2024-2025学年译林版（2024）第二学期七年级英语期中复习专练09 书面表达（含答案）

这是一份2024-2025学年译林版（2024）第二学期七年级英语期中复习专练09 书面表达（含答案），共46页。试卷主要包含了满分写作核心技巧，高频题型模板，提分细节等内容，欢迎下载使用。
解题技巧精讲
一、满分写作核心技巧
1.结构清晰
三段式结构：
开头（观点/主题句）→ 主体（2-3个论点+例子）→ 结尾（总结+升华）。
万能框架：
开头：Nwadays, … / It is widely believed that…
中间：Firstly, … Secndly, … What's mre…
结尾：In a wrd, … / I hpe…
2.语言升级
替换低级词汇：
gd → excellent/beneficial
imprtant → vital/crucial
like → enjy/be fnd f
多用复合句：
定语从句：This is the bk that I brrwed frm the library.
状语从句：If we wrk hard, we will achieve ur dreams.
3.内容饱满
举例法：Fr example, … / Take… as an example.
数据法：Accrding t a survey, 70% f students…
对比法：On the ne hand… On the ther hand…
4.避免硬伤
时态统一（记叙文用过去时，议论文用一般现在时）。
标点符号正确（句尾用句号，逗号后空格）。
字数达标（80-100词左右，宁多勿少）。
二、高频题型模板
1. 议论文（观点类）
题目：Shuld students use smartphnes?
模板：
> 开头：Smartphnes have becme a ht tpic. Sme peple think…, while thers believe…
> 主体：
> - Firstly, smartphnes help us study (e.g. search infrmatin).
> - Hwever, spending t much time n phnes may harm ur eyes.
> 结尾：In my pinin, we shuld use smartphnes wisely.
2. 记叙文（故事类）
题目：An Unfrgettable Experience
模板：
> 开头：I will never frget the day when…
> 主体：
> - What happened: One sunny afternn,…
> - Feelings: I felt nervus at first, but…
> 结尾：This experience taught me that…
3. 应用文（书信/邮件）
题目：给笔友Tm写回信，介绍你的周末活动
模板：
> Dear Tm,
> Hw are yu? I’m writing t tell yu abut my last weekend.
> 内容：
> - On Saturday, I went hiking with my family.
> - On Sunday, I finished my hmewrk and watched a mvie.
> 结尾：I hpe t hear frm yu sn!
> Yurs,
> Li Hua
三、提分细节
开头结尾万能句：
开头：With the develpment f sciety…
结尾：Only in this way can we…
过渡词升级：
并列：nt nly… but als…
转折：hwever/actually
因果：as a result/therefre
卷面加分：
字迹工整，分段明确（每段空一行）。
用笔规范（黑色签字笔，勿涂改）。
单元话题精练
基础入门训练7篇
1．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tny想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. 你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局；
2. 你所在社区的情况(如：基础设施、环境、邻居等)
要求：
1. 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tny,
I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my hme and my cmmunity.
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I really lve my hme and my cmmunity. What abut yurs? Write t me sn.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2．中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditinal Chinese Clthes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装（风格、材质······）；
2. 喜欢的理由；
3. 如何向全世界推广的建议。
In recent years, mre and mre yung peple wuld like t try traditinal Chinese clthes. They becme a new fashin.
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3．每个人都有自己的梦想家园。根据下列提示，设计你自己梦想的家园。不少于90词，可以适当发挥。
1. What is yur dream hme like?
2. Hw many rms are there in yur dream hme and what are they?
3. What things are in it?

My dream hme
I’m glad t share my ideas abut my dream hme. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．D yu like yur wn hme? D yu want a better ne? What’s yur dream hme like? Please write an article abut yur dream hme.
注意事项：1)短文必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2)词数：70词左右；
3)短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部位无效。
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5．Millie的朋友Sandy下周来扬州玩，根据下表提示帮Millie写一封信， 邀请她来扬州玩时住在自己家里。
要求:
1. 词数100左右；短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名；
2. 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I’m happy t knw that yu will visit Yangzhu next week. I’d like t invite yu t stay at my hme.
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Welcme t Yangzhu! Welcme t my hme.
Best wishes!
6．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighburhd”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。
What is yur neighburhd like?
What are yur neighburs like?
Hw d yu feel t live in yur neighburhd?
注意事项： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My neighburhd
I’m Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Cmmunity. ________________
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7．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你结合思维导图，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。
请按需求选用参考词汇：
Places: Cmmunity Centre; Fix-it Club; …
Activities: give away ld bks; repair brken bicycles; take care f pets; d exercise; …
注意：
1. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Emily,
I’m happy t tell yu abut my cmmunity.
