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【浙江省温州市鹿城区2024-2025】
1．假如你是Green Schl的学生李华，学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个，给校长Ms Mendzer写一封80词左右的信，说明选择该方案的理由，介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pster海报
Dear Ms Mendzer,
I think it’s great t have a schl trip every term. Fr this term’s schl trip, I think Plan ______is a better chice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Ms Mendzer,
I think it’s great t have a schl trip every term. Fr this term’s schl trip, I think Plan A is a better chice.
Learning mre abut plants in the park can greatly enhance ur understanding f envirnmental prtectin. By putting up psters arund the park, we raise awareness amng the public abut the imprtance f prtecting nature. Mrever, we culd rganize a cleanup activity in the park, which nt nly beautifies the envirnment but als teaches us the imprtance f teamwrk and respnsibility.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍选择的方案以及理由；
第二步，介绍活动内容。
[亮点词汇]
①enhance提高
②putting up张贴
③raise awareness提高意识
[高分句型]
①Learning mre abut plants in the park can greatly enhance ur understanding f envirnmental prtectin.（动名词作主语）
②Mrever, we culd rganize a cleanup activity in the park, which nt nly beautifies the envirnment but als teaches us the imprtance f teamwrk and respnsibility.（定语从句）
Writing 2
【浙江省台州市书生中学2024-2025】
2．假设你叫李俊，你的美国笔友David想要在中国结交更多的笔友。你通过电子邮件，把你的同学王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表：
要求：1. 注意文章条理，语句通顺；
2. 词数80-100词，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I’m writing t intrduce my classmate Wang Ming t yu. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe yu can make friends with him as sn as pssible.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Jun
【答案】例文
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I’m writing t intrduce my classmate Wang Ming t yu.
He is a by f 14. He is tall with a square face, big eyes and shrt hair. Everyne likes his humr and hnesty. He gets alng well with his friends because he always keeps secrets fr them. Besides, he never says anything bad abut thers. Because he desn’t think it is right t d s. Guess what his hbby is? He is crazy abut DIY, he ften spends mst f the time n weekends in hand making r mending smething by himself. He thinks it’s very cl. Althugh he is yung, he has a dream f being a headmaster, he plans t make sme changes f schl rules fr students. Fr example, he will let students have mre time t play instead f studying. With the Sping Festival cming, he will plan t pay a visit t Beijing with his tw classmates and g back t his hmetwn t visit his grandparents.
I hpe yu can make friends with him as sn as pssible.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Jun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③要点：写作时应从外形、性格、兴趣爱好等方面来介绍，注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问好。给对方介绍新朋友；
第二步，从这位新朋友的年龄、外形、性格、兴趣爱好和梦想等方面来介绍这位新朋友；
第三步，书写结语。介绍后询问对方的看法，并期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①get alng well with sb.与……友好相处
②be crazy abut sth.对……痴迷
③spend sme time in ding sth. 花……时间做某事
[高分句型]
①He gets alng well with his friends because he always keeps secrets fr them. (because引导的原因状语从句）
②Althugh he is yung, he has a dream f being a headmaster, he plans t make sme changes f schl rules fr students. (althugh引导的让步状语从句）
Writing 3
【浙江省绍兴市柯桥区柯桥区联盟学校2024-2025】
3．如今，健康积极的生活方式逐渐深入人心，你奶奶的生活方式也发生了很大变化。请以“My dear grandma”为题，写一篇短文，说一说奶奶的变化。
注意：
(1) 短文必须包括表中的所有内容，可适当增加细节；
(2) 省略号至少补充一条内容；
(3) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
(4) 词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：wealth (财富)； lifestyle (生活方式)；square dancing (广场舞)
Health is mre imprtant than wealth. Nw, mre and mre peple care abut their health, and my grandma has als changed a lt.
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We all wish ur dear grandma lives a healthy and lng life.
【答案】例文
Health is mre imprtant than wealth. Nw, mre and mre peple care abut their health, and my grandma has als changed a lt.
Mnths ag, my grandma lved watching sap peras and TV shpping and had the wrst health in ur family because f the least exercise. Nw grandma is fnd f ding square dancing every day which is pretty easy t learn. She als drinks milk nce r twice a day and watches cmedies and talent shws instead f sap peras in rder t live a mre psitive and meaningful life. Grandma has been healthier and has mre friends and laughter since she ttally changed.
