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【题型分析】
理解题目： 仔细阅读题目，确保完全理解要求。明确补全对象，以及所给信息或提示的内容。
分析信息： 仔细分析所给的信息或提示，包括关键词、主题、时态等。理解信息的含义和要求，确定如何补全文本。
构思内容： 根据所给信息或提示，构思文章、段落或故事的内容。确定主题和大意，并考虑如何展开和组织内容。
确定结构： 根据所给信息和构思的内容，确定文章、段落或故事的结构。包括引言、主体和结论，确保逻辑清晰、条理清楚。
扩展细节： 根据需要，添加细节或补充信息，以丰富内容，增加可读性和吸引力。
语言表达： 注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性。选择恰当的词汇和句式，确保表达清晰、连贯。
【高分技巧】
1.审题：这里的审题包括审文体（记叙文、说明文、议论文）、要求（注意要点中的要求以及人称）、时态（中考书面表达往往有三种时态）、内容（需要写什么方面的内容）
2.布局：中考最流行的结构就是总分总式。因为“观点——要点——总结”这种结构让人一目了然，但是要说明一点，“总分总”，不一定是三段，这里的“分”可以是两段、三段或者更多，根据写作需要来安排。
3.略写：学生在阅读写作要求后，应该划出写作要点，并且要在空白处做简略地写出要点中单词、短语和句型，当然也要简略写出一些隐性的要点和省略号部分的内容。
4.串联：通过句型、句子结构、时态等工具把略写的内容串联起来，构成文章内容。
5.美化：经过上面的操作，只能得到基础的分数，所以要给文章进行美化。短文要有体现突出色彩的东西，比如：从句、固定句型和副词，同时文章应该蕴含一定量的连词，以此来体现文章的连贯性和行文的流畅性。
6.检查：到这里，行文基本完整，但是为了文章完美，应该仔细检查。这里的检查包括：检查要点是否遗漏，检查人称、单词、短语、句型和时态是否有错或者不符合规范的地方。
【2025热门话题】
热门话题一：向外国朋友介绍电影哪吒
Dear Jack,
I'm writing t share with yu an incredible Chinese animated film, Ne Zha.
Ne Zha is a masterpiece that cmbines stunning visuals with a tuching stry. It's based n traditinal Chinese mythlgy. Ne Zha is brn as a mischievus and pwerful being frm the magic pill. Despite being misunderstd and stracized by the villagers as a "demn child", he refuses t be defined by their prejudice.
What I admire mst abut Ne Zha is his unyielding spirit. He defies his predetermined fate and bravely battles against all dds. His curage t face difficulties and his determinatin t prve himself are truly inspiring.
This film is nt nly a visual feast but als a great shwcase f Chinese culture. The unique character designs, traditinal Chinese architectural styles in the scenes, and the prfund values it cnveys, like the imprtance f friendship and self-identity, make it a must-watch. It has nt nly been a huge hit in China but als gained ppularity verseas.
I'm sure yu'll be deeply impressed by Ne Zha. Dn't miss the chance t enjy this wnderful film!
Best regards,
Li Hua
热门话题二：如何看待豆包、Deepseek 等AI的崛起
Recently, AI like Deepseek and Duba has been emerging, bringing huge changes t ur lives.
AI has numerus benefits. Fr instance, it can quickly answer varius questins, saving us a lt f time in searching fr infrmatin. It als helps with creative wrk, such as writing stries and making designs. Take writing an English cmpsitin as an example. Duba can ffer useful ideas and crrect grammar mistakes, making the writing prcess easier.
Hwever, the develpment f AI als has sme negative sides. If we rely n it t much, we may becme lazy and lse the ability t think independently. Als, there are cncerns abut jb lsses as AI can replace sme repetitive jbs.
In my view, AI is a pwerful tl. We shuld make gd use f it t imprve ur study and wrk, while als being aware f its ptential prblems. I believe that with prper use, AI will lead us t a better future.
热门话题三：如何看待压力与成长的关系
Pressure is an inescapable part f ur grwth prcess, and its relatinship with ur develpment is cmplex.
On ne hand, pressure can be a catalyst fr grwth. When we're under the pressure f exams, it spurs us t study harder and expand ur knwlede. Scial pressure, like fitting int a new class, frces us t imprve ur cmmunicatin skills. Overcming pressure als builds ur resilience. Fr example, handling the pressure f a difficult prject makes us mre adept at prblem-slving.
On the ther hand, excessive pressure can stunt ur grwth. T much stress frm parents r peers may cause anxiety and self-dubt. It can make us lse ur passin fr learning and explring.
