英语人教版（2024）Unit 6 Rain or Shine课堂检测

这是一份英语人教版（2024）Unit 6 Rain or Shine课堂检测，共18页。
【话题分析】
本单元的话题为“天气”，要求能围绕这一话题写一篇有关天气情况、人们正在进行的活动和人们感受的短文。在写作过程中，首先要能准确使用描述天气的形容词及句型，并要能正确使用现在进行时描述人们正在进行的活动。
常用句型：
Hw's the weather
What's the weather like
It's...
The weather
ding sth.
having a gd time.
【写作实例】
“一轮皎洁月当空，佳节团圆欢笑多”。假如你是李华，Jane是你的笔友。今天是中秋节，请写一封信告诉Jane你如何度过中秋节，并根据以下提示完成本文。
内容包括：1.天气情况；
2.中秋节所做的事情；
3.你的感受。
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【思路点拨】
【教材典句】
1、Climbing is hard...(SB,1b)
2、I’m sunbathing at the mment!(SA,2a)
3、 peple here are still in high spirits.(SB,1b)
4、Is the weather making Grandpa Sad ?(SA,1c)
【经典范文】
Dear Jane,
Tday is ur traditinal Mid-Autumn Festival.
Getting tgether with ur family is really exciting! It's a cl autumn night. The mn is shining in the sky.
We are eating a big dinner nw. My grand-parents are lking at the mn. My parents are talking with each ther. My yunger brther is eating mncakes at the mment. He is in high spirits!
When it is Mid-Autumn Festival, everyne is enjying their wnderful time! The Mid-Autumn Festival makes everyne happy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【亮点点评】
①用动名词(短语)作主语概述中秋节的特点。
②用现在进行时结构 be ding 和时间状语 at the mment描述中秋节活动。
③用 be in high spirits 描述“我”的弟弟的情绪状态。
④"make sb adj."描述中秋节给大家的感受。
【同步检测】
1．假如你是魏华，你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息，给你上海的同学李涛写一封信，不少于60词。
Dear Li Ta,
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Yurs,
Wei Hua
【答案】
Dear Li Ta,
Hw is it ging with yu? I’m visiting my aunt in Canada. It’s winter here nw. It’s cld and it’s snwing really hard. What a beautiful white wrld it is! The weather here is just right fr playing with snw. S I am skiing and making a snwman with my cusins. We are having a gd time in the snw. We are really relaxed. What’s the weather like in Shanghai? Are yu studying hard r having fun?
Please write back t me sn.
Yurs,
Wei Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时” ；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给出的词汇或短语，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向同学问好，说明自己所在的地方及活动；
第二步，阐明天气情况，正在进行的活动及内心的感受；
第三步，询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况，并请他尽快回信。
[亮点词汇]
① snw hard 下雪下得大
② be just right fr 正适合……
③ really 确实
[高分句型]
What a beautiful white wrld it is! (感叹句)
2．假设今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文来描述你们的活动。
提示：
1.What are yur family ding?
2.What d yu think f rainy days?
要求：
1.语句通顺，符合逻辑；
2.包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
Tday is Sunday. It’s five ’clck in the afternn nw. ____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Tday is Sunday. It’s five ’clck in the afternn nw. It’s raining utside, and all f my family are at hme. My father is using the cmputer t d his wrk in his study. My grandparents are playing chess in the living rm. My brther Dale is making a mdel plane in his rm. He likes making things very much. My mther is cking in the kitchen fr us. And I’m watching TV with my sister Susan in the bedrm.
I like rainy days because we can have a gd time staying at hme tgether.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文为材料作文，描述自己的家人正在做的事情；
② 时态：现在进行时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生不要遗漏要点；可适当添加语句，使文章连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步，描述家庭成员们各自正在做的事情；
第二步，描述自己对下雨天的看法。
【亮点词汇】① rain下雨
② all所有的
③ play chess下棋
④ very much非常
⑤ watch TV看电视
⑥ because因为
【高分句型】① My father is using the cmputer t d his wrk in his study. (use sth. t d使用某物做某事)
② I like rainy days because we can have a gd time staying at hme tgether. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3．假设你是李华。上周Anna给你写了一封信。 Anna在信中介绍了她的家乡并希望收到你的回信。请根据以下表格内容提示，给网友Anna写一封e-mail，向她介绍广州冬天的情况以及你和家人过春节的活动和感受，并邀请她来广州。
要求：
1. 字数：不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）；
2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
3. 条理清楚，语句还顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
Dear Anna,
I was happy t hear frm yu last week.
Winter is cming. In winter, Guangzhu is a beautiful city. _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Anna,
I was happy t hear frm yu last week.
Winter is cming. In winter, Guangzhu is a beautiful city. It’s nt cld here. It never snws here, but it rains smetimes. We climbed Baiyun Muntain, visited the flwer market and had mrning tea. During this festival, peple in China get tgether and have a big meal. In many places peple like t set ff firecrackers and firewrks t celebrate it. And dumplings are the mst traditinal fd during the festival. It is my favrite festival because I dn’t have t g t schl, and I can get sme new clthes, eat a lt f delicius fd, get sme red envelpes, t. I’m very happy.
