高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文

开放性作文

1．高中毕业在即, 你校英语俱乐部将举行“Heartfelt Thanks to My Teacher”的主题演讲比赛, 目的是令学生感恩一位对自己有深刻影响的老师。请你准备一篇英语演讲稿, 要点如下：

1.影响你的具体事例;

2.给你带来的改变;

3.你对老师的祝福。

注意:

1.词数100左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数;

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文流畅;

3.不得出现真实的人名或地名。

How time flies!

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2．全国爱眼日（National Sight Day）即将到来，学校英文报拟就此展开讨论。请根据图表中的2022年中小学生视力调查结果写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：

1. 中小学生近视状况描述；

2. 简单评论；

3. 你的建议。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.首句已为你写好。

As National Sight Day approaches, it’s crucial to discuss the rising myopia rate among Chinese students.

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3．Think and write

Your school paper has established a new column called “Travelling in Canada”. Write a short passage about it to contribute to the paper. Any writing style is welcomed.

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4．假设你是李华，最近参与了学校举办的“家务活我在行”活动，请你为班级英语角写篇短文介绍这次活动。内容包括：

1. 活动目的；

2. 活动过程；

3. 活动感受。

注意: 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Housework, I can do it

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5．假如你是李华，上周日是你妈妈的生日，你和爸爸还有弟弟一起为妈妈庆祝了生日。请根据下面的提示，用英语把这件事描述一下。

1．上周日是妈妈的五十岁生日；

2．家人都为她准备了生日礼物；

3．爸爸下厨做了好吃的饭菜；

4．大家一起祝妈妈生日快乐，感谢她为家里所做的一切。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 开头与结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

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I love my family and I will remember the happy day forever!

6．玉兔新春启程，寰宇气象万千。愉快的寒假即将结束，然而不少铜中学子因上学期铜仁市期末统考没有取得理想的成绩而感到沮丧，伴随着开学考试的到来，同学们的压力与紧张也涌上心头。假如你叫李华，你将代表高一(2)班参加一次主题为“Learn to relax before an examination”的英文演讲，因而你要写一份演讲稿。

主要内容如下：

①考前焦虑的坏处；② 给同学们提出合理的建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以话当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

Learn to relax before an examination

Nowadays, as Senior One students, we still have to face many examinations.

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All in all, don’t let anxiety stand in your way. Take it easy and everything will be OK.

7．上海每年举办一次书展，但在电子书盛行的时代，为何还举办书展呢？请以“Why do we host a book fair”为题，谈谈你对此的看法。词数：不少于150词。

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8．假如你是李华, 你校英语社团将开展以“Thank You, My Senior High”为主题的交流活动。请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿, 要点如下：

1. 最感谢的人;

2. 感谢的事由;

3. 个人的感悟。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear boys and girls, good afternoon.

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Thanks for your listening.

9．运用下列写作词汇，自己创设一个语境，形成一个小语段。

tradition, gathering, sweep away, teenager, put up, attach… to, custom, let off, memory, decoration

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10．请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，简要介绍中国著名画家张大千。

1. 出生于1899年，1983年去世。年轻时学诗。受妈妈和哥哥的影响学习中国画；

2. 他不断地学习和探索西方绘画，形成了自己独特的风格；

3. 他一生中大部分时间都在临摹传统绘画；

4. 他被认为是二十世纪最有天赋的画家之一。

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1．How time flies! We are going to graduate soon. Standing here, I feel privileged to have this opportunity to express my heartfelt appreciation to Ms. Wang, my English teacher.

Looking back on the past three years, I can’t thank her too much. When I entered senior high, I was deeply impressed by her excellent pronunciation and patience. Therefore, I was determined to work hard at English. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations. too much homework and the high expectations made me so depressed that I couldn’t focus on my study. Having noticed everything, she offered me some constructive advice. It was her constant encouragement that helped me restore confidence and become positive again.

Feeling deeply grateful to her for what she has done for me, I wish her all the best.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为你校英语俱乐部将举行“Heartfelt Thanks to My Teacher”的主题演讲比赛写一篇英语演讲稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

荣幸的：privileged→honored

机会： opportunity→chance

感激：appreciation→gratitude

极好的：excellent→wonderful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Standing here, I feel privileged to have this opportunity to express my heartfelt appreciation to Ms. Wang, my English teacher.

