人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents.（教师版）

这是一份人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents.（教师版），共29页。试卷主要包含了描述烦恼；， 睡前做些运动 ；等内容，欢迎下载使用。

近三年考情分析
本单元的话题为“烦恼与建议”。该话题习作通常阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见或给出合理的解决办法，最后提出祝愿。在写作时，首先要学会运用“My prblem is that…/I can't…”等描述生活中存在的问题，学会用“shuld/culd/why dn't yu…/why nt…/what abut…/hw abut…”提出建议以及用“In my pinin…”等阐述观点与理由。
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一：1.描述烦恼；
◆ 步骤二：给出合理化的建议；
◆ 步骤三：表达祝愿，希望对方走出困境。
真题感知
（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）
眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 mypia；电子产品 electrnic device
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu?
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Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging with yu? I’m srry t learn that yur eyesight is getting weaker. I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight. And reading bks fr t lng may cause mypia.
But dn’t wrry. I’d like t share with yu sme ways f prtecting eyesight. At first, yu shuld cntrl the time yu spend n electrnic prducts. Yu can d mre utdr activities. What’s mre, yu shuld develp sme gd habits. Yu shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit. They are gd fr yur health. Besides, ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes. Lastly, yu shuld have yur eyes examined every term t make sure yur eyes stay healthy.
I hpe yu’ll find my ways helpful.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
②be gd fr对……有好处
③play an imprtant rle in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think yu may use electrnic prducts fr a lng time, which is bad fr yur eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②ding eye exercises plays an imprtant rle in relaxing yur tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
【单元写作素材】
◆开头句
①Glad t hear frm yu，but I’m srry t…
②We all have sme prblems and stress in ur lives.
③I knw yu are upset these days.
◆中间句
①Here is sme f my advice fr yu.
②Why nt buy sme flwers fr yur best friend?
③First，yu… Secnd，yu… Third，yu…
◆结尾句
①Last,if yu have t much stress，yu’d better see a dctr.
②That’ll be enugh t make him happy.
③I hpe yu will have a gd time.
【常用句式】
I am writing t express my views cncerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
Yu have asked me fr my advice abut...，and I will try t make sme cnducive suggestins. 对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。
I wuld like t suggest that... 我建议……
Why dn't yu...？为何不……？
I'd like t suggest that... 我想要建议
In my pinin,...在我看来，
If I were yu, I wuld... 如果我是你，我会
Yu'd better d... 你最好/最好不
I think it will be a gd idea/mre beneficial if yu culd... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
It's imprtant helps shuld be a gd idea t... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
I am writing t put up sme suggestins cncerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
Please take gd cnsideratin f my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
I hpe yu will find these suggestins/recmmendatins helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
Thank yu fr yur attentin. 感谢你对此事的关注。
◆谚语积累
All wrk and n play makes Jack a dull by.
只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
3.True friendship is like health. Yu dn’t knw its value until yu lse it.
真正的友谊好像健康，失去时才知道它的可贵。
【例文】
Gina最近遇到了一个问题，她给某杂志的专栏作者Jenny写了一封信，以寻求帮助。
Dear Jenny,
I am nt well these days because I can’t sleep well. I always think abut the things in the daytime. I dn’t knw what I shuld d.
Can yu help me? Thanks a lt！
Yurs,
Gina
根据信件内容及下列提示内容，帮Jenny给Mrs. Smith写一封回信。80词左右。
提示：1. 尽量放松，不要想太多；
2. 睡前做些运动 ；
3. 在床上听一些轻音乐。
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审题
二．文章布局
开头：点明主题以“I am srry t hear that yu can't have a gd sleep...” 引出问题
文章段落结构
正文：提出建议 不同问题，不同建议
结尾：表达祝愿 以“I hpe yu will be better sn.”表达祝愿
三．遣词造句
①词汇库
放松Relax;锻炼exercise;睡觉sleep;轻音乐light music;建议advice/suggestin;苦恼truble/prblem
②短语箱
尽量Try t; 在意care abut;太多t much;睡觉 g t bed;听音乐listen t music;锻炼d sprts;担心wrry abut;解决wrk ut
③链接句型
I am srry t hear that
In yur letter yur prblem is that...
Thanks fr telling me abut yur prblem.
Dn’t wrry abut that./It is nrmal fr yur age.
Here are sme gd pieces f advice fr yu.
I hpe everything will wrk ut./ I hpe yu will be better./I hpe these suggestins will be helpful fr yu.
