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【题型分析】
日记主要用来记录。天所经历的主要事情和过程，并表达自己的感受天文日记的写作，要注意以下三个方面:
1.格式要正确。在写日记正文之前，要依次有日期、星期及当天的天气情况。
2.表达要清楚、准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记，看能否用简洁明了的英语把一天之中发生的事情以及你的感受准确无误地表达出来。日记记录的事情通常是已经发生了的，故常用一般过去时。
3.文体要口语化。因为日记是写给自己看的，其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等，所以用第一人称写， 把该写的东西写清楚即可。
写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤：
第一步：介绍事件：
第二步：具体阐述事情经过，补充细节；
第三步：表达感想或总结该事件的意义。
【必备句型】
开头部分
(1) It was the first day f ur winter hliday. 这是我们寒假的第一天。
(2) One f my father' s friends invited me t have a picnic tday.
今天，我爸爸的一个朋友邀请我去野餐。
(3) On this weekend, my brther and I decided t help my mther with the husewrk.这个周末，我弟弟和我决定去帮助我妈妈做家务活。
(4 ) Tday, I realized that time was a very cruel thing.
今天，我意识到时间是非常残忍的一样东西。
(5) Tday, ur schl had an pening ceremny in the schl auditrium.
今天，我们学校在学校礼堂举办了开学典礼。
中间部分
(1 ) It seemed t be an easy task fr us, but later we had a hard time finishing it.
它看起来像是一项容易的任务，但之后我们经历一段艰苦的时期才完成它
(2) I spent the whle day sweeping the flr and washing the clthes.
我花了一整天来扫地、洗衣服。
(3 ) Thse red buildings and thse green trees frmed a beautiful picture.
那些红色的建筑物和绿色的树木构成了一幅美丽的图画。
(4) The night view was s beautiful that we all didn't want t g hme.
夜景是如此漂亮，我们都不想回家了
结束部分
(1)I will be mre diligent in this semester.这个学期我准备更加勤奋地学习。
(2) We will treasure it at the bttm f ur hearts.我们会把它珍藏在我们的内心深处。
(3) What a nice day! 多么美好的.天!
(4) I was s mved by his speech.我被他的演讲深深感动了。
(5) I did enjy that game.我非常喜欢那个游戏。
写作样例与常用句式:
日期，星期 天气
事件背景与话题:
1 enjyed myself tday because...我今天很尽兴， 因为 tk part in...我参加了
On my way t...,I 在路上， 我看见了
It is an unfrgettable day tday.今 天是难忘的一天。Hw time flies!时光 飞逝!
记叙事件、描写经过，适当穿插体会:
Early this mrning今天早些时候 I set ff fr...启程
It tk me an hur t get there.我到那儿花了一个小时。When I gt 当我到
After that...在这之后 1 spent 30 minutes visiting...我花了 30分钟参观
At the end f the 在一 天结束时，
结尾(感受与态度):
Thugh I was tired, I felt...尽管很累， 我感到
I felt .. than ever befre我觉得比以往任何时 am cnvinced that...我确信
I am determined t ..我决.心
It is my duty ..是我的职贵
【万能模板】
Day f the week, Date Weather
①Tday is .I did sme meaningful things .
②In the mrning,I_ .（事件一）In the afternn,I （事件二）After that,I .（事件三）
③What a warm and meaningful day! I will never frget the memrable day!/Althugh I was very tired, I felt very happy because .
注：
①介绍今天是什么日子，引出事件
②详细描写了今天所做的事情
③表达感想
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
话题范文
1．为了丰富学生课后生活，放松心情，你们班组织全班学生到西山郊游。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一则日记，并发表你的感想。
内容提示：
注意：（1）短文须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
April 6th Saturday Sunny
In rder t make ur after-schl life clrful and relax ur minds, we went fr an uting t the West Hill. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One pssible versin:
April 6th Saturday Sunny
In rder t make ur after-schl life clrful and relax ur minds, we went fr an uting t the West Hill. We set ut in the schl bus at 7:30 a. m. The weather was pleasant and every ne f us was excited.
After tw hurs’ ride, we arrived there at 9:30. We began ur prgrams as sn as we gt ff the bus. We played games n the grass happily. After that, we had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternn we held a cntest f telling stries in English. It turned ut t be quite a success. Five winners were given beautiful prizes and I was lucky t be amng them. Many phts were als taken there. We enjyed urselves very much. Time passed quickly and we had t leave. It was half past five when we returned safely.
