人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world？-话题作文写作提升专练（教师版）

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近三年考情分析
本单元的话题是“自然和地理”，这类话题的写作主要涉及两方面：自然环境与名胜；谈论濒危动物与环境保护。在写作时，能正确使用形容词和副词的比较级与最高级，能使用a lt/much/a little/many times 等修饰形容词和副词的比较级。
写作目标
能介绍关于自然、地理方面的知识。
1. 正确使用形容词、副词的比较级与最高级；
2. 能使用a lt/much/a little/many times修饰形容词与副词的比较级；
3. 写作微技能：用形容词和副词增加文章的美感。
真题感知
（2023·甘肃武威·统考中考真题）
假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Prtect the Envirnment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿，需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义及作为中学生怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示，以Save the Earth: Let’s D Our Part!为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（不用抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域。）
Save the Earth: Let’s D Our Part!
The earth is the nly hme fr everyne n it. It’s crying fr ur help nw.
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【答案】例文
Save the Earth: Let’s D Our Part!
The earth is the nly hme fr everyne n it. It’s crying fr ur help nw. As middle schl students, we have the pwer t make a difference and help save the earth!
T prtect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting mre trees, and reducing pllutin. We can als save animals and recycle whenever pssible.
We can als chse t ride a bike instead f driving a car t help stp pllutin, and make sure t always thrw trash in the prper bins. By ding ur part, we can make a psitive impact n the envirnment and create a better future fr urselves and generatins t cme.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，呼吁大家保护地球；
第二步，具体阐述作为中学生怎样保护环境；
第三步，最后宣讲环保的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference很有影响
②instead f代替
③make a psitive impact n对……产生积极影响
[高分句型]
①T prtect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting mre trees, and reducing pllutin.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②By ding ur part, we can make a psitive impact n the envirnment and create a better future fr urselves and generatins t cme.（动名词作宾语）
【词汇积累】
◆开头句
①Welcme t China！I’m glad t be yur guide tday.
②Nw let me tell yu smething abut pandas.
③Have yu seen tigers in zs？I think the tiger is ne f the mst ppular animals in the z.
④Nw the number f them is becming smaller and smaller.Why. Here are tw main reasns.
◆中间句
①Pandas are white and black. They are very cute and friendly t peple. They feed n bamb.
②They mainly live in sme frests and muntains.
③Peple cut dwn s many trees that the tigers have n places t live in and can’t find enugh fd.
④Peple hunt and kill them fr their beautiful fur t make clthes r ther things.
◆结尾句
①Peple started t realize the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment.
②In my pinin，we must stp peple frm killing animals.
③Remember saving the animals means saving the earth and urselves.
◆谚语积累
When the wells dry，we knw the wrth f water.
井枯方知水珍贵。
Prtect wildlife and cexist with nature.
保护野生动物，人与自然共存。
3.Prtecting wildlife means prtecting human beings themselves!
保护野生动物就是保护人类自己！
Every life deserves respect. Please lve animals.
每一个生命都值得尊重。请爱护动物。
【话题范文剖析】
本周末有一批外国游客要来动物园参观大熊猫，假如你是他们的导游，请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇发言稿，向这些游客简要地介绍一下大熊猫，要求不少于80词。要点提示：
1．大熊猫的外貌及性格特点是什么？
2．大熊猫以什么为食？它们主要生活在哪些地区？
3．大熊猫的生存现状是什么样的？中国政府为了保护大熊猫采取了哪些措施？
参考词汇：feed n以...为食；the number f...的数目
要求：
1．词数：80左右；
2．书写工整，句式规范，条理清楚，标点符号使用正确。
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◆◆范文欣赏
Ladies and gentlemen，
Welcme t China！I'm glad t be yur guide tday.We will see lvely pandas sn.Nw let me tell yu smething abut pandas.Pandas are white and black.They are very cute and friendly t peple.They feed n bamb.They mainly live in sme frests and muntains in Sichuan Prvince，Gansu Prvince and Shaanxi Prvince.Nw the number f pandas is less than 3，000，because peple cut dwn many trees andthey can't find enugh fd and dn't have enugh space t live in.S the Chinese gvernment is thinking abut ways t prtect them，such as building research bases and teaching peple abut the imprtance f saving pandas.Besides these，the gvernment is als planting mre bamb trees s there will be mre frests fr pandas t live in.
