


人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?(教师版)
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近三年考情分析
本单元以"家务、杂务"为话题,围绕这一话题,引导学生学习掌握情态动词culd表示委婉地请求以及请求许可的用法。以谈论家务以及对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由为话题的作文或是请求他人帮忙的电子邮件之类的书面表达是单元测试或中考所常考查的。
写作目标
本单元以“家务琐事与许可”为话题,要求学生学会运用与做家务相关的动词短语描述家务琐事,要能运用“Culd I...?/Culd yu please...?”表示“请求得到许可”,使用think, believe, agree及disagree等相关句式表达自己对做家务的看法。此话题常见的写作角度涉及:①树立劳动观念,进行实践活动 ②做家务的收获
写作步骤
真题感知
(2023·辽宁朝阳·统考中考真题)
劳动(Labr)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》,从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中,你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能,比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际,以“Labr makes me a better persn”为题,根据以下要点和要求,写一篇英语短文。
要点:
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么?
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处?
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能?
要求:
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Labr makes me a better persn
As we all knw, labr plays an imprtant rle in ur lives.
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【答案】例文
Labr makes me a better persn
As we all knw, labr plays an imprtant rle in ur lives. I am very gd at cking. I always ck meals fr my parents when I am free n weekends. I think cking is a very imprtant and necessary life skill because I can develp my independence by cking. I can learn hw t take gd care f myself instead f making my parents wrry abut me. In the future, I wuld like t learn hw t plant trees s that I can plant mre trees n the hill and make my hmetwn mre beautiful.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“Labr makes me a better persn”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么;
第二步,介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处;
第三步,介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd at擅长
②n weekends在周末
③take gd care f照顾好
④In the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cking is a very imprtant and necessary life skill because I can develp my independence by cking.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②In the future, I wuld like t learn hw t plant trees s that I can plant mre trees n the hill and make my hmetwn mre beautiful.(s that引导的目的状语从句)
【词汇积累】
rubbish 垃圾 fld 折叠 sweep 打扫 mess 杂乱 wash 清;清洗 clean 打扫
busy 忙碌 chre 杂务 husewrk 家务劳动 tired 累的 take ut the rubbish 倒垃圾
d the dishes 洗餐具 fld the clthes 叠衣服 sweep the flr 扫地
make ne’s bed 整理床铺 clean the rm 打扫房间 d husewrk/chres 做家务
help sb.d sth.帮助某人做某事 take care f 照顾 d husewrk all evening 整晚做家务
find the huse clean and tidy发现房间干净又整洁 share the husewrk分担家务
a clean and cmfrtable hme一个干净又舒服的家
there is n need fr smebdy t d smething 对于某人来说没必要做
develp children's independence 养成孩子的独立(习惯)
the idea f fairness 公平意识
have n idea hw t take care f himself 不知道怎样照料自己
it's fair/ unfair fr children t d smething对于孩子来说,做……是公平的/不公平的。
a few ther things I want yu t d我想要你做的另处几件事情
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
It is the parents' jb t prvide a clean and cmfrtable envirnment at hme fr their children.
在家给孩子们提供一个干净而舒服的环境是家长们的工作。
2.It is imprtant fr children t learn hw t d chres and help their parents with husewrk.
对于孩子们来说,学会怎样做家务和帮助父母亲做家务是很重要的。
3.Since they live in ne huse with their parents, they shuld knw that everyne shuld d their part in keeping it clean and tidy.
既然他们和他们的父母生活在同一房子里,他们就应该明白每个人都应该做他们份内之事,以保持房子的干净与整洁。
4. The earlier kids learn t be independent, the better it is fr their future.
孩子们越早独立,对他们的未来就更好。
5.Playing cmputer games is a waste f time and energy.打电脑游戏是浪费时间和精力。
6.Ding chres can develp children’s independence.做家务能够培养孩子们的独立能力。
7.We can't depend n ur parents t much.我们不能过多地依赖我们的父母。
8.The mre the children d the chres,the earlier they will learn t be independent.
孩子们做的家务越多,就会越早地学会独立。
9.It helps children t understand the idea f fairness. 这帮助孩子们理解公平的含义。
1-.Students have n time t d the husewrk. 孩子们没有时间做家务。
◆开头句
①It is everyne’s duty t d chres.
