2026年中考英语一轮重点专题突破讲练：12书面表达（全国通用）

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2. 旅行方式：乘公共汽车；
3. 游玩安排：(1) 参观博物馆；(2) 游览水洞沟遗址；(3) 享受宁夏美食；(4) …… (至少补充两点)
要求：1. 文章须包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：museum (博物馆) Water Carves Gully Site (水洞沟遗址)
Dear David,
Hw’s every thing ging? Let me tell yu my trip t The Water Carves Gully Site.
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Lk frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2．（2025·宁夏中卫·一模）假如你是李雷，你们班级正就“保护地球，从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。请根据表格内容，谈谈你周边的环境问题，在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的，以及你这样做的感受。
提示词语：减少reduce；尾气gas
Many peple pay little attentin t prtecting ur envirnment, s pllutin is mre and mre serius. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2025·甘肃陇南·三模）近来，多地中小学将课间时长从原来的十分钟延长至十五分钟，旨在鼓励学生“动起来”。请根据以下思维导图提示，以“Hw t Make Gd Use f Break Time”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈充分利用好课间时间的目的和建议。
要求：1.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点；
Purpses
Suggestins
2.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
Hw t Make Gd Use f Break Time
In China, mst schls have a 10-minute break between classes. Recently, the break time has been increased t 15 minutes in many cities.
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4．（2025·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·三模）为积极响应国家“体重管理年”计划（2024—2027），你所在的英语社团近期将开展“Healthy Weight, Healthy China”主题活动。请根据社团提供的自检表撰写一篇英语短文，向成员分享自己的体重管理方面的具体表现和下一步计划。
写作要求：
1. 80—100词，开头已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 包含所提示要点，并适当进行拓展。
My weight management is (gd/ s-s/ pr)…
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5．（2025·湖南长沙·三模）为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间，增强时间管理意识，以在高效复习的同时平衡好自己的学习和生活，使我们的时间得到充分利用。学校英语社团以“Manage yur Time Wisely”为题向学生征文。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示，适当拓展，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对合理管理自己时间的看法。
Manage yur Time Wisely
Time management plays an imprtant rle in ur life.
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6．（2025·江西九江·模拟预测）为激发同学们的学习热情，提高同学们的创造力，你校正开展“师生携手，作业创新”活动。英语组老师已设计多种形式的作业，现征求同学意见，评选出兼具趣味性、实效性和创新性且受大家喜爱的课后作业。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。
写作要点：
要求：
1．短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3．词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I’m glad there are s many kinds f interesting English hmewrk in the hmewrk list. Amng them, I like
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7．（2025·广东广州·三模）近来，多地的中小学将课间时长从原来的十分钟延长至十五分钟，旨在鼓励学生“动起来”。校英语社团以“Lnger Breaks, Greater Jy”为题向学生进行征文。请你结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。
注意：1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Lnger Breaks, Greater Jy
Recently, many cities have increased the class breaks t 15 minutes.
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8．（2025·陕西西安·二模）假如你是李华，西安市志愿者之家正在招募志愿者，请认真阅读以下信件，并按要求写一篇英语短文，应征志愿者。
参考词汇：patient, be gd with, be interested in…
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Xi’an Vlunteer Center,
I’d lve t be a vlunteer in _________________, helping the peple wh are in need f help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
9．（2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模） 志愿者的工作是传递爱心、汇聚温暖的桥梁。假如你是中学生李平，你的外国笔友Peter也热爱志愿者工作，暑假即将来临，他想了解你所在的志愿者小组的暑假活动，请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
写作要点：
1. 社区宣传环保;
2.帮助残疾邻居;
3.捐赠贫困儿童。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.100 词左右。
参考词汇：
publicize v.宣传，推广; pster n.海报; dnate v.捐赠， dnate (sth.) t sb.
Dear Peter,
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10．（2025·云南楚雄·三模）你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Taking Actin fr Garbage Srting”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你参与垃圾分类活动 (如学校组织的宣传活动、社区实践等) 的经历及感悟，或谈谈垃圾分类对环境和生活的好处。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
Taking Actin fr Garbage Srting
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11．（2025·安徽合肥·三模）假如你是李辉，上周参加了学校组织的志愿者活动，请你以Vlunteering Makes the Wrld Better为题，向校英文报投稿。要点如下：
1. 活动内容；
2. 个人收获；
3. 提出号召。
注意：
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）
Vlunteering Makes the Wrld Better
Last weekend, I tk part in a meaningful vlunteer activity with my classmates.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2025·吉林·三模）自我反思是成功的必经之路。校英文报社正在开展以“Self-examinatin: A Key t Success”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇不少于90词的英语短文参加投稿。
内容包括：
(1)谈谈自我反思对于成功的重要意义；
(2)叙述一次你通过自我反思获得成功的经历；
(3)你从这次经历中获得的感悟。
写作要求：
(1)语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
(2)词数90-100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)书写规范，卷面整洁；
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Self-examinatin: A Key t Success
Self-examinatin plays a very imprtant rle in achieving success. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
环境问题
不关灯、不关水、乱扔垃圾、工厂排污水、汽车尾气……
采取措施
节约水电、绿色出行、绿色购物、回收利用……
感想
自己对环境保护的认识 ……
Weight Management Self-checklist
Always
Usually
Smetimes
Never
D I eat and drink healthily?