由于环境污染、人类的残杀，很多野生动物正濒临灭绝。请以 “Hw t Prtect Wild Animals”为题，写一篇短文，说明保护野生动物的重要性以及怎样保护它们。
要点：1.野生动物濒临灭绝的原因； 2.保护野生动物的重要性；
3.作为中学生，我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。第
一
段
野生动物的现状
考词汇 : feed n 以为食
野生动物是我们的好朋友。然而，野生动物的数量越来越少。
它们处于极大危险中。 （fewer and fewer be in great danger）
Why? Here are sme reasns. (该段中心句)
人们砍伐森林，污染河流。所以它们没有足够的地方居住和足够的东西吃。
第二，野生动物经常死于疾病。(die frm illness)
第三，为了挣钱，人们杀死它们为了肉、脂肪和油。 (kill…fr)
处于危险的原因
第
二
段

As we all knw, animals are very imprtant t us. Prtecting animals is prtecting urselves. What shuld we d t save them? (该段中心句)
第一，我们应该停止砍伐森林并且多种树。
第二，我们不应该杀动物。
第三，我们应该建立研究基地以及告诉人们拯救野生动物的重要性。
Let’s take actin t prtect endangered animals. (结尾句)
野生动物的重要性及拯救措施
第
三
段
Animals are ur friends. Hwever, the number f wild animals is getting smaller and smaller. Many wild animals are in danger nw.
Why? Here are sme reasns. (该段中心句)
First, humans cut dwn frests and pllute the rivers. S animals dn't have enugh places t live in r enugh fd t eat, s the number
Secnd, wild animals ften die frm illnesses.
What's mre, t make mney, humans kill them fr meat, fat and il.
处于危险的原因
第
二
段
As we all knw, animals are very imprtant t us. Prtecting animals is prtecting urselves.
What shuld we d t save them? (该段中心句)
第
三
段
野生动物的重要性及拯救措施
First f all, we shuld stp cutting frests and plant mre trees.
Secnd, we shuldn’t kill animals.
Third, we shuld set up sme research bases and tell peple the imprtance f saving wild animals.
Let’s take actin t prtect endangered animals. (结尾句)
(一)数据描述类短语
1. 550米深_____________________
2.8, 844米高_____________________
3. 2, 400公里长_____________________
4.960万平方公里_____________________
5. 10千克_____________________
6.300年历史_____________________
(二)含最高级的短语
1. 最长/短的河流_____________________
2. 最大/小的沙漠_____________________
3. 最重/轻的熊猫_____________________
4. 最多/少的竹子_____________________
5. 最危险的运动_____________________
6. 最普遍的问题_____________________
7. 最著名的部分_____________________
8. 最深的咸水湖_____________________
9. 最高的山脉_____________________
10. 最多的人口_____________________
(三)其他短语
1. 每两年_____________________
2. ……的重要性_____________________
3. 濒危动物_____________________
4. 就我所知_____________________
5. 水污染_____________________
6. 主要的原因之一______________________
7. 长城之旅_____________________
8. 登山_____________________
9. 出生时_____________________
10. 到达(某数量、程度等)；至多有；不多于_____________________
11. 绊倒_____________________
12. 大约_____________________
句子积累
(一)佳句欣赏与模仿
1. The spirit f these climbers shws us that we shuld never give up trying t achieve ur dreams.
【give up (ding) sth. 放弃(做)某事；try t d sth. 尽力做某事】
尽管有诸多困难，他也从没放弃拯救濒危的动物。
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2. Adult pandas spend mre than 12 hurs a day eating abut 10 kils f bamb.
【spend time ding sth. 花时间做某事】
他曾打算花5年时间环游中国。
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3. They send peple t schls t tell children abut the imprtance f saving these animals.