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What abut yur cmmunity? I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶拓展训练7篇
8．假设你是李明，你的网友Tm对你的家乡无锡很感兴趣，请根据以下提示以“My hmetwn”为主题，写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡，包括以下要点：
注意：
(1)要点清楚，语言流畅；
(2)字数90字左右；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tm,
I want t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Li Ming
9．为了激发同学们热爱家乡的情感，学校英语角开展题为”My hmetwn”的征文活动。假如你是李文，请根据以下表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章参加活动。
注意：
1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My hmetwn
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
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10．假设你是Thmas，你的英国笔友Anthny计划来南通玩，他给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡南通。请认真阅读他的邮件，并根据邮件内容回信。
注意：
1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数90个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anthny,
I’m glad t hear yu’re cming t my hmetwn-Nantng. It is a gd place t visit.
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I hpe my answer is helpful t yu. See yu in Nantng!
Yurs,
Thmas
11．假如你是李华，你在南京学习的英国笔友Henry五一假期要来你家乡盐城游玩。现在你想要写一封邀请信，邀请他来参观游玩。邀请信需包含如下内容：
1. What is yur hmetwn like?
2. Where is yur cmmunity?
3. What d yur neighburs d t help each ther?
4. What can yu d tgether at yur hme?
5. Hw can Henry get t yur hme?
注意：
1. 邀请信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
I am writing t invite yu t visit my hmetwn Yancheng.
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Hpe t see yu sn in Yancheng.
All the best!
Yurs,
Li Hua
12．同学们，“我为家乡代言”主题展览活动即将启动，请根据问题和提示，以My hmetwn为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，简单介绍宿迁。
1. What is Suqian like? (in the nrth f Jiangsu Prvince, 8555 square kilmeters, trees and flwers/…)
2. What can we d in Suqian? (interesting places t visit, Santaishan Frest Park/Luma Lake…)
3. What d yu think f living in Suqian? (lucky, a wnderful place/…)
要求：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文语连贯、通顺。
My hmetwn
I wuld like t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn Suqian.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．保护和传承中国传统技艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近你校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统技艺”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的传统技艺，并号召大家来保护传统技艺。
注意：
1.词数：80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
As we all knw, prtecting the traditinal Chinese skills is very imprtant.
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Let’s wrk tgether t prtect this traditinal skill and keep it alive.
14．为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting clse t traditinal Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a histry f abut 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
能力综合实践6篇
15．请你写一篇文章介绍中国灯笼的特点、用途，表达你对它的喜爱之情。词数80以上。
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16．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于中国民间艺术的短文，不少于 60 词。
提示：
1. 介绍一种你喜欢的中国民间艺术，如剪纸、刺绣、陶瓷等。
2. 描述它的特点和制作过程。
3. 说明你为什么喜欢它。
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17．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Hme为题写一篇小短文。
要求：
1、词数不少于80个；
2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。
4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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18． 假如你是王林，家住在Happiness Hme。本周六是来自英国的交换生Mike的生日。你打算邀请他来你家过生日。请你根据下列提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍一下你的小区环境、邻里关系，并告诉他生日会的安排以及从学校到你家的具体路线。
要求：
1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
2. 邮件内容必须包括上面提及的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Dear Mike,
I am ging t have a party at hme t celebrate yur birthday this Saturday.
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Yurs,
Wang Lin
19．假如你是王欣悦，你的英国笔友David想了解你的社区和你的理想家园。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件介绍你的社区和理想家园。
要求：
1.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；3.词数：80 词左右。
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my cmmunity and my dream hme.
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Wang Xinyue
20．你校“英语写作竞赛”即将举行，要求大家积极投稿，以“My Hmetwn”为题，结合要点，完成作文：
1. 我的家乡无锡是个现代化的城市，位于江苏东南部；
2. 离上海不远，乘火车只要一个小时左右；
3. 每年有很多游客到无锡来参观，春天去公园赏花很尽兴；
4. 在这里可以尝到各种东西方的美食；
5. 我觉得……
要求：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺、语言规范；
2. 第5要点用2句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
3. 词数：70词左右。
My Hmetwn
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答案与解析
基础入门训练7篇
1．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tny想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. 你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局；
2. 你所在社区的情况(如：基础设施、环境、邻居等)
要求：
1. 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tny,
I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my hme and my cmmunity.
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I really lve my hme and my cmmunity. What abut yurs? Write t me sn.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tny,
I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my hme and my cmmunity.
I live in a cmfrtable apartment n the fifth flr f a building in a great cmmunity. My apartment has a living rm and dining area. Next t it is a mdern kitchen. There are tw bedrms. One is my persnal space, and the ther is a guest rm. Besides, there is a tidy bathrm.
The cmmunity is wnderful. Peple can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden fr relaxing. The envirnment is clean and quiet, with trees and flwers everywhere. My neighbrs are very nice. We ften meet in the hallway and have friendly cnversatins.