拓展句：When I stand here, I feel privileged to have this opportunity to express my heartfelt appreciation to Ms. Wang, my English teacher.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Looking back on the past three years, I can’t thank her too much.(运用了非谓语动词作伴随状语)

【高分句型2】It was her constant encouragement that helped me restore confidence and become positive again.(运用了强调句型)

2．As National Sight Day approaches, it’s crucial to discuss the rising myopia rate among Chinese students. According to a 2022 survey, the rate of myopia among students is high, with 35.6% for elementary school students, 71.1%for junior high school students, and a staggering 80.5%for senior high school students.

This data indicates that myopia has become a serious issue, likely due to the increasing usage of electronic devices and less time spent outdoors. To prevent further damage, students should reduce electronic device usage and spend more time outdoors. Parents, teachers, and schools should also promote healthy eye habits and have the children’s eyesight checked regularly.

In conclusion, raising awareness and promoting healthy eye habits can prevent further damage to students’ eyesight and help them lead healthier lives.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表中的2022年中小学生视力调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿，内容包括描述中小学生近视状况并进行简单评论、给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表明：indicate →show/suggest

由于：due to →on account of

检查：check →examine

总之：in conclusion →in short

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Knowing you are fond of seeing films, I want to invite you to go to the movies this weekend.

拓展句：Because I know you are fond of seeing films, I want to invite you to go to the movies this weekend.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To prevent further damage, students should reduce electronic device usage and spend more time outdoors.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语）

【高分句型2】Parents, teachers, and schools should also promote healthy eye habits and have the children’s eyesight checked regularly.（运用了“have+宾语+宾补”结构）

3．     Travelling in Canada is an amazing experience. Canada is a beautiful country that offers a diverse range of landscapes – from the mountains in the west to the coastal areas in the east.

One of the most popular destinations in Canada is Banff National Park in Alberta. You can explore the vast plains of Saskatchewan and Manitoba, which offer unique prairie landscapes that stretch as far as the eye can see. Quebec, on the other hand, is known for its rich French culture and historic architecture in cities such as Quebec City and Montreal. If you want to experience the true beauty of Canada’s nature and wildlife, then heading to the East Coast is a must.

Overall, travelling in Canada is an unforgettable adventure. With such diverse and picturesque landscapes, amazing cultural experiences, and friendly people, Canada truly is an incredible country to explore!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇短文，给校报开设了一个新的专栏“Travelling in Canada”投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

不同的：diverse →various

因……而闻名：be known for → be famous for

总的来说：Overall →In summary

令人惊叹的：amazing → mirable

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Travelling in Canada is an amazing experience.

拓展句：It was an amazing experience to travel in Canada.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Canada is a beautiful country that offers a diverse range of landscapes – from the mountains in the west to the coastal areas in the east.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】You can explore the vast plains of Saskatchewan and Manitoba, which offer unique prairie landscapes that stretch as far as the eye can see.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4．One possible version:

Housework, I can do it

To promote the awareness of students’ tidiness and family responsibility, an activity named “Housework, I can do it” was held. In response to the activity sponsored by our school, I carried out my housework plan last weekend, ranging from tidying up rooms to cooking meals.

Early in the morning, I removed unwanted items and cleaned the house until it was spotless. At almost eleven, I prepared a lunch, fried rice, for which my parents praised me. Tired as I was, I felt so proud.

Through the involvement in the household chores, not only have I established a sense of family responsibility, but also I have fully understood that doing housework is of great meaning.

【导语】本篇书面表达开放性作文。假设你是李华，最近参与了学校举办的“家务活我在行”活动，请你为班级英语角写篇短文介绍这次活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

主办：sponsor→host

实施：carry out→implement

表扬：praise→commend

疲惫的：tired→exhausted

2.句式拓展

变定语从句

原句：Early in the morning, I removed unwanted items and cleaned the house until it was spotless.

拓展句：Early in the morning, I removed unwanted items that took up too much space in my room and cleaned the house until it was spotless.

【点睛】【高分句型1】At almost eleven, I prepared a lunch, fried rice, for which my parents praised me. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Tired as I was, I felt so proud. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装句式)

5．参考范文：

We had a merry day last Sunday, for it was my mother’s fiftieth birthday!

