上，地上的霜闪闪发光。
Ivan batted lw hanging twigs and leaves ut f his way, careful nt t trip ver anything.
伊万把低垂的树枝和树叶扔到一边，小心翼翼地不被任何东西绊倒。
S I walked abut the camp t get my mind ff f it, even thugh mre walking was exactly the ppsite f what my legs wanted t d.
所以我在营地里走了一圈，把我的注意力从它身上移开，尽管更多的行走和我的腿想做的完全相反。
He climbed dwn the stne stairs and stepped ut frm behind the statue, walking the halls and scanning the utside fr any prf ne f the kids had been there. But t n avail, his eyes didn't spt any f the children as he made his way dwn t the Hgwarts entrance.
他爬下石阶，从雕像后面出来，在大厅里踱来踱去，看看外面有没有孩子来过的痕迹。但是没有用，当他走向霍格沃茨的入口时，他的眼睛没有看到一个孩子。
I had t walk back here under that immense grey curtain f rain.
我不得不在那巨大的灰色雨幕下走回来。
告别
Antni lightly smacked Gilbert's arm. “Be careful, kay?”
“I will.” Gilbert hugged him, patting back rughly, and then let g.
安东尼奥轻轻地拍了一下吉尔伯特的胳膊。“小心点，好吗?”
“我会的。吉尔伯特抱着他，草草地拍了拍他的后背，然后松开手。
he gave his brther a final hug in farewell.
告别时，他给了哥哥最后一个拥抱。/他给了哥哥最后一个拥抱向他告别
睡觉／醒来
Alfred let ut anther jaw splitting yawn just as the bus turned the crner. Tears frmed in the crners f his eyes, but the stretch f his muscles did nthing t alleviate the sleepiness that cluded his mind
就在公共汽车拐弯的时候，阿尔弗雷德又打了个哈欠。泪水在他的眼角里打转，但他的肌肉的伸展并没有减轻他迷糊的睡意。
he saw Gilbert slumped against the wall, Matthew cuddled against his chest, as they bth slept. He grunted sftly, sitting up, and rlled his neck and shulders t wrk ut kinks.
他看到吉尔伯特靠在墙上，马修依偎在他的胸前，他们都睡着了。他轻轻地哼了一声，坐了起来，转动着脖子和肩膀，放松僵硬的肌肉。
I pushed myself up t a sitting psitin and lked him in the eye. He bemusingly blinked back at me. “Thank yu fr a gd Samhuin. I had a pleasant time,” I tld him, and kissed his cheek just next t his eye. Then I fell back dwn and finished my nap n his legs.
我勉强坐起来，看着他的眼睛。他困惑地对我眨了眨眼睛。“谢谢你的善举。我对他说，并在他眼睛旁边的脸颊上亲了一下。然后我又倒下来，在他腿上睡了个午觉。
失败
Hadria's metallic cat was sitting very stiffly n her desk, even as she tried t spell it t mve, but t n avail.
哈德莉亚的那只金属猫僵硬地坐在她的桌子上，尽管她试图施咒让它动起来，但毫无效果。
对话
They dn't sing, but the afternn melts away in a flurry f cnversatin abut shw chir and her hair and his hair (he really liked talking abut his hair) and cllege and why little children felt the need t scream s ludly.
他们不唱歌，但午后的时光却在一大堆谈话中消逝了，这些谈话涉及唱诗班表演、她的头发、他的头发(他很喜欢谈论他的头发)、大学生活，以及为什么小孩子需要大声尖叫。
"Hell." A rather cld vice drawled ut in a very British accent, stpping all three dead in their tracks.
“你好。”一个相当冷漠的声音拖长地说，带着很重的英国口音，三个人一下子僵在原地。
Lking at the thers and then himself, Five uttered a single wrd.
5号看了看别人，又看了看自己，说了一个词。
“I- Yu dn’t-” Dieg said, indignant, befre he lked away, lips pursed in annyance. “Shut up, Five.”