D I sleep fr at least 8 hurs a day?
D I d exercise fr at least 2 hurs a day?
Hmewrk list
Yur ideas
tell an English stry draw a mind map
read an English bk learn an English sng
make an English vide give an English speech
1. Which three kinds f hmewrk d yu like?
2. Why d yu like them?
3. Hw can they help yu learn English?
Dear teenagers,
Xi’an Vlunteer Center needs lts f vlunteers in the Old Peple’s Hme, Children’s Hspital and Shaanxi Histry Museum. Wuld yu like t spend yur weekends helping the ld peple, cheering up the sick children r explaining lcal culture t visitrs? If yes, please write t us and let us knw.
Here are sme questins t help yu.
Why d yu want t be a vlunteer?
What experience(s) d yu have?
What is yur plan?
We are lking frward t yur apply.
Xi’an Vlunteer Center
《2026年中考英语一轮重点专题突破：12书面表达》参考答案
1．例文：
Dear David,
Hw’s every thing ging? Let me tell yu my trip t The Water Carves Gully Site. During the Qingming hliday—frm April 4th t 5th, my family and I tk a bus t Ningxia. We visited the museum first and saw many ancient tls. Then we explred the Water Carves Gully Site. It was amazing! We als tried lcal fd like lamb, which tasted delicius. Besides, we walked thrugh the canyn and saw a cultural shw abut lcal histry. I felt excited t learn abut ancient life and enjyed the beautiful views. We want t g there again fr ur next hliday.
Lk frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“旅行的时间和交通方式”来引出下文中对旅行经历的描述；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“参观博物馆、游览遗址、品尝美食”三个固定活动入手，还需要补充两个其他活动；
第三步，书写结语。对这次旅行进行简单评价。
[亮点词汇]
①explre 探索
②learn abut了解
③enjy the beautiful views欣赏美丽的风景
[高分句型]
We als tried lcal fd like lamb, which tasted delicius.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2． 例文：
Many peple pay little attentin t prtecting ur envirnment, s pllutin is mre and mre serius. Sme peple waste water, fd, and ther things.
As a student, I always remember these three wrds: reduce, reuse, recycle. Fr example, I turn ff the lights when I leave the rm and I turn ff the tap when I brush my teeth. I dn’t use paper cups in my daily life. We ften cllect plastic bttles in ur classrm. What’s mre, I always take a bus t schl instead f asking my parents t drive me.
I feel happy t d these things, because I believe if everyne f us des a little, we will make a difference t ur envirnment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍环境问题；
第二步，介绍环保措施；
第三步，介绍自己对环境保护的认识。
[亮点词汇]
①recycle循环利用
②turn ff关闭
③What’s mre此外
[高分句型]
①Fr example, I turn ff the lights when I leave the rm and I turn ff the tap when I brush my teeth. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I feel happy t d these things, because I believe if everyne f us des a little, we will make a difference t ur envirnment. (because引导原因状语从句)
3．高分范文
Hw t Make Gd Use f Break Time
In China, mst schls have a 10-minute break between classes. Recently, the break time has been increased t 15 minutes in many cities. This allws students t have mre time t relax s that they can refresh their minds and be mre fcused in the next class. T make gd use f the valuable time, the fllwing methds may be helpful.
Firstly, walking ut f the classrm t enjy fresh air is far better than just sleeping at the desk. Secndly, it’s gd fr yu t draw a picture r sing a sng. Bth f them can make yu relaxed. Thirdly, try t d sme sprts, such as jumping rpes and playing ping-png. They nt nly strengthen yur bdy, but als make yu full f energy. Finally, yu can als take part in an English mvie rle-play activity t imprve yur prnunciatin.
In a wrd, lnger break time is gd fr students. It is wise t treasure every mment instead f wasting it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明课间时间延长的现状及目的；
第二步，分条列举具体活动；
第三步，强调珍惜时间的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
① refresh ne’s mind 清醒头脑
② strengthen yur bdy 强健体魄
③ treasure every mment 珍惜每分每秒
[高分句型]
This allws students t have mre time t relax s that they can refresh their minds and be mre fcused in the next class. （目的状语从句）
4．例文
My weight management is s-s. I try t eat and drink healthily, but I smetimes snack n junk fd. I usually sleep fr abut eight hurs a day, which helps me feel energetic. Hwever, I seldm d exercise fr tw hurs daily.
