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【题型分析】
建议信是向收信人针对某事提出自己的建议或忠告，以便让对方接受自己的想法，主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
【高分技巧】
建议信通常包括三部分内容：
1. 写信目的；
2. 介绍详情、说明原因；
3. 提出建议。
话题词汇/金句
常用词汇
1.give/ffer sb. sme advice(n)给某人提建议
2.ask sb. fr advice向某人征求意见
3.as fllws如下
4.in my pinin/in my view/frm my pint f view 在我看来
5.take part in/participate in...参加
6.fllw/take ne's advice采纳某人的建议
7.in this regard 在这点上/在这方面
8.share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事
9.with time ging n 随着时间的推移
10. Be faced with面临
11.take sth. seriusly重视；认真对待
建议信常用句型
1. I'm srry t hear that yu are having truble ...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。
2. I have received yur letter saying yu plan t...我已经收到了你的来信。信上说。。。
3. I'm very glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t ..很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何。。。。
4. I'm very glad t have received yur e-mail. Nw I'm writing t give yu sme advice n hw t ...很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在。。。，我写信给你一些建议。
5.Whatever yu decide t d，gd luck with yur studies/wrk.
不管你做怎么决定，祝你学业/工作好运！
6.I hpe these ways are f sme use t yu, and I believe everything will be ging well again sn!
我希望这些方法对你有用，并且我相信一些都会很快好起来的。
【真题剖析】
1．（2024·青海西宁·中考真题）假如你是Dr. Knw，请根据表格中的要点，给她写一封80词左右的英文回信，帮她解决困扰。可适当发挥，首句已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
Dear Jenny,
I’m very srry t hear yur prblems. Here are my suggestins fr yu.
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Dr. Knw
【答案】A pssible versin:
Dear Jenny,
I’m very srry t hear yur prblems. Here are my suggestins fr yu.
T begin with, yu need t help thers because helping thers is helping yurself. Yu can get much jy and will be ppular. Secndly, yu’d better try yur best t make friends and learn t share. It can duble yur happiness and half yur prblems. The mst imprtant thing is t be a gd listener. Then yu will nt feel lnely and becme utging. Thirdly, jin sme clubs actively. If yu shw yurself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with yur shyness. Yu can have mre chances t practise speaking in public and believe yurself mre. Last but nt least, try new things and share them with friends. They are thirsty fr new things.
In a wrd, yu dn’t have t care t much abut what thers think f yu, just imprve yurself. I believe yu can d it well. Hpe what I said can help yu be better sn.
Dr. Knw
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据表格中的要点提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，引出下文；
第二步，从“帮助他人、结交朋友、参与活动”等方面给出建议；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①t begin with首先
②try ne’s best t尽力去做某事
③make friends交朋友
④care t much abut过于在意
⑤think f考虑到
[高分句型]
①T begin with, yu need t help thers because helping thers is helping yurself.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②If yu shw yurself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with yur shyness.（if引导的条件状语从句）
【话题范文】
1．（2024·湖北·模拟预测）每年的6月6日是我国的“爱眼日”。你校将在本周举行一场“爱眼日”公益活动，号召大家保护视力。请你结合自身实际和活动内容要求，用英语写一篇倡议书。
要求：
（1）短文须包含内容要求中所给的提示；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
June 6 is ur cuntry’s Sight Day. As we knw, “Eyes are the windws t the sul”.
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Fllw my advice and frm gd habits. Let’s say gdbye t thick glasses.
Thank yu!
【答案】
Dear friends,
June 6 is ur cuntry’s Sight Day. As we knw, “Eyes are the windws t the sul”. Hwever, mre and mre students are suffering frm pr eyesight. It’s really imprtant t prtect ur eyes.
Here are sme suggestins n hw t prtect ur eyes. First, dn’t use electrnic prducts fr t lng. When reading r writing, keep the right psture and prper distance. Secnd, take regular breaks during study, and lk at green plants r distant bjects. Third, d eye-prtecting exercises and take part in utdr activities t relax yur eyes.
Fllw my advice and frm gd habits. Let’s say gdbye t thick glasses.
Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中保护视力重要性的认识和建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述保护视力的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述如何保护视力；
第三步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①suffer frm遭受
②take part in参加
③take regular breaks定期休息
[高分句型]
①Here are sme suggestins n hw t prtect ur eyes. (Here be句型)
②Secnd, take regular breaks during study, and lk at green plants r distant bjects. (祈使句)
2．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的朋友Lucy是一名初三学生。考试将至，她来信询问你如何缓解学习压力，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括：
1.表示理解和安慰
2.提出三条建议
3.表达祝愿
要求：要点齐全，表述准确，简洁得体，不少于40词。
Dear Lucy,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lucy,
I understand hw yu feel. It’s nrmal t feel stressed befre exams. Here are sme suggestins t help yu.
First, take regular breaks during yur study time. G fr a walk r d sme simple exercise. Secnd, talk t yur friends r family abut yur feelings. Sharing can make yu feel better. Third, listen t sme sft music t relax.
I wish yu gd luck in yur exams. Believe in yurself and yu’ll d well.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，表述准确并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示理解及安慰；
第二步，就如何缓解学习压力给出自己的三条建议；
第三步，表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①take regular breaks定期休息
②g fr a walk去散步
③talk t sb.和某人交谈
[高分句型]
①Sharing can make yu feel better. (动名词作主语)
②Believe in yurself and yu’ll d well. (并列句)
3．（2023·湖北随州·一模）下面是九年级学生王云在你校“英语学习网”留言板发布的一条求助信息。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。
要点提示：
1.多阅读，扩大词汇量；
2.养成写作的习惯；
3.……
要求：
1.内容须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：vcabulary词汇
Dear Wang Yun,
T help yu imprve yur writing, I’d like t give yu sme advice.
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I hpe my advice is useful and yu’ll make great prgress in yur writing.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Hi, Wang Yun,
T help yu imprve yur writing, I’d like t give yu sme advice.
T begin with, yu dn’t knw what t write abut. I think yu shuld read mre. By reading yu can increase yur vcabulary. If yu have a large vcabulary, it is easier t express yurself in writing. Als reading is a great way t help yu experience different kinds f writing. What’s mre, why dn’t yu fall int the habit f writing? Write smething every day. As the saying ges, “Practice makes perfect.” Yu culd begin by writing shrt nes abut everything yu’re interested in.
Then, there are always lts f grammar mistakes in yur writing. Dn’t wrry abut it. I advise yu t d lts f grammar exercises in yur free time. By ding s, yu’ll imprve yur grammar.
I hpe my advice is useful and yu’ll make great prgress in yur writing.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文。
②时态：主要使用一般现在时。
③提示：作文需要包含三个要点，其中两个已给出（多阅读，扩大词汇量；养成写作的习惯），还需要补充一个要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引出话题；
第二步，中间部分详细阐述每个建议，并适当增加细节；
第三步，结尾总结，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①a large vcabulary 丰富的词汇量
②fall int the habit f 养成……的习惯
③in yur free time 在你的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①If yu have a large vcabulary, it is easier t express yurself in writing.（条件状语从句）
②As the saying ges, “Practice makes perfect.”（引用谚语，增强了文章的说服力）
③By ding s, yu’ll imprve yur grammar.（介词短语作方式状语）
4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。
要点提示：
1. 课程内容建议：
①…… ②…… ③……
2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。
要求：
1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。
提示词：
开设run；课程curse；木工wdwrking；屋顶农场rftp farm；光荣的glrius
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman f the Student Unin. I am writing t
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【答案】例文
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman f the Student Unin. I am writing t share sme suggestins n running the curse.
First, the schl can ffer paper-cutting and wdwrking classes. Secnd, we can build a rftp farm n ne f the buildings, and teachers can teach us hw t plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. Finally, hlding sme cmpetitins like cking cmpetitin will be a nice chice. We can als invite parents t jin in these activities.
Thrugh this curse, we students can nt nly learn sme life skills but als take part in scial activities. Meanwhile, ur schl life will becme mre clurful and meaningful!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表明写信的目的是提供一些开设课程的建议；
第二步，具体介绍课程内容的建议；
第三步，介绍开设课程的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①hld sme cmpetitins举办一些比赛
②take part in参加
③invite sb t d sth邀请某人做某事
④meanwhile同时
[高分句型]
①Secnd, we can build a rftp farm n ne f the buildings, and teachers can teach us hw t plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. (and连接的并列句)
②Finally, hlding sme cmpetitins like cking cmpetitin will be a nice chice. (动名词作主语)
5．（2023·陕西西安·模拟预测）假如你是Amy，你的中国朋友张亮在学习的过程中遇到了很多困难并给你写信求助。请你根据下面的提示信息给张亮写一封英文信，给他一些学习英语的建议。
提示：1．Zhang liang’s prblems: few wrds, pr grammar, can’t speak English well, …；
2．learn t use the dictinary, read mre English bks, …；
3．d mre exercise, make sentences, new wrds, …；
4．jin the English club, talk with thers in English, pen, muth, …
要求：1．参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3．文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4．词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear Zhang Liang,
I have received yur letter and knwn yur prblems in yur English study.
