专题29 健康与安全-【妙笔生花】2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍（原卷版+解析版）

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【题型分析】
分析全国中考真题可知此类话题通常考查：①健康的重要性及保持健康的建议；②如何进行自我保护；③健康饮食的建议。
【写作要点】
角度①健康
存在的问题
1. Sme f the teenagers are in pr cnditin. They catch a cld easily.
2.T much hmewrk and t much screen time make the junir high schl students' eyesight weaker and weaker.
3. Many teenagers spend mre time n electrnic prducts and exercise less and less. S many f them are in pr health.
4.A great deal f children ften eat much junk fd and becme verweight. It makes their parents
wrried.
5. Nwadays, sme children were t shy t express their thughts and feelings t their teachers even their parents.
6.Lacking f cnfidence is a big prblem fr lts f students tday.
重要性
1. Nwadays, peple pay much mre attentin health.
2.Keeping healthy plays an imprtant rle in ur daily life.
3. A healthy bdy is the premise（前提） t face pressure.
4.Only by building a healthy bdy can we live a better life.
5. As is knwn t all, it is very imprtant t keep healthy.
6. As far as we knw, health is the best gift that a man can ever have.
7. As everybdy knws, it's imprtant t keep a balance between study and health.
8. As the saying ges, "Health is better wealth.”
健康饮食
1. Firstly, it's imprtant t have a healthy eating habit.
2.It is imprtant t remember: eat well, stay healthy and dn't get fat!
3.It is imprtant t eat fd that is fresh and natural.fr example, fruit and vegetables.
4.Wash yur hands ften, especially befre meals.Remember t have healthy fd and drink enugh water every day.
5.Having a healthy diet plays an imprtant rle in keeping yurself healthy, s yu'd better eat mre fruit and vegetables instead f junk fd.
6.Meat is healthy but t much meat is nt gd fr children.
坚持运动
7.Secndly, taking exercise every day helps us build up a strng bdy.
8. We have played ftball fr a year nw and we all feel very fit.
9.Taking regular（定期的） exercise, eating a healthy diet and getting enugh sleep are all the things that can help yu.
10.Exercise such as playing sprts is fun, and yu can spend time with yur friends and family as yu play tgether.
11.It is gd t relax by using the Internet r watching game shws, but we think the best way t relax is thrugh exercise.
12. Riding a bicycle is a healthy frm f relaxing yurself.
13.N matter hw cld it gets, we must stick t ur exercise rutine.
充足睡眠
14. Besides, t make sure I have enugh sleep, I never stay up t late at night.
15. In rder t be healthy, teenagers need t get enugh sleep.
16. Enugh sleep can make sure that yu are energetic class.
17. We need t fcus n sleeping habits because they may have a big influence n ur bdies.
保护视力
18. Yu need t take breaks away frm the cmputer.
19. Dn't read in the pr r strng light, r it will hurt yur eyes.
20. When yu are reading, yu shuld keep the bk away frm yur eyes fr abut a ft.
21. It's bad fr ur eyes if we read in the sun r in bed. I als try hard t avid using the mbile
phnes r cmputers fr a lng time.
22. Yu shuld always lk n the bright side f life, and imagine that yu will have a happy and successful future.
23. Learn t relax. Frce yurself t take a break frm yur studies and wrries abut exams.
24. We are all under pressure, s we shuld d sme things t relax urselves.
25. Laughter is the best medicine.
角度②安全
存在的问题
1. There are mre and mre traffic accidents, especially in busy cities.
2.Sme danger cmes frm the Internet.
3.There may be sme fires r earthquakes and they can't be avided.
4.With the develpment f the sciety, there are mre and mre cars, trucks and buses n the rad.
5. As the day gets htter, many children want t g t the rivers t cl themselves dwn. But it's really dangerus.
6. Besides traffic safety, kitchen safety is als very imprtant.
7. The summer hliday is cming. And swimming safety has becme a big prblem.
重要性
1.Safety cmes first.
2.Safety is abve everything.
