【新教材核心素养】沪教版英语八上Unit 6 Wisdom counts 第4课时Writing（课件+教案带反思+单元整体教学设计）

Unit 6 Wisdom countsWriting目录CONTENTBy the end of the lesson, I will be able to...123master the three-part structure of a wisdom short story;describe ancient wisdom story characters’ actions and feelings in detail;explain lessons from ancient wisdom stories and tell a complete one.Learning objectivesThe school short story competition is calling all talented writers! Please write a story and send it to us. Winning stories will be included in this year's storybook.Writing a short story about wisdomSCOOP1. Setting3. Oh no! (the problem)5.Problem Solved4.Order of Events2. CharactersThe school short story competition is calling all talented writers!Please write a story and send it to us. Winning stories will be included in this year's storybook.Think and share.What makes a good story?What's the SCOOP?Lead inSCOOPWhat's the SCOOP?1. SettingTells WHEN and WHERE3. Oh no! (the problem)What is the PROBLEM in the story?5.Problem SolvedHow is the problem solved or fixed?4.Order of EventsTell the story IN ORDER2. CharactersWHO is in the story?Look and say.Lead inAfter the war, one of the Greek soldiers in the Trojan Horse wrote a story about his experience. Read the story and see how he organized his story. Writing a short story about wisdomLook and fill.It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do? One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment. That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy. The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!SCOOP1. Setting3. Oh no! (the problem)5.Problem Solved4.Order of Events2. CharactersPre-writingWriting a short story about wisdomLook and fill.It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do? One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment. That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy. The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!SCOOP1. Setting3. Oh no! (the problem)5.Problem Solved4.Order of Events2. CharactersHot dry summer, Troy, after ten years’ fightingGreek soldiers, Trojans, Trojan captainCouldn’t capture Troy, tired of war, missed homeBuilt wooden horse → hid inside → placed outside Troy → pretended to sail away → Trojans took horse in → climbed out at midnight → opened gate → entered TroyCaptured Troy, went homePre-writingSCOOP1. Setting3. Oh no! (the problem)5.Problem Solved4.Order of Events2. CharactersHot dry summer, Troy, after ten years’ fightingGreek soldiers, Trojans, Trojan captainCouldn’t capture Troy, tired of war, missed homeBuilt wooden horse → hid inside → placed outside Troy → pretended to sail away → Trojans took horse in → climbed out at midnight → opened gate → entered TroyCaptured Troy, went homeWriting a short story about wisdomLook and fill.Part 1: Setting the scene time, place, weather, character(s)(appearance, clothes, feelings, etc.)Paris 2: Developing the storyWhat happened at the beginning, in the middle, and at the end?(Put the events in time order.)Part 3: Ending the storyWhat did the character(s) do at the end of the story, and how did they feel?Pre-writing Paris 1: Setting the scene time, place, weather, character(s)(appearance, clothes, feelings, etc.)Paris 2: Developing the storyWhat happened at the beginning, in the middle, and at the end?(Put the events in time order.)Part 3: Ending the storyWhat did the character(s) do at the end of the story, and how did they feel?It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do? One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment.That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy. The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!Read and analyze the outline.Pre-writingRead and fill in the chart.TimeLocationCharactersCharacter StatesBeginningMiddleEndGreeksTrojansPre-writingIt was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do? One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment. That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy. The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!third-person narrativefirst-person narrativeWho was telling the story?Pre-writingLook and learn-About the language.It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do? One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment. That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy. The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!The Trojan captain’s words / actions The Greek soldier’s feelings / actionsLook and learn-About the language.Pre-writingHow were the characters’ actions, feelings and thoughts described? A man uses a clever strategy to win a series of horse races.What stories about wisdom do you know? Guess what the following stories are. Writing a short story about wisdomGuessing game.During a battle on the Yangtze River, a general uses fire to defeat a much more powerful enemy.To trick the enemy, a general leaves the gates to the city open. The enemy leader thinks this is a trap and orders his army to leave.Pre-writingStep1 Plan Plan your story based on the three parts in Exercise 2 Write a famous story about wisdom. While-writingTimeLocationCharactersCharacter StatesBeginningMiddleEndCharacter 1Character 1Step 2 Write Write the story. Make sure to include detailed descriptions of the character’s actions, feelings and comments __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2 Write a famous story about wisdom. While-writingStep 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.While-writingFind and write. I included the three parts, such as _______________, in my story. I provided detailed descriptions of the character’s actions, feelings and comments. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.Long ago in ancient China, the strong State of Wei send many soldiers to attack the State of Zhao. Wei’s soldiers surround Zhao’s capital tightly. Zhao is in great danger. The king of Zhao quickly send people to the State of Qi for help.Sun Bin was a wise man from Qi. He think hard and have a good plan, “If we fight Wei’s army near Zhao, we’ll lose many soldiers. Let’s attack Wei’s capital instead—Wei’s army will have to go back to save it!”​Qi’s army did what Sun Bin said. When Wei’s soldiers heard their capital was in danger, they hurried back at once and left Zhao. At last, Zhao was safe.​This famous plan is called “Surround Wei to save Zhao”. It tell us: sometimes we need to use wisdom, not just force, to solve hard problems.Read and correct.Post-writingsent surroundedwassentthoughttellsLong long ago in the Three Kingdoms period, Zhou Yu has been jealous of Zhuge Liang’s wisdom. He give Zhuge Liang a hard task: to make 100,000 arrows in just three days. Zhuge Liang agree and said he can do it.He asked his soldiers to prepare many straw boats. On the third night, when the fog was very thick, Zhuge Liang take the boats to the enemy’s camp. The enemy soldiers, thinking they are being attacked, shoot lots of arrows at the boats.When the boats came back, Zhuge Liang had got more than 100,000 arrows. Zhou Yu is surprised and say, “Zhuge Liang is really clever!”Read and correct.Post-writingwas gaveagreedtookwereshotsaidGrade and shareShow it.Post-writingThe words we have learned一、根据首字母或中文提示完成单词。The Greeks tried to c___________ the city of Troy.They made a huge w ___________ horse.The soldiers h ___________ inside the horse. The Trojans celebrated their v ___________. The Greek soldiers pretended to s ___________ away in their ships. We should always tell the truth and never p ___________ to be someone else.SummaryaptureoodenidictoryailretendThe phrases we have learned二、英汉翻译。上船 _______________ (2) 假装离开 ___________________(3) 厌倦 _______________ (4) 庆祝胜利 ___________________三、用方框内短语的正确形式填空。go on board, sail away, be tired of, celebrate victoryAfter the plan worked, all the Greek soldiers _______________ their ships and _______________.(2) We _______________ the long war and were eager for peace.(3) The Trojans drank and danced to _______________.Summarygo on boardpretend to sail awaybe tired ofcelebrate victorywent on boardsailed awaywere tired ofcelebrate victory三、用括号内动词的正确形式填空。It was a hot summer day. The Greeks _________ (try) to capture Troy.(2) One of us _________ (have) a clever idea that day.(3) We __________ (hide) inside the wooden horse.(4) The Trojan captain ______ (cry) when we captured him.(5) The Greeks ______ (leave) their ships on the shore and pretended to sail away.(6) The Trojan soldiers _______ (find) the huge wooden horse and reported it to the captain.The sentences we have learnedSummarytriedhadhidcriedleftfoundAssessmentHomework