②I think it is necessary fr us t d husewrk.
③Nw many students are t lazy t d husewrk at hme.
④I think we shuld help parents d sme husewrk.
◆中间句
①I swept the flr at first and tk ut the rubbish.
②We shuld finish ur hmewrk independently and make a study plan carefully.
③What’s mre,I als cked sme prridge.
④Third,ding husewrk can relax urselves.
⑤I ften help my parents with much husewrk,such as cleaning the rms,taking ut the rubbish and ding the dishes.
◆结尾句
①I believe if we can d these things,we will be mre independent.
②I think it’s ur duty t share husewrk t keep the huse clean and tidy.
◆谚语积累
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
2.Easier said than dne.说起来容易做起来难。
杂志Sunday Mail就“孩子在家应不应该做家务”这个话题征集稿件。请你写一篇英语短文向该杂志投稿。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:议论文
时态:一般现在时和一般将来时
人称:第一人称和第三人称
2. 谋布局、写句子
3. 巧衔接
本文在表明观点后,需要阐述支撑观点的理由,为此,我们可以先用Here are three reasns来承上启下,使文章过渡自然。然后具体的理由可以用first, secnd, third来衔接,使行文条理清晰、紧密相连。
4. 成篇章
Dear Sir r Madam,
Yurs truly,
Mandy
5. 化“平凡”为“非凡”
Children are part f the family. They shuld share chres at hme. ➝As part f the family, children shuld share chres at hme.
答案
2. 谋布局、写句子
(1) they d all the husewrk at hme
(2) It can make children understand their parents better
(3) d their part in keeping their rms tidy
(4) children depend n their parents t much
(5) have gd living habits
4. 成篇章
Dear Sir r Madam,
I think children shuld d chres at hme. Here are three reasns. First, parents will feel very tired if they d all the husewrk at hme, s children shuld help their parents d sme chres. It can make children understand their parents better. Secnd, children are part f the family. They shuld share chres at hme. Children shuld d their part in keeping their rms tidy. Fr example, they shuld make their beds and fld their clthes. Third, these days children depend n their parents t much. Ding chres can help children learn hw t take care f themselves. And it can help them have gd living habits. It’s gd fr their future. S I believe that children shuld d chres at hme.
Yurs truly,
Mandy
短语积累
话题
考查热度
"家务、杂务"
谈论家务
烹饪家务
切碎
做汤
做晚餐
做奶昔
用……填满
清洗餐具
其他家务
做家务
打扫(或清楚)干净
扫地
叠衣服
铺床
扔掉;抛弃
倒垃圾
保持……整洁
接通(电流、煤气、水等);打开
写作佳句
我认为孩子们学习如何做家务是非常重要的。
I think it’s very imprtant fr children .
我愿意在我的空闲时间打扫房间。
I wuld like in my free time.
与家人一起做家务是我们与他们相处的好机会。
It is fr us t get alng with family when ding husewrk with them.
做家务可以帮助我们学会如何照顾好自己。
Ding chres can help us lern urselves well.
分担家务,拥有一个干净舒适的家是我们的责任。
It is the husewrk t have a clean and cmfrtable hme.
我度过了一个忙碌但开心的星期六。
I had a Saturday.
我们越早学会独立,我们未来的生活就越容易。
we learn t be independent, ur future life will be.
【参考答案】
短语积累
cut up 2. (t) make sup 3. make dinner 4. make a milk shake 6. d/wash the dishes 7. d chres 8. clean up 9. sweep the flr 10. fld the clthes 11. make (ne's) bed 12. thrw away 13. take ut the rubbish 14. keep. .. clean and tidy 15. turn n
写作佳句
t learn hw t d chres/husewrk
clean the/my rm
a gd chance
hw t lk after/ hw t care fr/ hw t take care f
ur jb t share
busy but happy
The earlier;the easier
(一)
1.假设你是李华,请你结合最近新出台的劳动课程标准,根据自身的劳动体会,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,谈谈你对劳动课程的看法。
内容包括:
1. 校内:学习生活技能;
2. 校外:参加实践活动,如:植树、种菜等;
3. 在家:学做家务,如:整理房间、烧饭等;
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意:
1. 词数: 80~100;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:劳动课labr educatin class
A new curriculum (课程) standard fr labr educatin came ut recently in rder t help mre students t develp hard-wrking spirit.