We all wish ur dear grandma lives a healthy and lng life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述过去要用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍奶奶数月前的情况；
第二步，重点介绍奶奶现在的变化；
第三步，总结生活方式上的变化，由不健康变为健康。
[亮点词汇]
①because f由于
②be fnd f喜欢
③instead f而不是
[高分句型]
①Nw grandma is fnd f ding square dancing every day which is pretty easy t learn. (定语从句)
②Grandma has been healthier and has mre friends and laughter since she ttally changed. (时间状语从句)
Writing 4
【浙江省宁波市余姚市六校2024-2025】
4．随着杭州亚运会和巴黎奥运会的相继结束，中国代表团的拼搏精神对青少年产生了不小的影响，“沙宝”、“Queen Wen”、“小胖”等成了“万人宠”的体育明星。假如你也是这些粉丝之一，请你根据下表信息，任选其中一位，以”My favrite sprts star”为题写一篇短文，并结合你自己，谈谈你喜欢他/她的理由及如何改变 (change)自己。
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，书写规范。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
3. 字数90左右 (开头已给出，不计入总数)。
4. 至少用三次以上作比较的表达方式。
My favrite sprts star
Nwadays, many teenagers have their favrite sprts stars. My favrite star is
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【答案】例文
My favrite sprts star
Nwadays, many teenagers have their favrite sprts stars. My favrite star is Zheng Qinwen. She plays tennis s well that her fans call her “Queen Wen” fr her fantastic perfrmance.
Zheng Qinwen is a 21-year-ld tall girl. She has very gd living habits, like getting up at 4:30 a.m. every day and never eating junk fd r drinks. She is nt nly talented, but als hard-wrking. She is strict with herself. That’s why I like her.
As fr me, my living habits are nt as gd as Queen Wen’s. I get up much later and ften eat junk fd. S I wuld like t change myself nw. I will d mre sprts and eat less junk fd r drinks t have a healthier life. I als plan t wrk harder t get better grades in schl.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向介绍最喜欢的体育明星，包括姓名、昵称、运动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍体育明星的外貌、性格及生活习惯；
第三步，谈谈喜欢体育明星的理由及如何改变自己。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with对……要求严格
②nt as gd as不如……一样好
[高分句型]
①She plays tennis s well that her fans call her “Queen Wen” fr her fantastic perfrmance. (结果状语从句)
②I will d mre sprts and eat less junk fd r drinks t have a healthier life. (动词不定式表目的)
Writing 5
【浙江省舟山临城区域2024-2025】
5．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Alice下个月将来你们学校参加交换生项目。请根据图表中列举的信息，写一封电子邮件，向她介绍你们学校的基本情况。
注意：
（1）文中需包含图表中所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息：
（3）词数80左右； 首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad t hear yu’re cming t ur schl n an exchange prgram. Nw let me tell yu smething abut my schl.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I’m glad t hear yu’re cming t ur schl n an exchange prgram. Nw let me tell yu smething abut my schl.
My schl is the best ne in the city. It has many buildings, such as the library, the dining hall and sme teaching buildings. Als, it has the best teachers and the mst talented students. The mst imprtant thing is that we have fun after-schl activities. Every day after schl, the playgrund is full f bys and girls. Sme play basketball, thers walk arund and talk happily. The library is als the students’ favrite place, t. A lt f students spend free time reading there. One mre thing, ur schl has many different subjects. They’re useful and educatinal.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏内容，可以适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表示自己对她要来参加交换生项目感到很开心；
第二步，介绍学校概况，包括学校设施、老师和学生；
第三步，介绍学校的课外活动和课程设置。
［亮点词汇］
①be glad t乐意做某事
②such as例如
③is full f充满
④spend time ding sth花费时间做某事
［高分句型］
①Als, it has the best teachers and the mst talented students. (形容词最高级)
②The mst imprtant thing is that we have fun after-schl activities.(表语从句)
Writing 6
【浙江省温州市三校联盟2024-2025】
6．生命在于运动。从小到大，你一定有喜欢或坚持的某项运动并从中获益。学校英语社团正在向大家征集投稿，请以“I learned t be ______ thrugh running/swimming/…”为题，选择一项运动，讲述你的运动经历并谈谈你的收获，写一篇80词左右的短文。
注意：（1）请将题目补充完整；（2）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息。
I learned t be ______ thrugh ______
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【答案】例文
I learned t be tugh thrugh running
Marathn is a lng-distance running race. I jined in ne last year. It taught me a lt.