“我——你不要——”迭戈生气地说，然后他把目光移开，恼怒地撅起了嘴。“闭嘴,五号。”
【光说不做假把式，让我们利用上面的金句来解决下面的五道读后续写吧！每一道题要善用金句来解决！】
1．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kenneth Hansen, 46, was wrking late ne May evening tw years ag, putting the last pieces f bard n a huse in Gratit Cunty, Michigan. He saw a by crazily waving his arms. Then Hansen heard screaming. Standing n the back prch (门廊)f the huse next dr was the little by screaming "Help!", while fur dgs barked and ran after him. Hansen knew little abut the by. After all, the by was just visiting his grandfather during hlidays.
At first, Hansen thught it was just a dgfight. Then alarm bells went ff in his head. The nises they made sunded like what dgs d when they're biting smething. His feeling prved right when he watched in hrrr as they sank in their teeth and bit at the by's leg.
Then, Hansen realized the by was in a great danger. He raced acrss the grass, jumped ver a six-ft-high fence and landed in the neighbr's yard. He shuted at the dgs, but they ignred him. He screamed and yelled luder until they let g just lng enugh fr Hensn t grab the eight-year-ld by, Ethan. But he culdn't grab him under his arms, which wuld make it harder t run, because the by was badly injured. Luckily, He fund a lng wden stick at the crner. Hensn used it t drive the dgs away and held the by int his arms.
Hansen ran fast acrss the yard, and the dgs fllwed him. Hansen ran t the back deck (木制平台). S did the dgs. When he reached the tp, he pulled n a curtyard dr, but it wuldn't pen. At that time, a dg grabbed Ethan's ft again t get him back frm Hansen. Then Hansen pulled n a secnd dr. It sprang pen. He rushed inside the huse, fllwed clsely by the dgs scratching (抓)at his legs. He pened a bedrm dr a crack, pushed Ethan in quickly, then clsed it immediately.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Turning arund, Hansen faced the dgs.
Mnths later, Ethan was fully recvered.
2．阅读下列材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写的词数应为150左右。
Every girl dreams and Bnnie is n exceptin. When Bnnie was yung, she had read dzens f bks n hw t be a ballerina(芭蕾舞者), Swan Lake(天鹅湖)was her favrite and she had always wanted t becme the white swan in it. Later, she started taking ballet(芭蕾)lessns and all her teachers cnfirmed she was a gd student. In the hpe f becming a great ballerina, she trained hard n a daily basis.
One day, she saw an advertisement that a famus ballerina trupe(舞团)wuld be perfrming in her hmetwn. And the whle twn was talking abut the trupe leader wh was said t be the best ballet dancer in the wrld. Her thughts ran wild. "I must meet the leader f the trupe and shw him my skills" she said t herself.
She dressed herself in her best ballerina cstume and managed t slip(溜)in the backstage withut being nticed. T her luck, the leader entered the dressing rm and she timidly kncked at the dr "Cme in" said a gentle vice. Opening the dr, Bnnie saw a tall and slim man with a calm lk n his face. She bravely apprached him and handed him a bunch f red rses and in her excitement the thrns(刺)pricked(刺痛)her hand but she did nt pay much attentin t the pain.
The leader bserved her actin as she tld him her dream. "Alright, yu dance and I will give yu my advice."
But half way thrugh the dance he stpped her and said, "I'm srry yu're nt gd enugh!" On hearing this, Bnnie 's eyes pened wide in shck. It was secnds befre she culd absrb what was said t her, "Nt gd enugh?!" she asked in disbelief. "Yes, nt gd enugh." replied the leader. Biled in shame(羞)and rage(怒), Bnnie ran ut f the dressing rm as fast as her legs culd carry her. The leader's wrds were a huge blw t her cnfidence. Despite being s sad, she didn't give up her dream.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Six mnths later, she heard that the same ballet trupe was perfrming in her twn again.