Yu'd better d...
Yu can/culd/shuld
提建议的句型
Why dn't yu/Why nt d...
Wuld yu like t
What/hw abut ding...
It will be better/imprtant/necessary fr yu t d...
四、参考范文
Dear Gina,
I’m srry t hear that yu can’t sleep well. Dn’t wrry abut that. Here are sme pieces f advice.
First f all , yu'd better try t relax and nt care abut t much.Secndly,yu can d mre exercise befre yu g t sleep. It will help yu g t sleep very quickly. Next,Why nt listen t sme light music when yu are in bed? Finally,If yu are really serius, it is necessary t see a dctr.
I hpe these can help yu. Yu will be better sn.
Yurs,
Jenny
（一）问题类短语
1. 对某人生气be angry with sb
2. 与某人吵架get int a fight with sb
3. 不能与同学和睦相处nt get n with classmates
4. 给某人施压give sb pressure
5. 与同学竞争cmpete with classmates
6. 太多的作业t much hmewrk
（二）建议类短语
1. 与父母交流cmmunicate with parents
2. 早点睡觉g t sleep earlier
3. 给某人写信write t sb
4. 主动提出帮助ffer t help
5. 给某人打电话call sb up
6. 归还某物return sth
7. 给某人道歉say srry t sb
8. 根据某人的看法in ne’s pinin
句子积累
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
1. Yu shuld call him s that yu can say yu’re srry. 【s that 为的是；以便】
你应该在课堂上认真听讲，以便你能取得好成绩。
Yu shuld listen t the teachers carefully in class s that yu can get gd grades.
2. My prblem is that I can’t get n with my family. 【my prblem is that...我的问题是……】
我的问题是我没有时间做我自己喜欢的事情。
My prblem is that I dn’t have time t d what I lve t d.
3. The tired children dn’t get hme until after 7：00 p. m. 【nt... until...直到……才……】
学生们直到晚上10：30才睡觉。
Students didn’t g t bed until 10:30 p.m.
（二）根据提示词，用不同的句型表达生活中存在的以下问题。
1. 【nt sleep well 】
My prblem is that I can’t sleep well.
2. 【nt get alng well with my classmates】
I can’t get alng well with my classmates.
3. 【nt get gd grades 】
I am srry t tell yu that I can’t get gd grades.
4. 【have t much hmewrk】
My biggest prblem is that I have t much hmewrk.
5. 【have a fight with my best friend】
I am really sad that I have a fight with my best friend.
（三）完成下列提建议的句子（每空一词）
1. Yu shuld just be yurself.
2. Why dn’t yu talk t yur parents?
3. What/Hw abut calling him up and saying srry t him?
4. Why nt d sme sprts t keep healthy?
5. Why dn’t yu talk abut these feelings?
例文：
现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；
2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；
3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。
要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
参考词汇：be shrt f 缺少
Many students are shrt f exercise in their spare time nw ________
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【佳作展示】
Many students are shrt f exercise in their spare time nw. They think ding exercise can affect their studies. Therefre they have less time t study. Ding sprts is gd fr their health. A persn wh takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the schl, students are frced t take exercise in the PE class, they need t jin certain activities. In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they wn’t get sick easily. But after they leaving schl, n ne frces them t d s, s they are lazy t take exercise s that their bdies get weaker.
I think students shuld take exercise every day utside the schl. In a wrd, exercise is helpful, imprtant and abslutely necessary.
（2024·新疆克孜勒苏·统考一模）
最近你和父母针对 “青少年该不该在周末和朋友外出” 进行了讨论。请你根据下列表格中的信息提示，以 “Shuld teenagers g ut with friends n weekends?” 为话题，写一篇 80词左右的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：1. 所写内容包括表格中提供的父母的想法
2.至少给出你的三个想法。
Shuld teenagers g ut with friends n weekends?
Recently I’ve had a discussin with my parents abut whether teenagers shuld g ut with friends n weekends.
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【答案】例文：
Shuld teenagers g ut with friends n weekends?
Recently I’ve had a discussin with my parents abut whether teenagers shuld g ut with friends n weekends.
My parent thinks that teenagers shuld stay at hme n weekends. They shuld g ver their lessns. And they culd have enugh time t have a gd sleep. They als think teenagers shuld help parents d sme husewrk n weekends.