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Hpe yur English will be better and better! Best wishes!
Yurs,
Amy
【答案】Dear Zhang Liang,
I have received yur letter and knwn yur prblems in yur English study. Here are sme suggestins fr yu.
First, yu shuld learn t use the dictinary t lk up new wrds. Reading mre English bks can als help yu imprve yur vcabulary and grammar. Secnd, d mre exercise and try t make sentences with new wrds yu learn. Jining the English club is a gd idea, where yu can talk with thers in English. Dn’t be afraid t pen yur muth and speak. Practice makes perfect. Hpe yur English will be better and better! Best wishes!
Yurs,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的重要信息，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，给对方提出建议；
第二步，具体阐述建议，从使用字典、阅读英语书籍、做练习、加入英语俱乐部等几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①lk up 查找
②make sentences 造句
③jin the English club 加入英语俱乐部
④pen yur muth 开口
[高分句型]
①Reading mre English bks can als help yu imprve yur vcabulary and grammar. (动名词作主语)
②Dn’t be afraid t pen yur muth and speak. (祈使句)
③Jining the English club is a gd idea, where yu can talk with thers in English.（定语从句）
6．（2024·湖北宜昌·三模）校园霸凌时有发生，Jimmy 在学校也曾被霸凌过。请你认真读他的信并给他回复
要求：1：短文必须包括所给所有要点，可适当发挥。
2：文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名。
3：词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jimmy,
It’s nt easy being ur easy t deal with such a thing.
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【答案】例文
Dear Jimmy,
It’s nt easy t deal with such a thing. I’m srry t hear abut what happened t yu. I have experienced smething similar befre. Here is my advice:
First, always stay calm and try t remember their faces r any details abut them. Secnd, avid ging hme alne. Yu walk with friends r take different rutes. Third, it’s very imprtant t tell yur parents r teachers abut this. They can help yu find ways t prtect yurself. Lastly, if it happens again, dn’t give them mney. Instead, shut fr help r run t a safe place.
Stay strng, Jimmy. Yu are nt alne in this.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据Jimmy的信件，提炼出写作要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对Jimmy的遭遇表示同情，并表示自己有类似的经历；
第二步，就如何应对校园霸凌给出自己的建议；
第三步，鼓励Jimmy并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②stay calm保持冷静
③avid ding sth.避免做某事
[高分句型]
Lastly, if it happens again, dn’t give them mney. (if引导的条件状语从句)
7．（22-23八年级下·湖北襄阳·期末）为缓解学习压力，你的好友Frank 沉迷于电脑游戏，每晚玩游戏到很晚，上课无心听讲，学习直线下降，你看在眼里，急在心里，作为好朋友，请你给Frank写一封信，动之以情，晓之以理，劝他正确处理学习压力和娱乐的关系。
要点提示如下：
(1) 简要表达你对Frank现状的担忧；
(2) 结合Frank的情况重点阐述玩游戏的利弊；
(3) 给出1-2条缓解压力的合理化建议。
写作要求：
90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实姓名或校名；行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
Dear Frank,
As yur gd friend,
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Hpe everything will be better with yu.
Yurs,
xxx
【答案】Dear Frank,
As yur gd friend, I’m really wrried abut yu. Playing cmputer games t much has many disadvantages. It makes yu sleep late and yu have n energy t listen t the teacher in class, which leads t yur pr grades. Yu dn’t have enugh time t review and d yur hmewrk. Mrever, it can als have a negative impact n yur eyesight and physical health. But n the ther hand, playing games can relax yu fr a shrt time. Hwever, it shuld be cntrlled.
T deal with the study pressure, yu can d sme sprts like running r playing basketball. These activities can nt nly help yu relieve stress but als keep yu fit. Or yu can listen t music t calm dwn. Maybe yu can als talk t yur parents r teachers abut yur trubles. Hpe yu can balance study and entertainment well.
Hpe everything will be better with yu.