3. In a wrd, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value ur lives.
4.Life is s valuable that we shuld take it seriusly and never frget t value ur life.
5. Life is priceless, s safety is the mst imprtant.
》如何保证自身安全
冷静求救
1. Yu are suppsed t calm dwn first when yu are in danger.
2. Remember t ask the plice fr help when yu are in danger.
3. If we are in danger, we must call the plice fr help in time s that we can keep safe.
4. If we happen t have truble, we're suppsed t keep calm and remember t ask ur parents,
teachers r the plice fr help.
交通安全
5.Make sure that we always pay attentin t the traffic n ur way t schl r hme.
6. Whether we walk r take a bus t schl, we must be careful f the traffic.
7.Besides, d nt ride side by side, r yu may be in danger.
8. It's best t keep/stay away frm the street while yu are playing ftball.
网络安全
9. We shuldn't put t much persnal infrmatin n the Internet.
10. We shuld be careful when we make friends, especially nline.
校园安全
11. Als, we mustn't run t fast in the classrm,because it may cause accidents.
12. When we are at schl, we mustn't have a fight with ur classmates.
家庭安全
13. Fr yur wn safety, yu'd better nt g ut alne at night.
14. At ur hme, we shuld be careful while using electricity and natural gas.
15. We mustn't play with smething dangerus, such as knives and fire.
火灾、地震、游泳
话题词句篇诵读
16. Yu shuld be careful with fire in the kitchen.
17. Be careful with fire and heat when yu ck. Yu dn't want t burn yurself.
18. Stay away frm windws and heavy furniture.Keep clear f fires.
19.Leave the rm ne by ne and dn't jump dwn frm the windws in case f a fire.
20. If yu are inside when the earthquake starts, get under a table r a bed.
21. When an earthquake happens, stay under the table immediately.
22. Keep away frm buildings when an earthquake happens because parts f a building may fall n yu.
23. When swimming, it's necessary fr us t be accmpanied（陪同） by thse wh are gd at swimming, fr they can help us in case f emergency.
俗语谚语
1. Happiness lies first f all in health.幸福首先在于健康。
2. Gd health is ver wealth.健康是最大的财富。
3.An apple a day keeps the dctr away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。
4.A gd medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。
5. Eat gd things fr breakfast, eat a big meal fr lunch， but eat less at dinner.
早餐吃好，午餐吃饱晚餐吃少。
Early t bed and early t rise makes a man healthy wealthy and wise.
早睡早起使人健康、富有、明智。
7.One persn is safe and the whle family is happy.一人安全，全家幸福。
8.Safety des nt leave the muth, and rules d nt leave the hand.安全不离口，规章不离手。
9. Safety creates happiness. Negligence brings pain.安全创造幸福。疏忽带来痛苦。
【话题范文】
1．（2024·山东济南·三模）同学们的健康与安全是每个家庭最大的愿望与期盼，也是成长、成才的前提和保障。假如你是李华，你班准备举办一个以“Self-prtectin”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容提示及要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。
2.列举生活中的安全问题(至小两个方面)，并分别提出合理化建议。
3.发出自我保护的号召。
写作要求：
1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。
2.词数100-120(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；书写规范，卷面整洁。
3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。
Self-prtectin These days, peple pay mre attentin t safety prblems.
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2．2020年5月, 习近平总书记在全国两会期间强调"保护人民生命安全和身体健康可以不惜一切代价"。你校对学生的健康和安全问题很重视, 最近正举行主题为"关爱青少年健康与安全"的"双语"征文竞赛。请根据提示, 以"Caring abut urselves'为题, 用英语写一篇征文, 与同学分享你对青少年健康和安全问题的认识。
要求：
1、表达清楚, 语法正确, 上下文连贯。必须包括上图中所有的相关信息、并适当发挥。
2、词数:100词左右。(开头已给出, 不计入总词数。）
3、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Caring abut urselves
Nwadays a number f peple arund us are caring abut teenage health and safety.
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I hpe all f us can be healthy and safe in the future.