I really lve my hme and my cmmunity. What abut yurs? Write t me sn.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要运用一般现在时；
③提示：对自家房屋布局和社区环境、设施以及邻里关系等要点的介绍，通过具体描述展现家与社区的特点，突出喜爱之情。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明写作意图，告知对方写信是为介绍自己的家与社区，让读者明确邮件主旨；
第二步，详细介绍自家情况，先说明居住在社区中某栋楼的五楼公寓，接着描述公寓内布局，包括客厅、餐厅、现代化厨房、两间卧室及整洁的浴室；然后介绍社区情况，提及社区内有健身中心供居民锻炼、美丽小花园可放松身心，环境干净安静且到处有花草树木，还有友善的邻里关系；
第三步，总结强调对家与社区的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①cmfrtable舒适的
②mdern现代的
③friendly友好的
[高分句型]
Peple can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden fr relaxing. (there be句型)
2．中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditinal Chinese Clthes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装（风格、材质······）；
2. 喜欢的理由；
3. 如何向全世界推广的建议。
In recent years, mre and mre yung peple wuld like t try traditinal Chinese clthes. They becme a new fashin.
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【答案】范文：
In recent years, mre and mre yung peple wuld like t try traditinal Chinese clthes. They becme a new fashin.
Of all the traditinal Chinese clthes, I like hanfu best. They’re usually lse with a belt. They’re made f different materials, like cttn and silk.
Hanfu are very beautiful. They’re suitable fr peple f all ages. They’re always cmfrtable t wear. S they’re ppular with yung peple nw.
Wearing hanfu is a gd way t shw ur traditinal culture t the wrld. Maybe we can have sme hanfu festivals and give sme hanfu shws in hlidays.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的中国传统服饰；
第二步，说明自己喜欢的理由；
第三步，提出向全世界推广的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① are made f由……组成
② are suitable fr适合……
③ peple f all ages各个年龄阶段的人
[高分句型]
①Wearing hanfu is a gd way t shw ur traditinal culture t the wrld.(动名词作主语)
②Maybe we can have sme hanfu festivals and give sme hanfu shws in hlidays.(and并列句)
3．每个人都有自己的梦想家园。根据下列提示，设计你自己梦想的家园。不少于90词，可以适当发挥。
1. What is yur dream hme like?
2. Hw many rms are there in yur dream hme and what are they?
3. What things are in it?

My dream hme
I’m glad t share my ideas abut my dream hme. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My dream hme
I’m glad t share my ideas abut my dream hme. My dream hme is a huse with tw flrs. There are seven rms in it. On the grund flr, yu can see a sfa in the siting rm. Beside the siting rm is the kitchen. There’s a large fridge and a cupbard in it. There is a large dinner table in the dining rm. On the first flr, there is a study and three bedrms. There is a large bkcase in the study. I have my wn bedrm and it has a bathrm in it. In frnt f my huse, there is a nice garden with many flwers. The flwers are very beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示问题介绍自己梦想中的家，可适当增加细节 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己梦想中的家的样子；
第二步，具体介绍家的样子，包括房间数量和房间里的陈设；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a huse with tw flrs一个有两层楼的房子
②in frnt f在……前面
[高分句型]
①There’s a large fridge and a cupbard in it.（there be 句型）
4．D yu like yur wn hme? D yu want a better ne? What’s yur dream hme like? Please write an article abut yur dream hme.
注意事项：1)短文必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2)词数：70词左右；
3)短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部位无效。
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【答案】例文
My dream hme is far away frm big cities. It’s a big three -flr huse with a garden, a ftball field and a swimming pl. The living rm is big and bright. After supper, I can chat with my parents and watch TV there. I have my wn bedrm n the secnd flr. It is clean and cmfrtable. I like the ftball field best, because I can have fun playing ftball with my friends at weekends.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，材料作文，描述你梦想中的家是什么样的；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍梦想中的家的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述梦想中的家的位置；
第二步，具体叙述梦想中的家的样子。
第三步，叙述在家中做的有趣的事情。
[亮点词汇]
Be far away frm远离……
a big three-flr huse with a garden带花园的三层大房子
chat with与……聊天
like… best最喜欢……
have fun ding sth. 很高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①I like the ftball field best, because I can have fun playing ftball with my friends at weekends.（原因状语从句）
5．Millie的朋友Sandy下周来扬州玩，根据下表提示帮Millie写一封信， 邀请她来扬州玩时住在自己家里。
要求:
1. 词数100左右；短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名；
2. 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I’m happy t knw that yu will visit Yangzhu next week. I’d like t invite yu t stay at my hme.
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Welcme t Yangzhu! Welcme t my hme.
Best wishes!
【答案】例文
Dear Sandy,
I’m happy t knw that yu will visit Yangzhu next week. I’d like t invite yu t stay at my hme.
Our cmmunity is in the center f Yangzhu, near schls and shpping centers. The air is fresh here. I can smell the flwers and hear the birds sing. There is a big supermarket in the cmmunity. Peple can g there t buy what they like. The cmmunity als has a beautiful small garden, peple can walk in the rest. Our neighbrs are very kind and helpful. Once I came hme and frgt my keys, my neighbr called my mther fr me. We have fur bedrms. Each bedrm has a balcny. There are tw restrms in my hme, s it is very cnvenient t g t the tilet. Our living rm is very big. I can sit n the sfa and watch TV there.
I am happy t have my wn rm and study. I hpe I can see yu sn. Then we can read happily tgether.