Yurs,
xxx
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封建议信。
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中涉及的对现状的担忧、利弊分析及合理化建议等方面的表述，适当添加连接词，使行文连贯、通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出担忧并概述过度玩游戏的弊端；
第二步，提供减压及提升学习状态的积极建议；
第三步，表达期望与祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①have many disadvantages有许多缺点
②lead t导致
③negative impact负面影响
④relieve stress缓解压力
⑤keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①Playing cmputer games t much has made yu sleep late and lse fcus in class. (动名词短语作主语)
②It makes yu sleep late and yu have n energy t listen t the teacher in class, which leads t yur pr grades.(and连接并列句；which引导非限制性定语从句)
③T deal with the study pressure, yu can d sme sprts like running r playing basketball. ( 动词不定式作目的状语)
8．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假如你是王平，上周你的班级召开了以“如何利用时间”为主题的班会。你的朋友Mike对此很感兴趣，来信询问。请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信，并告诉他如何做一名自律的学生。
写作要点：
1．班会的主题是：如何利用时间
2．同学们的做法：
（1）李梅：利用课间的休息时间看喜欢的书；
（2）张明：坚持每天做练习题，发现问题；
（3）我：严格执行自己的学习计划。
3．告诉他如何做一名自律的（self-disciplined）学生。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4．至少80词。
Dear Mike,
Hw is everything ging?
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Wang Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Hw is everything ging? Last week, I’m writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. The theme f the class meeting is hw t make use f time. Here are the pinins f several students in ur class.
Li Mei ften spends her break time reading bks that she is interested in. She thinks it is very interesting. Zhang Ming keeps ding exercises every day. When he finds prblems, he will ask the teacher fr help. I always carry ut my study plan strictly.
I think yu shuld be a self-disciplined student. First f all, yu shuld fllw schl rules and get n well with yur classmates at schl. Secndly, yu shuld finish ur hmewrk n time and help ur parents with husewrk at hme. Best wishes!
Yurs,
Wang Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍同学们是如何利用时间的，并告诉他如何做一名自律的学生，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍同学们是如何利用时间的；
第三步，告诉他如何做一名自律的学生。
[亮点词汇]
①make use f利用
②spend time ding sth.花费时间做某事
③carry ut执行
④get n well with sb.和某人和谐相处
[高分句型]
①Li Mei ften spends her break time reading bks that she is interested in. (that引导的定语从句)
②When he finds prblems, he will ask the teacher fr help. (when引导的时间状语从句)
9．（2024·湖南长沙·三模）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tm来信，告诉你他最近经常学习到很晚，睡眠不好，成绩也没提高，学习压力较大。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封信，帮助他解决问题。
要求：
1. 请结合生活实际，自行补充第三点建议；
2. 要涵盖表格中的要点，可适当增加细节；
3. 字数80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4. 文中不能出现本人真实姓名和班级。
Dear Tm,
I’m srry t hear that yu have much stress these days.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tm,
I’m srry t hear that yu have much stress these days. It is nrmal t have a lt f pressure fr teenagers. I wuld like t share sme ways t lwer stress with yu.
First f all, yu had better make a gd study plan. A gd plan can make yu study efficiently. Besides, yu shuld get enugh sleep s that yu have much enenrgy t learn knwledge in class. Remember that yu shuldn’t play games r yur phne befre bedtime. Last but nt least, d sme exercise t relax yurself every day.
Hpefully, my suggestins are f great help t yu. Please let me knw if yu have any prblems.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对别人的问题表达同情，并引出主题；
第二步，从要点提示的三个方面具体介绍自己给出的建议；
第三步，总结全文，希望自己的建议有用。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb d sth让某人做某事
②be f great help t sb对某人非常有用
[高分句型]
①Besides, yu shuld get enugh sleep s that yu have much enenrgy t learn knwledge in class. （目的状语从句）
②Remember that yu shuldn’t play games r yur phne befre bedtime.（宾语从句）
10．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina，收到Li Wei同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。
要求：
1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.词数：80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：laugh at; care abut; high-fat fd (高脂肪食物); the mre; the healthier.
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received yur letter and I can understand yu.
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Yurs,
Rina
【答案】例文：
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received yur letter and I can understand yu. Yu must feel bad when being laughed at use f yur ver-weight. Here is my advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Secndly, try t eat healthily. Keep away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, I strngly advise yu t exercise mre ften. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly. The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be.