【the imprtance f ding sth. 做某事的重要性】
人们开始意识到保护环境的重要性。
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(二)比较句专练
1. 中国几乎与美国一样大。
【as... as...】
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2. 黄河不如长江长。
【nt s (as)】
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3. 中国比美国的历史要长得多。
【a much lnger histry】
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4. 北京是中国最大的城市之一。
【ne f...】
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5. 重庆是所有城市中最大的。
【f all...】
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【参考答案】
（一）
1．假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生 Andy，一位野生动物爱好者。你登陆了 WCS（野生动物保护协会） 网站。请根据网站留言栏中的问题写一篇英语短文，分享自己的感想，并呼吁大家一起行动起来，保护野生动物。
The Wildlife Cnservatin Sciety, funded in 1895, has the clear missin t save wildlife and wild places acrss the glbe. Tday, we prtect many f the wrld’s icnic creatures here and abrad, including grillas in the Cng, tigers in India, wlverines in the Yellwstne Rckies, and cean giants in ur wrld’s amazing seascapes.

Message Bard (留言栏)
D yu lve wild animals? If s, please tell us:
1. What’s yur favurite wild animal? Wuld yu please tell us their lks and abilities?
2. What prblems d they face nw? (Tw prblems)
3. Hw can we prtect them?
注意：1. 词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
I am Andy, a Grade 8 student frm Sunshine Middle Schl. I lve wild animals, and my favurite wild animal is
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【答案】范文
I am Andy, a Grade 8 student frm Sunshine Middle Schl. I lve wild animals, and my favurite wild animal is the tiger. Tigers are big and strng. They have range fur with dark stripes. They can run very fast. Besides, they are able t swim and climb.
Sadly, there are nt many tigers left in the wild nw. They are in danger because hunters catch them fr their fur, bnes r ther parts f the bdy. Als, sme peple want t make the frests smaller and smaller in rder t have mre space fr farms and buildings. This will lead t less and less space fr them.
S it’s time fr us t take actin t prtect tigers. We’d better prevent the hunters frm hunting them. What’s mre, I think we can build mre reserves fr them.
Animals are ur friends. It’s ur duty t help them live a happy life in the wild.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给网站留言栏中的问题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的野生动物；
第二步，介绍这些野生动物现在所面临的问题；
第三步，介绍如何保护它们。
[亮点词汇]
①stripe条纹
②in danger处于危险之中
③in rder t为了
④lead t导致
⑤it’s time fr sb. t d sth.是某人做某事的时候了
⑥take actin采取行动
[高分句型]
①Sadly, there are nt many tigers left in the wild nw.（there be句型）
②S it’s time fr us t take actin t prtect tigers.（it’s time fr sb. t d sth.句型）
2．动物是人类的朋友，我们应该和动物和谐相处。令人悲哀的是，由于人类的过度砍伐和猎杀，越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。校保护野生动物社团针对这一问题开展征文活动。请你选取一种濒危动物，说明其现状和濒危的原因并发出保护动物的倡议。
内容提示：
1. What animal is in danger? Why?
2. What can we d t help them?
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
（3）词数在70词左右。
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【答案】例文：
Animals are ur best friends, they are als an imprtant part f nature, we can’t live withut them. Hwever, mst f them are in danger, such as the pandas. The situatin is becming mre and mre difficult.
It’s hard t believe that there are nly abut 1600 pandas left in the wild and abut 340 pandas in zs and research centers. Why is the situatin becming s serius? On the ne hand, pandas dn’t have many babies and baby pandas ften die. On the ther hand, pandas eat bamb, but the bamb frests are getting smaller and smaller in these years. S it’s time fr us t take actins t prtect them. Why nt plant mre bamb t make sure they have enugh fd? What’s mre, it’s als a gd idea fr us t give mney t set enugh natural parks t prtect them in peace. Last but nt least, dn’t pllute the water and leaving them mre frests can als help them a lt.