I wke up early that day, feeling bth excited and nervus. As I lined up at the starting pint, I lked arund. There were lts f runners. We began t run after the sund f the starting gun. At first, I ran quickly and excitedly, feeling the rhythm f my breath. Hwever, as the time went by, I gt tired and my muscles ached. Culd I really finish this race? When I saw the runners arund me and the crwd wh cheered n us, I just kept n running and tld myself I had t crss that finish line. At last, I made it.
Crssing the finish line was a mment that I’ll never frget. Thrugh the Marathn, I knw n matter what we d, be tugh and never give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态主要为一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作时注意先补充题目，根据题目主题按要求展开写作，注意增加细节描写，添加适当逻辑词，使文章更连贯，逻辑更分明。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题；
第二步，详细叙述运动经历的经过和结果；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wake up醒来
②at first起初
③cheer n加油
④at last最后
[高分句型]
①When I saw the runners arund me and the crwd wh cheered n us, I just kept n running and tld myself I had t crss that finish line. (时间状语从句，定语从句，宾语从句)
②Crssing the finish line was a mment that I’ll never frget. (定语从句)
Writing 7
【浙江省金华市婺城区2024-2025】
7．学校准备下周进行研学活动，下面有三种方案可供选择。假如你是李华，请你比较三种方案的相关信息，给出自己的最佳选择，并阐明你的理由。
提示：
要求：（1）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
（2）提示内容可适当增加细节；
（3）语句通顺，逻辑连贯，语法正确；
（4）词数：80词左右，文章首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I’m happy t hear that we will have a schl trip next week. And there are three plans fr us t chse.
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【答案】例文
I’m happy t hear that we will have a schl trip next week. And there are three plans fr us t chse.
Of the three plans, my favrite is the trip t Hengdian Wrld Studi. First f all, the price f 120 yuan is quite reasnable fr such an exciting experience. Traveling by cach is als very cnvenient, saving us the hassle f finding ther transprtatin.
At Hengdian, we can watch sme live perfrmances, which will surely be entertaining and engaging. Mrever, I’m really lking frward t learning mre abut Chinese histry and culture. It’s a great pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and deepen ur understanding f ur rts.
Cmpared t West Lake, which csts mre and invlves a train ride, r Wuzhu Park, which thugh free, nly ffers picnics and sightseeing, Hengdian ffers a mre enriching and educatinal experience. Therefre, I believe Hengdian Wrld Studi is the best chice fr ur schl trip.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为选择建议信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，因为是在描述现有的研学活动方案及个人的选择和理由；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括三个研学活动方案的具体信息（地点、价格、交通方式、特点）。考生需要比较这些信息，给出自己的最佳选择，并详细阐述理由，同时注意不要遗漏提示中的任何信息点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先提及学校即将进行的研学活动，并说明有三个方案可供选择，引出自己将要进行比较和选择的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。逐一介绍三个方案的具体信息，包括地点、价格、交通方式及其特点，并在介绍后直接给出自己的最佳选择。接着，详细阐述选择该方案的理由，可以围绕其价格适中、交通便利、内容丰富等方面展开；
第三步，书写结语。总结自己的选择，并表达对于即将进行的研学活动的期待和兴奋之情。
[亮点词汇]
①reasnable合理的
②hassle麻烦
③entertaining and engaging有趣的，吸引人的
④braden ur hrizns开阔视野
⑤deepen ur understanding加深理解
⑥enriching and educatinal丰富的和教育性的
[高分句型]
①Of the three plans, my favrite is the trip t Hengdian Wrld Studi.（介词短语作状语）
②We can watch sme live perfrmances, which will surely be entertaining and engaging.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
Writing 8
【浙江省温州市二十三中、三中、四中 2024-2025】
8．为丰富学生们的课余生活，某国际学校决定在周末组织一次实践活动。现有以下三种活动方案：
假设你是李华，请给该校校长Mr. Green写一封信，选择你最喜欢的一种方案并阐述理由，同时补充至少一项活动内容。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名；
（2）词数80词左右。
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing t shw yu my idea abut the weekend activity. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing t shw yu my idea abut the weekend activity. I like Plan 2 best because it is very interesting and helpful. We can help the animals by raising mney fr them. We can als learn abut the imprtance f prtecting animals. In additin, we can rganize a painting cmpetitin with the theme f “Prtecting Animals”.
