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一，文化对比
1．2025届上海市浦东新区高三下学期二模（期中）英语试卷
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
British farms are attracting mdern cnsumers
Peterley Manr Farm has mved a lng way frm traditinal farming. When Rger Brill, a furth-generatin farmer tk ver the farm in 1982, he grew and sld fruit and vegetables frm the farm gate. Nw the farm basts a “wild spa” with utdr ice baths and a wd-fired steam bath, yga(瑜伽) classes in a Mnglian yurt(蒙古包).
Branching ut has becme the nrm fr mdern farmers. Nearly 70% f farms in England are engaging in different cmmercial activities. Out f thse with additinal incme streams, ne in five earn mre than half f their incme frm diversified initiatives. Half f farm-wners let ut space fr ther activities, accrding t figures frm the Department fr Envirnment, Fd & Rural Affairs (DEFRA); a fifth generate incme frm slar energy.
The decisin t diversify may nt be new: farmers have sught alternative incme streams fr decades. But the need has becme mre urgent. Farms have been squeezed by huge rises in energy csts and the rapidly increasing cst f agricultural labur in recent years. Increasingly unpredictable weather, including recrd amunts f rainfall, has made harvests less reliable. Changing subsidy(补贴) arrangements add t the uncertainty. DEFRA estimates that up t 42% f all farms are unprfitable withut the Basic Payment Scheme (BPS), a subsidy that was intrduced in 2015 and is nw ending.
Diversificatin brings new business fr struggling farms. But adapting t cnsumer demands leaves them expsed t wider ecnmic cycles. It als requires them t find wrkers with new skills. In future Peterley Manr Farm will need mre marketers and chefs, fr instance, and fewer farm hands. In ne respect, thugh, things are nt that different frm ld-fashined farming. “The service industry is challenging,” says Ms Brill. “It’s hard wrk and lng hurs.”
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【答案】British farms have transfrmed frm traditinal farming t cmmercial services t seek mre incme. This shift is mainly due t the urgent need t cpe with rising csts, unpredictable weather, and subsidy refrms. Despite new business pprtunities, this diversificatin is still challenging with mre demands fr new skills and hard wrk. (51 wrds)
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。主要介绍了英国农场已经从传统农业转向商业服务，以寻求更多收入。这种转变主要是由于迫切需要应对不断上涨的成本、不可预测的天气和补贴改革。尽管有新的商业机会，但这种多样化仍然具有挑战性，因为需要更多的新技能和努力工作。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①Branching ut has becme the nrm fr mdern farmers. Nearly 70% f farms in England are engaging in different cmmercial activities.
②The decisin t diversify may nt be new: farmers have sught alternative incme streams fr decades. Increasingly unpredictable weather, including recrd amunts f rainfall, has made harvests less reliable.
③Farms have been squeezed by huge rises in energy csts and the rapidly increasing cst f agricultural labur in recent years. Changing subsidy arrangements add t the uncertainty.
④Diversificatin brings new business fr struggling farms. But adapting t cnsumer demands leaves them expsed t wider ecnmic cycles. It als requires them t find wrkers with new skills.
2.缜密构思将第1、4两个要点进行重组，将第2、3两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句British farms have shifted frm traditinal farming t cmmercial services in search f mre incme.
This shift is mainly driven by the urgent need t deal with rising csts, unpredictable weather and subsidy refrm.
Despite the new business pprtunities, but this kind f diversity is still challenging, because need mre new skills and wrk hard.
【点睛】[高分句型1] British farms have transfrmed frm traditinal farming t cmmercial services t seek mre incme.（运用了动词不定式t d作目的状语。）
[高分句型2]：Despite new business pprtunities, this diversificatin is still challenging with mre demands fr new skills and hard wrk.（运用了Despite的介词短语作状语。）
2．2025届上海市闵行区高三上学期质量调研（一模）英语试题
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Enjy Small Treats withut Guilt
In tday’s fast-paced wrld, it’s easy t feel guilty abut taking time fr urselves. Whether it’s treating urselves t a sweet treat, watching an episde f ur favrite TV shw, r buying smething we dn’t really need, we ften assciate these “guilty pleasures” with negative feelings. But what if we stpped feeling guilty? What if we enjyed these small treats as part f ur self-care rutine?
Life is all abut balance. We wrk hard and manage respnsibilities but we smetimes frget t take care f ur mental well-being. Small pleasures, when dne mindfully, can actually cntribute t a healthier and mre balanced life. They prvide us with a chance t relax, recharge, and enjy life’s little mments.
There’s a difference between self-care and verding it. Self-care is abut ding things that restre us; while ging t far can lead t negative cnsequences. The key is mderatin. Fr example, treating yurself t a chclate bar after a lng week isn’t a prblem — it’s a frm f self-care, a small act f kindness t yurself. But if we d this every day and it gets ut f hand. then it might lead t guilt r ther issues.