All in all, I believe that if everyne starts t d smething t prtect the animals, we all will live happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述动物的重要性，点题说明文章介绍的濒危动物为熊猫；
第二步，介绍熊猫的现状以及濒危的原因；
第三步，提出保护熊猫的合理化建议，并发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险之中
②such as例如
③n the ne hand, n the ther hand一方面，另一方面
[高分句型]
①What’s mre, it’s als a gd idea fr us t give mney t set enugh natural parks t prtect them in peace.（不定式作目的状语）
②I believe that if everyne starts t d smething t prtect the animals, we all will live happier.（宾语从句；条件状语从句）
3．为了保护野生动物，拯救珍贵、濒危野生动物，促进人与自然和谐共生，新修订的《中华人民共和国野生动物保护法》于 2023年5月1日起正式实施。那么，你对濒危动物金丝猴了解多少呢? 请参考以下表格内容，以“Saving Glden Mnkeys”为题，写一篇保护金丝猴的英语短文。
提示词：rare 珍稀的；fur 皮毛
要求：
1. 80~120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以增、删细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Saving Glden Mnkeys
Hw much d yu knw abut glden mnkeys? Let’s learn mre abut them.

【答案】范文：
Saving Glden Mnkeys
Hw much d yu knw abut glden mnkeys? Let’s learn mre abut them.
Living in the suthwest f China, like Sichuan, Guizhu and Yunnan, glden mnkeys are seen in high muntains and thick frests. They feed n tree leaves, flwers and fruit. They als eat birds and their eggs. They live with their family. They take care f each ther. They always g ut and lk fr fd tgether. They play tgether and even have a rest tgether. In China, they are ne f the mst famus and rarest animals like pandas. But they are in great danger nw and they are becming fewer in number.
Hw can we prtect them? First, we shuld prtect the frests because they’re their hme. Secnd, we must stp killing them and nt buy anything made f their fur. What’s mre, we shuld learn mre abut the animals and let mre peple knw hw imprtant they are t us.
All in all, we shuld d ur best t prtect and save glden mnkeys.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍金丝猴的情况；
第三步，介绍保护它们的方式。
[亮点词汇]
①take care f照顾
②lk fr寻找
③in great danger处于极大的危险中
[高分句型]
①Let’s learn mre abut them.（祈使句）
②What’s mre, we shuld learn mre abut the animals and let mre peple knw hw imprtant they are t us.（宾语从句）
4．最近，不少动物园都发生了动物袭击游客事件。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，请你就这一问题给某英文报社写一封建议书，呼吁人们在动物园游玩时学会尊重、爱护动物。
（1）动物们很可爱，但有时也会伤人，观赏时请保持距离，不逗弄动物。
（2）喂错误的食物会导致动物生病甚至死亡。
（3）动物园会设置投喂区并提供食物供游客投喂。
（4）如果被动物咬伤，请及时就医。
（5）你认为……
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：逗弄tease 投喂区 feeding areas 被咬be bitten
Dear sir and madam,
Recently, there are ften reprts in the newspaper that peple gt hurt by the animals in the z.
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear sir and madam,
Recently, there are ften reprts in the newspaper that peple gt hurt by the animals in the z. Animals are lvely, but smetimes they can be a bit dangerus. S, when yu’re watching animals, make sure t keep ff them and avid teasing them. Giving them the wrng fd can make them sick r even cause their death. Sme fds are nt suitable fr animals. The z will set up feeding areas and prvide fd fr turists t feed. If yu are bitten by animals, please ask fr help and g t see the dctr immediately. I think peple shuld learn t respect and care fr animals when visiting the z.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作时应注意题干给出的“动物具有危险性”、“投喂动物食物需谨慎”、以及“爱护动物”等要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明动物具有危险性，需注意安全；
第二步，结合要点，阐述观看动物的时候需注意的点有哪些。
第三步，总结全文，并提出要爱护动物，尊重动物。
[亮点词汇]
①dangerus 危险的
②suitable 合适的
③immediately 立即
[高分句型]
①S, when yu’re watching animals, make sure t keep ff them and avid teasing them.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I think peple shuld learn t respect and care fr animals when visiting the z.（宾语从句）
5．假如你是李华，是野生动物俱乐部的一名成员，请根据下面表格的内容提示，以“Let’s prtect wild animals”为题，用英语写一篇短文，发表在你的英文博客上，呼吁人们保护野生动物。
写作要求：1. 内容必须包含所有要点；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Let’s prtect wild animals
Nw mre and mre wild animals like tigers and pandas are in danger.