I believe this activity will nt nly help us learn mre abut animals but als enhance ur sense f respnsibility.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容选择其中一项活动并陈述理由，注意需要补充至少一项活动内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的，介绍自己最喜欢的一项活动及理由；
第二步，介绍活动的内容；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn abut了解
②in additin另外
③with the theme f以……为主题
[高分句型]
①I like Plan 2 best because it is very interesting and helpful. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I believe this activity will nt nly help us learn mre abut animals but als enhance ur sense f respnsibility. (宾语从句)
Writing 9
【浙江省温州市2024-2025】
9．校英语俱乐部想在周末组织一次校外实践——龙湾文化体育一日游学。假如你是俱乐部的成员李华，请你阅读俱乐部负责人Smith老师的通知，根据表格内容用英语给他写一封回信提出你的活动计划或建议。
Smith
要求：1. 文中不能出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
2. 词数：90词左右，文章首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am lking frward t this study trip! Here is my plan abut it.
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I hpe my advice will help!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am lking frward t this study trip! Here is my plan abut it.
In the mrning, we can walk t the Olympic Centre, which is nly 500 meters frm ur schl. We can start with sme sprts activities t get everyne energized. After that, we can learn abut the histry and significance f the Olympic Games.
In the afternn, we will visit Siqian Street, which is 3 kilmeters frm ur schl. We can take a bus r rganize a walking grup fr thse wh want t enjy the jurney. There, we can visit cultural museums t learn abut lcal histry and art. We shuld als try sme lcal fd t fully experience the culture.
I suggest we take cameras t capture memrable mments. Als, we might want t bring water bttles and wear cmfrtable clthes suitable fr bth sprts and walking.
I hpe my advice will help!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一封回信。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据表格要点给出活动计划或建议。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，给出上午去奥体中心的安排，包括交通方式和活动；
第二步，给出下午去寺前街的安排，包括交通方式和活动；
第三步，给出一些建议，包括带相机、水杯等。
[亮点词汇]
①walk t走路去……
②start with从……开始
③enjy the jurney享受旅途
④try sme lcal fd尝试当地的一些食物
⑤fully experience the culture充分体验文化
[高分句型]
①In the mrning, we can walk t the Olympic Centre, which is nly 500 meters frm ur schl. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I suggest we take cameras t capture memrable mments. (省略that的宾语从句)
Writing 10
【浙江省温州市鹿城区2024-2025】
10．假如你是Green Schl的学生李华，学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个，给校长Ms Mendzer写一封80词左右的信，说明选择该方案的理由，介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pster海报
Dear Ms Mendzer,
I think it’s great t have a schl trip every term. Fr this term’s schl trip, I think Plan ________ is a better chice.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Ms Mendzer,
I think it’s great t have a schl trip every term. Fr this term’s schl trip, I think Plan A is a better chice. We are always busy with schlwrk, why dn’t we chse t get clse t nature?
We can visit the city park. It’s a gd chance t knw mre abut plants in the park. We can als make sme psters and put up them arund the park s that mre peple will get t knw abut nature. Befre leaving the park, we must pick up the litter.