T balance this, we shuld set achievable gals and learn t relax. When feeling stressed, ding sme exercise r listening t music can help. In a wrd, pressure can be a friend r a fe in ur grwth jurney, and it's up t us t manage it prperly.
热门话题四：申请参加野生动物保护协会
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a junir high schl student. I'm writing t apply fr membership in yur Wildlife Cnservatin Assciatin.

I've always been passinate abut wildlife. I'm deeply cncerned abut the current situatin where many species are facing the threat f extinctin due t habitat lss and illegal hunting. I believe I can cntribute t the prtectin f these precius creatures.
I'm gd at rganizing activities. I nce successfully rganized an envirnmental prtectin campaign in my schl. I'm als prficient in using the Internet t spread knwledge abut wildlife prtectin. I'm willing t vlunteer my time n weekends and hlidays t participate in yur activities, such as wildlife surveys and educatinal prgrams.
I sincerely hpe t jin yur assciatin and wrk tgether t safeguard ur wildlife. Thank yu fr yur cnsideratin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
热门话题五：过去和现在的变化对比
I have changed a lt in the past few years.
In the past, I was very shy and quiet. I was afraid t speak in frnt f thers, s I had few friends. I als didn't like sprts and spent mst f my time reading at hme. My study habits were nt gd either. I ften prcrastinated ding my hmewrk and didn't review regularly.
Hwever, nw I have becme mre utging. I actively participate in class discussins and make many new friends. I have develped a great interest in sprts, especially basketball. I play basketball with my classmates every weekend. As fr my study, I've frmed gd habits. I finish my hmewrk n time and review lessns carefully. I'm much mre cnfident and energetic than befre. I'm really glad t see these psitive changes in myself.
热门话题六：对网络直播的看法
Nwadays, live streaming n the Internet has becme a phenmenn. It has bth psitive and negative aspects.
Psitively, it ffers a platfrm fr peple t shwcase their talents. Sme rdinary peple have even becme nline celebrities thrugh live streaming. It als enriches ur entertainment. We can watch varius shws like music perfrmances r gameplays. Mrever, it prmtes e-cmmerce as many prducts are sld effectively via live streaming.
Hwever, there are dwnsides. Sme live streams cntain inapprpriate cntent that may mislead viewers. Als, excessive time spent n watching live streams can affect ur study and wrk.
In a wrd, live streaming is a duble-edged swrd. We shuld make gd use f it while being cautius, s that it can better serve ur lives.
热门话题七：学习与压力
As junir high schl students, we ften face pressure in ur studies. Here are sme effective ways t deal with it.
Firstly, we shuld set realistic gals. Dn't push urselves t hard with unattainable targets. When we achieve small gals, we'll gain a sense f accmplishment. Secndly, manage ur time prperly. Make a study schedule and stick t it. This can help us avid the last-minute rush.
Mrever, taking breaks is essential. D sme exercise like jgging r playing basketball during breaks t relax bth ur bdy and mind. We can als talk t ur friends r teachers when feeling stressed. They may ffer useful advice and supprt.
In a wrd, by using these methds, we can better cpe with study pressure and keep a psitive attitude.
【话题范文】
1．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）某青少年英文杂志社正在开展征文活动。假如你是就读于某双语学校的九年级学生李华，请你以“Friendship”为主题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿。
要求：
1. 结合自身经历写一个与友谊相关的故事；
2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Friendship
Friendship is like sunshine in my life. It lights up ur lives and gives us the strength t mve frward.
Last term, I tk part in an English speech cntest. The tpic was difficult and I was extremely nervus. Every time I practiced, I made mistakes. When I was abut t give up, my best friend Tm helped me. He encuraged me t be cnfident and helped me crrect my prnunciatin. He als listened patiently as I practiced again and again. With his help, I finally vercame my fear and did well in the cntest.
This experience made me realize that true friends are always there t supprt us, especially in hard times. They bring ut the best in us and make ur jurney mre wnderful. I will always cherish ur friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时” ；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明作者心中的友谊是什么;
第二步，具体阐述作者最好的朋友帮助自己的故事；
第三步，谈谈自己的感想并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lights up照亮
②tk part in参加
③encurage sb. t d sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①When I was abut t give up, my best friend Tm helped me. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②This experience made me realize that true friends are always there t supprt us, especially in hard times. (宾语从句)
2．（2025·上海徐汇·一模）What des Charlie’s stry make yu think f? Please write at least 60 wrds frm yur wn r the schl’s perspective n hw t ensure every student has a fair pprtunity t receive a gd educatin.
