辽宁省锦州市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

辽宁省锦州市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、材料作文

1．（2020·辽宁锦州）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为40-50词；

2.必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；

3.续写至少一段，第一段开头语已经为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。

Because of COVID-19 (新冠病毒), students had to study online at home for a long time. Compared with studying at school, it’s very different.

Some students like online classes, because they have more freedom. They can get information about their study on the Internet. And they can also ask their teachers questions by Internet, telephone or email. During every break, they can watch TV or listen to music to relax.

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However, some students prefer studying at school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

二、书信作文

2．（2021·辽宁锦州）假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Lucy正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请你根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Ms. Liu。

要求：

1. 不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；

2. 请包含所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥；

3. 内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；

4. 词数：80-100词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy, Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he is such a great teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Ms. Liu.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please write soon.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

3．（2020·辽宁锦州）高尔基说：“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”为了激发同学们的阅读兴趣，请你以“我读书，我受益”为主题， 根据下列要点提示，代表Reading Club向全校学生发出一封倡议书。

内容提示：

1.feel the beauty of the words

2. open your eyes

3. increase your knowledge

4. develop a good reading habit   

5. enjoy the happiness

要求：

1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；

2.请包含所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥；

3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐;

4.词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear students,

Reading can not only help you make progress but also make you grow well. Here are some advantages of reading. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hope all of you can enjoy reading. Let’s take action together now!

Reading Club

July 15. 2020

三、小作文

4．（2022·辽宁锦州）根据要求完成读后续写，并将答案写在答题卡相应位置。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为 40—50 词；

2. 必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分至少一段，第一段开头语已经为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。

Health is very important to us. It can bring us energy and make us happy. Different people have different ideas about what we should do to keep healthy. Here is some advice for us to follow.

First of all, we should have a healthy eating habit. It’s necessary to eat enough vegetables and fruit. But do not eat too much junk food.

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Secondly, we should have enough sleep. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

5．（2021·辽宁锦州）阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的语篇。

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为40- 50词；

2. 必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分至少一段, 第一段开头语已经为你写好；

4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。

Many students have a number of interesting ideas about their dream schools. Maybe people will build these schools someday. Let’s have a look at some of them.

In my dream school, there will be no real classrooms. We will study in our own rooms. With VR technology （虚拟现实技术）, we can study more.

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In my dream school, we will have flexible （灵活的）learning choices. ________________

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参考答案：

1．例文：

However, some students prefer studying at school. In class, they can listen to teachers more carefully. Teachers can check their homework and help them in time. They can communicate with their teachers and classmates face to face. School is also good fun. After class, students can play together and enjoy themselves in different sports teams as well.【详解】1. 题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据短文中所给情节续写短文，要求至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语，且将所选词语加下划线。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，与所给短文内容衔接自然，并用了原文中划线的多个关键词。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

3. 高分亮点：

单词和短语：prefer doing sth.；carefully；in time；communicate with；face to face；enjoy oneself；as well。

句型：Teachers can check their homework and help them in time. （and连接并列谓语结构）

School is also good fun.（不可数名词fun作表语）

2．One possible version:

Dear Lucy,

Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he is such a great teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Ms. Liu.

She is not only tall but also thin. She looks very smart, too. Because her favorite color is pink, she is interested in all kinds of things that are pink. She has a lot of hobbies, such as reading and traveling. So she often goes to the library after school on weekdays and goes to the places of interest on weekends. She also likes watching movies, but she seldom goes to the cinema. She is so excellent a teacher that she won the first prize in the teaching competition in our city. She is helpful and friendly to everyone. We all like her.

Please write soon.

Yours,

Zhang Hua【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和内容，描写自己的英语老师的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

3．Dear students,

Reading can not only help you make progress but also make you grow well. Here are some advantages of reading.

First, when you are reading, you can feel the beauty of the words. Second, reading can open your eyes and help you to know about the world. Third, reading is also the best way to increase your knowledge. Fourth, you can improve your writing skills by reading. What’s more, when you spend most of your spare time reading, you will be able to develop a good reading habit. There is so much knowledge and so many interesting things in different kinds of books. You can enjoy the happiness that the books bring to you at the same time.

Hope all of you can enjoy reading. Let’s take action together now!

Reading Club

July 15. 2020【详解】1.题干解读：本次书面表达是一篇书信作文。写作时，围绕“我读书，我受益”的主题展开，为全校学生发出一封倡议书。本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头、结尾已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文。本文采用三段式，第一段开篇点题读书使人进步；第二段详细阐述了读书的益处；第三段呼吁大家一起读书。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，文中“First”、“Second”、“Third”、“Fourth”、“What’s more”等词的使用让本文看起来更加条理清楚，词组，短语等运用灵活，多种句式交替运用，给文章增色不少。

3.高分亮点：

短语：not only…but also…；help sb. (to) do sth.；make progress；the best way to do sth.；writing skills；spend time doing sth.；spare time；develop a good reading habit；different kinds of；at the same time；take action。

句型：Here倒装句；First…Second…Third…Fourth…What’s more…；when引导的时间状语从句；There be句型；and并列句；that引导的定语从句；祈使句。

4．例文：

          Secondly, we should have enough sleep. Enough sleep is important for everyone. As students, we need to sleep nine hours a day. If you don’t sleep well, you will have no energy in class.

          Thirdly, we should do sports often. Exercise will fill you with energy and make you study more efficiently.

          In a word, if you want to keep healthy, you can’t be lazy.【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据所给的短文进行续写，内容是关于如何保持健康的。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称和第二人称为主。写作时承接第二点“睡眠”开始写作，自己根据主题适当发挥，写完后，需下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。文章确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

5．One possible version:

We can choose when and where to have classes freely. So we will never be late. And besides Chinese, math and English, we can study different kinds of subjects that we are interested in. There is no exam of any subject. We love our dream school.【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据文章以给出的部分进行续写，主要是写出自己梦想中的学校会是什么样子，要加以发挥，要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的部分很好的衔接起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，辅以一般将来时，注意无单词拼写和语法错误。