The trip will make us relaxed. At the same time, it will certainly help us knw mre abut nature and prtecting nature.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，信中需要包含选择某个方案的理由、介绍该方案的活动内容，并提出一项新增的活动。考生应确保包含所有要点，同时使文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，直接表达选择某个方案作为本学期学校郊游活动的理由；
第二步，详细介绍所选方案的活动内容，可以包括参观地点、活动安排等，并说明这些活动对学生的益处；
第三步，提出一项新增的活动，并解释其意义；
第四步，表达期待校长的回复，礼貌地结束信件。
[亮点词汇]
①get clse t亲近；接近
②knw mre abut了解更多关于……
③put up张贴
④pick up捡起；收拾
[高分句型]
①We are always busy with schlwrk, why dn’t we chse t get clse t nature? (why dn’t...表示建议，语气委婉)
②Befre leaving the park, we must pick up the litter. (befre引导时间状语从句)
Writing 11
【浙江省金华市义乌市绣湖中学2024-2025】
11．秋天是旅行的好季节。假设你是李明，你的朋友李华想了解你们上周去森山小镇秋游的情况，以便为他们下周的森山之行做准备。请根据下表内容写一封 email 给李华，讲述你们在森山小镇游玩的经历，并为他提一些建议，词数 100 左右。
Dear Li Hua,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Ming
【答案】例文1
Dear Li Hua,
Last week we had a trip. We went t Senshan Park by bus. We did a lt f interesting things there. We cut rice,caught fishes, pulled sugarcane and s n. Senshan Park is a gd place t visit. It had fresher air and cleaner water. S there are a lt f turists cming here every year. I felt very relaxed when I enjyed the natural beauty here. Thrugh this trip, I experienced the hard wrk f farmers. I als understand hw imprtant the teamwrk is. I think it wuld be better if there were sme entertainment prgrams here.
Yurs,
Li Ming
例文2
Dear Li Hua,
I am glad t hear that yu will pay a visit here. I wanted t share my recent trip t Senshan Twn last week, which was a truly refreshing experience. I tk a bus there and spent the day engaging in varius activities such as cutting rice, catching fishes, and pulling sugarcane. The air was fresher and the water was cleaner, making Senshan Park a delightful place t visit.
I felt relaxed and enjyed the nature immensely. It was als a great pprtunity t experience the hard wrk f farmers and the imprtance f teamwrk. I highly recmmend that yu visit Senshan Twn fr a day trip. Dn’t frget t wear cmfrtable clthes and shes, as yu’ll d a lt f walking and utdr activities. Als, bring sme snacks and water t keep yur energy up thrughut the day.
I’m sure yu’ll have a fantastic time there. Let me knw if yu need any mre tips r infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表示很乐意为对方介绍上周的旅行。
第二步，具体介绍，根据表格给出的要点展开介绍，包括“在森山小镇的经历”和“游玩建议”。
第三步，书写结语，祝愿对方玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②s n等等
③a gd place t visit游玩的好地方
[高分句型]
①The air was fresher and the water was cleaner, making Senshan Park a delightful place t visit.（现在分词making作状语）
②I highly recmmend that yu visit Senshan Twn fr a day trip.（宾语从句）
Writing 12
【浙江省温州市瑞安市五校联考2024-2025】
12．假设你是李华，上周五你参加了你们学校英语角 (the English Crner) 举行的阅读分享活动。活动要求每位参与者写一个活动总结。请根据以下信息，写一写你的参与情况和收获。
注意： （1）文章需包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数100词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Last Friday, I tk part in an exciting reading sharing activity at the English Crner._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last Friday, I tk part in an exciting reading sharing activity at the English Crner. During the event, I shared a nvel that I recently read. I fcused n its main idea and highlighted sme beautiful language used by the authr. This experience nt nly allwed me t practice my English speaking skills but als gave me the pprtunity t learn frm thers. Listening t different perspectives and interpretatins f varius stries was enlightening. I gained new insights int strytelling techniques and imprved my vcabulary. Overall, the activity was bth enjyable and educatinal, and I lk frward t participating in similar events in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示内容书写，可适当发挥，注意语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍分享的故事；
第二步，介绍从活动中获得的感受；
第三步，期待下一次活动的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②fcus n关注
③lk frward t期待
④participate in参与
[高分句型]
①During the event, I shared a nvel that I recently read. (that引导的定语从句)
②This experience nt nly allwed me t practice my English speaking skills but als gave me the pprtunity t learn frm thers. (运用nt als句型)
Writing 13
【浙江省金华市金东区2024-2025】
13．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家从小事做起，保护动物，人人有责。假如你参加此次活动，请根据要点提示完成演讲稿。
要点提示：
Wrd bank: pllute v. 污染，rubbish n. 垃圾，envirnment n. 环境
注意：词数100左右
Dear my friends,
As we all knw,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear my friends,
As we all knw, blue whales live in the deep sea and are the largest animals in the wrld. They feed n small fishes in the sea. Sadly, they are in danger nw. There may be nly 3, 000 blue whales left. They are dying ut.