读完了Charlie的故事后，你有了哪些思考和感悟？请用不少于60个词从自身或学校的视角来谈谈可以怎样做来让每一个学生都能获得公平接受教育的机会。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
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【答案】例文
Charlie’s stry reminds me f the imprtance f educatinal equity. T ensure every student has a fair pprtunity t receive a gd educatin, schls shuld prvide gd resurces and supprt t all students. Schls shuld regularly ffer sme mental health classes. Students can learn hw t feel calm when facing schl bulling r difficulties. Mrever, persnalized learning plans can help meet everyne’s needs, ensuring that n student is left behind.
I hpe that every student can receive a fair educatin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据查理的故事，写出自己的思考和感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，写出自己从故事中获得的感悟；
第二步，给出自己想法和建议；
第三步，总结，希望每个学生都能接受到平等的教育。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb f sth提醒某人某事
② receive a gd educatin接受好的教育
③meet everyne’s needs满足每个人的需求
[高分句型]
①T ensure every student has a fair pprtunity t receive a gd educatin, schls shuld prvide gd resurces and supprt t all students. （不定式作目的状语）
②I hpe that every student can receive a fair educatin. （that引导宾语从句）
（2024·云南昆明·一模）
Hw t Prtect the Rainfrests
提示：热带雨林在调节全球气候，防止水土流失，净化空气，保证全球生态循环有序进行等方面发挥着重要的作用。然而，由于人类乱砍滥伐和过度开荒，有很大一部分热带雨林已经遭受了严重的破坏。请以“Hw t Prtect the Rainfrests”为题，写一篇短文，谈一谈我们应该如何保护热带雨林。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名等，否则以零分计；
3.请将短文书写在答题卡上，写在试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Hw t Prtect the Rainfrests
Trpical rain frest plays an imprtant rle in regulating glbal climate, preventing sil ersin, purifying air and ensuring the rderly prgress f glbal eclgical cycle. S, it is necessary fr us t prtect them. Here are sme suggestins t prtect the rainfrests.
Firstly, we shuld shw and tell peple abut the imprtance f prtecting the rainfrests by sme channels, such as advertisement, bradcast and schl educatin etc. Secndly, we shuld d anything we can. When we eat, we can’t use dispsable chpsticks r paper cups. We shuld use less paper and make sure nt t waste paper. Thirdly, the gvernment shuld als publish sme regulatins t prtect the rainfrests.
In a wrd, it is ur duty t prtect the rainfrests. Let us try ur best t leave a green hme tgether.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述热带雨林的重要作用，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“人人们了解保护热带雨林的重要性”、“做我们力所能及的的事情”以及“政府应该发布相关法律法规”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，倡导大家一起保护热带雨林。
[亮点词汇]
①plays an imprtant rle in在……中发挥重要作用
②glbal climate全球气候
③sil ersin水土流失
④dispsable一次性的
⑤make sure确保
⑥indiscriminately任意地
⑦In a wrd换言之
[高分句型]
①Here are sme suggestins t prtect the rainfrests. (倒装句)
②When we eat, we can’t use dispsable chpsticks r paper cups. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③Let us try ur best t leave a green hme tgether. (祈使句)
4．（2024·河南周口·一模）春季正值花开时节，我们学校计划组织学生走出校园进行研学旅行 (study trip)，让同学们可以通过各种形式亲近社会与自然，并开展研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的校外教育活动。学校想对九年级同学是否应该参加研学活动进行意见征集，请你写一篇短文， 谈谈对“研学旅行”的看法。
要求：
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右。
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【答案】例文
Nwadays, many schls are rganizing students t g ut fr a study trip. Our class had a discussin abut whether Grade Nine students shuld be allwed t take part in the study trip.
As the ld saying ges, “Read as many as ten thusand bks and travel as far as ten thusand miles.” I think we shuld be allwed t take part in it. Firstly, it prvides us a chance t feel the pwer f nature. I think it is imprtant fr all f us t make an effrt t travel and explre the wrld arund us. In additin, we will have many team building activities t make ur friendship strnger. What’s mre, the study trip can nt nly help us reduce pressure but als make us relaxed.
All in all, I think study trip is helpful t achieve a better self and life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山介绍本次讨论的主题；
第二步，具体阐述自己的观点并说明原因；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in additin此外
②all in all总之
[高分句型]
Our class had a discussin abut whether Grade Nine students shuld be allwed t take part in the study trip.（whether引导的宾语从句）
5．（2024·云南德宏·一模）It Makes Me ________
提示：让人成长的不是年龄，而是阅历，看过的电影、读过的书、游览过的风景、交过的朋友、促膝交谈的师长、体贴入微的父母……都是我们成长过程中不可或缺的部分。丰富多彩的生活充满了苦辣酸甜，让我们哭，让我们笑。请你描述印象最深刻的一次经历并谈谈自己的感悟，请以“It Makes Me ________”为题写一篇短文。
要求：
1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。
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【答案】例文
It Makes Me Strnger
One f the mst memrable experiences in my life was when I participated in a schl debate cmpetitin.