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【答案】例文
A new curriculum standard fr labr educatin came ut recently in rder t help mre students t develp hard-wrking spirit. As a middle schl student. I welcme it warmly.
Firstly, we have labr educatin classes s that we can learn sme basic life skills at schl every week. Secndly, it’s f great imprtance t take part in ut-f-class activities such as planting trees r grwing vegetables t enrich ur real wrk experience. Als, we try t d sme chres at hme, like tidying rms, washing clthes r cking sme dishes in rder t develp ur ability t wrk. Abve all, we can frm gd wrking habits and value the imprtance f wrking hard thrugh ur experiences.
In a wrd, the hard-wrking spirit educatin is necessary and it helps t build up ur bdy and mind s that we are suppsed t develp the hard-wrking spirit as much as pssible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你对劳动课程的看法的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“谈谈你对劳动课程的看法。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“学习生活技能、参加实践活动、学做家务等”几个方面重点介绍你对劳动课程的看法的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“总之,努力工作精神教育是必要的,它有助于建立我们的身心,这样我们就应该尽可能地发展努力工作精神”的总结。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②try t d sth努力做某事
③abve all最重要的
④in a wrd总之
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we have labr educatin classes s that we can learn sme basic life skills at schl every week. (s that引导目的状语从句)
②Secndly, it’s f great imprtance t take part in ut-f-class activities such as planting trees r grwing vegetables t enrich ur real wrk experience. (“It is+f+名词+t d sth”句型)
(二)
国家提出将 “劳动教育(labr educatin)”纳入中小学国家课程方案,请结合自身的劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括:
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2. 短文必须包含表格内所有信息,可适当发挥;语句通顺,意思连贯,书书工整;
3. 词数:80词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s reprted that labr educatin will be included in the educatin f middle schls and primary schls in China. I think
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【答案】例文
It’s reprted that labr educatin will be included in the educatin f middle schls and primary schls in China. I think it is gd fr ur health. We can relax frm the hard study by ding labr.
I ften d labr at hme. Fr example, I d the dishes, sweep the flr and take ut the rubbish. At schl I ften clean the classrm and water flwers. I really feel happy.
I have sme ideas abut the curse. The schl can ffer different kinds f labr classes. It can als hld cmpetitins abut labr skills. They will make ur schl life mre clrful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容谈谈对劳动教育的看法,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,介绍你对劳动教育的看法;
第二步,介绍你自身的劳动经历及感受;
第三步,介绍你对劳动教育课程的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd fr对……有好处
②d the dishes洗碗
③different kinds f各种各样的
[高分句型]
We can relax frm the hard study by ding labr.(动名词作宾语)
(三)
3.现在许多孩子在家里很少做家务,甚至不愿意做家务。学校为了号召同学们积极参与家务劳动,开展了以“We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk”为主题的演讲活动。假如你是李华,请结合下面的信息用英语写一篇演讲稿。
注意: 1. 文章必须包括提示中的三个要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实地名、人名和校名;
3. 词数在70左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
Ladies and gentlemen,
Gd mrning! I’m Li Hua. It’s my hnr t give yu a speech. My tpic is “We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk”.
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Thanks fr listening.
【答案】例文:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Gd mrning! I’m Li Hua. It’s my hnr t give yu a speech. My tpic is “We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk”.
On weekdays, I ften clean my bedrm every mrning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, I usually wash clthes and sweep the flr.
I think ding husewrk is necessary and meaningful, which makes me happy and mre respnsible.
In my pinin, as a family member, we must share the husewrk. We can’t depend n ur parents frever. Therefre, ding husewrk can make us independent when we grw up. Sharing the husewrk is helpful fr us t build a gd relatinship with ur parents. I think trying t d sme husewrk can als keep us healthy and strng.
