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这是一份小学英语新人教版PEP五上Unit5 写作突破专项训练含答案,共8页。
Unit 5衔接词串联法写植物种植的方法
01 写作方法指引-原文指路
Look! This is my favourite vegetable. It comes from ... This is how you grow it. (总体介绍某种植物)
First, you plant its seed. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织开头内容)
Then ...
Next.. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织中间内容)
Finally... (用衔接词按时间顺序组织结尾内容)
02 写作方法指引-衔接词串联法
通过使用衔接词(Transitional Words/Phrases) 连接句子、段落或观点,避免内容零散,让读者能快速跟上写作思路。
按时间或逻辑顺序组织内容
- 开头:first(ly), to begin with(首先)
- 中间:then(然后), next(接下来), after that(之后), meanwhile(同时)
- 结尾:finally(最后), in the end(最终)
例句:
To make a cake, first mix flour and sugar. Then add eggs and milk. Finally, bake it for 30 minutes.
(做蛋糕时,先混合面粉和糖,然后加入鸡蛋和牛奶,最后烤30分钟。)
03写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例
Look! This is my favourite vegetable. It’s a carrot. This is how you grow it. (总体介绍某种植物)First, we plant the seed in spring or autumn. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织开头内容)Then, a carrot will grow from the seed. Next the stem will grow big and strong. We eat this part of a carrot. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织中间内容)
Finally, we will pull up the carrot by the stem and leaves.(用衔接词按时间顺序组织结尾内容)
01 基础知识精讲-句型
1.与植物相关的词汇
参考单词:
(常见植物)
- tree 树(如 apple tree 苹果树,pine tree 松树)
- flower 花
- grass 草
- rose 玫瑰
- sunflower 向日葵
- daisy 雏菊
- bamboo 竹子
- cactus 仙人掌
植物的组成部分
- leaf 叶子(复数:leaves)
- stem 茎
- root 根
- seed 种子
- bud 芽(花骨朵)
- petal 花瓣
- trunk 树干(树的粗茎)
和植物相关的动作/状态
- grow 生长(例:Plants grow in spring.)
- bloom 开花(例:Roses bloom in summer.)
- plant 种植(例:I plant a tree.)
- water 浇水(例:We water the flowers.)
- pick 摘(例:Don’t pick the petals.)
植物的果实/产物(简单常见)
- apple 苹果(来自苹果树)
- berry 浆果(如 strawberry 草莓,blueberry 蓝莓)
- corn 玉米
- carrot 胡萝卜(植物的根)
- tomato 番茄(植物的果实)
描述植物的词(颜色/形态)
- green 绿色的(叶子、草等)
- red 红色的(玫瑰、草莓等)
- tall 高的(树、竹子)
- small 小的(小花、小草)
- beautiful 美丽的(花)
参考句型:
(1).Look! This is my favourite vegetable.
(2).I have a vegetable. it's_________.
2. 表示时间顺序或逻辑关系的衔接词
- 开头:first(ly), to begin with(首先)
- 中间:then(然后), next(接下来), after that(之后), meanwhile(同时)
- 结尾:finally(最后), in the end(最终)
参考句型:
This is how it grows. First_______. Then_________. Next__________. Finally __________.
02 基础知识精讲-语法
1. 介绍事物:
- "This is my favourite + 事物."(这是我最喜欢的……)
例:This is my favourite fruit.(这是我最喜欢的水果。)
2. 说明主题:
- "This is how you + 动作."(这是……的方法/步骤。)
例:This is how you make a cake.(这是做蛋糕的方法。)
3. 描述步骤:
- "First, we + 动词原形 + 其他."(首先,我们……)
- "Then, + 事物 + will + 动词原形 + 其他."(然后,……会……)
- "Next, + 事物 + will + 动词原形 + 其他."(接下来,……会……)
- "Finally, we will + 动词原形 + 其他."(最后,我们会……)