In my pinin, we teenagers shuld be allwed t g ut with friends fr fun n weekends, s we can relax mre. And we can als share ideas with each ther. What’s mre, we can als take sme exercise tgether t keep fit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出谈论的主题（已给出）。
第二步，介绍父母的想法；
第三步，介绍自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at hme待在家
②g ver their lessns复习功课
③have enugh time t d有足够时间做某事
④ sb和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①My parent thinks that teenagers shuld stay at hme n weekends. (that引导的宾语从句)
②In my pinin, we teenagers shuld be allwed t g ut with friends fr fun n weekends, s we can relax mre. (被动语态)
（2024·西藏拉萨·统考一模）
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展主题为“ Hw t Keep a Gd Relatinship with Parents” 的征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：
1. 父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法；
3. 表达对父母的理解。
【答案】例文：
In my pinin, I have t many rules at hme. My parents never allw me t g ut with my friends at night. They dn’t allw me t chse my wn clthes, either. And they pay t much attentin t my exam results. I think my parents dn’t understand me.
In rder t keep a gd relatinship with my parents, I study hard and listen t them. I talk with them as friends, and I always tell them my truble. I als help them d sme husewrk.
Als, I try my best t understand them. Althugh they dn’t allw me t make my wn decisins and they give me t much pressure, I knw they really lve me and want me t have a bright future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己的问题；
第二步，具体阐述你与父母保持良好关系的做法；
第三步，最后表达对父母的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①in my pinin 在我看来
②allw sb. t d sth. 允许某人做某事
③t much太多
[高分句型]
①I think my parents dn’t understand me.（宾语从句）
②Althugh they dn’t allw me t make my wn decisins and they give me t much pressure, I knw they really lve me and want me t have a bright future.（让步状语从句，宾语从句）
（2024·福建三明·统考一模）
汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友 Anna 的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给她写封回信。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anna,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.
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I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Pssible versins：
Dear Anna,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. Knwing yu have an interest in Chinese, I suggest yu chse the Chinese curse. Chinese is spken by the mst peple in the wrld. With the develpment f China, Chinese is becming mre and mre ppular. Learning Chinese is nt nly a way t cmmunicate, but als a chance t admire Chinese culture.
In my pinin, there are many ways t learn Chinese. It’s useful t read Chinese bks and listen t Chinese sngs. What’s mre, yu are suppsed t jin a Chinese club t practice yur spken Chinese. Learning is a lifelng jurney. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring smething new.
I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，给出相应的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
hear frm收到……的信
suggest建议
nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
cmmunicate交流
admire欣赏
be suppsed t应该
[高分句型]
Knwing yu have an interest in Chinese, I suggest yu chse the Chinese curse.(省略that的宾语从句)
Learning Chinese is nt nly a way t cmmunicate, but als a chance t admire Chinese culture.（动名词作主语）
（2024·福建南平·统考一模）
新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出合理的建议。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
At present many students d little reading after class. Here are several reasns.
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【答案】例文
At present many students d little reading after class. Here are several reasns. First f all, mst students have t much hmewrk t d. Sme students haven’t develped reading habit. They prefer t spend their free time watching TV r the Internet.
Hwever, reading actually has many advantages. It can nt nly increase ur knwledge, imprve ur thinking, but als make ur lives mre clrful.
Here are my suggestins t share with everyne. We can frm reading grups, read whle English bks tgether, and then share ur reading experiences with each ther. Let’s start reading tday and enjy the fun f reading!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因并提出合理的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因；
第二步，介绍阅读的好处；
第三步，介绍自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②prefer t d更喜欢做某事
③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①It can nt nly increase ur knwledge, imprve ur thinking, but als make ur lives mre clrful. (nt als结构)
②Let’s start reading tday and enjy the fun f reading! (祈使句)
（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模）
假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为身体瘦弱而苦恼，请你根据以下信息，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名身体健康的中学生。
写作要点：
1. 因他的信任而高兴。
2. 你的看法：
①参加体育运动是必要的。
②体育运动即能增强体质又能调节情绪。
3. 告诉他如何做一名身体健康（in gd health）的中学生。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu ding?
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Hw are yu ding? I’m glad f yur trust. I wuld like t ffer yu sme advice.