I think this is a great activity. It can nt nly bring us clser t nature and relax ur md but als keep ur bdies and minds healthy. I’ll never frget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇日记；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍去郊游的目的、时间及地点；
第二步，具体介绍郊游的活动内容；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in rder t为了
②as sn as一……就……
③turn ut t be结果是
④enjy neself玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It was half past five when we returned safely.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②It can nt nly bring us clser t nature and relax ur md but als keep ur bdies and minds healthy.(nt nly…but als结构)
2．假如你是李华，今天(星期三)参加了学校举办的为山区儿童捐赠图书(bk dnatin)活动。请根据提示写一篇日记。内容需包括：时间、地点、人物、事件、经过和感想。
要求：1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 信中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出但不计入总数)
Wednesday (Dec 18th 2020) Sunny
Tday I tk part in a bk dnatin activity fr the village kids in my schl.
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I hpe I can have mre such chances t help thers.
【答案】例文
Wednesday (April 18th 2018) Sunny
Tday I tk part in a bk dnatin activity fr the village kids in my schl. When all the classes were finished in the afternn, the bk dnatin started. It was rganized by the mnitr f each class. Every student culd dnate sme bks depending n his wn decisin. I dnated three nvels and five magazines fr them, which were my favrite.
In my pinin, it is a gd idea t hld such activities. And sharing reading is well wrth ding in fact. We all knw helping thers is the happiest thing in the wrld, especially abut reading bks and learning.
I hpe I can have mre such chances t help thers.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇日记；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给中文提示，介绍这个活动的时间、地点、人物、事件和经过；
第二步，介绍自己的感想；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
① depend n依靠
② in my pinin在我看来
③ be wrth ding sth值得做某事
[高分句型]
①When all the classes were finished in the afternn, the bk dnatin started.（时间状语从句）
②I hpe I can have mre such chances t help thers.（宾语从句）
3．李红是某校九年级（1）班一名新转入的外地学生。几个星期来，老师和同学们对她的关心和帮助让她倍感温暖，使她逐渐适应了新的学习和生活环境。
假如你是李红，请你根据下面表中的提示语写一则日记，叙述这几个星期以来他们对你各方面的关心、帮助以及你的感受和愿望。
注意：1. 词数：80个左右 (日记开头已给出的内容不计入总词数)；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Sunday, May 26th Sunny
My teachers and classmates have helped me a lt since I came here.
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【答案】例文
Sunday, May 26th Sunny
My teachers and classmates have helped me a lt since I came here. They brught me lcal fd frm their hmes. They were very delicius. My classmates shwed me arund ur schl. They even invited me t their hmes t watch TV and enjy dinner. After schl they ften ran and played vlleyball with me in the playgrund. They came t talk with me when we were free. We have been gd friends. They helped me with my lessns. When I had prblems, I went t them fr help.
I feel very happy here. I hpe t make mre friends and make prgress in my studies.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍老师和同学在生活方面、思想方面、学习方面等对我的帮助；
第二步，表达自己的感受和愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①shw sb. arund带领某人参观
②invite sb. t d sth.邀请某人做某事
③make prgress取得进步
[高分句型]
①They came t talk with me when we were free. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．每个人都有幸运和不幸的时候。请你根据以下提示及要求写一则日记，记录自己糟糕的一天。
提示：
1.晚上因为熬夜而睡过头了；
2.因未赶上公共汽车而导致上学迟到；
3.上课注意力不集中，未能回答出英语老师的问题。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.80—100词 (日记格式已给出，不计入总词数)。
Mnday, March 18th
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【答案】例文：
Mnday, March 18th
I have an unlucky day tday because smething terrible happened. This mrning, I verslept because I stayed up late last night. I didn’t have my breakfast. I was late fr schl because I didn’t get n the bus in time. In the English class, I had prblem fllwing my teacher. I didn’t understand what the teacher said. I didn’t fcus n my lessn s that I culdn’t answer the questins.
What a terrible day it is! I wn’t stay up late.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：以 “一般过去时” 为主；
③提示：结合提示要点，介绍自己糟糕的一天，不要遗漏要点，避免语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：总体说明今天感觉很糟糕；
第二步：具体介绍今天发生的事情（熬夜睡过头、上学迟到、未能回答老师的问题）；
第三步：自己以后不会再熬夜。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late 熬夜
②in time 及时
③fcus n 专注于……
[高分句型]
①This mrning, I verslept because I stayed up late last night. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I didn’t fcus n my lessn s that I culd’t answer the questins. (s that引导结果状语从句)
5．上周末，我校的“厨艺小达人”李华给大家上了一节云家务劳动课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点；
1. 授课者：李华，15岁，福州八中学生，校厨艺大赛冠军；
2. 上课内容：鱼丸的制作和烹饪，福州美食的历史等；
3. 你的收获和感受。
参考词汇：鱼丸 (fish ball)、冠军 (champin)。
注意事项：
1. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Mnday, June 20
Dear Diary,
Last weekend, we had a special nline lessn.