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Let’s take actin nw t prtect wild animals! Prtecting them is just prtecting urselves.
【答案】范文：
Let’s prtect wild animals
Nw mre and mre wild animals like tigers and pandas are in danger. Fr ne reasn, peple cut dwn frests, s wild animals have n place t live in r fd t eat. Fr anther, peple kill them fr their fur r ther parts f the bdy t make mney. As a result, wild animals face serius prblems in the wild. If we d nthing, there may be less and less f them left. We human beings culd nt live withut wild animals. It is very imprtant t prtect them. S we shuld help them have mre babies, build mre reserves fr them, and make laws t stp peple killing them.
Let’s take actin right away t prtect wild animals! Prtecting them is just prtecting urselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，介绍野生动物所面临的困境；
第二步，介绍动物面临困境的原因，以及保护它们的重要性；
第三步，呼吁人们立刻行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be in danger 处于危险之中
②cut dwn 砍倒
③as a result 结果
[高分句型]
①If we d nthing, there may be less and less f them left.（if引导条件状语从句）
②It is very imprtant t prtect them.（动词不定式作主语）
6．根据要求完成作文。
现如今,世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“The Animal We Shuld Prtect”为题，写一篇英语短文。
根据以下提示信息，
提示：
1. 介绍你最喜欢的濒危动物；
2. 濒危的原因；
3. 保护它们的建议。
注意：
1. 词数80-100。
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
The Animal We Shuld Prtect
The panda is my favurite animal. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the frests. They feed n bamb. They are very cute and lvely. But their situatin is becming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas dn’t have many babies and baby pandas ften die. Secnd, pandas eat bamb, but the bamb frests are getting smaller. T prtect animals is t prtect urselves. S we shuld make a better life fr pandas. We can set up nature parks with lts f bamb s that pandas can have enugh fd t eat. It is als a gd idea t raise mney fr them. I hpe there will be mre pandas in the wrld.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写自己喜欢的动物是什么，并介绍一下这种动物的外貌、习性、饮食等；
第二步，表达这种动物正处于濒危之中，并具体介绍濒危的原因，比如繁殖困难、食物短缺等；
第三步，给出保护它们的具体的建议，比如建设自然公园等。
[亮点词汇]
①feed n 以……为食
②be in danger 处于危险之中
③set up 建立
④s that 以便于
⑤raise mney 筹钱
[高分句型]
①We can set up nature parks with lts f bamb s that pandas can have enugh fd t eat. （s that引导的目的状语从句）
②It is als a gd idea t raise mney fr them. （it作形式主语句型）
③I hpe there will be mre pandas in the wrld.（省略that的宾语从句）
7．熊猫被誉为“国宝”。它憨态可掬，是大家都喜欢的动物。请根据下面的图示信息，写一篇短文，向大家加以介绍。
要求：
(1)短文要包含图示中的所有要点，开头已给出。可适当发挥。
(2)词数：80词左右。
(3)文中不能出现真实的人名、地名或学校的名称。
Pandas are the natinal treasure f China.
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【答案】例文
Pandas are the natinal treasure f China. Peple in the wrld all like them. They live in the muntains and frests f Suthwest China. Pandas lk cute and funny in black and white fur. It’s amazing that these fat animals are able t climb trees and swim. They feed n bamb.
Hwever, because they have less and less land t live n, nw pandas are becming fewer in number. We shuld try ur best t prtect them. We can build mre nature parks, then they can enjy a happy life there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍熊猫的相关信息，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍熊猫的居住地和长相；
第二步，介绍它们的生活习性；
第三步，介绍熊猫为什么处于危险中，号召人们保护熊猫。
[亮点词汇]
①be able t能够
②try ur best t d sth.尽我们最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
Hwever, because they have less and less land t live n, nw pandas are becming fewer in number. (because引导的原因状语从句)
8．假如你们学校正在开展“动物保护周”系列活动，请从图片中选择一种野生动物，并根据思维导图的提示，以校学生会名义写一封80词左右的英文倡议书，号召更多的人加入保护野生动物队伍。
写作要求：
1. 倡议书须包括思维导图中所提示内容，省略号部分作适当发挥；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an imprtant part n ur planet earth. But they are facing many prblems. I am writing t call n everyne t d smething fr them.
