高中英语外研版 (2019)必修 第二册Unit 5 On the road精品学案设计

这是一份高中英语外研版 (2019)必修 第二册Unit 5 On the road精品学案设计，共5页。

动物是人类的亲密朋友，但是大量野生动物包括珍惜动物遭到人类的滥捕滥杀。人类正在失去越来越多的朋友。没有了这些动物朋友，我们人类的生活又会怎么样？请你结合实际，对此类现象发表个人观点，并提出一些合理建议。注意：题目自拟。词数：120词左右。




审题谋篇
STEP Ⅰ审题构思出框架
明确体裁话题→写建议、对于保护动物给出一些建议。
确定时态人称→一般现在时为主；以第一人称为主
构思文章框架→三段式：首段：描述现状，引出问题中段：结合实际情况，表述动物被伤害的原因并给出具体建议 尾段：简单总结。
接下来细化主要内容→结合实际情况，表述动物被伤害的原因并给出具体建议
原因，比如：可以从没有买卖就没有伤害这个角度来分析。
建议如何做，可以从个人与政府角度来具体实施。
将这些表述清楚即可组成文章主要部分。
STEP Ⅱ 完整句子表达
1.动物是人类的亲密朋友。
Animals are clse friends f human beings.
2.他们的存在使整个世界充满生机和色彩。
Their existence makes the whle wrld lively and clurful.
3.不幸的是，大量的野生动物正在受到伤害和杀害。
Unfrtunately, a large number f wild animals are being hurt and killed.
有些稀有动物处于危险之中。
Sme rare animals are in danger.
没有了我们的朋友，我们的未来会是什么样子呢？
Withut ur friends, what will ur life be like in the future?
6.我认为，这种现象的原因之一是一些人缺乏对这些动物的理解和照顾。
I think, ne f reasns fr this phenmenn is that sme peple lack understanding abut these animals and caring fr them.
练习（仿写句子）
以下是类似结构的句子，均采用 “I think, ne f the reasns fr... is that...” 的句式，用于分析现象原因：
我认为，学生学习困难的原因之一是传统教学方法未能有效吸引他们。
I think, ne f the reasns fr is that
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我认为，注意力持续时间缩短的原因之一是电子设备不断分散我们的注意力。
I think, ne f the reasns fr is that
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我认为，儿童肥胖的原因之一是加工食品变得过于容易获得。
I think, ne f the reasns fr is that
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我认为，过度消费主义的原因之一是广告制造了虚假需求。
I think, ne f the reasns fr is that
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7.另一个原因与巨额利润有关。
And anther reasn is related t huge prfits.
8.人们杀死动物只是为了得到有价值的皮毛来制作衣服或医疗用品。
Peple killing animals just want t get valuable furs t make clthes r bdy fr medical usage.
此处补充“没有买卖，就没有伤害。”
When the buying stps, the killing can t.
9.因此，应立即采取有效措施。
Therefre, effective measures shuld be taken immediately.
10.首先，我们要帮助公众更多地了解野生动物，特别是珍稀动物。
At first, we shuld help the public knw mre abut the wild animals, especially the rare animals.
11.此外，我们还应该牢记，保护动物是每个人的责任。
Besides, we shuld keep it in mind that prtecting animals is the duty f everyne.
12.同时，政府应当制定法律保护动物，并对杀害动物的人进行处罚。At the same time, gvernment shuld make laws t prtect animals and punish thse wh kill animals.
13.如果我们继续伤害动物，它们就会报复我们。
If we cntinue t injure the animals, they will take revenge n us.
14.善待动物就是善待我们自己。
Being kind t animals is being kind t us.
STEP Ⅲ 增加衔接句，成篇。
One pssible versin
Save Our Friends---Animals
Animals are clse friends f human beings. Their existence makes the whle wrld lively and clurful. Unfrtunately, a large number f wild animals are being hurt and killed. Sme rare animals are in danger. Withut ur friends, what will ur life be like in the future?
I think, ne f reasns fr this phenmenn is that sme peple lack understanding abut these animals and caring fr them. And anther reasn is related t huge prfits. Peple killing animals just want t get valuable furs t make clthes r bdy fr medical usage. Fr these reasns, animals are at the edge f extinctin.Therefre, effective measures shuld be taken immediately. At first, we shuld help the public knw mre abut the wild animals, especially the rare animals. Besides, we shuld keep it in mind that prtecting animals is the duty f everyne. At the same time, gvernment shuld make laws t prtect animals and punish thse wh kill animals.
If we cntinue t injure the animals, they will take revenge n us. Being kind t animals is being kind t us.
参考例句
I think, ne f the reasns fr students' learning difficulties is that traditinal teaching methds fail t engage them effectively.
I think, ne f the reasns fr decreased attentin spans is that digital devices cnstantly distract us.
I think, ne f the reasns fr childhd besity is that prcessed fds have becme t readily available.
I think, ne f the reasns fr excessive cnsumerism is that advertising creates artificial needs.