Welcme t Yangzhu! Welcme t my hme.
Best wishes!
Millie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并在适当的地方补充和发挥，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意语句的通顺，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“想邀请你来我家玩并住我家里”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点提示，介绍小区位置，配套设施，邻里关系和自己房间的情况，并在适当的地方补充完整内容，注意行文的连贯和语法的准确；
第三步，结尾介绍自己的感受和看法，表明对朋友到来的期待，并总结文章。
[亮点词汇]
①in the center在中心
②be happy t d sth很开心做某事
③hear sb d sth听见某人做某事
④watch TV看电视
[高分句型]
①S it is very cnvenient t g t the tilet.（句型it is+adj+t d sth表示“做某事如何”）
②Once I came hme and frgt my keys, my neighbr called my mther fr me.（nce引导的时间状语从句）
6．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighburhd”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。
What is yur neighburhd like?
What are yur neighburs like?
Hw d yu feel t live in yur neighburhd?
注意事项： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My neighburhd
I’m Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Cmmunity. ________________
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【答案】例文
My neighburhd
I am Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Cmmunity. It’s a beautiful and quiet neighburhd. There’s a beautiful park near here. Peple always take a walk in it. And there’s a supermarket in ur neighburhd, s it’s very easy fr us t d sme shpping.
My neighburs are kind and helpful. There are sme engineers amng them. They can help us repair things like brken bikes and cmputers. Sme f my neighburs are cllege students. They can help yunger students with their hmewrk. They are patient enugh t answer questins.
I feel very lucky t live in such a neighburhd. I hpe it will becme better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍社区的状况；
第二步，具体介绍邻居的情况以及邻里间互相帮助；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk散步
②help sb with sth帮助某人某事
[高分句型]
①There are sme engineers amng them. (There be结构)
7．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你结合思维导图，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。
请按需求选用参考词汇：
Places: Cmmunity Centre; Fix-it Club; …
Activities: give away ld bks; repair brken bicycles; take care f pets; d exercise; …
注意：
1. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Emily,
I’m happy t tell yu abut my cmmunity.
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What abut yur cmmunity? I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Emily,
I’m happy t tell yu abut my cmmunity. The peple here are very friendly and helpful.
There are many places in my cmmunity. We have a Cmmunity Centre where peple can have parties and meetings. There is als a Fix-it Club where peple repair brken bicycles.
Peple ften d different things. Sme give away ld bks t thse in need. Sme take care f pets fr thers. And many peple d exercise t keep fit.
I really lve my cmmunity. It makes me feel warm and cmfrtable.
What abut yur cmmunity? I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为向朋友介绍自己所在社区的电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：介绍自己所在社区的情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明很高兴向朋友介绍自己的社区。
第二步，中间详细描述社区的情况，包括友好的居民、社区里的场所（社区中心、修理俱乐部）以及人们常做的事（捐书、照顾宠物、锻炼等）。
第三步，结尾询问朋友社区的情况并期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly友好的
②helpful有帮助的
③repair修理
④keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①There are many places in my cmmunity.（There be句型）
②We have a Cmmunity Centre where peple can have parties and meetings.（定语从句）
进阶拓展训练7篇
8．假设你是李明，你的网友Tm对你的家乡无锡很感兴趣，请根据以下提示以“My hmetwn”为主题，写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡，包括以下要点：
注意：
(1)要点清楚，语言流畅；
(2)字数90字左右；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tm,
I want t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Li Ming
【答案】范文
Dear Tm,
I want t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
Wuxi is nt far away frm Shanghai. It takes abut tw hurs t drive there. Wuxi is famus fr the Yuantuzhu park. There are many trees arund it. We can smell the flwers and hear the birds sing. If yu cme t Wuxi, yu can try lcal fd—steamed dumplings. Besides, peple here are ready t help thers with all kinds f prblems. My hme is in the east f Wuxi City. Walk straight alng the rad and yu can see the schl.
It’s really a gd place t live and I feel happy t live here. I hpe yu can visit my hmetwn sme day.
All the best,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，确保要点清楚，语言流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍无锡的位置以及环境；
第二步，介绍无锡的本地美食和无锡人的友好；
第三步，最后介绍你在无锡的家以及感想。
[亮点词汇]
①far away frm远离
②be famus fr因……而著名
③besides此外
[高分句型]
①If yu cme t Wuxi, yu can try lcal fd—steamed dumplings.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②It’s really a gd place t live.（不定式作后置定语）
9．为了激发同学们热爱家乡的情感，学校英语角开展题为”My hmetwn”的征文活动。假如你是李文，请根据以下表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章参加活动。
注意：
1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My hmetwn
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn.