I plan t jin a basketball club t imprve my fitness. Als, I will reduce sugary drinks and chse mre fruits and vegetables. Next, I will g jgging in the park every weekend.
I believe these changes will help me cntrl my weight better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述自己在体重管理方面的表现；
第二步，具体阐述自己的下一步计划；
第三步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①try t d尽力做某事
②plan t d计划做某事
③g jgging慢跑
[高分句型]
I usually sleep fr abut eight hurs a day, which helps me feel energetic.（which引导的定语从句）
5．例文
Manage yur Time Wisely
Time management plays an imprtant rle in ur life. It helps us finish tasks effectively and strike a gd balance between study and leisure.
T manage time well, first, make detailed plans. List ut tasks and set clear time limits. Secnd, keep away frm distractins like excessive phne use. Als, learn t priritize tasks—tackle imprtant nes first.
By mastering time management, we can make the mst f ur spare time, bst learning efficiency, and lead a mre rganized life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：采用一般现在时；
③提示：从好处和方法等方面，论述合理管理时间的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明时间管理在生活中重要作用，引出主题。
第二步，中间从制定计划、远离干扰、任务排序三个方面，介绍管理时间的具体方法。
第三步，结尾说明掌握时间管理能带来的积极影响，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①strike a gd balance取得良好的平衡
②detailed详细的
③distractins干扰物
④priritize优先处理
[高分句型]
①“Time management plays an imprtant rle in ur life.” (使用“play an imprtant rle in...”短语，简洁清晰说明时间管理的重要地位。)
②“T manage time well, first, make detailed plans.” (“t d”不定式作目的状语，清晰呈现行为目的，使句子结构合理。)
6．例文：
I’m glad there are s many kinds f interesting English hmewrk in the hmewrk list. Amng them, I like telling an English stry, learning an English sng, and making an English vide.
First, telling an English stry is fun because I can use my imaginatin. It als helps me remember new wrds better. Secnd, learning an English sng makes me happy. Singing alng imprves my prnunciatin. Finally, making an English vide is creative. I can practice speaking English with my friends. It als helps me becme mre cnfident.
All these activities make learning English enjyable. They help me imprve my speaking skills, learn new vcabulary, and be mre creative. I believe they are bth interesting and useful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生需从作业清单中选择三种喜欢的作业形式，说明理由及其对英语学习的帮助。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明从作业清单中选择的三种喜欢的作业形式；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别说明喜欢这三种作业的原因及其对英语学习的帮助；
第三步，书写结语。总结这些作业的益处，强调其趣味性和实用性。
[亮点词汇]
①use my imaginatin 发挥我的想象力
②imprves my prnunciatin 提高我的发音
③becme mre cnfident 变得更加自信
④make learning English enjyable 让英语学习变得有趣
⑤imprve my speaking skills 提高我的口语能力
[高分句型]
①First, telling an English stry is fun because I can use my imaginatin. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Singing alng imprves my prnunciatin. (动名词作主语)
7．例文
Lnger Breaks, Greater Jy Recently, many cities have increased the class breaks t 15 minutes. This change is necessary because lnger breaks allw students t relax their minds, reduce stress, and prepare better fr the next class.
T make gd use f break time, I suggest ding light activities. First, we can d simple exercises like stretching r jgging t stay active. Secnd, chatting with friends helps us build better relatinships. Third, enjying nature in the schl garden can refresh ur minds.
I supprt this change because it shws care fr students’ health. Thugh 15 minutes is shrt, using it wisely can make us happier and mre energetic. Let’s enjy ur breaks and study mre efficiently!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍许多中小学将课间时长延长的原因；
第二步，介绍你对于课间活动的建议；
第三步，介绍你对这一改变的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①allw sb t d sth允许某人做某事
②make gd use f充分利用
③help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①This change is necessary because lnger breaks allw students t relax their minds, reduce stress, and prepare better fr the next class. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Thugh 15 minutes is shrt, using it wisely can make us happier and mre energetic. (thugh引导的让步状语从句)
8．例文
Dear Xi’an Vlunteer Center,
I’d lve t be a vlunteer in the Old Peple’s Hme r Children’s Hspital, helping the peple wh are in need f help.