Guilt is a majr barrier t enjying small treats. We ften feel as thugh we dn’t deserve a treat, r that we shuld always be wrking tward smething bigger. But taking time t enjy life is nt a luxury — it’s necessary. Accepting guilty pleasures withut guilt can actually imprve ur prductivity and mental health. A relaxed and happy mind is far mre effective than ne filled with stress.
S next time yu feel tempted t treat yurself, remember that it’s kay. Life is t shrt nt t enjy the little things — s g ahead and embrace yur guilty pleasures. Yu deserve it!
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【答案】Life requires balance, and small pleasures help us recharge and enjy it. The key is enjying pleasures in mderatin, while t much can cause prblems. It's necessary t treat urselves withut guilt, which makes us mre prductive and mentally healthier. S, treat urselves t small pleasures we deserve.
【导语】本文是一篇议论文。我们常常会对一些小的享受感到内疚，但我们真的需要这样吗？生活需要平衡，小的快乐帮助我们充电并生活。关键是要适度地享受这些快乐，因为过度则可能带来问题。我们需要无内疚地享受这些小快乐，这能让我们更有生产力心理更健康。所以，享受我们应得的小快乐吧。
【详解】要点摘录
①In tday’s fast-paced wrld, it’s easy t feel guilty abut taking time fr urselves.
②But what if we stpped feeling guilty? What if we enjyed these small treats as part f ur self-care rutine?
③Life is all abut balance.
④Small pleasures, when dne mindfully, can actually cntribute t a healthier and mre balanced life. They prvide us with a chance t relax, recharge, and enjy life’s little mments.
⑤The key is mderatin.
⑥But if we d this every day and it gets ut f hand. then it might lead t guilt r ther issues.
⑦Accepting guilty pleasures withut guilt can actually imprve ur prductivity and mental health. A relaxed and happy mind is far mre effective than ne filled with stress.
⑧Life is t shrt nt t enjy the little things — s g ahead and embrace yur guilty pleasures. Yu deserve it!
缜密构思
将第1、2要点合并，将第3、4要点整合，将5、6、7总结，将8总结。
遣词造句
Life requires balance, and small pleasures help us recharge and enjy it.
The key is enjying pleasures in mderatin, while t much can cause prblems.
It's necessary t treat urselves withut guilt, which makes us mre prductive and mentally healthier.
S, treat urselves t small pleasures we deserve.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The key is enjying pleasures in mderatin, while t much can cause prblems. 使用while引导的并列句。
[高分句型2] It's necessary t treat urselves withut guilt, which makes us mre prductive and mentally healthier. 使用which引导的非限制性定语从句。
社会热点
3．2025届上海市高考3月教学质量监测英语试题
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 70 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Dumb phnes (非智能手机) are making a cmeback
It is hard t imagine life withut a smartphne these days. Nine in ten American adults wn ne, and they spend 3 hurs and 45 minutes n them a day, n average. New versins updated with artificial intelligence may be even harder t put dwn.
Yet a market is als grwing fr phnes that are simple-designed. These dumb phnes accunt fr just 2% f phne sales in America. But demand is grwing. In 2016, a Finnish firm bught the rights t relaunch the devices f Nkia, which is nw selling “tens f thusands” f flip-phnes (翻盖式手机) a mnth in America.
Dumb phnes tday d nt nly cpy thse f the past, thugh. Startups ffer simple-designed devices f their wn. One example is the Light Phne, which is shaped like an iPd and has an e-ink screen like a Kindle. It als allws users t add ptinal “tls” including a pdcast-player and a directins app.
What explains the return f the dumb phne? One factr is anxiety ver the impact f smartphnes — and scial-media apps in particular — n yung peple’s mental health. That is why Etn, a well-knwn British schl, annunced in July that it wuld bar its future prime ministers frm bringing smartphnes t schl, and wuld prvide them with Nkia phnes instead.
But plenty f grwnups are als chsing dumb phnes f their wn free will. Jse Brines, wh hsts a cnference fcused n dumb phnes n Reddit, a scial-media site, switched t the Light Phne after grwing alarmed at his rising screen-time recrd. Like many new cmers, he still keeps a smartphne fr situatins such as travelling abrad. Other smartphne addicts are instead chsing t simplify their devices, either by deleting apps r dwnlading nes that cntrl screen time, f which there are a grwing number.