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【答案】例文
My hmetwn
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn. My hmetwn is a mdern city, which has a lng histry. There the air is fresh, and we can hear the birds sing and smell the flwers every day. My hme is nt far frm the city center, and it nly takes 20 minutes t get t the city center by subway. On the third flr, I have my wn bedrm. My favrite thing t d is reading bks because I can learn a lt f knwledge frm it. My neighbrs are very friendly and helpful. I lve my hmetwn. I hpe yu can cme and visit here ne day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题：介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从环境、地理位置、邻居等方面展开说明；
第三步，书写结语。评价并表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad t d sth乐意做某事
②nt far frm离……不远
③a lt f许多
[高分句型]
①My hmetwn is a mdern city, which has alng histry.（定语从句）
②I hpe yu can cme and visit here ne day.（宾语从句）
10．假设你是Thmas，你的英国笔友Anthny计划来南通玩，他给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡南通。请认真阅读他的邮件，并根据邮件内容回信。
注意：
1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数90个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anthny,
I’m glad t hear yu’re cming t my hmetwn-Nantng. It is a gd place t visit.
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I hpe my answer is helpful t yu. See yu in Nantng!
Yurs,
Thmas
【答案】例文：
Dear Anthny,
I’m glad t hear yu’re cming t my hmetwn—Nantng. It is a gd place t visit. The air is fresh in Nantng. There are many trees and rivers. Yu can smell the flwers and hear the birds sing. The peple here are kind and helpful. In my cmmunity, peple ften help each ther with prblems. In the bus, they always take the initiative t give up their seats t thers, and they are especially enthusiastic t sme utsiders wh ask fr directins. They always tell them hw t get there very carefully. When yu cme t Nantng, yu can g t different parks and eat Chinese fd. If yu g t different places in Nantng, yu can take a bus. There are buses t different places every day. If yu cme t Nantng, yu will definitely like it.
I hpe my answer is helpful t yu. See yu in Nantng!
Yurs,
Thmas
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎对方来南通；
第二步，具体介绍南通的相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①help each ther with prblems互相帮助解决问题
②ask fr directins问路
③take a bus乘坐公共汽车
[高分句型]
①In the bus, they always take the initiative t give up their seats t thers, and they are especially enthusiastic t sme utsiders wh ask fr directins. （并列句）
②I hpe my answer is helpful t yu.（省略that的宾语从句）
11．假如你是李华，你在南京学习的英国笔友Henry五一假期要来你家乡盐城游玩。现在你想要写一封邀请信，邀请他来参观游玩。邀请信需包含如下内容：
1. What is yur hmetwn like?
2. Where is yur cmmunity?
3. What d yur neighburs d t help each ther?
4. What can yu d tgether at yur hme?
5. Hw can Henry get t yur hme?
注意：
1. 邀请信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
I am writing t invite yu t visit my hmetwn Yancheng.
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Hpe t see yu sn in Yancheng.
All the best!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Henry,
I am writing t invite yu t visit my hmetwn Yancheng. It is a gd place t visit. The air is fresh in Yancheng. There are many trees and rivers.
My neighburs are very nice and helpful. They ften help me with my hmewrk. When yu cme, yu can live in my flat. I have lts f CDs in my study. We can enjy listening t music tgether. And I can teach yu Chinese in my hme, t.
Yu can take a taxi r the undergrund at the airprt and get ff at Xinjieku. I will pick yu up at Exit 1 there.
Hpe t see yu sn in Yancheng.
All the best!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信的目的是邀请对方来参观游玩；
第二步，介绍盐城的环境、你所住的位置、你的邻居以及你和Henry可以在家做什么、Henry怎么到达你家；
第三步，书写结语，希望能很快在盐城见到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth. 帮助某人某事
②lts f 许多
③get ff 下车
④pick sb. up 接某人
[高分句型]
①When yu cme, yu can live in my flat.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Yu can take a taxi r the undergrund at the airprt and get ff at Xinjieku.(and并列句)
12．同学们，“我为家乡代言”主题展览活动即将启动，请根据问题和提示，以My hmetwn为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，简单介绍宿迁。
1. What is Suqian like? (in the nrth f Jiangsu Prvince, 8555 square kilmeters, trees and flwers/…)
2. What can we d in Suqian? (interesting places t visit, Santaishan Frest Park/Luma Lake…)
3. What d yu think f living in Suqian? (lucky, a wnderful place/…)
要求：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文语连贯、通顺。
My hmetwn
I wuld like t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn Suqian.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My hmetwn
I wuld like t tell yu smething abut my hmetwn Suqian. Situated in the nrth f Jiangsu Prvince, Suqian cvers an area f 8555 square kilmeters, making it a place f vast beauty. There are a lt f green trees and clrful flwers. The peple in the city are als very friendly t thers.
In Suqian, there are many interesting places t visit, such as Santaishan Frest Park and Luma Lake. At the same time, peple can enjy lcal delicius fd as well.