I was very nervus because it was my first time speaking in frnt f a large audience. Despite my fear, I prepared thrughly and practiced my speech multiple times. On the day f the cmpetitin, I felt my heart punding as I walked nt the stage. Hwever, as I started speaking, I gradually gained cnfidence. I presented my arguments clearly and respnded t the ppsing team effectively. In the end, ur team wn the cmpetitin.
This experience taught me the imprtance f preparatin and facing my fears. It made me strnger and mre cnfident in my abilities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：考生注意需要将题目补充完整；注意时态要用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己印象最深刻的一次经历是参加学校辩论赛；
第二步，描述比赛前的紧张准备和比赛中的表现，展示了自己如何克服恐惧并最终取得胜利；
第三步，自己从这次经历中获得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①memrable难忘的
②participate in参加
③nervus紧张的
④audience观众
⑤despite除了
⑥effectively有效地
[高分句型]
One f the mst memrable experiences in my life was when I participated in a schl debate cmpetitin. (表语从句)
6．（2024·重庆北碚·二模）新一轮创建“全国文明城区”（build a natinal civilized city） 的活动已经拉开帷幕，创建文明城区，校英语广播站正以“What can we d t build a natinal civilized city?”为主题开展英语征文比赛。请提供至少两条切实可行的建议，并说明原因。
要求： 1. 80—100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
What can we d t build a natinal civilized city? As we all knw, ur city is building a natinal civilized city. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文：
What can we d t build a natinal civilized city?
As we all knw, ur city is building a natinal civilized city. It’s crucial fr each f us t play a part. We can vlunteer t clean up the streets, tidy, walking, r the subway, nt nly reduces cngestin but als fsters a safer envirnment. Furthermre, we shuld ffer the seats t the elderly, demnstrating respect and kindness. These small acts cntribute t a warm and harmnius sciety.
Let’s pull tgether and take these steps twards creating a mre civilized and inclusive city fr all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，写作时直接写创建全国文明城市，我们能做的事情。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“去清理街道，整理，步行，或坐地铁以及其原因”和“给老人让座位以及其原因”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，重申主旨，倡议大家一起创建全国文明城市。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all knw众所周知
②crucial关键的
③play a part发挥作用
④vlunteer t d sth.志愿做某事
⑤clean up打扫
⑥nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
⑦ffer sth. t sb.提供某物给某人
[高分句型]
①It’s crucial fr each f us t play a part. (It+be+adj.+fr sb. t d sth.固定句型)
②Let’s pull tgether and take these steps twards creating a mre civilized and inclusive city fr all. (Let引导的祈使句)
7．（2024·吉林长春·三模）习惯虽小，但力量无穷。某英文网站正在进行关于“Habits”的征文活动，请你根据以下提示要点和要求，准备一篇英语短文参加此活动。
要点：1. 描述与习惯相关的事件；
2. 谈谈你对习惯的理解与感悟。
要求：1. 不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Everyne has his r her habits. Sme are gd but sme are bad. Gd habits can make a great difference t ur lives. Nw let me tell yu abut my habits.
I used t eat lts f junk fd after schl, including hamburgers and ptat chips. I didn’t d much exercise and ften stayed up late. Because f thse bad habits, I always felt tired and sleepy in class. T change the situatin, my mm decided t push me t frm gd eating and exercising habits. She asked me t eat a lt f fresh fruit and vegetables instead f junk fd. With her help, I tk up sprts like running and swimming t lse weight. These habits have changed my life and made me much healthier. Nw I’m always full f energy.