I want t be a vlunteer because I enjy helping thers and making ur city a better place. I have sme experience. Fr example, I helped my grandma at hme every week, s I am gd with ld peple. Als, I am patient and kind. I am interested in playing games and telling stries, which might cheer up sick children. My plan is t spend my Saturday mrnings helping there. I can talk with the elderly, read bks t them, r play simple games with the children.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出写信目的；
第二步，具体阐述想当志愿者的原因，有哪些经验及自己的计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in need f需要
②fr example例如
③be gd with擅长与某人相处
④be interested in对……感兴趣
⑤lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①I want t be a vlunteer because I enjy helping thers and making ur city a better place. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I am interested in playing games and telling stries, which might cheer up sick children. (which引导的定语从句)
9．例文：
Dear Peter,
Summer vacatin is cming sn, and ur vlunteer grup will carry ut a series f summer activities. Firstly, We will publicize envirnmental prtectin. We will create psters t call n peple t develp a green lifestyle in their daily lives such as saving water and pwer, taking wn bags instead f plastic bags when shpping and s n. Secndly, We will assist ur disabled neighbrs. We will try ur best t help them slve sme life prblems. Als, we will als rganize dnatin activities fr children in pr areas. We will dnate sme daily necessities and study supplies such as clthes and bks t them.
Helping thers is als helping urselves. Let’s wrk tgether t have a pleasant and meaningful summer vacatin.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：时态以 “一般将来时” 为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从社区宣传环保、帮助残疾邻居和捐赠贫困儿童等方面介绍你所在的志愿者小组的暑假活动。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①carry ut 进行
②call n sb t d sth. 号召某人做某事
③such as 例如
④try ne’s best t d sth 尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①Summer vacatin is cming sn, and my vlunteer grup will carry ut a series f summer activities. (并列句)
②Helping thers is als helping urselves. (动名词结构作主语和表语)
10．例文
Taking Actin fr Garbage Srting
Last mnth, ur schl rganized a garbage srting activity in the cmmunity. As a vlunteer, I helped t teach peple hw t divide waste int different bins: recyclables, harmful waste, kitchen waste and thers.
At first, many elderly peple didn’t knw hw t srt plastic bttles r ld newspapers. I shwed them pictures and explained patiently, “Batteries are harmful waste, while fruit peels belng t kitchen waste.” T my surprise, sme kids even taught their parents after learning frm us, which shwed hw quickly they grasped the knwledge! We als made psters with clrful signs t shw the steps clearly.
Thrugh this activity, I realized garbage srting is nt nly gd fr reducing pllutin but als helps save resurces. Small steps make a big difference! If each f us takes part, ur city will becme cleaner and mre beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代垃圾清理活动的组织方、地点及志愿者身份，说明核心任务 (垃圾分类指导)；
第二步，通过具体事例 (老人学习、孩子反馈、宣传海报) 展现活动细节与积极影响；
第三步，总结活动意义 (环保价值)，升华主题 (号召集体行动)。
[亮点词汇]
①divide … int … 把……分成……
②make a big difference 产生重大影响
[高分句型]
①T my surprise, sme kids even taught their parents after learning frm us, which shwed hw quickly they grasped the knwledge! (定语从句)
②If each f us takes part, ur city will becme cleaner and mre beautiful. (if引导的条件状语从句)
11．范文：
Vlunteering Makes the Wrld Better
Last weekend, I tk part in a meaningful vlunteer activity with my classmates. We went t a nearby nursing hme and helped the elderly clean their rms, talk with them and perfrm sngs fr them. The smiles n their faces made us feel warm and prud.
Thrugh this activity, I learned the imprtance f helping thers. It nt nly brings jy t thse in need but als gives us a sense f purpse and achievement. I became mre patient, respnsible and willing t care fr thers.
I hpe mre students can jin vlunteer wrk. Tgether, we can make the wrld a warmer and better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出活动背景，点明活动时间、对象和内容；
第二步，具体叙述活动中做了什么，有哪些感受或收获；
第三步，总结感悟，并号召更多人参与志愿服务。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参与
②talk with和……聊天
③nt als...不但……而且……
④care fr 关心
[高分句型]
①It nt nly brings jy t thse in need but als gives us a sense f purpse.（nt nly…but als并列结构）
②I hpe mre students can jin vlunteer wrk.（宾语从句）
12．One pssible versin
Self-examinatin: A Key t Success
Self-examinatin plays a very imprtant rle in achieving success. It helps us recgnize ur wn mistakes and weaknesses, allwing us t make targeted imprvements.
I nce failed a math exam. Instead f being discuraged, I did a self-examinatin. I analyzed each wrng questin carefully and fund that I had prblems with sme cncepts and calculatin methds. Then I studied hard n thse pints and practiced mre questins.
Finally, I gt a high scre in the next exam. This experience taught me that self-examinatin is like a lighthuse in ur life. It guides us t crrect ur directins and mve frward twards success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步：引出话题，表明自我反思的意义；
②第二步：介绍自己通过自我反思获得成功的经历；
③第三步：书写结语，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①allw sb t d sth允许某人做某事
②instead f代替
③mve frward前进
[高分句型]
①I analyzed each wrng questin carefully and fund that I had prblems with sme cncepts and calculatin methds. (that引导的宾语从句)
②It helps us recgnize ur wn mistakes and weaknesses, allwing us t make targeted imprvements. (现在分词作状语)