Welcme t Guangzhu. I lk frward t hearing frm yu.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料介绍广州冬天的情况以及春节的活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍广州冬天的天气。
第二步，介绍春节的活动。
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① set ff firecrackers 放鞭炮
② a lt f 许多
③ lk frward t ding sth 期待做某事
[高分句型]
① In many places peple like t set ff firecrackers and firewrks t celebrate it（动词不定式作宾语）
② It is my favrite festival because I dn’t have t g t schl, and I can get sme new clthes, eat a lt f delicius fd, get sme red envelpes, t（because引导原因状语从句）
4．请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。
要求：
1. 认真观察图画，把观察到的内容写成一段通顺的话。
2. 可以给图中人物起名字，展开合理的想象。
3. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。
4. 不少于五句话，注意规范书写。

图1 图2
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【答案】
Tday is Sunday. It’s sunny. I am playing in the park with my friends. Lk! Mary is playing the vilin and Kate is singing sngs. Peter is taking pictures f trees. Lily is riding her bike. Mike and Sarah are playing rle-play. Mike is acting the dctr. Sarah is acting the patient. We are all happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主，注意时态的正确使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍今天是星期日，天气很好；
第二步，具体描绘公园里每个人正在做些什么；
第三步，最后进行总结，今天很开心。
[亮点词汇]
①in the park在公园
②take pictures f拍……的照片
③ride ne’s bike骑自行车
[高分句型]
Lk! Mary is playing the vilin and Kate is singing sngs.（and并列句）
5．现在是晚上八点钟，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正给你的朋友写一张明信片，介绍下今天的天气，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60个词左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Mei
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s 8:00 pm. And it is raining heavily utside. We all stay at hme. My grandparents are watching TV. They are laughing happily. My father is reading newspaper in the living rm. My mther is ding the dishes in the kitchen. What am I ding? Of curse, I am writing t yu. We all happy and relaxed at this mment. What will yu d n a rainy day?
Yurs,
Li Mei
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。写信给Jim告知家人的活动。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用现在进行时。先介绍此时的天气，紧接着描述家人的活动信息，最后表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
【真题链接】
（21-22七年级下·河北唐山·期末）
下面是公园一角人们的活动场景。请你根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友 Jane 和人们的活动。
提示：
(1) Hw’s the weather tday?
(2) What are peple ding?
(3) What des Jane lk like?
(4) What is Jane ding?
要求:
（1）短文须包含所有提示内容。
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数不少于60词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
It is Sunday tday. _________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
It is Sunday tday. It’s sunny and warm. There are many peple in the park. Lk, sme bys are playing basketball. Sme are playing sccer. They are playing happily. There is a man and tw wmen standing under the tree. They are watching bys playing basketball. Where is my friend Jane? Can yu find her? She has big eyes and shrt curly hair. Oh, I see her. She is eating an apple and she is talking with a by right nw. Next t Jane, a girl is reading a bk. Hw happy they are!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友 Jane 和人们的活动。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先从今天的天气入手；其次描写人们在公园里的活动；接着描述简的外貌和活动。保证行文连贯，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
2．（20-21七年级下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假如你是来自澳大利亚的Alice，暑假期间你正在哈尔滨旅游，请向你的妈妈介绍一下你在哈尔滨的情况，并向她介绍你的新朋友。
写作要点：
1.现在哈尔滨是夏天。
2.介绍今天的一些情况：
(1)今天天气晴朗但有风；
(2)你正在公园里踢足球；
(3)一个女孩正在拍江边的照片、一些男孩正在江里游泳。
3.介绍你的新朋友王莹（外貌、衣着、爱好等）。
写作要求：
1.内容完整、合理；语句正确；行文连贯；
2.字迹工整、书写规范；
3.60词以上；
4.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
Dear Mm,
Hw are yu? I am in Harbin nw. _________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Alice
【答案】
Dear Mm,
Hw are yu? I am in Harbin nw. I will intrduce yu t my life here.
Nw Harbin is in summer. The weather is fine tday, but windy. I feel very cmfrtable. I am playing ftball in the park. I see a girl taking pictures. Sme bys are swimming in the river. I make a new friend here. Her name is Wang Ying. Wang Ying lks very beautiful. She is wearing a yellw dress. She likes t sing.
I am fine here, yu d nt need t wrry.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Alice
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干提示向妈妈介绍自己在哈尔滨的旅游情况以及自己交到的新朋友，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。第一段进行总述；第二段描述天气、今天的活动以及介绍自己的朋友；第三段告诉妈妈自己很好，不用担心。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
3．（20-21七年级下·河北石家庄·期中）假设你正在和你爸爸妈妈，妹妹在三亚度假，你在朋友圈晒的旅行照片被你的美国朋友Jim看到。他对你去的地方很感兴趣，发微信让你给他简单介绍一下，要求包括以下内容：
要求：
1．条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
2．词数：80 词左右。
3．可适当发挥。
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【答案】
Hell, Jim! I am n summer vacatin in Sanya with my parents. We are having a great time here. Let me tell yu smething abut Sanya.