There are sme reasns. Peple are taking away their hmes, s blue whales have fewer safe places t live. Peple kill them fr different use. Peple als kill ther sea animals s they dn’t have enugh fd. In rder t prtect blue whales in the wild, we shuld make plans. Firstly, we shuldn’t thrw litter int the sea. Secndly, we shuld stp peple frm killing them. We can d this by nt buying whale prducts first. At last, we can think f as many ther ways as pssible t prtect sea animals.
I sincerely hpe that we can make ur effrt t save them!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍蓝鲸的现状；
第二步、介绍蓝鲸受到危险的原因；
第三步、介绍保护蓝鲸的措施并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①feed n…以……为食
②die ut灭绝
③take away夺走
④in rder t为了
⑤stp sb. frm ding sth.阻止某人干某事
[高分句型]
① I sincerely hpe that we can make ur effrt t save them! (that引导宾语从句)
Writing 14
【浙江省金华市义乌市2024-2025】
14． 假设你是 Li Hua， 你的美国朋友Betty 计划下个月来中国旅游，请根据来信， 回复她的邮件。
注意：
1. 文中不出现真实校名、地名、人名；
2. 可适当发挥， 以使行文连贯， 短文首句已给出， 不计入总词数；
3. 词数80左右。
Hi, Betty,
I’m really excited that yu are cming t China next mnth! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Hi Betty,
I’m really excited that yu are cming t China next mnth! Here are sme things abut my hmetwn.
It’s a beautiful city with rich culture and delicius fd. The weather is usually pleasant fr sightseeing and utdr activities. Fr transprtatin, the subway is very cnvenient. Besides, there are als sme highlights yu shuldn’t miss, like parks and museums. In additin, yu can taste special fd at the night markets. I’ll shw yu arund my favrite spts when yu cme.
If there’s anything else yu want t knw, please let me knw. I’m lking frward t seeing yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文是给美国朋友Betty回复一封邮件，并介绍自己的家乡，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明写作目的：介绍自己的家乡。
第二步，具体介绍自己的家乡。
第三步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①utdr activity户外活动
②in additin此外，而且
③shw sb arund带某人逛逛
[高分句型]
①It’s a beautiful city with rich culture and delicius fd. (介词短语做后置定语)
②If there’s anything else yu want t knw, please let me knw. (if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 15
【浙江省绍兴市嵊州市三界片2024-2025】
15．假如你是李华，你在旅途中认识了一个新朋友，你想将它介绍给美国笔友Harry，请从外貌、爱好和性格等方面介绍你们的相似点和差异，让Harry更多地了解你们。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
（2）词数：80。文章的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）不得出现真实个人信息（人名、校名等）
Dear Harry,
I made a new friend when traveling in Hng Kng.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Harry,
I made a new friend when traveling in Hng Kng. Her name is Jane. We have sme similarities and differences. Bth f us are tall and wear glasses. We enjy playing baseball, but she plays much better than me. In terms f persnality, I am shy and quiet, but Jane is very utging. Hwever, we bth have gd qualities. I am a gd listener, and she lves talking a lt. Besides, we are bth hard-wrking. I think yu wuld like her t!
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中外貌、爱好和性格等方面的相似点和差异的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我在香港旅行时交了一个新朋友”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、爱好和性格”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In terms f在……方面
②Bth f us我们都
[高分句型]
I am a gd listener, and she lves talking a lt.（and连接的并列句）
Writing 16
【浙江省温州市龙湾区多校联考2024-2025】
16．周末生活是我们生活的重要组成部分。光明中学英语俱乐部就“如何让周末生活更丰富多彩”开展征文活动。请根据下列提示，以“Hw t Make Our Weekends Mre Clurful”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
1、表达中必须包含所给的要点及理由，……部分请自拟内容作答。
2、词数90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3、表达中请勿提及真实姓名和校名。
Hw t Make Our Weekends Mre Clurful
Nwadays, weekends play an imprtant part in ur life, hw can we make ur weekends mre clurful?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hw t Make Our Weekends Mre Clurful
Nwadays, weekends play an imprtant part in ur life, hw can we make ur weekends mre clurful?