Several days before, my father, brother and I had a talk secretly, discussing how to celebrate my mother’s birthday. On Sunday morning, my brother and I got up early and went to buy some flowers using our pocket money. When we got home, we saw a table laid with many delicious foods on it. My mother was so surprised at what she saw when she came back from work! We all said “Happy Birthday!” to her, thanking her for what she had done for our family.

I love my family and I will remember the happy day forever!

【导语】本文是记叙文。假如你是李华，上周日是你妈妈的生日，你和爸爸还有弟弟一起为妈妈庆祝了生日。请根据下面的提示，用英语把这件事描述一下。内容包括：上周日是妈妈的五十岁生日；家人都为她准备了生日礼物；爸爸下厨做了好吃的饭菜；大家一起祝妈妈生日快乐，感谢她为家里所做的一切。

【详解】1.词汇积累

快乐的：merry→happy

到家：get home→arrive home

放置：lay→place

感谢某人：thank sb.→be garteful to sb.

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Several days before, my father, brother and I had a talk secretly, discussing how to celebrate my mother’s birthday.

拓展句：Several days before, my father, brother and I had a talk secretly, discussing how we could celebrate my mother’s birthday.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When we got home, we saw a table laid with many delicious foods on it. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] My mother was so surprised at what she saw when she came back(运用了what引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)

6．Learn to relax before an examination

Nowadays, as Senior One students, we have to face many examinations.

Many of us feel quite anxious before various examinations, not sleeping well in the night or feeling frightened and blank in the mind just before the examinations, which has a negative impact on our health as well as our performance during the examinations.

How to cope with the anxiety before an examination may vary from person to person. Generally, doing some light exercise is a good way to relieve our anxiety, which can help us to relax both physically and mentally. In addition, chatting with our good friends also works out well because a casual talk will help us move away from the examination for a moment. Last but not least, thinking about some happy things in our life may also contribute to our relaxation before an examination.

All in all, don’t let anxiety stand in your way. Take it easy and everything will be OK.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生写一份演讲稿，代表高一(2)班参加一次主题为“Learn to relax before an examination”的英文演讲。

【详解】1.词汇积累

焦虑的：anxious → worried

对……有负面影响：has a negative impact on→ has a negative influence on

应对：cope with→ deal with

与不同：vary from→ be different from

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：How to cope with the anxiety before an examination may vary from person to person.

拓展句：How we can cope with the anxiety before an examination may vary from person to person.

【点睛】【高分句型1】How to cope with the anxiety before an examination may vary from person to person.（运用了疑问词加不定式充当句子主语）

【高分句型2】Generally, doing some light exercise is a good way to relieve our anxiety, which can help us to relax both physically and mentally.（运用了动名词doing充当主语以及引导which的非限制性定语从句）

7．One possible version:

Why do we host a book fair

Despite the growing popularity of e-reading, a book fair continues to be held annually in Shanghai. From my perspective, this is because book fairs offer a unique experience that cannot be replaced by e-reading.

Firstly, in book fairs people gain an opportunity to physically browse through books and engage with them in a way that cannot be achieved through a screen. Meanwhile, there is a chance to meet authors, attend readings and participate in discussions. These events provide a platform for people to connect with others who share their love of reading and to gain insight into the writing process. Furthermore, book fairs go beyond reading for they showcase the cultural and historical significance of books. Exhibitions at book fairs often highlight the evolution of printing techniques, the history of publishing and the impact of literature on society. This helps to preserve and promote the importance of books as a medium of communication and expression.

In conclusion, book fairs remain important despite the rise of e-reading as they open a window for us to see a wider world of literature and reading.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生以“Why do we host a book fair”为题，谈论电子书盛行的背景下举行书展的理由。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

在我看来：from my perspective→in my opinion, from my point of view, as far as I am concerned

取代：replace→take the place of, substitute

首先：firstly→to begin with, at the beginning, first of all

实现：achieve→realize, accomplish, obtain

参与：participate in→join in, engage in

此外：furthermore→in addition, additionally, besides

展示：showcase→display, exhibit, demonstrate

重要性：significance→importance, gravity

突出：highlight→spotlight, underline, feature

总之：in conclusion→to conclude, to sum up, in summary

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Exhibitions at book fairs often highlight the evolution of printing techniques, the history of publishing and the impact of literature on society. This helps to preserve and promote the importance of books as a medium of communication and expression.