It’s lucky fr me t live in Suqian. The warm cmmunity and the abundance f natural beauty make it a wnderful place t live in. I am prud t represent my hmetwn and welcme yu all t Suqian.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍宿迁的一些相关信息，围绕“地理位置、占地面积、环境和宿迁的人”等展开；
第二步，介绍在宿迁可以做的事情；
第三步，介绍自己居住在宿迁的感受，并欢迎大家来宿迁。
[亮点词汇]
①situated in位于
②be friendly t对……友好
③such as例如
④at the same time同时
⑤as well也
[高分句型]
①There are a lt f green trees and clrful flwers.（There be句型）
13．保护和传承中国传统技艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近你校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统技艺”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的传统技艺，并号召大家来保护传统技艺。
注意：
1.词数：80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
As we all knw, prtecting the traditinal Chinese skills is very imprtant.
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Let’s wrk tgether t prtect this traditinal skill and keep it alive.
【答案】例文
As we all knw, prtecting the traditinal Chinese skills is very imprtant. My favurite traditinal Chinese skill is paper-cutting. Paper-cutting can be made in different shapes, such as animals, flwers and Chinese characters with gd meanings and s n. Paper-cutting is an imprtant part f Chinese culture. Peple ften put them up n the walls. Paper-cutting ften appear at festivals r weddings because peple think they can bring them happiness and gd luck. We shuld try ur best t prtect this traditinal skill. I think paper-cutting shuld be taught in schls s that students can learn this skill.
Let’s wrk tgether t prtect this traditinal skill and keep it alive.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，保护中国传统技艺是非常重要的；
第二步，结合表格提示，介绍自己最喜爱的传统技艺，原因，以及如何保护；
第三步，号召大家来保护传统技艺。
[亮点词汇]
①in different shapes形态各异
②put up 张贴
③try ur best t d尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①Paper-cutting ften appear at festivals r weddings because peple think they can bring them happiness and gd luck.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think paper-cutting shuld be taught in schls s that students can learn this skill.（s that引导的目的状语从句）
14．为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting clse t traditinal Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a histry f abut 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Kites
Kites have a histry f abut 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mzi in the Warring States perid. He made a bird ut f wd. It was the first kite in histry. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamb t make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the inventin f paper, peple began t use paper t make kites. Kites have als begun t take n different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and s n.
The Wrld Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandng Prvince. There are many grand kite cmpetitins held there every year. Peple all ver the wrld want t g there. Flying kites is deeply lved by peple. It is a very ppular utdr activity. Every weekend, I can see many peple flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly nw are all bught frm stres. Few peple make their wn kites.
I believe that as a traditinal Chinese handicraft, kites shuld cntinue t be passed dwn. We shuld prtect traditinal Chinese handicrafts.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点；
第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况；
第三步，最后提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① with the inventin f paper随着纸的发明
② take n呈现
③ all ver the wrld全世界
[高分句型]
① I believe that as a traditinal Chinese handicraft, kites shuld cntinue t be passed dwn.（宾语从句）
② But the kites we fly nw are all bught frm stres.（定语从句）
能力综合实践6篇
15．请你写一篇文章介绍中国灯笼的特点、用途，表达你对它的喜爱之情。词数80以上。
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【答案】例文：
Chinese lanterns are an imprtant part f Chinese culture. They have a lng histry.
Chinese lanterns are usually made f paper r silk. They cme in different shapes and sizes. Peple make lanterns mre beautiful by painting n it.
Chinese ften use lanterns t decrate huses and streets during festivals, such as the Spring Festival and the Lantern Festival. Peple als light lanterns t wish fr gd luck and happiness.
I lve Chinese lanterns very much. They are beautiful and carry rich cultural value. I hpe mre peple can learn abut and enjy them.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，灯笼是中国文化中重要的一部分，灯笼具有悠久的历史;
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍中国灯笼的特点、用途;
第三步，书写结语，表达我对灯笼的喜爱之情，希望更多的人了解并喜欢它们。
[亮点词汇]
①cme in different shapes and sizes有不同的形状和尺寸
②wish fr gd luck and happiness祝你好运幸福
[高分句型]
I hpe mre peple can learn abut and enjy them.（that引导的宾语从句）
16．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于中国民间艺术的短文，不少于 60 词。
提示：
1. 介绍一种你喜欢的中国民间艺术，如剪纸、刺绣、陶瓷等。
2. 描述它的特点和制作过程。
3. 说明你为什么喜欢它。
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【答案】例文
I like paper cutting very much. It is a traditinal Chinese flk art. Paper cutting has varius shapes and patterns. Peple use scissrs t cut the paper int beautiful pictures, such as animals, flwers and characters. The prcess f making paper cutting is very interesting. First, we need t prepare a piece f paper and scissrs. Then, we can start t cut accrding t ur designs. I like paper cutting because it shws the wisdm and creativity f Chinese peple.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己喜欢的中国民间艺术；
第二步，具体介绍它的特点和制作过程；
第三步，说明喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②accrding t根据
[高分句型]
I like paper cutting because it shws the wisdm and creativity f Chinese peple.（原因状语从句）
17．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Hme为题写一篇小短文。
要求：
1、词数不少于80个；
2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。
4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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【答案】
I have a tidy and beautiful hme. Althugh it is nt very big, it is czy and warm. In my hme, there are tw bedrms, a living rm, a study, a bathrm and a kitchen. The living rm is where my family spends mst f ur time tgether. My father ften watches TV there. My mther ften stays in the kitchen. She cks delicius meals fr us. I lve the smell f her cking. And I ften study in the study. There are many bks in my study. I like reading them very much. My bedrm is my favrite place where I can escape frm the wrld and have sme peace and quiet f my wn.