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Students’ Unin
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an imprtant part n ur planet earth. But they are facing many prblems. I am writing t call n everyne t d smething fr them.
I like tigers best amng all the wild animals. They have yellw fur with black strips. Tigers like living in grups. They are very brave. They can run fast, but nly fr a shrt while. They can als swim and climb trees. Tigers eat small animals fr fd, like rabbits, deer, wlves and s n. Hwever, these big cats are in great danger nw. They dn’t have enugh fd t eat and their living areas are becming smaller and smaller.
I think everybdy shuld act t prtect wild animals. Let’s take actin nw!
Students’ Unin
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的要点提示，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；短文开头已经给出，注意内容的衔接；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，野生动物很重要，但面临着困境，表达写倡议书的目的；
第二步，介绍最喜欢的动物名称，按照思维导图介绍该动物的相关情况；
第三步，表达自己的观点，呼吁大家保护野生动物。
［亮点词汇］
① call n 号召
② in great danger 处于巨大的危险之中
［高分句型］
① I think everybdy shuld act t prtect wild animals. (宾语从句)
② They dn’t have enugh fd t eat and their living areas are becming smaller and smaller. (and连接并列句)
9．每年4月1日为“国际爱鸟日”，鸟类是与人类共生共荣的“空中精灵”。学校将开展以“爱鸟始于心，护鸟始于行”为主题的演讲比赛，请你以“Creating a bird-friendly garden r balcny”为题，根据表格中的要点写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁大家用自己的创造力来表达对鸟类的欣赏和关爱。内容如下：
参考词汇：create (创造) feeder (喂食器) fd surces (食物来源)
要 求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Creating a bird-friendly garden r balcny
Gd afternn, everybdy!
I’m very glad t share my tpic with yu. I’m Li Lin frm Class 1, Grade 8. Tday I’d like t talk abut creating a bird-friendly garden r a balcny.
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That’s all. Thank yu!
【答案】例文
Creating a bird-friendly garden r balcny
Gd afternn, everybdy!
I’m very glad t share my tpic with yu. I’m Li Lin frm Class 1, Grade 8. Tday I’d like t talk abut creating a bird-friendly garden r a balcny.
Birds play an imprtant rle in nature. They bring nature t life and I lve nature. Sme peple keep birds as pets, which prevents them frm flying freely. The number f birds has als decreased dramatically ver the years. S let’s create a bird-friendly garden r balcny.
First, find a right place n the balcny and make a huse fr the birds. Secnd, use feeders t prvide birds with the fd they like. When they are hungry, they will cme t yur balcny. Third, cver the balcny with their favrite plants. Furth, put sme water n the balcny. If they are thirsty, they may cme t drink. In a wrd, if yu want t create a bird-friendly balcny, try t ffer the birds smething they’re lking fr, then they’ll be much mre likely t cme t visit. In this way, the living envirnment f birds can be greatly imprved.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章开头，说明要保护鸟类的原因；
第二步，具体阐述如何创建一个适合鸟类的花园或阳台及其目的。
[亮点词汇]
①play an imprtant rle起重要作用
②prevent sb. frm ding sth.阻止某人做某事
③the number f……的数量
④in a wrd总之
⑤lk fr寻找
[高分句型]
①When they are hungry, they will cme t yur balcny.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If they are thirsty, they may cme t drink.（if引导的条件状语从句）
10．野生动物是生态系统里重要的成员，跟大自然关系非常密切。保护野生动物就是保护人类自己。请从所给图片中选择一种野生动物 (或另选一种)，并根据所给提示，以“Prtecting ________ (动物名称)”为题写一篇英文演讲稿，在你校英语俱乐部正在举办的以“保护野生动物”为主题的活动中作专题演讲。
提示：
（1）Culd yu please say smething abut their lks, fd, qualities and abilities.
（2）What prblems d they face?
（3）What can we d t help prtect them?