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Within three years, Bnnie had becme a famus ballerina as she wanted.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t cntrl theirs. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn’t.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.
It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意：
Para 1：Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
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Para 2：A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university.
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4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cld, snwy evening. Tmmy was running as fast as he culd, fcused n nthing but his destinatin----the shp n the street crner. Tw weeks ag he saw figurines(小塑像) f Marvel superheres n the shelves and felt he had t have ne. He’s been walking the neighbr’s dg ever since then t earn mney t fulfil his little dream. He was s excited and barely nticing the wrld arund him. Maybe that’s why he tripped ver the legs f a hmeless wman, wh was sitting n the pavement, her back against the wall. He murmured(低语) "srry" and mved n t his destinatin.
Once he entered the shp, he went straight t the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thr, Captain America, Irn Man, and many mre----all f his admired heres. With his heart punding like crazy he reached fr Spiderman.
“Yu like these, true believer?”
Tmmy turned arund. An ld man was standing behind him with a wide smile n his face.
“Y-yes, …Yes, they’re awesme!” answered Tmmy. “They’re strng and fast and help ther peple a lt ...”the by lked at figurines in admiratin. “I wish I culd be a superher t.”
“Then becme ne!” said the ld man.
“Hw?” Tmmy asked in surprise. “I dn’t have any superpwers.”
“And why wuld yu need them?” the ld man smiled. Seeing the cnfusin n the by's face, he squatted(蹲下) and put his hands n Tmmy's arms. “Did yu knw that shpkeeper lady ver there has a disabled husband? She’s been wrking hard and taking care f him fr years. I’ve never heard a wrd f cmplaint frm her. And this persn ---” he pinted at a redhead man, wh just entered the shp. “He’s a firefighter; he’s saved cuntless lives. He never gives up, n matter hw dangerus the situatin seems t be.”
The ld man lked Tmmy in the eyes and smiled. “Yu dn’t need a superpwer t be a her fr smene else. The path f a superher starts nt in the mind, nt in the muscles, but in the heart.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tmmy lwered his head and lked at his shes thinking intensely.
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The hmeless wman was right there, where he saw her last time.
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5．It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn n my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze(吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. "Dn’t be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven(编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. ____________
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【答案】One pssible versin：
Turning arund, Hansen faced the dgs. He thught he had t get the dgs utside. Hansen screamed, even drve them arund the huse, until he gt them ut f the huse and shut the glass dr. The dgs sat ut-side, glaring at him. Suddenly, the dr flew pen. There std Ethan's grandfather, the huse wner, checking n Ethan. Ethan was in bad situatin. S Hansn called an ambulance immediately. The ambulance arrived sn, and Ethan was sent t the hspital immediately.
Mnths later, Ethan was fully recvered. When he recalled what happened that day, he still felt frightened. Hwever, he remembered Hansn, his her, saved him. S he thanked Hansn with a prize. When rewarded the prize, Hansen said, "I didn't even think. I just was trying t help the by." Actually, Hansen was uncmfrtable with the "her" title. It was still unclear what sent the dgs int the crazy mde, but Ethan knew it's Hansen's bravery and kindness that saved his life.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了汉森不惧危险救下一个被狗咬着腿的小男孩的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“汉森转过身来，面对着狗。”可知，第一段可描写汉森冒着危险斗智恶犬的场面。
②由第二段首句内容“几个月后，伊森完全康复了。”可知，第二段可描写伊森感谢汉森。
2.续写线索：斗智恶犬——送医院——康复——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①获奖：reward the prize/award
②带出：get/bring sb ut f
情绪类
①感谢：shw his appreciatin/shw his gratitude/be grateful
②陷入疯狂：send sb. int the crazy mde/g crazy
【点睛】[高分句型1] The dgs sat ut-side, glaring at him.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。
[高分句型2] When he recalled what happened that day, he still felt frightened.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型3] It was still unclear what sent the dgs int the crazy mde, but Ethan knew it's Hansen's bravery and kindness that saved his life.这句话运用了强调句。
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Six mnths later, she heard that the same ballet trupe was perfrming in her twn again. Bitter memries f the leader's harsh wrds came flding back t her. This time she was determined t find ut why the leader had tld her she was nt gd enugh when all her teachers thught therwise. He replied, “I tell this t every student.” She angrily sht back, “Yu've ruined my life!” Then she gt a further shck, “I remember yur gift f rses and hw the thrns had pricked yur fingers but yu carried n bravely.” He said if she did nt give up s easily, it might be a different stry.