Gd habits are the key t success while bad habits are the unlcked dr t failure. S let’s develp gd habits as early as pssible because it can make us have a bright future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据习惯相关的事件进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，注意语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出“习惯”这个话题；
第二步，具体阐述自己的习惯；
第三步，谈谈对习惯的理解与感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①make a great difference有很大影响
②used t d sth.过去常常做某事
③stay up late熬夜
④instead f而不是
[高分句型]
①T change the situatin, my mm decided t push me t frm gd eating and exercising habits.（不定式表目的）
②S let’s develp gd habits as early as pssible because it can make us have a bright future!（because引导的原因状语从句）
8．（2024·河南驻马店·三模）不积跬步，无以至千里；不积小流，无以成江海。点滴付出，巨大进步。你校英文报社正开展以“Little effrt makes a difference”为主题的演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，结合个人经历谈谈你对这个主题的理解以及感悟。
写作要求：
1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数100左右。
Little effrt makes a difference
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【答案】例文
Little effrt makes a difference
Every little actin can add up t great prgress in life. When I was in primary schl, I was t shy t talk with peple arund me. I felt s lnely because I didn’t have true friends. My parents encuraged me t jin the vlunteer club in my middle schl. I helped clean up the parks with my classmates. We went t the ld peple’s hme t cheer them up. We spent a lt f weekends in the children’s hspital. Reading bks and playing games with them made me mre and mre utging. Nw, I find myself braver and mre cnfident than befre. And I als make a lt f prgress in my study.
All in all, vlunteering in the cmmunity really makes a difference in my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕“点滴付出，巨大进步”进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述自己的经历及感悟；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①add up总计
②太……以致于不能……
③encurage sb. t d sth.鼓励某人做某事
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①When I was in primary schl, I was t shy t talk with peple arund me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I felt s lnely because I didn’t have true friends.（because引导的原因状语从句）
9．（2024·北京朝阳·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“为了梦想而努力”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对梦想以及如何实现梦想的看法。
提示词语：drive us t achieve, take actin, set gals, vercme difficulties
提示问题：·What d yu think f dreams?
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Dreams are imprtant fr ur future. They can drive us t achieve great things. Dreams can be big r small, but they have ne thing in cmmn: they encurage us t wrk hard.
Hwever, dreams alne are nt enugh. In rder t make ur dreams cme true, we must take actin. This means setting gals, making plans and wrking tirelessly t achieve them. It als means facing challenges and vercming difficulties alng the way. In additin t taking actin, it is als necessary t fcus n ur dreams.
Finally, it’s imprtant t remember that achieving ur dreams takes time. It may take years r even lnger. With hard wrk, we can realize ur dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：可根据提示词语和提示问题组织内容，注意不要遗漏提示问题的内容；可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈论梦想的重要性及作用；
第二步，阐述如何实现梦想；
第三步，总结梦想的实现需要花时间和努力。
[亮点词汇]
① cmmn有共同之处
②in rder t为了
③cme true实现
④take actin采取措施
⑤fcus n关注
[高分句型]
①It is als necessary t fcus n ur dreams. (It作形式主语)
②It’s imprtant t remember that achieving ur dreams takes time. (It作形式主语；that引导宾语从句)
19．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）Challenges are part f life. They push us t grw, t learn and t be better. During the three years f junir high schl life, yu’ll surely have such experiences t share. Please write a passage abut yur understanding f the challenge and a stry behind it.
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语言通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范。
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【答案】例文：
Challenges are inevitable in life, like stepping stnes n ur jurney f grwth. During my junir high years, I came acrss a really hard math prblem. A cmplicated shape prblem made me very cnfused. I didn’t knw hw t slve it. But I didn’t give up. I studied the cncepts, practiced similar prblems, and even asked my teachers fr help. After trying many times, I fund the answer! That feeling f success taught me that challenges are pprtunities t learn and imprve. They make us strnger and wiser. S, I cherish every challenge that cmes my way.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作主题已给出，考生应围绕主题进行发挥，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述你对挑战的理解；
第二步，讲述一个你与挑战有关的故事；
第三步，再次强调你对挑战的深刻理解。
[亮点词汇]
①stepping stnes n ur jurney f grwth我们成长之路上的垫脚石
②cme acrss偶然遇见
③give up放弃
④ask sb. fr help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①That feeling f success taught me that challenges are pprtunities t learn and imprve.（that引导的宾语从句）
②S, I cherish every challenge that cmes my way.（that引导的定语从句）
11．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）假如你叫李华，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在你的学习生涯中，一定有不少帮助过你的老师、朋友和同学。值此毕业之际，请以“Thank yu, ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。
内容包括：
1. Wh d yu want t thank the mst?
2. Describe his r her appearance r persnality;
3. Describe an event he r she helped yu;
4. What d yu want t say the mst t him r her?
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.不能出现你的真实学校和姓名；
3.词数100左右。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
Thank yu, ________
Hw time flies! My wnderful junir high schl life is cming t an end.
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【答案】例文
Thank yu, My Deskmate
Hw time flies! My wnderful junir high schl life is cming t an end. Lking back at the past three years, the persn I want t thank mst is my deskmate, Li Ming.