The weather here is sunny and windy. It’s cmfrtable t travel here. Nw we are taking a walk and we can g swimming in the afternn. Smetimes I draw pictures n the beach. And my mther sings sngs with ther turists. There are many peple n the beach. We can als play games tgether.
I like Sanya. It’s really beautiful and relaxing. I think my summer vacatin is wnderful.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己暑假在三亚旅游的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
4．（21-22七年级下·河北邯郸·期末）在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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【答案】
It’s summer nw. The weather in my hmetwn is very ht and rainy. S it is very wet. Peple are wearing sunglasses and cl clthes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a gd time. Sme girls are singing and dancing. Sme bys are playing sccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tm is taking phts. A little by is eating an ice cream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①have a gd time玩得开心
②take phts拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tm is taking phts.（and连接并列句）
5．（23-24七年级下·山东烟台·期末）假如你是李华，你和你的美国朋友Helen正在网上聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么，请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。
要求：
1.内容须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.不得出现真实校名、班名及姓名。
4.有卷面分。
提示词组：water the flwers
Hi, Helen, gd evening. Nw, ______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hi, Helen, gd evening. Nw, my grandfather isn’t at hme. He is taking a walk in the park. My grandmther likes flwers very much, and she is watering the flwers in the living rm. My father is in the living rm, t. He is reading a newspaper. My mther is washing the dishes in the kitchen. My sister is ding her hmewrk in ur bedrm. She always studies hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍家人现在正在做什么；
第二步，具体介绍家人现在正在做什么；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at hme在家
②very much非常
③read a newspaper读报纸
④study hard努力学习
[高分句型]
①He is taking a walk in the park. (运用现在进行时)
②My mther is washing the dishes in the kitchen. (介词短语作地点状语)
6．（22-23七年级下·山东烟台·期末）请根据表格中的信息，进行场景描述，字数不少于50，可适当扩展。
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【答案】
Tday is Sunday. It is sunny and a bit ht. In the afternn, Wang Hua’s family g t the park near his huse t play.
His father and his elder brther are playing chess under the tree. His father plays chess very well. His father ften teaches his elder brther hw t play chess. Wang Hua and his little brther are playing ftball. This is Wang Hua’s favrite sprt. What is his mther ding? Oh, his mther is taking phts. She likes taking phts and she always takes sme beautiful phts.
They are all very happy. They all have a great time.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍周日的天气情况并引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍王华一家人在公园的活动情况；
第三步，最后总结他们玩得很开心。
[亮点词汇]
① play chess下棋
② take phts拍照
③ have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
① What is his mther ding? （特殊疑问句）
② She likes taking phts and she always takes sme beautiful phts. （and连接的并列句）
7．（22-23七年级下·山东青岛·期末）
看图说话。请你仔细观察上面的图画，之后以 “A Happy Sunday” 为题写一篇英语短文，向大家简要介绍一下图片中的内容，包括天气情况、地点、人们正在进行的各种活动。
部分参考词汇：
遛狗：walk the dg；野餐：have a picnic；照相：take phts；放无人机：fly a drne；长凳：bench；躺：lie；草地：grass；在湖边：by the lake
要求：
1、对图片中的活动可以有选择地加以描述，不必面面俱到。
2、文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。
3、词数在80左右。
A Happy Sunday
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【答案】
A Happy Sunday
It’s Sunday tday, and it’s als sunny. There are many peple in the park. What are they ding? A man is running, and tw wmen are walking their dgs. A man and a wman are having a picnic (with their dg) by the lake. Tw men are playing the guitar, and a wman is singing. A small by is flying a kite. A by and a girl are riding bikes. An ld man is reading a newspaper n the bench. A man and a wman are lying n the grass. Oh, they are flying a drne. There is als a man taking phts! They are all very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：考生注意根据图片内容描写，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述图片内容；
第二步，具体介绍图片上人物的行为；
第三步，书写结语，总结图片上人物表现出的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①by the lake湖边
②n the beach在沙滩上
③lie n the grass躺在草地上
④take phts照相
[高分句型]
①There are many peple in the park. (运用there be句型)
②Tw men are playing the guitar, and a wman is singing. (运用现在进行时)
Where
Weather
Activities
Feelings
Canada
cld; snwing
visit my aunt; ski; make a snwman
relaxed; have a gd time
天气
不冷，从不下雪，有时会下雨
活动
爬白云山，逛花市，喝早茶
感受
请自行补充
天气
晴朗，有风
时间
暑假(summer vacatin)
地点
Sanya
活动
画画，唱歌，游泳，做游戏等
观点
……（你认为你的旅游怎么样? ）
爷爷
在公园散步
奶奶
在客厅浇花
爸爸
在客厅读报纸
妈妈
在厨房洗碗
妹妹
在卧室做作业
时间
周日下午
地点
公园
天气
晴朗，有点热
人物
王华一家
场景
爸爸与哥哥在树下下棋；王华和弟弟在踢球；妈妈在拍照。
心情
快乐