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【答案】
Nn-smart phnes are regaining ppularity. Althugh smart phnes are prevalent, the demand fr nn-smart phnes is grwing, with bth re-launched ld mdels and new designs. One factr is anxiety abut smart phne impacts n yung peple’s mental health. The ther factr is that plenty f grwnups are als chsing dumb phnes f their wn free will.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。非智能手机正重新流行。尽管智能手机普及，但非智能手机需求在增长，不仅有复刻款，还有新创品牌。其回归原因包括对智能手机危害的担忧，以及年轻人和成年人都有选择非智能手机的情况。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Dumb phnes (非智能手机) are making a cmeback
②It is hard t imagine life withut a smartphne these days.
③But demand is grwing.
④Dumb phnes tday d nt nly cpy thse f the past, thugh. Startups ffer simple-designed devices f their wn.
⑤One factr is anxiety ver the impact f smartphnes — and scial-media apps in particular — n yung peple’s mental health.
⑥But plenty f grwnups are als chsing dumb phnes f their wn free will.
2.缜密构思将第2、3、4三个要点进行重组，将第5、6两个要点进行重写。
3.遣词造句
Dumb phnes are making a cmeback
Despite prevalence f smart phnes, the demand fr nn-smart phnes is grwing, with bth re-launched ld mdels and new designs.
One factr is anxiety abut smart phne influences n yung peple’s mental health.
The ther reasn is that many grwnups are als chsing dumb phnes f their wn free will.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Althugh smart phnes are prevalent, the demand fr nn-smart phnes is grwing, with bth re-launched ld mdels and new designs.(运用althugh引导的让步状语从句对第一段和第二段进行总结，表达高级)
[高分句型2] The ther factr is that plenty f grwnups are als chsing dumb phnes f their wn free will.(用that引导的表语从句对最后一段进行概括，表达高级)
4．2025届上海市徐汇区高三上学期一模考试英语试题
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s)f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Why we hate phne calls
Suddenly a sund rings ut, stpping yu in yur tracks. Panicking, yu search fr where it culd be cming frm. It’s yur phne, and if yu’ re like a quarter f 18 t 30-year-lds in a recent British study, yu prbably wn’t answer it. The same study fund that 70% f the peple in this age grup prefer text messages t phne calls. Why d s many yung peple hate phne calls?
While previus generatins grew up using landlines t talk t their friends, smartphne-equipped yunger peple have grwn up used t using text messages fr scial cnversatins. There’s less pressure with texting. Yu can read and respnd t messages n yur wn schedule, and yu can take time t think abut what yu want t say rather than being put n the spt during a phne call. Besides, when yu can craft a reply free f interruptin, yu have greater cntrl ver yur cntributins t a cnversatin. Cmmunicatin like phne calls can lead peple t feel a lss f cntrl and the crrespnding anxiety. Many yung peple reprt assciating phne calls, particularly thse withut prir warning, with bad news.
This means that new scial cdes are being established. Many peple will nw text smene t see if they’re available t take a phne call. If smene desn’t feel able t sum smething up in a few shrt messages, they might leave a lng vice nte.
But this desn’t mean that anxiety arund cmmunicatin has been stpped. Evidence suggests that texting can als cause anxiety. Many times, texting anxiety cmes frm frustratin, fear, and wrry ver the reactins f ther peple. Fr instance, a shrt respnse t yur lng message might be interpreted as a cld shrug and many peple reprt tensins frm being “left n read”— when yu knw smene has read yur message, but they dn’t, r wn’t, reply.
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【答案】Study fund that yung peple nwadays prefer text messages t phne calls because there is less pressure and they can have mre cntrl ver the cmmunicatin, which reduces anxiety. New scial cde invlves texting t check availability befre calling r leaving a vice message. Hwever, texting can create new anxieties abut ther peple’s reactins.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。研究发现，现在的年轻人更喜欢发短信而不是打电话，因为这样压力更小，他们可以更好地控制交流，从而减少焦虑。新的社交准则包括在打电话或留言前先发短信确认是否有空。然而，发短信会让人对别人的反应产生新的焦虑。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①While previus generatins grew up using landlines t talk t their friends, smartphne-equipped yunger peple have grwn up used t using text messages fr scial cnversatins.
②There’s less pressure with texting. Yu can read and respnd t messages n yur wn schedule, and yu can take time t think abut what yu want t say rather than being put n the spt during a phne call.
③This means that new scial cdes are being established.
④Many peple will nw text smene t see if they’re available t take a phne call.
⑤But this desn’t mean that anxiety arund cmmunicatin has been stpped. Evidence suggests that texting can als cause anxiety.
⑥Many times, texting anxiety cmes frm frustratin, fear, and wrry ver the reactins f ther peple.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行重组，将第5、6两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Study fund that yung peple nwadays prefer text messages t phne calls.
There is less pressure and they can have mre cntrl ver the cmmunicatin, which reduces anxiety.