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【答案】
Mnday, June 20
Dear Diary,
Last weekend, we had a special nline lessn. The teacher was the champin f schl cking cmpetitin named Li Hua. He is 15 years ld, and he is als a student f Fuzhu N. 8 Middle Schl. In the class, he explained the way f making fish balls and shwed us hw t ck them well. We were interested in making fish balls. He als intrduced us t the histry f Fuzhu cuisine. Frm this lessn, I learnt that cking skills are nt easy t master, and t becme a master f cking needs a lt f practice, practice makes perfect. What a special lessn we had!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人信息，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
6．面临世界的快速发展，21世纪的青少年应该拥有关键能力从容以对。假如你是李明，今天你们班召开了班会，请你根据以下信息，写一篇日记，并说说21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力和理由。
写作要点：
1. 班会主题：21世纪的青少年。
2. 同学们的发言：
（1） 很多同学认为沟通力（cmmunicatin）是重要的；
（2）刘丽说表达力（expressin）是有帮助的；
（3）说说你认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力（key skill）和理由。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Tday we had a class meeting.
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I hpe we all have a bright future.
【答案】例文
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Tday we had a class meeting. Many students think that cmmunicatin is imprtant. Liu Li says that the expressin is helpful. I think it is very imprtant t express my ideas well. First f all, n matter hw knwledgeable yu are, if yu can’t express yurself well, thers wn’t understand yur ideas. Yu can’t cmmunicate well with thers. Secndly, the rganizatinal ability is als very imprtant. A chpstick is easy t break, but a bundle f chpsticks is hard t break.
I hpe we all have a bright future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该文章为日记，写作时候要注意符合日记的写作格式。日记内容主要包括两部分：（1）包括同学们的发言；（2）作者自己认为的认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力。
2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称来写；时态用一般现在时；写作时要注意围绕主题，并能准确地使用一定的语法，词汇，短语和句型。
7．2022寒假正值北京冬奥会，你和同学们也想去体验一下冰雪运动。周六天气晴朗，你和朋友相约到鸣翠湖滑雪场一起滑雪。请你根据以下提示写一篇日记，记录本次活动并简要谈谈感受。文中不得出现真实姓名，80词左右，所给字数不算在总字数中。
内容提示：
1. 活动时间：早上10:00出发，下午5:00返回。
2. 交通工具：公交车；
3. 活动：滑冰，滑雪(skiing)，参观鸣翠湖……(拓展至少两项活动)；
4. 感受：谈自己的感受或收获。
During the winter vacatin f 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I als wanted t experience winter sprts with my friends.
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【答案】[例文]
Saturday Sunny
During the winter vacatin f 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I als wanted t experience winter sprts with my friends. We left at 10:00 a.m. and returned at 5:00 p.m. We went there by bus because Mincui Lake Ski resrt was nt far frm here. We had many interesting activities, such as skating, sking and visiting Mincui Lake. We als had an interesting ski race. In additin, we had a game abut skiing. Everyne tk an active part in the game. I was s happy that I didn’t want t g hme.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇日记，记录周六你和朋友相约到鸣翠湖滑雪场一起滑雪的过程和感受。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称采用第一人称。写作时按照日记格式，内容需包含时间、交通工具、活动以及自己的感受。文章确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语法错误。
8．我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动。在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去天津敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇日记。
要求：
1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数80~100。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 老人the elderly peple；尊重respect
Mar. 5th, 2021
Fine
Tday is 5th March. Our teacher tk us vlunteers t Tianjin Nursing Hme.
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I hpe mre peple can jin us.
【答案】Mar. 5th, 2021
Fine
Tday is 5th March. Our teacher tk us vlunteers t Tianjin Nursing Hme. As sn as we vlunteers gt t Tianjin Nursing Hme, they gave us a warm welcme. We brught sme flwers and fruits t the elderly peple. We cleaned the windws and swept the flr fr them. Then we sang and danced. Hw happy we were! After that, we sat tgether chatting with each ther and gave ur best wishes t them. The elderly peple were very excited. We als had dinner tgether. When it was time fr us vlunteers t leave, they were thankful fr ur kindness.
This activity nt nly makes the elderly peple happy but als lets us learn mre. Fr example, we feel it ur duty t care fr the elderly peple and respect them.