He is f medium build with bright eyes and always wears a pair f glasses. The deepest impressin Li Ming left n me was when I culdn’t slve a math prblem and was abut t give up. I wanted t cpy his hmewrk, but he refused and encuraged me t think independently and slve the prblem seriusly. His wrds inspired me t pnder the math prblem further. When I finally slved it, my heart swelled with pride and satisfactin, as well as admiratin fr Li Ming’s wisdm and kindness.
Time flies like a fleeting hrse. As we are abut t separate frm each ther, I want t tell him, “Thank yu fr yur cmpany and encuragement.” I d hpe we can cntinue ur friendship in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己最想感谢的人是同桌；
第二步，介绍同桌的外貌、性格，并具体介绍一件他曾经帮助过自己的事情；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己最想要和他说的话，以及希望友谊长存。
[亮点词汇]
①lking back at 回顾
②give up 放弃
③encurage sb t d sth 鼓励某人做某事
④think independently 独立思考
⑤swelled with 充满
[高分句型]
①The deepest impressin Li Ming left n me was when I culdn’t slve a math prblem and was abut t give up.（省略that的定语从句及when引导的表语从句）
②When I finally slved it, my heart swelled with pride and satisfactin, as well as admiratin fr Li Ming’s wisdm and kindness.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③I d hpe we can cntinue ur friendship in the future.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．（2024·河北唐山·二模）端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。端午临中夏，时清日复长。端午节即将来临，学校英语社团将在下周五举办“The Dragn Bat Festival in My Eyes”的主题活动。活动期间，学生们了解端午节的由来和习俗、学包粽子、观看龙舟比赛视频等。假如你是学校英语社团的小记者，请结合以下提示写一篇英文报道，介绍此活动。
提示 ：shw respect t Qu Yuan, make zngzi, dragn bat races, meaningful.
要求：
1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入词数)。
Dear friends,
As we all knw, the Dragn Bat Festival is an imprtant traditinal festival in China.
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【答案】例文
Dear friends,
As we all knw, the Dragn Bat Festival is an imprtant traditinal festival in China. T celebrate this festival, ur schl English club is planning a special activity called “The Dragn Bat Festival in My Eyes” fr next Friday. The event aims t help us understand the rigin and custms f the festival, including shwing respect t Qu Yuan, a great pet. We will learn hw t make delicius zngzi, a traditinal fd eaten during the festival. Additinally, we will watch exciting dragn bat race vides, capturing the thrill and spirit f the festival. This meaningful event prmises t be an enriching experience fr all participants, bringing us clser t ur cultural rts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍关于端午节的习俗，活动等，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达端午节是中国一项重要的传统节日；
第二步，介绍该活动的时间，目的和内容；
第三步，介绍该活动期待达到的效果。
[亮点词汇]
①aim t旨在
②help sb. d sth.帮助某人做某事
③prmise t d sth.承诺做某事
[高分句型]
T celebrate this festival, ur schl English club is planning a special activity called “The Dragn Bat Festival in My Eyes” fr next Friday. (动词不定式作目的状语)
13．（2024·重庆九龙坡·二模）每个人都会犯错，犯错并不可怕。有些错误让人成长，有些错误铸就美好……近日，校英文社团以“A Valuable Mistake”为题征稿，邀请你分享三年生活中特别的记忆。请你用英语写一篇短文参加投稿，分享你的故事及感悟。
要求：
1.80—120词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
A Valuable Mistake
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【答案】例文
A Valuable Mistake
One day, I sat in the classrm alne. Suddenly I saw Lisa’s new pen n her desk. It is a beautiful pen. I really wanted t wn it. Then I tk the pen and put it in my schlbag. While Lisa was lking fr her pen, I was afraid and didn’t have the curage t tell her the truth. I tld my mther abut the pen after I gt hme. She said I made a mistake and tld me I shuld be hnest and make up fr it.
Then I realized hw wrng I was and felt very srry, s I decided t give the pen back t Lisa and say srry t her. The next day, I did s and Lisa frgave me.