3．（24-25九年级上·四川泸州·开学考试）以谈论“健康与急救（Health and first aid）”为话题，针对健康与安全等问题，利用所学知识提出简单的建议。
写作方法
“总——分——总”法对健康与急救提建议
总：总说健康的重要性；
分：针对如何拥有健康，分层次、具体地提出建议和方法；
总：总结概括以上提出的建议和方法，提出愿望。
3）写作任务
请结合你了解的健康知识，写一篇题目为“The Ways t Keep Healthy”的短文。
要求：80词左右。
参考短语：a balanced diet均衡的饮食
The Ways t Keep Healthy
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4．（24-25九年级下·江西九江·开学考试）我们日常生活中有哪些保持身心健康的方法呢？请你根据以下内容提示，从饮食、睡眠、体育锻炼及如何面对生活中的苦恼等方面入手，以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容提示：
1. Hw can teenagers eat and sleep well?
2. Why shuld teenagers play sprts at least an hur every day?
3. What can teenagers d when they’re in truble?
4. Smething mre abut yur ideas.
要求：
1.短文应包括所有内容提示的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Health is imprtant t everyne. But hw can we teenagers live a healthy life?
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5．（2024·广东深圳·一模）春节贺岁片《热辣滚烫》备受关注，女主角杜乐莹的扮演者贾玲成功减掉100斤的体重，付出了巨大的艰辛和努力，苦苦坚持拳击练习，最终实现了“我想赢一次”的愿望，也养成了健康的生活方式。贾玲的励志经历也掀起了人们对健康生活的关注。以此为契机，学校拟举办以“Hw t Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求：
1. 文中不可出现真实的学校和姓名；
2. 可根据要点适当发挥，使条理清楚、行文连贯；
3. 书写工整，字数80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：physical health (n.) 身体健康 psychlgical health (n.) 心理健康
Hw t Live a Healthy Life
Encuraged by Jia Ling’s mvie YOLO, mre and mre peple have cme t fcus n health.
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6．（2024·甘肃兰州·二模）国家卫健委数据显示，截止2023年，全国儿童青少年总体近视率为53.6%，其中初中生为71.6%。为倡导青少年爱眼健康用眼，近期学校准备举办以“保护视力，关爱眼睛”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你紧扣主题，利用图示信息，完成一篇演讲稿，代表班级去参加本次演讲比赛。
要求：
1. 写作内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
3. 词数80左右（演讲的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Prtect ur eyesight
Gd mrning, dear teachers and schl mates. I’m Li Hua frm Class 4 Grade 9. It’s my hnr t be here t share my speech with yu.
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That’s all. Thanks fr yur listening.
7．（2024·重庆沙坪坝·一模）青少年在成长的过程中，不可避免会遇到一些心理健康问题。在5.25（谐音“我爱我”）国际心理健康日来临之际，21世纪英语报联合青少年心理健康中心发出倡导，号召同学们关注自己的心理健康和心理成长。请你以健康中心Dr. Li的名义给青少年们写一封信，简述常见心理健康问题，提出2-3条建议并发出倡导。
参考信息：
要求：
1. 词数：80—120词，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear students,
In the prcess f grwing up, it’s nrmal fr yu t have sme mental health prblems.
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Dr. Li
8．（2024·吉林四平·三模）有人说，“人的一生只有健康和快乐是自己的。”可见健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“Hw t keep healthy?”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：1.短文必须包含以上表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息 ；
3.词数90—100，短文开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Hw t keep healthy?
Nwadays, peple pay much mre attentin t health. It is necessary fr everyne t learn sme ways t keep healthy.
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9．（2024·广西贵港·二模）现在中学生中有不少“小胖墩”、“小眼镜”，学生的肥胖和近视问题受到社会的关注。下周主题班会上，同学们将讨论如何提高身体素质和保护视力的问题。请你根据下面信息提示，用英语写一篇短文，针对以上问题提出建议。
写作提示：
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包含所有信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息； 4. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In ur schl, sme f students have besity and visin prblems (肥胖和近视问题). Hw are we ging t slve the prblems?
