2023届高考英语二轮复习写作课件

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习写作课件，共29页。PPT课件主要包含了高考作文类型，亮点点拨等内容，欢迎下载使用。
A. 数据说明类文章B. 提示议论文类文章C. 看图说话类文章
影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句5 .卷面整洁,书写工整
写作基本步骤：仔细审题，列举大纲。２．围绕要点，写出句子。３．添加过度，确保连贯。４．先求正确，再求灵活。５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。
现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。
Hw t write a gd cmpsitinHw t write a gd cmpsitin
Intrductin (tpic)
Bdy (supprting ideas)
Can yu list the utline f the writing?Can yu list the utline f the writing?
The utline f the writing:
Cnclusin paragraph: …
Intrductin paragraph: …
Key wrds:1.intrductin(tpic):高三学生（senir 3 students）春游(g spring uting）讨论（discussin）2.bdy(supprting ideas): 接触自然（be clse t nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe sme fresh air ）精神放松（relax themselves ）大脑休息（rest their brains ）高考临近（ with cllege entrance examinatin drawing near ）没心情玩（dn’t feel like ging ）耽误学习(waste the time)3.cnclusin: in my pinin…
Key wrds:中学生middle schl students身体差in a pr state f healthIn bad cnditin充足的睡眠enugh sleep加强锻炼，增加户外活动take mre exercise and d mre utdr activities定时吃饭少吃零食have three meals regularly,eat less nn-staplefd.讲卫生
Frm/develp the habit f hygiene
主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性
Hw will yu start yu passage?问句： … …从句： … …Intrductin:（sample） Whether r nt shuld Senir 3 students g spring uting? We have had a heated discussin.
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系
Pay special attentin t the transitin sentences:Opinins are divided n the questin.
What will yu say？Yur answer？What will yu say？Yur answer？
The bdy part
Pint1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）Sentence pattern: Mst f us (abut 65%) hld the pinin that…,since it tends t…,which is unfavrable t …Mst students, abut 65%, are fr the idea that Senir 3 students shuld g spring uting.
Reasn1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康
Sentence pattern: They think it gd t d sth……/ sth d gd t sth In their pinin, it is f great benefit t d sth…… Eg:They think it gd fr their health t be clse t nature and breathe sme fresh air
Reasn 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习
（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进what’s mre ；besides ; mrever ; in additin；furthermreEg: they can relax themselves fr a while and rest their brains s that they will be mre energetic.
Cnclusin: 小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。
Eg: They think it will d gd t their students.
Pint 2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）Sentence pattern:Hwever, thers prefer t…Sme thers have just the ppsite pinin… the ther hand…. Eg: On the ther hand, abut 35% students are against the idea.
Reasn 1:高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hld the pinin… that….Eg: They say that with cllege entrance examinatin drawing near, they dn’t feel like ging anywhere.
Reasn 2:春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides, they think ging spring uting will take at least a day ff. They can’t affrd the time. They think they shuld fix their attentin n their studies
Whether r nt shuld Senir 3 students g spring uting? We have had a heated discussin. Opinins are divided n the questin. 　Mst students, abut 65%, are fr the idea that Senir 3 students shuld g spring uting. They think it gd fr their health t be clse t nature and breathe sme fresh air and what’s mre, they can relax themselves fr a while and rest their brains s that they will be mre energetic. They think it will d gd t their students. On the ther hand, abut 35% students are against the idea. They say that with cllege entrance examinatin drawing near, they dn’t feel like ging anywhere. Besides, they think ging spring uting will take at least a day ff. They can’t affrd the time. They think they shuld fix their attentin n their studies
表示观点对比类写作套语
A.总起: Opinins are divided n this questin.Different peple hld different / ppsite pinins. Peple have taken/adpted different attitudes twards … Peple have different pinins n this prblem. Peple take different views n this questin.B.表达观点一: …f them hld the pinin that …. …f them are in favr f the idea that… Peple wh are fr the idea think …
C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:Hwever, …f them hld a different view. / …f them hld the ppsite pinin. Peple wh are against it dn’t think s. Hwever, every cin has tw sides. Different frm thse…., …peple think ….On the ther hand, … peple think ….D.结尾常用套语: In my pinin/Persnally, … As far as I’m cncerned, …In shrt/ in brief/ in a wrd, …
Whether r nt shuld Senir 3 students g spring uting? We have had a heated discussin. Opinins are divided n the questin. 　Mst students, abut 65%, are fr the idea that Senir 3 students shuld g spring uting. They think it gd fr their health t be clse t nature and breathe sme fresh air and what’s mre, they can relax themselves fr a while and rest their brains s that they will be mre energetic. They think it will d gd t their students. On the ther hand, abut 35% students are against the idea. They say that with cllege entrance examinatin drawing near, they dn’t feel like ging anywhere. Besides, they think ging spring uting will take at least a day ff. They can’t affrd the time. They think they shuld fix their attentin n their studies.
Opinins are divided n the questin.
Mst students, abut 65%, are fr the idea that
On the ther hand, abut 35% students are
against the idea.
表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/ First f all/ T begin with, Secndly… Thirdly…In the first place… In the secnd place… In the third place… Finally/ Last but nt least/, 表示递进、强调的关联词 Besides/Apart frm/ What’s mre/ In additin/ Furthermre/ Mrever/wrse still/ t make matters wrse…
what’s mre,
　A、运用高级词汇或短语B、增加形容词或副词C、灵活运用各种句型