I nce made the mistake. It made me grw up and I learned the imprtance f hnesty.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文主要讲述自己犯的一次错误，要适当补充，使文章内容充实。
［写作步骤］
第一步，详细陈述犯错的经历；
第二步，叙述在他人的帮助下认识到了错误以及纠错的过程；
第三步，总结与感受。
［亮点词汇］
①make up fr 弥补，补偿
②decide t d sth.决定做某事
［高分句型］
①While Lisa was lking fr her pen, I was afraid and didn’t have the curage t tell her the truth. (while引导时间状语从句)
②Then I realized hw wrng I was and felt very srry, s I decided t give the pen back t Lisa and say srry t her. (宾语从句)
14．（2024·安徽六安·三模）在你的三年初中生活中，一定有一个令你非常感动的瞬间。请你根据以下思维导图，以“The Mment That Mved Me Mst”为题用英语写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
2. 不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
3. 词数80—100。
The Mment That Mved Me Mst
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【答案】例文
The Mment That Mved Me Mst
Everyne has a mving mment during the three years f middle schl life. S d I. In the seventh grade, ne day it was raining heavily. After I played basketball in the rain, I gt very sick. When my math teacher Mr. King saw me, he realized I was quite ill. Withut thinking twice, he carried me n his back t the hspital. In the rain, Mr. King was all wet, but he didn’t stp t have a rest. At that mment, I felt the warmth and lve frm him. And in the end, thanks t his sending me t the hspital in time, I had recvered very fast and well.
This is ne f the mst mving mments in my middle schl life. And this experience made me understand that there is always kindness and care arund us. I’ll remember the tuching mment frever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作的内容要求已给出，需要自行阐述“一个感动的瞬间”，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出下文；
第二步，详细阐述这个瞬间相关的人物、时间以及事件具体内容；
第三步，写出结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a rest休息
②thanks t多亏
③in time及时
[高分句型]
①When my math teacher Mr. King saw me, he realized I was quite ill.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②This is ne f the mst mving mments in my middle schl life. （ne f+形容词最高级+可数名词复数）
15．（2024·山东德州·二模）保护环境，从身边做起，作为学校的一份子，我们应该要有主人翁意识，为打造环保校园贡献自己的力量，请你结合上文，根据以下思维导图内容提示， 以“Hw t Make Our Schl Greener?”为题，写一篇小短文。
要求：
1.文中勿提及真实姓名和学校，80-100词左右(短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2.短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息；并在此基础上适当发挥；
3.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
There are many envirnmental prblems in ur schl. Fr example,
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【答案】范文
Hw t Make Our Schl Greener? There are many envirnmental prblems in ur schl. Fr example, thrw litter n the grund at schl and dn’t save water etc. In rder t make ur campus green, it is suggested that we students shuld d many things, which can be listed as fllws.
Hw t Make Our Schl Greener? First f all, never destry the flwers and trees in ur schl. Besides, we shuld keep the schl envirnment neat and clean, thus thrwing away the waste shuld be frbidden. Meanwhile, try t save water if necessary and never frget t turn ff the lights in the daytime r when the classrm is empty. What’s mre, it is als necessary fr schl t make sme rules abut making ur campus green.
In shrt, whatever yu d, please remember t lead a green and healthy life. If yu understand it, yu’ll necessarily benefit a lt frm it. Let’s take actin nw!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，写作时可直接描写校园常见的环保问题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，围绕“打造环保校园的措施”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家行动起来，保护校园环境。
[亮点词汇]
①n the grund在地上
②In rder t为了
③make sth.+adj.使某物……的
④it is suggested that有人建议
⑤neat整洁的，干净的
⑥thrw away扔掉
⑦try t d sth.尝试做某事
⑧frget t d sth.忘记去做某事
⑨turn ff关闭
⑩remember t d sth.记得去做某事
[高分句型]
①In rder t make ur campus green, it is suggested that we students shuld d many things, which can be listed as fllws. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Meanwhile, try t save water if necessary and never frget t turn ff the lights in the daytime r when the classrm is empty. (祈使句和if引导的条件状语从句)
③What’s mre, it is als necessary fr schl t make sme rules abut making ur campus green. (it的固定句型)
16．（2024·吉林长春·三模）人生只有一次，我们要努力活出属于自己的精彩人生。某英文网站正在开展以“Yu Only Live Once”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇不少于 80词的英语短文投稿，讲述一个你自己或者你知道的某个人勇于拼搏、挑战自我、敢于蜕变的励志故事以及你从中获得的启发或激励。(文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。)
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【答案】例文
Yu Only Live Once
During ur grwth, we may gain success and jy, but we may als face difficulties and prblems. When talking abut dealing with prblems in life, ne experience flws int my mind.