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10．（2024·山东聊城·三模）根据下面提示，以“What t d in an earthquake”为题用英语写一篇文章。众所周知，近来地震频发。虽然现在我们可以采取一些措施来警告人们关于地震的事情。但是我觉得孩子们应该了解更多关于在地震中该怎么做的事情。下面就是我的一些建议：
如果你在室内：
1、不要跳下高楼。躲在桌下，远离窗户和大家具。
2、当停止震动时，快速离开楼房，但不要用电梯。
如果你在室外：
1、不要站在路灯和电线下面。
2、在山里，小心落石；在海边，快速转移到高地。
总之，遵循以上建议，并且保持镇静。你会安全并且你还可以帮助挽救他人。
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
What t d in an earthquake
As we all knw, earthquakes have happened several times recently. Althugh we can d smething t warn peple abut them.
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11．（2024·甘肃天水·二模）电影N Mre Bets（《孤注一掷》）的热映，引发人们对“电信诈骗”“网络诈骗”等社会问题的关注与思考。假如你是李华，请以“Stay Safe Online”为题，用英语写一篇短文，警示大家要安全上网。
要求：
1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：privacy 隐私 click n 点击 link链接 prperty lss财产损失
Stay Safe Online
With the wide spread f the Internet, we have easy access t almst everything we want t knw.
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12．（2024·陕西西安·一模）为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你校英文网站开展了以“安全”为主的英语征文比赛，请你参考下列提示词，写一篇文章给你校英文网站投稿，介绍自己的想法和看法。
参考词汇：
eat healthily, make friends carefully, call fr help, be carefull while ding sprts, ...
要求：1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
As teenagers, we shuld always keep safety in mind.
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13．（2022·江苏盐城·二模）你校举办了“中学生安全教育日”英语征文活动，请根据所给提示，以“Live a Safe Life”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
注意事项：1.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Live a safe life
As middle schl students, we shuld always keep safety in mind.
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14．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校举办了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
(1)交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红灯，走人行横道；
(2)食品安全：吃水果蔬菜等健康食品，远离垃圾食品；
(3)出行安全：晚上不要单独外出，遇到困难向他人求助；
(4)网络安全：不要在网上透露个人信息……（请你补充一条建议）。感想1—2点。
注意：1.参考词汇：人行横道（sidewalk）；
2.词数80词左右（开头已给出，不记入词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
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15．（2022·广西柳州·一模）安全对每个人都很重要，我们应该远离危险。请根据以下信息，以“Hw t be safer”为题写一篇关于安全的英语短文。
注意：1. 词数70左右，可以适当发挥；
2. 文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
提示词：bey the traffic rules（遵守交通规则） crss the rad（过马路）
pay attentin t（注意） traffic lights（交通灯）
keep a healthy diet（保持健康饮食） healthy fd（健康食品）
junk fd（垃圾食品）fruit and vegetables（水果和蔬菜）
run after each ther（追逐）
Hw t be safer
Safety is very imprtant fr everyne. We shuld stay away frm the danger.
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If we pay attentin t ur safety, we will be safer.
身体健康方面
1. 坚持锻炼
2. 保证睡眠
3. ……
心理健康方面
1. 拥有自信
2. 保持好的情绪
3. ……
shuld（√）
shuldn’t（×）
d sprts every day
keep a balanced diet
eat fruit and vegetables
have enugh sleep
keep happy
...
refuse t exercise
have junk fd
stay up t late
play cmputer games a lt
sit fr a lng time
建议
健康方面
1. 运动；2. 饮食（每个至少2点）
保护视力
1. 睡眠；2. 眼保健操（每个至少1点）
感悟
……（至少1点）
交通安全
遵守交通规则。当我们过马路时，注意交通灯。
食品安全
保持健康饮食。吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品，多吃水果和蔬菜。
活动安全
注意安全。不在教室里追逐；不独自下河游泳。