人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--环境保护（课件）

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·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 厦门质检］近年来，我国全面展开蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战。为了号召同学们参与环保行动，学校将组织一次主题为“Let’s G Green”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇 80 词以上的演讲稿① 。内容要点：1. 谈谈你②为环保做过什么③及感受；2. 制订你的环保计划④ 。
第一步 细审题 定要点
⑤定要点：环保的经历和感受、环保的未来计划
1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。As we all knw, China is making every effrt t prtect the envirnment. __________________________________
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：提出环保的倡议：我们应该负起责任，我们可以重新使用、减少和回收利用。中间段： 环保的经历及其未来计划：先介绍自己的环保经历，然后规划自己环保的未来计划。结尾：表达希望和呼吁：希望有一个更加美好的地球。
提出环保的倡议【易错句】 As middle schl student, we can reuse, reduce and recycle.【一般句子】 As middle schl students, we can reuse, reduce and recycle.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
【美化句子】 1. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
As middle schl students we shuld take the respnsibility. We can reuse, reduce and recycle.
环保经历和感受【易错句】 Last winter, I cllect used paper and bttles. I turn them int a rcket. I give it t my brther. He feel amazing at my wrk.【一般句子】 Last winter, I cllected used paper and bttles. I turned them int a rcket. I gave it t my brther. He felt amazed at my wrk.
【美化句子】 2. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
During the winter vacatin I cllected used things like paper and bttles. I turned them int a handmade rcket. I gave it t my brther as a gift. He felt amazed at my wrk.
环保的三点计划【易错句】 I reused things instead f thrwing them away. I reduced the use f energy. I srt the rubbish t recycle it.【一般句子】 I’ll reuse things instead f thrwing them away. I will reduce the use f energy. I’ll srt the rubbish t recycle it.
【美化句子】 3. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
First f all, I'll cntinue t reuse things instead f thrwing them away. Secndly, I can ride a bike t schl instead f taking a bus and turn ff the light when nt using it. Lastly, I'll srt the rubbish and send the recyclable materials t the recycling center.
表达希望和呼吁【易错句】 If everyne take part in prtect the envirnment, the earth will becme mre and mre gd.【一般句子】If everyne takes part in prtecting the envirnment, the earth will becme better and better.
【美化句子】 4.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If everyne takes part in prtecting the envirnment, the earth will be a better place fr all f us t live n. Take actin nw!
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
As we all knw, China is making every effrt t prtect the envirnment. As middle schl students, we shuld take the respnsibility. We can reuse, reduce and recycle.
During the winter vacatin I cllected used things like paper and bttles. I turned them int a handmade rcket. I gave it t my brther as a gift. He felt amazed at my wrk. I was prud, t. The waste was brught back t life with just a little creativity. Inspired by this experience, I plan t d mre in the future.
First f all, I’ll cntinue t reuse things instead f thrwing them away. Secndly, I can ride a bike t schl instead f taking a bus and turn ff the light when nt using it. Lastly, I’ll srt the rubbish and send the recyclable materials t the recycling center.If everyne takes part in prtecting the envirnment, the earth will be a better place fr all f us t live n. Take actin nw!
亮点点评：开篇点题，作为中学生，保护环境我们有着不可推卸的责任。衔接词和短语first f all, secndly 和lastly，给出环境保护的三点计划，使文章的层次感明晰。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 福州一检］假如你是康康，你的学校正在开展“节约用水”活动。经过调查，你了解了四个家庭的节水措施。请根据下表在英语课上做个汇报，并谈谈你对此活动的感想。词数80 左右。
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;2. 意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范;3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。It’s an hnr t share the result f my survey with yu. _________________________________________________That’s all. Thanks fr listening.
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It's an hnr t share the result f my survey with yu. We all take an active part in this activity. Zhang Jie and his family usually turn ff the water when brushing teeth. In rder t save water, Li Jun and his family always wash small clthes by hand. Wang Yue thinks reusing water wrks well. After washing vegetables she and her family use the water t clean the flr.