This is my hme, a safe and cmfrtable hme. I lve my hme very much.
【详解】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
提示：考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My Hme”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍家的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对家的爱。
【亮点词汇】
① czy and warm舒适温暖
② delicius美味的
③ escape frm逃离……
【高分句型】
① Althugh it is nt very big, it is czy and warm.（althugh引导让步状语从句）
② My bedrm is my favrite place where I can escape frm the wrld and have sme peace and quiet f my wn.（where引导定语从句）
18． 假如你是王林，家住在Happiness Hme。本周六是来自英国的交换生Mike的生日。你打算邀请他来你家过生日。请你根据下列提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍一下你的小区环境、邻里关系，并告诉他生日会的安排以及从学校到你家的具体路线。
要求：
1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
2. 邮件内容必须包括上面提及的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Dear Mike,
I am ging t have a party at hme t celebrate yur birthday this Saturday.
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Yurs,
Wang Lin
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
I am ging t have a party at hme t celebrate yur birthday this Saturday.
I live in Happiness Hme. It is beautiful and cnvenient. My neighbrs are very friendly. They always help each ther. I plan t have a big dinner in the evening. We can play games after dinner.
Yu can find my hme easily. G ut f schl and enter Ninghang Rad, and g straight alng Peple’s Rad. Then g acrss Huayang Rad. Yu need t turn left at the end f Peple’s Rad and yu can find my hme. The ppsite f my hme is the supermarket.
I hpe that we can have a gd time n Saturday.
Yurs,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以 “一般现在时” 为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容写电子邮件邀请Mike来自己家里过生日，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍自己所在的社区及邻居并给出生日会的计划；
第三步，介绍从学校到自己家的具体路线；
第四步，表达美好期望。
[亮点词汇]
①g straight alng沿着……一直往前走
②at the end f在……尽头
③play games玩游戏
④have a gd time玩得开心
[重点句型]
①G ut f schl and enter Ninghang Rad, and g straight alng Peple’s Rad.（祈使句）
②I hpe that we can have a gd time n Saturday.（that引导的宾语从句）
19．假如你是王欣悦，你的英国笔友David想了解你的社区和你的理想家园。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件介绍你的社区和理想家园。
要求：
1.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；3.词数：80 词左右。
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my cmmunity and my dream hme.
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Wang Xinyue
【答案】Dear David,
Hw are yu? I’m glad t tell yu smething abut my cmmunity and my dream hme.
My cmmunity is really nice. There are lts f flwers and trees, making it lk like a beautiful garden. It als has a supermarket, a library and a park. These places bring much cnvenience t ur life. My neighburs are very friendly. We ften help each ther. I ften have fun with my friends in the park. I feel s lucky t live in this cmmunity. As fr my dream hme, I hpe it’s a big flat n the tp flr. It has an area f 160 square metres. My favurite place is the balcny because I can enjy the view f the city there. It must be wnderful. I’m really happy t have such a dream hme. What abut yur cmmunity and dream hme? Write t me sn.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Wang Xinyue
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不要遗漏表格中提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，按照提示介绍你的社区和理想中的家园；
第三步，总结收尾，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①lk like看起来像……
②cnvenience方便
③each ther彼此
[高分句型]
①My favurite place is the balcny because I can enjy the view f the city there. (because引导的原因状语从句)
20．你校“英语写作竞赛”即将举行，要求大家积极投稿，以“My Hmetwn”为题，结合要点，完成作文：
1. 我的家乡无锡是个现代化的城市，位于江苏东南部；
2. 离上海不远，乘火车只要一个小时左右；
3. 每年有很多游客到无锡来参观，春天去公园赏花很尽兴；
4. 在这里可以尝到各种东西方的美食；
5. 我觉得……
要求：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺、语言规范；
2. 第5要点用2句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
3. 词数：70词左右。
My Hmetwn
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【答案】例文
My Hmetwn
My hmetwn Wuxi is a mdern city. It lies in the suth-east f Jiangsu prvince. Wuxi isn’t far away frm Shanghai. It nly takes abut an hur t g there by train. Every year many visitrs travel t Wuxi and it’s really fun t enjy flwers in the parks. Yu may try different kinds f Chinese and western fd here. I think Wuxi is a cmfrtable place t live. If yu cme here, yu must have a gd time. It’s really lucky t live in a city like this.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点以“My Hmetwn”为题进行写作，注意要点齐全，语句通顺，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的地理位置及优势；
第二步，介绍家乡的旅游景点及美食；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①far away frm离……很远
②different kinds f不同种类的
③have a gd time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I think Wuxi is a cmfrtable place t live. (宾语从句)
②If yu cme here, yu must have a gd time. (if引导的条件状语从句)小区
扬州市中心，靠近学校和购物中心
配套设施
空气清新，鸟语花香。小区有大型超市，人们可以……
小区有……，人们可以……
邻居
乐于助人，举例说明；
房间
四间卧室，每间带阳台；
两个卫生间，可以……
……(自拟一点)
感受
……
“通”在无锡
离上海不远，开车去上海2个多小时；
“游”在无锡
以鼋头渚公园(Yuantuzhu Park)闻名；那里绿树环绕，鸟语花香；
“吃”在无锡
可以尝试本地美食——小笼包(steamed dumplings)
“人”在无锡
乐意帮助他人解决各种问题；
“住”在无锡
我家在无锡市东面，沿着马路直走就能看到学校；
你的感想
……(自拟，至少一句)
概述
现代化城市，空气清新，每天听到鸟语；
位置
我家离市中心不远，乘坐地铁到市中心只要20分钟；
在三楼，有自己的卧室；最爱……，因为……
邻居
……
评价
……
T: Thmas@China. cm
Frm: Anthny2023@UK. cm
Subject: Yur hmetwn
Dear Thmas,
Hw are yu? Glad t hear frm yu. I am thinking abut travelling t China during the summer hliday. I plan t travel t yur hmetwn—Nantng. I want t knw smething abut the envirnment (环境), peple and transprt (交通) in yur hmetwn.