I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Rina
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“变得自信”、“健康饮食”以及“适当运动”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①laugh at嘲笑
②ver-weight过度肥胖
③need t d sth.需要做某事
④care abut关心
⑤help sb. d sth.帮助某人做某事
⑥try t d sth.尝试做某事
⑦advise sb. t d sth.建议某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. (there be句型)
②The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. (as引导的原因状语从句)
③Keep away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. (祈使句)
④I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu. (省略that的宾语从句)
11．（2024·湖南常德·二模）你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初三学生Angela的来信，她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，针对Angela的问题，提出你的建议并阐述理由。
注意：
1.要点包括图表中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数：不少于 80词 (短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人真实信息。
Dear Angela,
I am srry t hear that yu are having a bad time nw. In yur letter yu said that
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Gd luck with everything!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Angela,
I am srry t hear that yu are having a bad time nw. In yur letter yu said that yu have prblems with parents and much study stress. Here is sme helpful advice fr yu.
As fr the prblems with yur parents, yu shuld try t listen t them and cmmunicate with them mre ften. In this way yu may knw each ther better. It’s als a gd idea t take a walk with them r help them with husewrk. As fr yur study, dn’t put t much pressure n yurself. Yu shuld live a healthy life s that yu can take care f yur bdy, which is the mst imprtant thing t yu. Yu’d better have a healthy diet, have enugh sleep and keep exercising every day. What’s mre, why dn’t yu listen t yur favrite music t make yurself relaxed when yu’re tired r unhappy?
Gd luck with everything!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，明确对方的问题；
第二步，针对问题提出建议；
第三步，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①as fr至于
②try t d sth试着做某事
③what’s mre另外
[高分句型]
①It’s als a gd idea t take a walk with them r help them with husewrk. (it固定句型)
②As fr yur study, dn’t put t much pressure n yurself. (否定祈使句)
12．（2024·山东菏泽·二模）假如你是校刊Teenagers的主编李华，学生Grace向你诉说她进入初三后面临的压力，请根据以下思维导图，给该同学回信提供建议。
要点如下：
1. 学生 Grace 向你诉说她进入初三后面临的压力。
2. 给该学生回信提供建议。
要求：
(1) 全面反映图表信息；
(2) 应包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使图文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；
(4) 词数：100左右。
Dear Grace,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Grace,
I’m srry t hear that yu have s many prblems. Here is my advice. First, yu needn’t care t much abut the results f the exams, but mst imprtantly try t find ut why yu failed and avid making the same mistakes again.
Mrever, yu must understand the expectatins frm yur parents wh lve yu s much and hpe yu can have a bright future. S I think yu shuld cmmunicate with yur parents. And prper hmewrk can help yu review what yu are taught in class and master it better. It is a gd way t find ways t relax. Besides, yu can take a glass f milk befre ging t bed, which can guarantee yu a sund sleep.
Wish yu all the best!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应根据题干思维导图，给该同学回信提供建议并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示自己的同情；
第二步，结合思维导图给出建议；
第三步，希望对方能够好转并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①find ut找到
②cmmunicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①Mrever, yu must understand the expectatins frm yur parents wh lve yu s much and hpe yu can have a bright future. （wh引导的定语从句）
②And prper hmewrk can help yu review what yu are taught in class and master it better.（that引导的宾语从句）
建议
原因
帮助他人
使人快乐受到欢迎
结交朋友
互诉烦恼变得开朗
参与活动
展示自我自信满满
……
……
The Main Cntent (内容)
Eyes are the windws t the sul! What’s the imprtance f prtecting ur eyes? What’s the advice n prtecting ur eyes? Yu can talk abut them.
I’m pr in English writing and I want t imprve it. First, I dn’t knw what t write abut. Secnd, there are always lts f grammar mistakes in my writing. Culd yu please give me sme advice? Many thanks.
Wang Yun
Class 3 Grade 9
Dear Li Hua ,
Hw is it ging? I was stpped t ask fr sme mney by sme bad students n my way hme last Wednesday. They are much taller and strnger than me. I was t afraid t refuse. Besides, they warned me nt t tell what happened t my teachers r parents. Have yu ever experienced such a thing? Hw did yu deal with it? What shuld I d if I am bullied again? Can yu give me sme advice? Lk frward t yur reply.
Jimmy
Angela’s prblems
Yur advice and reasns
prblems with parents
1. listen and cmmunicate—knw each ther better
2. (请补充)
压力山大
1. live a healthy life—take care f yur bdy
2. (请补充)