When I gt t junir high schl, thusands f exams were like fld cming twards me. N matter hw many effrts I made, my grades were always very unsatisfying. Hwever, I didn’t give up and asked my English teacher fr help. She inspired me t turn difficulties int pprtunities. After that, I studied s hard that my grades imprved. With my effrts and teacher’s encuragement, I nt nly drve away the black cluds, but als deeply understd that I must face difficulties and prblems bravely and never give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般过去时为主；
③提示：写作要点和主题已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的经历；
第二步，分享自己获得的启发。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②ask sb. fr help向某人寻求帮助
③nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①When talking abut dealing with prblems in life, ne experience flws int my mind.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②N matter hw many effrts I made, my grades were always very unsatisfying.（n matter hw引导让步状语从句）
17．（2024·山东德州·二模）学校公众号正在征集以“Grwth (成长)”为主题的英语文章。相信你在初中三年的时间里，除了学习知识，收获友谊，培养个性，参加活动等，还有其他方面的收获吧！请回顾你的初中生活，参考以下提示，以“My schl life”为题，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80~100 词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My schl life
Hw time flies! Lking back at these past three years, I have imprved a lt.
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【答案】例文：
My schl life Hw time flies! Lking back at these past three years, I have imprved a lt. I used t be t shy t express myself in public. But with the teacher’s encuragement, I nt nly becme mre utging, but als get alng well with the peple arund me. Besides, I ften learn frm my classmates s I have made great prgress in my study. Hwever, I als wasted much valuable time in playing cmputer games. What’s wrse, I culdn’t really understand my parents, always talking back t them ludly. But nw, everything has changed. I make a decisin t study harder t make my parents prud f me.
I believe I will have a bright future!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先表明自己在过去的三年里，进步了很多；
第二步，具体介绍自己有哪些收获；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used t d过去常常做某事
②learn frm向……学习
③made great prgress取得巨大进步
④talk back t sb.和某人顶嘴
[高分句型]
①I nt nly becme mre utging, but als get alng well with the peple arund me.(nt nly…but als结构)
②I make a decisin t study harder t make my parents prud f me.(动词不定式目的状语)
18．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·三模）随着社会的进步和教育的发展，我们初中生不仅要学习知识，更要注重提升个人能力和培养良好品质。校园报以“Hw t be a better _______”为题，面向初中毕业生开展征文活动。 请你用student, friend, teenager, reader, learner…，将题目补全，希望同学们能结合自己的生活实际，分享自己的经历，帮助其他同学也成为一个更好的……期待大家的精彩作品！
要求：
1.意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.词数80—120。
Hw t be a better _______
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【答案】例文
Hw t be a better teenager
A natin will prsper nly when its yung peple thrive. S hw can we be better teenagers?
First f all, we shuld develp healthy living habits. We can run fr half an hur every day t keep healthy. What’s mre, we shuld make a study plan and take actins t achieve it. The mre knwledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly t thers. When thers need help, we shuld try ur best t help them. Finally, it is gd t take up gd hbbies and take part in vlunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a wrd, if we try ur best, we will becme better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍如何成为一名更好的年轻人，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述怎样成为一个更好的青少年；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们会变得越来越好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②take up开始从事
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①The mre knwledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级句式)
②In a wrd, if we try ur best, we will becme better and better. (if引导的条件状语从句)
19．（2024·广西来宾·三模）中国梦是一个伟大的梦想。在这个属于奋斗者的新时代，人人都有追梦的权利，人人都是梦 想的筑造者。你的中国梦是什么呢？请以“My dream”为题目，写一篇英语短文分享你的梦想吧！
内容要点：
1.你的梦想是什么？
2.你为什么会有这个梦想？
3.你如何实现这个梦想？
注意：
1.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得透露个人信息；
3.词数80左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： scientist 科学家， engineer 工 程 师 ，astrnaut 宇航员， realize 实现
My dream
Chinese dream is a great dream and everyne has his wn Chinese dream.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
My dream
Chinese dream is a great dream and everyne has his wn Chinese dream. I have a dream that ne day I will becme a teacher.
I am utging and I like kids very much. If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knwledge and skills, and grw up t be useful t the sciety. Children are the future f the natin. Educatin is a basic human right and it’s imprtant in the develpment f children, cmmunities, and cuntries.
T achieve my dream, first I am ging t study hard t enter a university t learn abut educatin and ther subjects. I will als learn t cmmunicate with thers, fr cmmunicating skill is very imprtant fr a teacher.
As lng as I try my best, I am sure my dream will cme true ne day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，写作时可直接描写自己的梦想。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“为什么会有这个梦想”和“如何实现这个梦想”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. d sth.帮助某人做某事
②grw up t成长为
③cmmunicate with sb.和某人交流
④as lng as只要
[高分句型]
①If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knwledge and skills, and grw up t be useful t the sciety. (If引导的条件状语从句)
②As lng as I try my best, I am sure my dream will cme true ne day. (As lng as引导的条件状语从句和宾语从句)
Be brave t express yurself. Slve a difficult prblem by yurself. Achieve success after trying many times.