Please tell me smething else abut yur hmetwn.
Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Anthny
My favurite traditinal Chinese skill
What
介绍一种传统技艺
Why
1.是中国文化的重要部分
2.（请你补充1-2点）
Hw
（请你补充1-2点）
Kites
Histry
Mzi, in the Warring States perid
Characteristics
materials fr making kites:…
shapes f kites:…
Cultural imprtance
kites:
● a traditinal Chinese handicraft
● …
kite flying:
● a ppular utdr activity…
● the Wrld Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandng Prvince…
Yur ideas
…
1. What d yu think f the envirnment f yur neighbrhd?
2. What are yur neighbrs like?（Give at least ne example. ）
3. What is yur plan fr the party?
4. Hw can Mike get t yur hme accrding t the map?
My cmmunity
My dream hme
1. Nice, lts f flwers and trees
2. A supermarket, a library and a park
3. Friendly neighburs，ften help each ther
4. Have fun with friends in the park
1. A big flat n the tp flr
2. Has an area f 160 square metres
3. Favurite place: the balcny
4. Enjy the view f the city there
1. Lucky t live in this cmmunity 2. happy t have a dream hme
小区
扬州市中心，靠近学校和购物中心
配套设施
空气清新，鸟语花香。小区有大型超市，人们可以……
小区有……，人们可以……
邻居
乐于助人，举例说明；
房间
四间卧室，每间带阳台；
两个卫生间，可以……
……(自拟一点)
感受
……
“通”在无锡
离上海不远，开车去上海2个多小时；
“游”在无锡
以鼋头渚公园(Yuantuzhu Park)闻名；那里绿树环绕，鸟语花香；
“吃”在无锡
可以尝试本地美食——小笼包(steamed dumplings)
“人”在无锡
乐意帮助他人解决各种问题；
“住”在无锡
我家在无锡市东面，沿着马路直走就能看到学校；
你的感想
……(自拟，至少一句)
概述
现代化城市，空气清新，每天听到鸟语；
位置
我家离市中心不远，乘坐地铁到市中心只要20分钟；
在三楼，有自己的卧室；最爱……，因为……
邻居
……
评价
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T: Thmas@China. cm
Frm: Anthny2023@UK. cm
Subject: Yur hmetwn
Dear Thmas,
Hw are yu? Glad t hear frm yu. I am thinking abut travelling t China during the summer hliday. I plan t travel t yur hmetwn—Nantng. I want t knw smething abut the envirnment (环境), peple and transprt (交通) in yur hmetwn.
Please tell me smething else abut yur hmetwn.
Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Anthny
My favurite traditinal Chinese skill
What
介绍一种传统技艺
Why
1.是中国文化的重要部分
2.（请你补充1-2点）
Hw
（请你补充1-2点）
Kites
Histry
Mzi, in the Warring States perid
Characteristics
materials fr making kites:…
shapes f kites:…
Cultural imprtance
kites:
● a traditinal Chinese handicraft
● …
kite flying:
● a ppular utdr activity…
● the Wrld Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandng Prvince…
Yur ideas
…
1. What d yu think f the envirnment f yur neighbrhd?
2. What are yur neighbrs like?（Give at least ne example. ）
3. What is yur plan fr the party?
4. Hw can Mike get t yur hme accrding t the map?
My cmmunity
My dream hme
1. Nice, lts f flwers and trees
2. A supermarket, a library and a park
3. Friendly neighburs，ften help each ther
4. Have fun with friends in the park
1. A big flat n the tp flr
2. Has an area f 160 square metres
3. Favurite place: the balcny
4. Enjy the view f the city there
1. Lucky t live in this cmmunity 2. happy t have a dream hme