Within three years, Bnnie had becme a famus ballerina as she wanted. Guided by the trupe leader, she succeeded in attaining the leading psitin in the Swan Lake. Her elegant appearance and excellent perfrmance n the stage was s amazing that she gained pwer ver all the audiences. Despite being s famus, Bnnie still felt nervus smetimes. But ne wrd wuld always calm her dwn: “If yu want t pick rses, dn’t be afraid f the thrns.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Bnnie的梦想是成为一名伟大的芭蕾舞演员，一天，她看到一则广告，说一个著名的芭蕾舞团将在她的家乡表演。她找到了团长，她勇敢地走近他，递给他一束红玫瑰。激动之下，玫瑰的刺扎到了她的手，但她并没有太在意它的痛，她向团长展示了自己的舞蹈才能。团长说她跳的不够好，在羞愧和愤怒中，Bnnie飞快地跑出了更衣室。领导的话对她的信心是一个巨大的打击。尽管如此悲伤，她没有放弃她的梦想。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“六个月后，她听说那个芭蕾舞团又在她的镇上演出了”可知，第一段可以继续写没有放弃梦想的Bnnie 又去找团长，这次她决心要弄清楚为什么领导说她不够好以及他们之间的对话。
②.由第二段首句内容“三年之内，Bnnie如愿以偿地成为了一名著名的芭蕾舞演员。”可知，第二段可续写Bnnie成功后的状态和心理、情感变化。
2.续写线索：找到团长问清楚原因——获得了成功——有时会感到紧张——一句话激励着她
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.下定决心做某事：be determined t d sth /make up ne’s mind t d sth
②.放弃：give up/abandn
③.获得：gain/acquire/attain
情绪类
①.害怕的：afraid/frightened
②.紧张的：nervus/anxius
[点睛]
[高分句型1].Her elegant appearance and excellent perfrmance n the stage was s amazing that she gained pwer ver all the audiences. （运用了s…that引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]. If yu want t pick rses, dn’t be afraid f the thrns. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
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【答案】Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. She was all white with shining big eyes, a black spt n its frehead making it mre attractive. Her new wners gave her a new name, Sptty. Mm tk her ut f the bx carefully, putting her beside Pppy’s feet. Pppy’s eyes were first filled with surprise and curisity and then brightened with jy. Lking at this, the parents relieved because Pppy accepted Sptty and their plan wrked.