I think it is necessary t take part in sprts, because sprts can nt nly strengthen the bdy but als regulate the md. As we all knw, we teenagers grw very fast, s we need plenty f nutritius fds, such as fish, fresh fruit and vegetables. Yu shuld nt take in t much meat r t many sweets. Als, physical exercise is needed instead f studying all the time. Fr example, yu can play basketball r swim after schl. What is mre, having enugh sleep is f great benefit. Therefre, I sincerely suggest that yu shuld have at least eight hurs f sleep every day and get rid f staying up t late. Only in this way can we keep fit.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己因对方的信任而高兴；
第二步，具体阐述自己对于体育运动的看法，并就如何做一名身体健康的中学生提出建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d想要做某事
②take part in参加
③at least至少
④get rid f摆脱
[高分句型]
①What is mre, I sincerely suggest that yu shuld have at least eight hurs f sleep every day and get rid f staying up t late.(that引导的宾语从句)
②I think it is necessary t take part in sprts, because sprts can nt nly strengthen the bdy but als regulate the md.(because引导原因状语从句)
（2023·福建福州·福建省福州铜盘中学校考模拟预测）
六月，全国节能宣传周和全国低碳日活动的主题是“践行节能低碳，建设美丽家园”。请以“共建文明城市，低碳生活我先行”为主题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇倡议书。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1）根据要点提示，可适当发挥（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Let’s create a civilized city tgether
As middle schl students, it’s ur duty t help build a civilized city.
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【答案】例文：
Let’s create a civilized city tgether
As middle schl students, it’s ur duty t help build a civilized city.
We can reduce air pllutin by riding bikes r walking. It can als save energy. We mustn’t thrw rubbish r spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep ur city clean and tidy s that we can live a cmfrtable life. And we’d better plant mre trees t prtect the envirnment and make ur city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it int the dustbin wherever I g. I can turn ff the lights when leaving the rm. Actins speak luder than wrds. Let’s take an active part in creating a civilized city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：注意具体做法要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅，建议不能少于两点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述建造一个文明的城市是我们的责任；
第二步，详细说如何做；
第三步，给出的两点建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way使用这种方法
②s that为了
[高分句型]
①In this way, we can keep ur city clean and tidy s that we can live a cmfrtable life.（表目的的状语从句）
②Actins speak luder than wrds.（谚语：行动胜于言语）
（2023·陕西渭南·统考模拟预测）
假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请根据以下提示，用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。
要求: 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks fr ffering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be very imprtant t my later life.
The living skills training will be n a farm. There, I can live with lcal peple. They will help me learn mre abut their custms and lifestyles. Mrever, what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities n the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I als have sme advice fr yu. I hpe there will be mre activities like grwing plants and vegetables. I hpe I will enjy myself n the farm.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“并对你选择的活动提出建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明自己更喜欢的一种活动；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢这种活动的理由；
第三步，书写结语，提出自己的建议，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①make me interested使我感兴趣
②by neself独力
③take part in参加
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the prcess will be very imprtant t my later life. (含有原因状语从句和定语从句的复合句)
②what makes me interested is that I can ck by myself. (what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句)
（2023·安徽合肥·合肥38中校考三模）
奋斗的道路不会一帆风顺，初中三年我们在生活和学习上都经历过困难。Teenager magazine正在举办“Hw t get ver difficulty”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据提示结合自身实际情况，写一篇短文投稿。
(1)遇到的困难，
(2)解决的办法，
(3)收获与感想。
1. 请围绕所给要点写作，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺、意思连贯，80—100 词左右；
3. 文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Hw t get ver difficulty
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【答案】例文
Hw t get ver difficulty
In ur daily life, we ften meet different kinds f difficulties. But hw can we get ver them? Here is ne f my unusual experiences.
When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t d well in my lessns first. Exams always brught me sadness. As a result, I was afraid f study and I became very lnely. Then, I decided t ask my teachers fr help. Luckily, they gave me sme useful advice. They tld me nt t give up easily because nthing is impssible if we put ur heart int it. I was deeply mved by their wrds and wrked harder than befre. Finally, I imprved myself a lt.
Frm this experience, I understand that I shuld learn t get ver difficulty by myself with my cnfidence and my hard wrk.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：以“Hw t get ver difficulty”为题，结合所给的要点提示，写一篇介绍自己如何克服困难的短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍你自己遇到了什么困难；
第二步：你解决问题的方法是什么；
第三步：谈谈你的收获与感想。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds f 各种各样的……
②ne f ……之一
③give up 放弃
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t d well in my lessns first. （when引导时间状语从句）
②They tld me nt t give up easily because nthing is impssible if we put ur heart int it. （because引导原因状语从句）
（一）
1.（2023·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）
当前，全国儿童青少年近视率居高不下，习近平总书记对此高度重视并作出重要批示，教育部也于2023年3月30日印发了《2023年全国综合防控儿童青少年近视重点工作计划》。对于儿童青少年近视问题，你有何看法和建议。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，告诉大家如何保护视力。
要求：
1. 包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
As we all knw, eyes are very imprtant t us. Hwever, many students have pr eyesight. In rder t prtect ur eyesight, we shuld fllw these suggestins.