拓展句：Exhibitions at book fairs often highlight the evolution of printing techniques, the history of publishing and the impact of literature on society, which helps to preserve and promote the importance of books as a medium of communication and expression.

【点睛】【高分句型1】From my perspective, this is because book fairs offer a unique experience that cannot be replaced by e-reading.(运用了because引导的表语从句和that引导的定语从句)

【高分句型2】Firstly, in book fairs people gain an opportunity to physically browse through books and engage with them in a way that cannot be achieved through a screen.(运用了that引导的定语从句)

【高分句型3】These events provide a platform for people to connect with others who share their love of reading and to gain insight into the writing process.(运用了who引导的定语从句)

【高分句型4】In conclusion, book fairs remain important despite the rise of e-reading as they open a window for us to see a wider world of literature and reading.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)

8．It's my honor to stand here and give you a speech, whose theme is “Thank you, my high school”. The person I thank most is my English teacher.

First of all, my English teacher treats all students equally, no matter your basic knowledge of English is strong or weak. Secondly, she is very patient. Knowing my English is poor, she always helps me with every problem patiently. Finally. She is a caring teacher. I remember once I caught a cold and had a fever. She sent me to the hospital in time and contacted my family. My teacher was there to take care of me until my family arrived, as if I were her own child.

At this moment, my heart is full of gratitude, thanks to my English teacher, thanks to my high school.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校举办的主题是“Thank You, My Senior High”的交流活动写一篇发言稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

荣誉：honor→glory

演讲：speech→lecture

公平地：equally→fairly

及时：in time→timely

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Knowing my English is poor, she always helps me with every problem patiently.

拓展句：Because she knows my English is poor, she always helps me with every problem patiently.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It's my honor to stand here and give you a speech, whose theme is “Thank you, my high school”. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】My teacher was there to take care of me until my family arrived, as if I were her own child. (运用了虚拟语气)

9．It’s a tradition to have a family gathering when we celebrate Spring Festival in China. Adults usually sweep away the dirt of the past year. We teenagers help to put up decorations, like attaching the Chinese character Fu upside down to the door. Also, we have the custom to let off fireworks on Spring Festival Eve. The memory of the whole family having fun together is always unforgettable.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生根据所给词汇，创设一个语境，形成一个小语段。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

庆祝：celebrate→observe

此外：also→additionally, moreover, furthermore, besides

玩得开心：have fun→enjoy oneself, have a good time, have a blast

难忘的：unforgettable→memorable, indelible, persistent, impressive

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Adults usually sweep away the dirt of the past year. We teenagers help to put up decorations, like attaching the Chinese character Fu upside down to the door.

拓展句：Adults usually sweep away the dirt of the past year, while we teenagers help to put up decorations, like attaching the Chinese character Fu upside down to the door.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s a tradition to have a family gathering when we celebrate Spring Festival in China.（运用了不定式作主语，when引导的时间状语从句）

【高分句型2】 The memory of the whole family having fun together is always unforgettable.（运用了动名词作宾语）

10．

Zhang Daqian, born in 1899, is a great artist in China. When he was young, he learnt poetry and he learnt Chinese painting from his mama and brother and gained lots of experience from them. He kept on learning and starting to explore western paintings when he got older, which really helped him form his unique style. He died in 1983. Throughout his life, he devoted most of time to copying traditional painting. He was regarded as one of the most gifted painters in the 20th century, which is an honour of Chinese people.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生简要介绍中国著名画家张大千。

【详解】1.词汇积累

伟大的：great→grand

学习：learn→study

获得：gain→get

被看作：be regard as→be considered as

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Zhang Daqian, born in 1899, is a great artist in China.

拓展句：Zhang Daqian, who was born in 1899, is a great artist in China.

【点睛】【高分句型1】He kept on learning and starting to explore western paintings when he got older, which really helped him form his unique style.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】He was regarded as one of the most gifted painters in the 20th century, which is an honour of Chinese people.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)