Thanks fr listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:这是一篇演讲稿,为议论文;
② 时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点包括:平时自己所做的家务活动 、感受和应该做家务的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己平时所做的家务活动;
第二步,介绍自己做家务的感受;
第三步,介绍应该做家务的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① depend n 依靠
② make us independent 使得我们独立
③ build a gd relatinship 建立良好关系
④ in my pinin 我认为
[高分句型]
I think ding husewrk is necessary and meaningful, which makes me happy and mre respnsible.(定语从句)
(四)
4.很多家长认为孩子不应该帮忙做家务,他们的主要任务是学习,请根据以下内容提示问题,写一篇题为“Shuld Teenagers Help with Husewrk at Hme?”的短文。 内容提示问题:
What d yu ften d t help yur parents at hme?
D yu think kids shuld help ut with chres at hme?
Why d yu think s?
Smething mre abut ding hmewrk.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60—80;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Shuld Teenagers Help with Husewrk at Hme?
Many parents think that teenagers dn’t have t help with husewrk at hme.
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【答案】例文:
Shuld Teenagers Help with Husewrk at Hme?
Many parents think that teenagers dn’t have t help with husewrk at hme. They just have t study hard t get gd grades. I really dn’t agree. I always help my parents d sme chres at hme. On schl days, I make my wn bed and d the dishes after dinner. On the weekend, I help clean up the living rm.
Smetimes I take ut the rubbish n the way t schl. I think helping d chres shw my lve t them. They are very tired after wrking all day. Since we live in ne huse with ur parents, everyne shuld d their part in keeping it clean and tidy. At the same time, ding chres helps us learn t take care f urselves. It’s helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:根据题干中的提示内容谈论青少年应不应该帮助父母做家务,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,表示自己赞成应该帮助父母做家务;
第二步,介绍你在加帮助父母做什么家务;
第三步,介绍做家务的好处。
[亮点词汇]
n the weekend在周末
n the way t schl在去学校的路上
d their part in尽他们的职责
[高分句型]
I think helping d chres shw my lve t them.(宾语从句)
Since we live in ne huse with ur parents, everyne shuld d their part in keeping it clean and tidy.(since引导的原因状语从句)
(五)
5.热爱劳动,才能热爱生活,才能感受生活的温暖。青少年应该主动参加各类劳动,如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。假如你是李华,你们学校组织“Grw Up in Labr”的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
内容包括:
谈谈参加劳动的意义;
介绍你经常参加的两项劳动和收获;
提醒同学们劳动时要注意的事项(至少两项)。
作文要求::
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Grw Up in Labr
Labr plays an imprtant rle in life.
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【答案】例文
Grw Up in Labr
Labr plays an imprtant rle in life. It helps us learn hw t take care f urselves and live independently.
As fr me, I ften d the cleaning at schl and help with the husewrk at hme. Thrugh ding the cleaning with my classmates at schl, I have realized that teamwrk can help finish the task mre quickly and better. And I have learned t plan my time well when helping with husewrk at hme.
Since labr is gd fr ur develpment, let’s take an active part in labr. But remember t fllw the rules and keep safe t avid accidents while wrking.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“劳动的意义;你经常参加的两项劳动及从中的得到的收获;至少两项劳动时的注意事项”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“劳动在生活中扮演着重要的角色。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我经常参加的劳动及从中获得的收获”几方面重点介绍劳动的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。提醒“但在工作时要记得遵守规则并保持安全,以避免发生事故。”
[亮点词汇]
① take care f照料
② be gd fr有利于
[高分句型]
①And I have learned t plan my time well when helping with husewrk at hme.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② Since labr is gd fr ur develpment, let’s take an active part in labr.(since引导的原因状语从句)
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6.随着年龄的增长,我们已经能做一些力所能及的家务,替父母分担劳动也是我们应该做的事情。当然,在这个过程中我们也会收获很多。请以“I get a lt frm ding husewrk”为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,谈论下你对此的观点吧。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息;
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【答案】例文
I get a lt frm ding husewrk.
As I’m getting lder, I’ve became mre independent and willing t share husewrk. I truly get a lt frm ding husewrk. Let me tell yu smething abut it.
First f all, t reduce my parents’ burden, I always ffer t d sme husewrk, which imprves the relatinship between my parents and I. In additin, ding husewrk helps me t understand the meaning f fairness. Everyne shuld d his part t keep the huse clean. What’s mre, it is ding husewrk that makes me learn t be independent.