New scial cde invlves texting t check availability t take a phne call.
Texting can create new anxieties abut ther peple’s reactins
【点睛】[高分句型1] Study fund that yung peple nwadays prefer text messages t phne calls because there is less pressure and they can have mre cntrl ver the cmmunicatin, which reduces anxiety.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。其中that引导的宾语从句、because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句为高级表达。)
[高分句型2]New scial cde invlves texting t check availability befre calling r leaving a vice message.(运用两个动名词短语作宾语，概况了第三段的主要内容)。
5．2025届上海市虹口区高三上学期一模考试英语试题
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Hw Green is the Paris Olympic Games?
The rganizers f the Paris Olympic Games have prmised t make the Games the mst sustainable in the decades since climate change became a cncern. But hw did it wrk?
On the plus side, rganizers have been serius in their effrts t educe carbn emissins. They measured the expected carbn ftprint f the Games, reduced emissins thrugh energy efficiencies and limited new cnstructin by using existing facilities.
But, the sustainability effrts in Paris have nt all been smth sailing. The Seine is scheduled t hst marathn swimming. But despite spending 1.4 billin eurs trying t clean the river, French authrities have achieved incnsistent results: Water tests in June still shwed high levels f pllutants.
The Paris rganizers had als hped t rely n a cling system that pump cld water beneath the village’s flrs. That technlgy was expected t reduce the carbn impact by 45 percent. Bur, eventually, they gave up their ambitin t avid using cnventinal air-cnditining in the Olympic Village, installing sme 2,500 temprary air-cnditining units.
Fr years, the rganizers all prmised the Games wuld be “climate psitive.” But, whatever effrts were taken, nne f them culd really achieve sustainability as lng as millins f turists flew int the hst city. Organizers f the Ri Olympics in 2016 estimated that mre than 40% f the carbn emissins came frm internatinal spectatrs. This year, with tickets available n a central platfrm glbally, the number f internatinal visitrs was beynd cntrl.
Fr all the effrts in Paris t reduce the carbn impact f the games, sme f which have been cnsiderable, the scale f future Games must be rethught. Jules Bykff, wh has written extensively abut the Olympic Games, rightly argues that “the Games need t reduce their size”. It wuldn’t slve everything, but it wuld make these events mre sustainable.
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【答案】The Paris Olympic Games fell shrt f its sustainability gals. Effrts t reduce carbn emissins faced setbacks, including pllutin in the Seine, the need fr temprary air-cnditining units in the Olympic Village and the uncntrlled number f internatinal visitrs. Scaling dwn future Games fr greater sustainability might be a pssible slutin.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，巴黎奥运会未能实现其可持续发展目标。减少碳排放的努力遇到了挫折，包括塞纳河的污染、奥运村对临时空调设备的需求以及无法控制的国际游客数量。缩小未来奥运会的规模以获得更大的可持续性可能是一种解决方案。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①But, the sustainability effrts in Paris have nt all been smth sailing.
②But despite spending 1.4 billin eurs trying t clean the river, French authrities have achieved incnsistent results: Water tests in June still shwed high levels f pllutants.
③Bur, eventually, they gave up their ambitin t avid using cnventinal air-cnditining in the Olympic Village, installing sme 2,500 temprary air-cnditining units.
④But, whatever effrts were taken, nne f them culd really achieve sustainability as lng as millins f turists flew int the hst city.
⑤Fr all the effrts in Paris t reduce the carbn impact f the games, sme f which have been cnsiderable, the scale f future Games must be rethught.
⑥Jules Bykff, wh has written extensively abut the Olympic Games, rightly argues that “the Games need t reduce their size”.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行重组，将第2、3、4和5、6几个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
The Paris Olympics failed t meet its sustainable develpment gals.
Effrts t reduce carbn emissins have run int setbacks, including pllutin f the Seine River, the need fr temprary air cnditining units in the Olympic village and uncntrllable numbers f internatinal visitrs.
Dwnsizing future Olympics fr greater sustainability culd be ne slutin.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Effrts t reduce carbn emissins faced setbacks, including pllutin in the Seine, the need fr temprary air-cnditining units in the Olympic Village and the uncntrlled number f internatinal visitrs.对原文二、三、四段进行了概括，运用了不定式作名词Effrts的后置定语。
[高分句型2] Scaling dwn future Games fr greater sustainability might be a pssible slutin. 对原文最后一段进行了概括，运用了动名词作主语。
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2024年“艺术家外在形象”要求批判性思维；2025年春考“英国运河”涉及文化遗产保护。
1. 文化对比：中西艺术表现形式（如中国书法与西方抽象画）。

2. 社会热点：如“双减”政策对教育的影响、社交媒体对青少年的利弊。