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发展；
（3）词数100字左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Prtecting _______________
Gd mrning, everyne! Tday I am very happy t be here t give a reprt n prtecting
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【答案】例文：
Prtecting Tigers
Gd mrning, everyne! Tday I am very happy t be here t give a reprt n prtecting tigers. Tigers are the kings f the animal wrld. They are big and strng. They have very bright eyes. They have range fur with dark strips. They can run very fast, but nly fr a shrt while. They are able t swim and climb. Tigers like t live alne. They live n animals like deer, sheep.
Sadly, there are nt many tigers left in the wild nw. They are in danger because hunters catch tigers fr their fur, bnes r ther parts f the bdy. Als, sme peple want t make the frests smaller and smaller in rder t have mre space fr farms and buildings. This will lead t less and less space fr tigers.
Mrever, S we shuld take actin t prtect tigers. If we d nthing, sn there will be nne left. We shuld encurage the gvernment t make laws t prvide cver and fd fr them. What’s mre, We shuld als prevent the hungers frm hunting them. Last but nt least, we shuld build mre reserves t prtect the frests s that tigers can have enugh living space. Wild animals are ur friends. It’s ur duty t help them live a happy life in the wild.
That’s all. Thank yu very much!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生需要补全题目并且根据“要点提示”中的问题给出相应的回答，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先选择熟悉的动物，补全标题，根据要点的提示描述老虎的特征，如相貌，食物，品质，能力等；
第二步，阐述具体面临的问题。主要从“猎人狩猎老虎”以及“老虎生存环境”两个方面来阐述面临的问题；
第三步，书写具体保护措施。主要从政府层面出台保护文件、防止猎人过度捕杀以及保护森林三个方面提出措施。
[亮点词汇]
①prevent sb frm ding sth阻止某人做某事
②encuraged sb t d sth鼓励某人做某事
③mrever而且
④what’s mre更重要的
[高分句型]
①They are in danger because hunters catch tigers fr their fur, bnes r ther parts f the bdy.（because引导原因状语从句）
②If we d nthing, sn there will be nne left. （if引导条件状语从句，there be句型）
③Last but nt least, we shuld build mre reserves t prtect the frests s that tigers can have enugh living space.（s that引导状语从句）
（2022·浙江湖州·统考中考真题）
假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Wrking the Waste int Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
注意：
（1）短文须介绍至少两项展品，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80—100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Hell, everyne! I’d like t tell yu smething abut the shw “Wrking the Waste int Magic” .
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【答案】Pssible versin:
Hell, everyne! I’d like t tell yu smething abut the shw “Wrking the Waste int Magic”.
A number f creative wrks were n shw, including clthes made frm waste paper and mdel planes made f used wd and glass. Anther fascinating wrk is a chair that is made f plastic bttles. They are glued tgether and painted in different clrs.
I was mst interested in a backpack fr cmputers. It is made ut f a pair f ld jeans! With the zipper f jeans n the tp, tw pckets n tw sides, the backpack lks bth useful and fashinable. It even has a lg!
I felt amazed at hw waste culd be put t such gd use. It really helps t save energy and build a greener future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“变废为宝”的环保作品展的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
（广西·中考真题）
在学校，一些同学不注意保护学校环境，使学校环境受到了损害。请你根据所给内容要点，以“Keep Our Schl Clean”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容要点：
1.学校环境越来越差。
2.随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾。
3.毁坏花草树木。
4.多植树，循环使用教材。
5.保护学校环境。
参考词汇；（参考词汇仅供参考）
要求：
1.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。
2.语句通顺、语法正确。
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
Keep Our Schl Clean
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【答案】例文：
Keep Our Schl Clean
Envirnment in ur schl has becme wrse and wrse. Sme schlmates spit here and there and thrw litter everywhere. Sme even destry the flwers, grass and trees. S we shuld plant mre trees t make ur schl mre beautiful. We shuld als reuse ur text bks.