In brief, ding husewrk helps t make me a better persn. I get a lt frm ding husewrk.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示介绍自己从做家务中学到了什么,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍自己从做家务中学到的事情;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ffer t d sth.主动提出做某事
②in additin此外
③in brief总之
[高分句型]
①First f all, t reduce my parents’ burden, I always ffer t d sme husewrk, which imprves the relatinship between my parents and I.(动词不定式作目的状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②What’s mre, it is ding husewrk that makes me learn t be independent.(强调句)
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7.随着义务教育阶段《劳动课程标准》的颁布,劳动教育将在学生全面发展过程中发挥重要作用。槐荫学校希望许飞同学在“国旗下讲话”时,对全校同学发出重视劳动教育的倡议。假如你是许飞,请根据以下提示写好这篇倡议书。
写作提示:
1. 认真对待劳动课程,熟练掌握劳动技能;
2. 积极参加劳动实践,全程体验劳动快乐,如:植树、种菜等;
3. 主动承担简单家务,培养良好劳动习惯,如:整理房间、洗衣服等;
4. ……(补充一两点个人想法)
写作要求:
1. 围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充,使文章内容充实,意思连贯,表达流畅;
2. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称:
3. 词数 100 词左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:labr curses劳动课;frm v. 养成
Gd mrning, everyne. I’m Xu Fei. It’s my great hnr t stand here t give a speech.
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In a wrd, I warmly welcme the labr educatin and call n us all t value the wrking spirit.
【答案】例文
Gd mrning, everyne. I’m Xu Fei. It’s my great hnr t stand here t give a speech. Nwadays, labr educatin plays an imprtant rle in ur life. As a middle schl student, it is necessary fr us t have labr classes and jin in different labr activities.
Firstly, we shuld take the labr classes seriusly, which will help us learn sme basic life skills. Secndly, we need take part in labr activities such as planting trees r grwing vegetables t experience the jy that labr brings t us. What’s mre, we had better d sme chres at hme, like tidying rms r washing clthes. Abve all, we can frm gd wrking habits and value the imprtance f hard wrking thrugh ur experience.
In a wrd, I warmly welcme the labr educatin and call n us all t value the wrking spirit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇倡议书;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意根据要点进行适当的补充,使文章内容更充实,上下文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,简单谈谈劳动教育对于中学生的意义;
第二步,介绍中学生该如何重视劳动教育;
第三步,表达自己对劳动教育的态度,以及号召同学们重视劳动精神。
[亮点词汇]
① play an imprtant rle 扮演重要的角色
② take part in 参加
③ d sme chres 做家务
[高分句型]
① As a middle schl student, it is necessary fr us t have labr classes and jin in different labr activities.(it固定句型)
② Firstly, we shuld take the labr classes seriusly, which will help us learn sme basic life skills.(which引导的非限定性定语从句)
(八)
8.有人说,劳动创造生活;有人说,劳动带来美好。请根据下表中内容和所给提示,谈一谈你对劳动的看法,说一说你经常从事的劳动工作及其个人感受。
提示:(1)What labr wuld yu like t d?
(2)Why d yu d it?
注意:(1)短文须包括表格中的全部信息和提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
As we knw, labr can create a clrful life and bring happy things.
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【答案】例文
As we knw, labr can create a clrful life and bring happy things. It helps us master basic life skills and develp the right view f life. As a middle schl student, I can d the dishes, sweep the flr and fld clthes at hme. I can water plants and sweep flrs at schl. Of curse, I can als g t cmmunity t d vlunteer activities. I can help ld peple, visit sick kids. Thrugh these activities, I can imprve my physical health. Let’s act! Let’s take part in such labr mre.
Why nt jin me and imprve yurself thrugh labr educatin?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,点明劳动的好处(已给出)。
第二步,结合自己的经历谈谈自己喜欢做的劳动。
第三步,介绍喜欢做这些劳动的原因,及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①basic life skills 基本生活技能
②sweep the flr扫地
③g t cmmunity去社区
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Let’s take part in such labr mre.(祈使句)
②Why nt jin me and imprve yurself thrugh labr educatin?(Why nt句型)
1.(2023·青海西宁·统考中考真题)为提高自理能力,适应未来发展,青少年应学会做日常家务,培养必备生活技能,如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Ding Chres Makes Me Better” 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
要点提示:1.你会做哪些家务?2.你想学哪些家务?为什么?3.对你有何帮助和意义?