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In a wrd, let’s take actin t say gdbye t thick glasses.
【答案】例文
As we all knw, eyes are very imprtant t us. Hwever, many students have pr eyesight. In rder t prtect ur eyesight, we shuld fllw these suggestins.
In my pinin, it’s imprtant t have gd eyesight. We shuld develp gd habits f using ur eyes. Fr example, we’d better take a break after reading fr 45minutes. We can d eye exercises and d mre sprts. They are helpful t prtect ur eyesight. Eating healthy fd is als gd fr prtecting ur eyesight. I hpe we prtect ur eyes well s that we can see the clrful wrld.
In a wrd, let’s take actin t say gdbye t thick glasses.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容呼吁人们保护视力，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对下文建议的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍如何保护视力；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In my pinin在我看来
②take a break休息一下
③be gd fr有益于
[高分句型]
①In my pinin, it’s imprtant t have gd eyesight.（It固定句型）
②I hpe we prtect ur eyes well s that we can see the clrful wrld.（省略that的宾语从句和s that引导的目的状语从句）
（二）
（2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题）
青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
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I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing t yu abut the prblem I’m facing at the mment.
These days I’m nt happy. I always argue with my parents. They nly care abut my schlwrk. The summer hliday is cming. They plan t chse lts f after-schl classes fr me. But I dn’t want t take these classes and dn’t want t be s busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want t take painting lessns during the hliday. They disagree with me. I dn’t knw what t d. And hw can I imprve the relatinship with my parents? Can yu give me sme advice?
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care abut关心
③take painting lessns上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer hliday is cming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I dn’t knw what t d. (疑问词+动词不定式)
（三）
（2023·湖北孝感·统考中考真题）
亲爱的同学，在你成长的过程中，也许会遇到一些“小烦恼”，自身的调节与朋友的建议可以帮助你成为更好的自己。近期，学校将举行一次相关主题的经验交流会，请你根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点提示：
1. 简要介绍你自己(如年龄、爱好……)；
2. 讲述你或你的朋友曾经遇到的问题及感受（如学习中的、同学间的、家庭里的……)；
3. 分享解决问题的方法(如多沟通、听音乐、参与活动……)。
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
cmmunicate v. 沟通
参考词汇：pressure n. 压力
Hell, everyne! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9.
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【答案】例文
Hell, everyne! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9. I am 15 years ld. I like ding sprts. But I used t hate ding sprts. It was my mther wh changed me.
Once I spent t much watching TV and playing cmputer games. S my grades were wrse and wrse. My mther nticed my changes. She had a lng cnversatin with me. She said that spending t much n them was bad fr my eyes. She advised me t relax by listening t music and ding sprts. She asked me t run fr an hur in the mrning every day. A few days later, I fund running culd make me healthy and happy. I culd d everything better.
In my pinin, when yu meet sme difficulties, yu can share them with yur parents r teachers. They will give yu sme useful advice.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息以及爱好；
第二步，分享自己曾经遇到的问题，以及解决的方法；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①used t d sth过去常常做某事
②spend time ding sth花费时间做某事
③be bad fr对……有坏处
[高分句型]
①She said that spending t much n them was bad fr my eyes.（that引导宾语从句，动名词作主语）
② She asked me t run fr an hur in the mrning every day. （动词不定式作宾补）
话题
考查热度
烦恼与建议
阐明自己与他人的烦恼，并向他人征求意见
近视原因
长时间使用电子产品；
读书时间过长。
建议
控制使用电子产品时间；
养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）
……
希望
……
体裁
应用文
话题
谈论问题，提出建议
时态
一般现在时
人称
第一.二人称
Yu’re parents’ ideas
Yur ideas
1. g ver lessns
2. have a gd sleep
3. help parents d husewrk
主题
Let’s create a civilized city tgether
具体做法
ways
benifits
1.ride, walk
reduce, save...
2.thrw, spit
clean...
3.plant
beautiful, envirnment...
你的建议
联系生活实际提出至少2条合理的建议。
Summer Camp
Living skills training
Sprts training
 n a farm
 in a training centre
 live with lcal peple
 live with team members
 ck meals by yurself
 be tested by caches
 feed animals, ...
 play ball games, ...