中考英语话题作文练习及范文 话题09 情感与情绪

这是一份中考英语话题作文练习及范文 话题09 情感与情绪，共14页。试卷主要包含了 词数等内容，欢迎下载使用。
本话题通常来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受，常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。这是一个记叙和议论相结合的话题，此类话题写作常常会给出特定的提示信息。写作时，观点要明确，要充分利用这些提示信息。
话题词汇
cheer 欢呼 excited 激动的 laugh 笑
smile微笑 psitive / ptimistic 乐观的 mad 生气的
shame 羞耻;羞愧 disappinted 失望的 pity 遗憾
话题句式
1. I'm s thankful t yu fr yur kind help that I' ll wrk harder and try t …我非常感谢你的帮助,我会更加努力地工作,并努力⋯⋯。(提分点: s ⋯ that⋯ 如此⋯⋯以至于⋯⋯)
2. Althugh yu were very strict with me, I understd what yu ... 虽然你对我很严格,但我最终还是懂了你……。(提分点：althugh引导的让步状语从句)
经典范例
假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，你思绪万千。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后的点滴回报。
要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mm/ Dad,
My junir schl life is cming t an end.__________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs lve,
Li Hua
写作方法指导
开头：要点1：表达自己对父母的感激之情。
Nw, I'd like t shw my thanks t yu fr_______________________________________________
主体：要点2：举例说明父母为我的付出，如照顾我、陪伴我、鼓励我等。
Since I was brn, yu have been_______________________________________________________
Every day, yu were the first t get up and_______________________________________________
On my way t and frm schl, yu____________________________________________________
When I failed an exam and felt stressed, yu_____________________________________________
When I didn't get alng with my friends, yu ___________________________________________
结尾：要点3：举例说明我对父母的回报，如陪伴、沟通、理解。
Nw, I have grwn up. I' ll_________________________________________________________
范文：
Dear Mm/ Dad,
My junir schl life is cming t an end. Nw, I'd like t shw my thanks t yu fr yur devtin t me these years. Since I was brn, yu have been taking gd care f me. Every day, yu were the first t get up and prepare breakfast fr me. On my way t and frm schl, yu were always with me. When I failed an exam and felt stressed, yu were the ne t encurage me. When I didn't get alng with my friends, yu tld me t learn t be caring.
Nw, I have grwn up. I' ll spend mre time staying and cmmunicating with yu. And I' ll try my best t understand yu and d what I can fr yu.
Yurs lve,
Li Hua
实战演练
（1）
（2023·四川凉山·中考真题）在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Thanks, ________
Everyne must meet a special persn wh makes yu feel warm in life, yur parent, yur teacher r maybe yur friend__________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2）
（2022·内蒙古·中考真题）正能量偶像宛如指路明灯，可以引导我们成为更好的人。近期，你们学校的英语报刊以“My guiding star”为题正在征稿，请你积极投稿。
要点：1. Wh is yur guiding star?
2. What did he/she d?
3. What have yu learned frm him/her?
4. What are yu ging t d in the future?
要求：1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；
2. 文章应句式多样、语句流畅、意思连贯；
3. 词数 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
注意：1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息；
2. 不许抄袭、套改。
My guiding star
The peple we admire are like guiding stars that guide us t be better. My guiding star is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（3）
（2024·贵州黔东南·二模）我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“A/An ________ Gift”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求：
1. 请将标题补充完整，合理即可；
2. 文中必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（4）
（2024·贵州黔东南·二模）近年来，我们的生活里涌现了许多可歌可泣的英雄。你心中的英雄是谁呢？是耀眼的明星，是见义勇为的市民，是恪守职责的公民，还是身边默默无闻的普通人？你校将开展以“The Her in My Heart—________”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇不少于80词的征文投稿。
写作要求：
1. 补全标题；
2. 征文须包含思维导图中所有信息；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（5）
（2024·吉林长春·二模）无论我们人在哪里，无论我们去向何方，家乡从来是一个令人魂牵梦绕的地方。某英文网站正在进行关于“My hmetwn”的征文活动，请你准备一篇英语短文参加此活动。
要点：
1. 描述与家乡有关的经历或故事；
2. 谈谈你对于家乡的理解与感悟。
要求：
1. 不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（6）
（2024·河南鹤壁·一模）若成长是一本著作，那么烦恼便是藏在段落深处的错字；如果成长是一张白纸，那么烦恼便是附在背面的一个瑕疵。请以“Hw I wrk ut prblems”为题，根据写作要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼的。
1. 写作要点：
1）你是如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼的？
2）你又是用什么方法解决的？
3）你的感想是什么？
2. 写作要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数80左右。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

参考范文：
（1）
Thanks, Mm
Everyne must meet a special persn wh makes yu feel warm in life, yur parent, yur teacher r maybe yur friend. The persn that I want t thank mst is my mther.
She is 40 years ld. She wrks in a hspital, and she wrks very hard. She is tall and thin. She is friendly, but strict with me. She always gives me the warmest lve and takes care f me all the time. She is willing t d everything fr me.
T express my lve, I can buy presents fr her, study hard and help her d smething useful. I will remember her lve and be thankful t her. I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Thanks, ________”为标题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明想感谢的是谁；
第二步，感谢的人的个人信息，想感谢他/她的原因；
第三步，介绍如何感谢以及美好的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①wrks very hard工作很努力
②takes care f照顾
③all the time一直
④be thankful t对……表示感激
[高分句型]
①The persn that I want t thank mst is my mther.（that引导的定语从句）
②I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.（that引导的宾语从句）
（2）
My guiding star
The peple we admire are like guiding stars that guide us t be better. My guiding star is Dctr Zhng Nanshan. He is ne f the greatest dctrs that I respect.
