初中英语沪教牛津版（2024）七年级上册（2024）Unit 5 Off to spaceSection 3 Expressing and communicating ideasWriting教学课件

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Learning bjectives
1. Understand the writing purpse, style, and requirements.2. Master the structure f making a travel plan.3. Imprve the structure, cntent, and language f the initial draft thrugh self-evaluatin and peer evaluatin.
After learning this lessn, yu can:
China's space dream
Thusands f years ag, there was a Chinese stry abut Chang’e flying t the Mn.
During the Ming Dynasty, the Chinese made the first rcket.
On 15 Octber 2003, Yang Liwei went int space in the Shenzhu V spaceship.
On 24 April 1970, China sent its first satellite int space.
China launched(发射)the Shenzhu XII spaceship n June 17 2021, sending 3 astrnauts t its permanent space statin (永久的空间站) .
If yu have a chance t visit space, hw will yu plan yur trip?
Thinking abut where yu want t g (e.g. the Mn, Mars).
Step ne: Plan
Pre-writing
the space htel
the space statin
I wuld like t g t the space statin.
David drew a mind map befre writing. Let’s match the tpic with each paragraph.
Step tw: Discuss and make sentences
the space statin
With my family
Add details.
Things I will have t d there
tie my sleeping bag t the wall
wash in a different way
Write cmplete sentences.
We will have t tie ur sleeping bags t the wall.
We will have t wash ur hands in a different way.
Discuss mre things.
Things I am ging t d there
lk at the Earth frm space
d sme experiments
g n a space walk
I am ging t d sme experiments.
I am ging t lk at the Earth frm space.
I am ging t g n a spacewalk.
What the trip will be like: amazing
It will be an amazing experience.
This is what my dream trip lks like.
Things are very different in space.
When we arrive at the space statin, I will first d...
I really lk frward t travelling int space smeday.
Step three: Write an article
There is much less gravity, s we will have t tie ur sleeping bags t the wall when we sleep.
cause and effect Adverbial f time
We will have t wash ur hands and brush ur teeth in a different way.
Add mre details r example and use cnjunctins t jin them, such as because, s, but, and s n.
I finished my writing.
Pay attentin t the lgic between different parts.
Remember t add:a cncluding sentence
supprting sentences
Tpic sentences
I hpe I can travel int space with my family ne day. This is what my dream trip lks like. First, my family and I will fly ut int space n a spaceship. When we get int rbit, we will visit a space statin. It will take us abut six hurs t get there.Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, s we will have t tie ur sleeping bags t the wall when we sleep. We will als have t wash ur hands and brush ur teeth in a different way.When we arrive at the space statin, I will first lk ut f the windws and enjy the view f the Earth. After that, I wuld like t d sme experiments. I really want t study hw plants grw in space. Next, I’m ging t put n a spacesuit and g n a spacewalk.I really lk frward t travelling int space smeday—it will be an amazing experience!
necessary linking wrds
Write yur article with this layut.
Step fur: Write yur pst
Things I will have t d
Things I am ging t d
What the trip will be like
Pst-writing
Visiting the MnI hpe I can visit the Mn with my family ne day. This is what my dream trip lks like. First, my family and I will fly t the Mn n a spaceship. The Mn is arund 380,000 kilmetres frm the Earth, s it’ll take us abut three days t get there.Things are different in space. There are a few things I’ll need t d there. There is much less gravity, s everything flats, including us! We’ll need t learn hw t flat safely. It’s like being a superher wh can fly, but with practice t master the art f ‘space walking’. Because there is n air n the Mn, we must take xygen tanks with us. Even thugh we’re far away, we can still talk t ur friends and scientists n Earth. We use radis and satellites t send messages back and frth. It’s imprtant t make them knw ur findings and any challenges we face. Smetimes, we share beautiful pictures f Earth frm space!
When we arrive at the space statin, I will take a walk n the Mn and take as many phts as I can. After that, We can help build new statins. Space statins are like hmes fr astrnauts. It’s meaningful t d s. Next, I am ging t teach live lessns frm space, t share my experiences and knwledge with students arund the wrld. I really lk frward t it nw. The trip t the Mn is sure t be an unfrgettable experience! I can’t wait t embark n this incredible jurney!
Step Five: Check and revise
Tick () the bxes t check yur writing, and then revise it.
Step Six: Grade and share
Hw t write a dream trip?
A dream trip t space
I think it’ll be a wnderful/ an amazing experience in my life.
when/hw/with whm