提分练
一、单项选择
1. A carrot is a kind of _______.
A. fruit
B. vegetable
C. animal
2. In the sentence “First, we plant the seed”, “First” means _______.
A. 首先
B. 最后
C. 然后
3. The plural form of “leaf” is _______.
A. leafs
B. leaves
C. leaf
4. What does “This is how you grow it” mean?
A. 这是它的颜色。
B. 这是种植它的方法。
C. 这是它的名字。
二、按要求改写句子
1. We plant the seed in spring. (改为否定句)
__________ __________ plant the seed in spring.
A carrot will grow from the seed.(改为一般疑问句)
___ ___ ___ grow from the seed?
3. Finally, we will pull up the carrot by the stem and leaves.(对划线部分提问
___ can we pull up the carrot?
参考解析
一、单项选择
1.B 2. A. 3.B 4. B
二、按要求改写句子
1.答案:We don’t
2.答案:Will a carrot
3.答案:How
模拟写作提升1
请你写一篇小作文,描述你喜欢的一种植物的生长过程。注意用时间顺序衔接词(First, Then, Next, Finally)组织内容,说明植物从种植到成熟的步骤,不少于5句话。要求:
1.书写规范,正确使用标点符号。
2.语言表达流畅。
3.不少于 50 词。
参考单词: sunflower 向日葵 seed 种子 sprout 幼苗(芽)soil 土壤 stem 茎 leaf 叶子(复数:leaves)
参考句型:
First, we _______ (动词原形) _______ (事物).
- Then, _______ (事物) will _______ (动词原形) _______ (地点/状态).
- Next, _______ (事物) will grow _______ (形容词,如tall/big).
- Finally, _______ (事物) will _______ (动词原形,如bloom/grow).
范文1:
My Favourite Plant: Sunflower
Look! This is my favourite plant. It’s a sunflower. (总体介绍某种植物)This is how it grows. First, we plant the sunflower seeds in spring. We need to water them every day. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织开头内容)Then, small green sprouts will come out of the soil after one week. Next, the stem will grow tall and strong, and big leaves will grow on it.(用衔接词按时间顺序组织中间内容) Finally, a big yellow flower will bloom on top. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织结尾内容)It looks like a little sun!
模拟写作提升2
请写一篇小作文,介绍你喜欢的一种蔬菜的生长过程。用时间顺序衔接词(First, Then, Next, Finally)说清楚它从种下到能吃的步骤。
要求:
1.书写规范,正确使用标点符号。
2.语言表达流畅。
3.不少于 50 词。
参考单词: tomato 西红柿 seed 种子 soil 土壤 seedling 幼苗 stem 茎 stick 小木 flower 花 grow 生长 bloom 开花 turn 变成(颜色) ready 准备好的
参考句型:
1. I like... very much. They are...
2. Let me tell you how they grow.
3. First, we... and... (动作). ... needs to be... (状态).
范文2:
My Favourite Vegetable: Tomato
I like tomatoes very much. They are red and juicy. (总体介绍某种植物)Let me tell you how they grow. First, we put tomato seeds in the soil and water them every day. The soil needs to be warm. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织开头内容)Then, after about a week, small green seedlings come out. They have two little leaves. Next, the seedlings grow taller and taller. We need to put sticks next to them to help the stems stand straight. Then, yellow flowers bloom on the plants. The flowers look like little stars. Next, the flowers fall off, and small green tomatoes start to grow. They get bigger day by day. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织中间内容)Finally, the green tomatoes turn red. Now they are ready to eat!(用衔接词按时间顺序组织结尾内容)
四、西安雁塔(真题作文)
假如你是Mike,你现在在Mac Donald叔叔的农场,请你向你的好朋友小于介绍农场里面一种蔬菜或水果的生长过程。
要求:
1.句子通顺,逻辑连贯。
2.不少于50词,开头已给出,不计入总句数。
Dear Xiao Yu,
I’m having fun at Uncle Mac Donald’s farm! Let me tell you how lettuce grows.________________.
参考单词:lettuce 生菜 farm 农场 soil 土壤 plant 种植 water 浇水 grow 生长
crunchy 脆的 fresh 新鲜的 after a week 一周后
参考句型:
1. I’m having fun at...(我在...玩得很开心)
2. Let me tell you how... grows.(让我告诉你...是怎么生长的)
3. First, we plant... in...(首先,我们在...种植...)
4. Then, we water them...(然后,我们在...给它们浇水)
范文3
Dear Xiao Yu,
I’m having fun at Uncle Mac Donald’s farm! Let me tell you how lettuce grows. (总体介绍某种植物)First, we plant small lettuce seeds in soft soil. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织开头内容)Then, we water them every morning. After a week, tiny green leaves come out. Next, the leaves grow bigger and bigger. (用衔接词按时间顺序组织中间内容)Finally, the lettuce is ready—crunchy and fresh!(用衔接词按时间顺序组织结尾内容)
Come visit soon!
Your friend,
Mike
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