He devted all f his energy and time t the medical research. Fr example, during the COVID-19 utbreak, he was s brave that he rushed t the frnt line and came up with valuable advice f fighting against the virus.
I have learned his spirit, his bravery and his patience. Besides, I have learned that I shuld value my time and read mre bks t get mre knwledge. Frm nw n, I’m ging t study harder and g t my dream university t make my dream cme true. Only in this way can I make cntributins t ur great cuntry.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的引路之星”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍相关事迹；最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么，以及打算将来如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。
（3）
A Valuable Gift
I’ve received lts f presents, but the mst valuable gift I’ve received is the bk The Old Man and the Sea frm my mther.
It was my 13th birthday. I failed t pass the exam sme days ag and felt really upset thse days. My mther wanted t cheer me up and encurage me t be strng, s she gave the bk t me. I was s surprised and happy t get it. After I finished reading the bk, I have learned that when we meet with difficulties, we shuld never give up.
Frm then n, I keep trying my best t study hard. I think I’ll grw up with it because it is nt nly a bk but als my mther’s lve. S I cnsider it the mst valuable gift.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
② 时态：时态主要为一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作时注意先补全标题，然后根据图示内容展开写作，可适当发挥使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明礼物是什么，引出主题；
第二步，讲述礼物背后的故事；
第三步，表达礼物的意义和自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① cheer sb. up让某人振作起来
② give up放弃
③ try ne’s best尽某人最大的努力
④ nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
① After I finished reading the bk, I have learned that when we meet with difficulties, we shuld never give up.（时间状语从句+宾语从句）
② I think I’ll grw up with it because it is nt nly a bk but als my mther’s lve.（宾语从句+原因状语从句）
（4）
The Her in My Heart—My Mther
Recently, many heres like Zhang Guimei have appeared arund us. Wh is the her in my heart? My mther. She is a nice dctr with lng hair, a pretty face and a sft vice. Nw she has becme my her because she helps me a lt and sets a gd example t me. As my mther, she always listens t me patiently, encurages me and gives me helpful suggestins when I am in truble. As a dctr, she wrks hard, tries her best t help patients and wins their high praise.
I hpe I will be a persn like her. I als hpe she will care fr her wn health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点名自己心目中的英雄；
第二步，具体阐述他/她的职业、外貌以及为什么他/她会成为你心目中的英雄，你在他/她身上学到了什么精神；
第三步，最后表达向他/她学习，成为像他/她那样的人
[亮点词汇]
①in ne’s heart在某人心目中
②in truble处于麻烦之中
③try ne’s best t尽最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①Nw she has becme my her because she helps me a lt and sets a gd example t me.（原因状语从句）
②I als hpe she will care fr her wn health.（宾语从句）
（5）
Hmetwn is the place where a persn belngs. Chinese peple have special feelings abut their hmetwn. N matter where they g, they will nt abandn it and always make sme time t visit. My hmetwn brings me s many happy memries and I wish its riginal face frever.
Tw years ag, I lived in my hmetwn. It is a small village, s peple there gt familiar with each ther. When we walked n the cuntry rad, everyne smiled when we saw each ther. There was n distance fr us. In the daytime, I liked t g bating in the small river with my friends, r smetimes I culd hear the birds singing all the time. It was a paradise fr me.
I think we shuld remember the past, live in the present and dream abut the future. I hpe ur hmetwn will becme better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态是一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：注意要描述一段与家乡有关的经历或故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈对家乡的理解与感悟；
第二步，描述与家乡有关的经历；
第三步，结束语，希望家乡越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
①N matter不管
②get familiar with熟悉
③all the time总是
[高分句型]
①Hmetwn is the place where a persn belngs.（定语从句）
②I think we shuld remember the past, live in the present and dream abut the future.（宾语从句）
（6）
Hw I wrk ut prblems
Prblems and wrries are nrmal in ur life. But dn’t wrry. I wuld like t share yu hw I wrk ut prblems.
First, I ften tell my friends abut my wrries. Because I knw they’re always there fr me and their advice always helps me a lt. Then, I amused t ding sme exercise like running. Yu knw ding exercise can make me feel s tired that I can get a gd sleep. And when the next day cmes, I’ll feel better. I’m fnd f listening t music in a quiet place by myself. What’s mre, reading bks and watching news are smetimes useful fr me, t. When I read, I frget my prblems and wrries.
I think we shuld learn t cntrl ur feelings. And if yu have sme prblems and wrries, yu can try what I share with yu.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般将来时”和“一般过来时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼、解决烦恼的方法和自己的感想的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼；
第二步，介绍自己如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼；
第三步，介绍自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
① wrk ut prblems解决问题
② the next day第二天
③ What’s mre而且，更重要的是
④ learn t cntrl ur feelings学会控制我们的感情
[高分句型]
① Yu knw ding exercise can make me feel s tired that I can get a gd sleep. (s…that引导结果状语从句)
② When I read, I frget my prblems and wrries. (When引导时间状语从句)
③ And if yu have sme prblems and wrries, yu can try what I share with yu. (if引导条件状语从句)