I hpe mre peple can jin us.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一篇日记，记述去敬老院做志愿者的经历，表格中的内容要描述齐全，并适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般过去时进行叙事，以第一、三人称进行写作。先承接所给开头重点描述活动内容，再另起一段表达感想。注意保持主谓的一致性，做到无标点和拼写错误。
9．今天，学校“英语节”总结交流会上，你的同学李华做了发言，分享了经验。请你写一则英文日记，记录这特别的分享。日记需包括以下要点：
1. 分享者：李华，学校英语演讲比赛一等奖获得者；
2. 分享内容：现场演讲、分享演讲技巧；分享学英语的方法等；
3. 你的收获和感受。
注意：
1. 词数80~120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Thursday, March 31st
Dear Diary,
Tday, we listened t a wnderful speech.
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【答案】例文：
Thursday, March 31st
Dear Diary,
Tday, we listened t a wnderful speech. There were twelve students in the cntest. Li Hua wn the first prize. She shared her speech skills and English learning experience with us. Here are sme in her speech.
Befre the speech, we shuld pick the tpic and prepare fr it. We shuld write dwn the utlines and rganize what we are ging t say. Take a deep breath t relax yurself and start the speech. She said making a speech in public made her cnfident and brught her great pleasure. She advised us t d a lt f reading and sing English sngs. It’s gd t listen carefully and take ntes in class. I learn a lt frm her speech. I am sure I will d better in English.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以日记形式记录学校“英语节”总结交流会，内容包括介绍一等奖获奖者；谈谈现场演讲及获奖者分享演讲技巧和学英语的方法，最后谈谈自己的收获和感受。
2.写作指导：本文用一般过去时和一般现在时写作，介绍演讲及获奖者用一般过去时，介绍获奖者的经验用一般现在时；书写要紧扣主题，分层介绍获奖者，获奖者分析的经验及自己的收获和感受。做到中心突出，内容完整连贯。
10．6月20日，你班组织了一场美化家园的义务劳动，主题为“T Be a Greener Persn”。请结合分组情况用英语写一篇日记，并发表你的看法。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
June 20, Sunday Fine
This mrning ur class rganized an activity called “T Be a Greener Persn” in the nearby cmmunity.
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【答案】例文
June 20, Sunday Fine
This mrning ur class rganized an activity called “T Be a Greener Persn” in the nearby cmmunity. The students were divided int three grups: Grup One cllected rubbish, Grup Tw tld the visitrs t take care f the flwers and trees, and Grup Three spread the imprtance n prtecting the envirnment.
Being a greener persn means that we shuld try ur best t pllute the envirnment less and be mre friendly t the envirnment, which is easier said than dne. T be a greener persn, we shuld use bicycles r public transprt services rather than driving ur wn cars r mtrbikes. We shuld try t recycle what we use and try nt t waste them. We can als be greener by saving water and electricity and s n. Being a greener persn is being friendly t the earth as well as all the human beings in the wrld. Try ur best and we will make a difference.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇日记写作，要求按照所给信息描述义务劳动的分工，并阐述自己的观点。写作时要按照题干中所给内容进行描写，紧扣题目，并适当发挥。写作时要先理顺内容，可以分为两层，第一层先描述每个组的工作内容，第二层阐述自己的观点。力争做到言简意赅，语句流畅。
2. 写作指导：动笔前要先构思写作要点，第一段主要采用第三人称，时态使用一般过去时来描述劳动的主要内容；第二段主要采用第一人称，时态使用一般现在时来发表自己的看法。为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
时间
4月6日，星期六，天气晴朗
地点
West Hill
抵达方式
乘校车
出发时间
7: 30 a. m.
到达时间
9: 30 a. m.
活动内容
上午：在草地上做游戏；在饭店吃午饭
下午：讲英语故事比赛；颁奖；照相
返回时间
5: 30 p. m.
生活方面
1. 同学们从家中带来当地可口的食物给我吃；
2. 同学们带我参观校园，周末邀请我到他们家做客；
3. 下午放学后，同学们经常带我去操场跑步、打排球。
思想方面
老师、同学们找我谈心，和我交朋友。
学习方面
……
感受和愿望
……
活动时间
3月5日
活动地点
天津敬老院（Tianjin Nursing Hme）
参加人员
学校志愿者（vlunteer）
活动形式
1.送去鲜花和水果
2.帮助打扫卫生
3.陪老人聊天（chat with sb）、唱歌、跳舞
4.送去美好祝愿
……
活动感想
关爱老人、尊重老人
T Be a Greener Persn
Grup One
cllect rubbish
Grup Tw
tell the visitrs t take care f the flwers and trees
Grup Three
spread the imprtance n prtecting the envirnment