As students, we are respnsible fr the envirnment f ur schl. We shuld d smething t prtect ur envirnment. Everyne in ur schl shuld play a part in cleaning it up! We hpe that ur schl will becme cleaner and tidier.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Keep Our Schl Clean”为题，按照所给内容要点写一篇文章介绍学校环境的现状及保护措施。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时，第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分段叙述，第一段介绍学校环境的状况及保护环境的措施；第二段阐述个人感悟；写作时保证文章要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。
（2020·甘肃天水·统考中考真题）
“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法,以“Hw t Make Our Hmetwn Mre Beautiful"为题,写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇: envirnment ; pllutin; reduce; srt the rubbish(垃圾分类)
The clean water and green muntains are ur treasures.
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【答案】例文：
Hw t Make Our Hmetwn Mre Beautiful
The clean water and green muntains are ur treasures. It’s ur dream t have a hme with a blue sky, green trees and clean water. S it’s very imprtant fr us t realize the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment and dealing with pllutin. But what shuld we d?
We can take actins in ur daily life. We can plant mre trees t keep the sil in place. Resurces are very imprtant, s we need t save resurces t avid plluting the envirnment. Fr example, we can use bth sides f the paper. Plluted water shuld be dealt with in time t keep the river clean because we cannt live withut water. When we g t ther places, we can chse public transprt t reduce air pllutin.
In my pinin, everyne can d smething small t make a difference. When we see rubbish n the rad, we shuld pick it up immediately. We shuld als learn t recycle waste by separating the waste int different grups. If all f us wrk tgether, we will have a mre beautiful hme.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要以“Hw t Make Our Hmetwn Mre Beautiful”为主题展开描写，主要从保护环境，节约资源，垃圾分类等方面做详细的描述，写作时要注意文章的层次感和语言的逻辑性要合理。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段引出绿水青山很重要，我们应该如何做；第二段给出一些具体的做法，第三段给出自己的一些观点，从生活出发要怎么做。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达流畅，意思明确，通俗易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：deal with；take actins；avid ding；fr example；in my pinin；pick up。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
话题
考查热度
自然和地理
谈论濒危动物与环境保护
一、词汇积累
(一)1. 550 meters deep2. 8, 844 meters high3. 2, 400 kilmeters lng
4. 9,600,000 square kilmeters 5.10 kils6. 300 years f histry
(二) 1. the lngest/ shrtest river 2. the largest/ smallest desert 3. the heaviest/ lightest panda
4. the mst/ least bamb 5. the mst dangerus sprt 6. the mst ppular questin
7. the mst famus part 8. the deepest salt lake 9. the highest muntain
10. the biggest ppulatin
(三)1. every tw years2. the imprtance f...3. endangered animals
4. as far as I knw5. water pllutin6. ne f the main reasns
7. Great Wall Tur8. muntain climbing 9. at birth 10. up t
11. fall ver 12. r s
二、句子积累
(一)1.Thugh it’s really difficult, he never gives up saving endangered animals.
The gvernment tried t stp factries puring plluted water int the river.
2. He planned t spend five years traveling arund China.
3. Peple started t realize the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment.
(二)1. China is almst as big as the US.
2. Yellw River is nt as lng as Yangtze River.
3. China has a much lnger histry than the US.
4. Beijing is ne f the biggest cities in China.
5. Chngqing is the biggest f all the cities.
名称
金丝猴
食物
树叶、花、果，也吃鸟和鸟蛋。
居住
高山和森林。
描述
分布于中国西南地区，四川、贵州、云南等地；群居，成员之间相互关照，一起觅食、一起玩耍休息；与大熊猫齐名，被认为是中国最著名的珍稀动物之一。
保护方式
保护森林；不捕杀它们，不购买金丝猴皮毛；多了解它们，让更多人知道它们的重要性。
Let’s prtect wild animals
Reasns
n place t live in r fd t eat, peple kill them fr...
Imprtance
We human being culd nt live withut...
Actin
help them have mre babies, build mre reserves, make laws t...
Reasns
1.Yu: lve nature...
2.Peple: keep birds as pets...
3.Birds: the number...
Actins
Create a bird-friendly garden r a balcny:
1. a right place... 2. prvide fd... 3. cver... 4. water...
Purpses (目的)
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What were n shw
What they are made f/frm
What yu think
➢clthes
➢chairs
➢mdel planes
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➢waste paper
➢plastic bttles
➢used wd and glass
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➢creative
➢save …
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