First, we can have a day ut with ur family r friends. Because ging ut will make us relaxed and learn smething that we haven’t learnt frm schl. Secnd, we can be with nice friends. Because friends can talk and share everything with us. They can play all kinds f sprts with us, t. Grwing up with ur gd friends is exciting. Third, d sme DIY. Making smething fr urselves r ur friends and family can nt nly imprve ur ability but als shw ur feelings t the peple we lve. What’s mre, I think we shuld take up hbbies as much as pssible. Reading mre bks is necessary.
In a wrd, dn’t waste ur free time and life. We must make prgress in ur free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示写作意图，介绍如何让周末生活更丰富多彩；
第二步，具体阐述建议内容；
第三步，书写结语，希望同学们能好好利用周末时间提升自己。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
②all kinds f各种各样
③make prgress取得进步
[高分句型]
①Because ging ut will make us relaxed and learn smething that we haven’t learnt frm schl.（that引导的定语从句）
②What’s mre, I think we shuld take up hbbies as much as pssible.（省略that的宾语从句）年 龄
14
外 貌
方脸，大眼睛，短发，高个子；
个 性
诚实，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，从不说他人坏话；
爱 好
痴迷于DIY，经常在周末自己动手制作东西；
理 想
当一名校长 (headmaster)，让学生有更多的时间玩耍；
寒假计划
……(补充不少于两点。)
A few mnths ag
Nw
sap peras every day;
shpping nline;
hardly ever exercise;
...
d square dancing, easy t learn;
drink milk ; eat vegetables and fruit;
like cmedies and talk shws; because...
...
unhealthy, ...
healthier; ...
Name
Sun Yingsha
Fan Zhendng
Zheng Qinwen
Nickname
Shaba
Xiapan
Queen Wen
Sprts
Pingpng
Pingpng
Tennis
Appearance
Rund face
A little serius
Tall
Persnalities
Outging
Calm (沉稳)
Cnfident (自信)
Talented, hard-wrking, strict with neself
Living habits
D things slwly t reduce pressure (减少压力); practice fr mre than 10 hurs a day
D things by himself; keep running and playing six days a week
Never have junk fd r drinks; get up at 4:30 a.m. every day
Places
Hengdian Wrld Studi
West Lake
Wuzhu Park
Price
120 yuan
210 yuan
Free
Transprtatin
By cach (cnvenient)
By train (cmfrtable)
On ft (cheap)
Features (特点)
1. Watch sme live perfrmances (表演);
2. Learn smething abut Chinese histry and culture; …
1. Knw mre abut the lve stry;
2. Have a bat ride;
…
1. Have a picnic;
2. Enjy the beautiful sights (风景);
…
Plan 1: Tur arund Wenzhug t Wuma Street
…
Plan 2: Helping the animalsraise mney
…
Plan 3: Learning abut Teahusewatch the play
…
Dear students,
I am glad t tell yu that ur club will have a study tur in Siqian Street and Olympic Centre. The fllwing is part f my plan. I still need yur suggestins. Hw can we get there? What else can we d? What shuld we take with us? Please help me t make the plan better.
Write t tell me yur plans and advice abut this study tur.
Place
Olympic Centre (奥体中心)
Siqian (寺前) Street
Times
In the mrning
In the afternn
Distance (距离)
500 metres frm schl
3 kilmetres frm schl
Way t get there
…
…
Pssible activities
d sme sprts
learn …
…
visit culture museums (文化馆)
enjy lcal (当地的)…
…
Other advice
take cameras, ….
Hw
by bus
When
last week
What
harvest (收割) rice, catch fish, pull sugarcane (拔甘蔗) ...
Impressin (印象)
fresher air, cleaner water...
Feelings
enjy the nature, experience the hard wrk f farmers...
Advice
...
situatin
nly 3, 000 blue whales, die . . .
reasns (≥3) kill
enugh fd, safe places . . .
steps(≥3) stp. . .
make . . . …
Hi, Li Hua,
Hw are yu? It has been a lng time since we sent emails last time. I’ll cme t China next mnth with my family. I als want t visit yur hmetwn. Wuld yu like t intrduce it t me? I’d like t knw the best way f travelling in China. Als I’d like t knw abut yur hmetwn, the weather, the famus places and s n. I can’t wait t start my trip. I’m lking frward t yur email.
Yurs,
Betty
Li Hua
Jane
Tall
Tall
Wear glasses
Wear glasses
Like baseball
Like baseball, play better
Shy and quiet
Outging
A gd listener
Talk a lt
Wrk hard
...