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. The first thing that caught his attentin was the happy nise made by Pppy and anther dg.When finding the by back hme frm university, Pppy was verjyed and intrduced Sptty t him. The three, immediately became just ne slid alliance. Frm their stry we can see the fact that happiness between three is much mre than between tw r just having it alne.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写文章。文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Pppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Pppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Pppy买一条小狗作伴。
【详解】1. 第一步理解整篇文章，包括一些细节：一位少年去上大学，父母送他到大学里，他与家人和狗狗Pppy伤心地告别。他们约定一个月后回家见面。男孩走后，狗狗Pppy对一切都失去了兴趣：最爱的食物，最爱的玩具，甚至是出门散步，少年的父母为了让狗狗振作起来用尽办法，但是事情没有好转。少年的父母知道孩子会回来，而狗狗并不明白。后来妈妈想出一个主意：再养一只小狗，给Pppy作伴，pppy当时的反应：当她看到盒子时，她停下了。她把鼻子放在上面。她的尾巴开始摆动得越来越慢，然后越来越快，因为她闻到了气味。
2. 续写思路，第一段的首句Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.注意句子中的一个形容词sweet, little,盒子里的狗狗小小的，非常可爱，后面续写可以描述两只狗狗很快建立起友谊，Pppy不再情绪低落，小狗狗也很快融入这个家庭。第二段首句为A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. 可以续写为男孩加入到两个狗狗的友谊中，一人两狗相处的非常愉快，最后主题升华为：一人不能独享快乐，两人分享才能快乐，三人分享会有加倍的快乐。
3. 文本中划线的单词，Pppy, university, parents, back, cheerful 都是续写中必需的单词，其他划线单词根据续写情节选择使用。整体为一般过去时，注意句式的变化，各类从句和非谓语动词的使用。
4. 第一段续写可以细节描述小狗狗的可爱，粘人，以至于伤心的Pppy不得不喜欢上了他，忘记了自己的悲伤，男孩的父母也高兴地松了一口气。字数约70-80单词。第二段续写可以描述少年回家之后，见到Pppy和小狗狗之后的兴奋，原先两个伙伴分享的乐事变成了三个伙伴一起分享。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：The first thing that caught his attentin was the happy nise made by Pppy and anther dg.这句话运用了that引导的定语从句； Frm their stry we can see the fact that happiness between three is much mre than between tw r just having it alne.这句话运用了that引导的同位语从句；文章也使用了一些固定词组，如be filled with; take…ut f等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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Tmmy lwered his head and lked at his shes thinking intensely. Finally he raised his head. "S I am suppsed t...” he stpped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alne. He turned his head left and right, but the ld man was nwhere t be seen. His eyes lit up---- he already had an idea f what he shuld d. He lked at figurines fr the last time and mved twards the cunter. "Tw sandwiches and a cup f tea please, "he said, and then returned, fd in hand.
The hmeless wman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tmmy came clser and carefully gave the wman his buys. Her eyes pened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank yu," she whispered. Tmmy bwed his head, turned arund and went back hme. He was mving faster and faster and finally he started t run. Strange energy filling his bdy made him feel like he culd fly. When he finally stpped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn’t feel tired. He smiled happily --- it was a wnderful feeling. And nthing culd stp it.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了汤米想成为超级英雄，在一个老人的开导下他学会了用自己的行动去帮助他人的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“汤米低下头，看着自己的鞋子，冥思苦想。”可知，第一段可描写汤米懂得了真正超级英雄的含义。
②由第二段首句内容“那个无家可归的女人就在那里，他最后一次见到她的地方。”可知，第二段可描写汤米帮助了那个女人。
2.续写线索：领悟——帮助——感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.开始：start/begin/cmmence
②.充满：be filled with/be full f
情绪类
①.感谢：Thank fr/shw ne’s appreciatin/shw ne’s gratitude/be grateful
②.积极：psitive attitude/act psitively
【点睛】[高分句型1]. His eyes lit up---- he already had an idea f what he shuld d.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Strange energy filling his bdy made him feel like he culd fly.这句话运用了现在分词作定语。
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. My hrse turned t the left t avid the little rabbit as I held n tightly and tried nt t fall. Then my dad turned arund and shuted, “Hld n!” All f a sudden the hrse began t run. My dad tried t keep up behind us. Fr a few minutes my hrse slwed dwn t a trt and then stpped beside a river. I lked arund and realized that we were way ff the track.
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. Luckily the stars came ut and gave us a little light when we were lking fr the way t the farm huse. After what must have been several hurs, we suddenly heard the sund f sheep in the distance. My dad and I bth rde ur hrses twards the sund f the sheep. As we gt clser we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us ver. What a night!
【详解】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。
通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。
根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。
第二段首句是We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。