Ding Chres Makes Me Better
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【答案】A pssible versin:
Ding Chres Makes Me Better
As teenagers, ding chres is ne f the mst imprtant life skills in ur daily life.
My mum always encurages me and teaches me t d chres. She wants me t learn mre life skills and take gd care f myself in the future. Thanks t her help, I can make simple fd, tidy my rm, wash clthes and take the dg fr walks. Recently I have als learned t make ckies in my labr class at schl. Later, I hpe t learn hw t ck beef ndles, because my family are fnd f them. Flwer arranging is anther skill that I want t learn because it can keep me calm and imprve my life. During learning, I can have a better cmmunicatin with my parents.
Ding chres makes me mre independent, cnfident and sciable. The mre chres I can d, the better life I will have!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍做家务的重要性;
第二步,分享自己会做的家务以及希望学哪些家务,并说说明原因;
第三步,介绍做家务给我带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①encurage sb t d sth鼓励某人做某事
②take gd care f好好照顾
③be fnd f喜欢
[高分句型]
①As teenagers, ding chres is ne f the mst imprtant life skills in ur daily life.(动名词作主语)
②The mre chres I can d, the better life I will have!(the+比较级,the+比较级)
(2023·内蒙古通辽·统考中考真题)
勤劳是中华民族的优秀传统美德,青少年要继承并发扬这一传统美德。请结合下列提示及自身实际,以“Ding Husewrk”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示:
1. 请列举你经常做的家务活;
2. 你还打算学做什么家务及原因;
3. 谈谈你对做家务的看法。
要求:
1. 思路清晰,语句通顺,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
Ding Husewrk
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【答案】例文:
Ding Husewrk
Ding husewrk plays an imprtant part in middle schl students’ lives. S I ften d husewrk, such as making beds, washing dishes, sweeping the flr.
I can’t ck. S I’m ging t learn t ck meals s that my parents can have meals after a-day hard wrk.
As fr me, I think middle schl students shuld d husewrk. In rder t make urselves better persns, it is necessary fr us t d husewrk at hme in ur free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体列举你经常做的家务活;
第二步,介绍你还打算学做什么家务及原因;
第三步,最后谈谈你对做家务的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①play an imprtant part in起重要作用
②such as比如
③as fr至于
[高分句型]
①Ding husewrk plays an imprtant part in middle schl students’ lives.(动名词作主语)
②S I’m ging t learn t ck meals s that my parents can have meals after a-day hard wrk.(s that引导的目的状语从句)
(2023·山东临沂·统考中考真题)
作为家庭的一员,每个人都有做家务的责任和义务。请以“My Experience f Ding Husewrk”为题,根据以下提示与要求,用英语写一篇短文。提示:
1. What husewrk d yu usually d?
2. Tell an experience f ding husewrk.
3. What have yu learned frm it?
要求:
1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分;
2.不少于80词。
My Experience f Ding Husewrk
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【答案】例文
My Experience f Ding Husewrk
As a family member, it’s ur duty t help ur parents d husewrk.
Last Sunday, when my parents went ut shpping t buy fd fr lunch, I began t clean my huse. First, I swept the flr and wiped the table. Then, I cllected all the bks and ther things and put them in place. Finally, I tk all the rubbish ut. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt s happy at that time. S I keep ding husewrk, such as sweeping the flr r tidying the rm.
Sharing the husewrk with ur parents means shwing lve t them. S I suggest all f us shuld take actin frm nw n.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明帮助做家务是我们的责任;
第二步,具体阐述你做家务的经历以及你经常做的家务;
第三步,最后表达你从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
② begin t d开始做
③ at that time那时
④ such as比如
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday, when my parents went ut shpping t buy fd fr lunch, I began t clean my huse.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Sharing the husewrk with ur parents means shwing lve t them.(动名词短语作主语)
(2023·四川眉山·统考中考真题)
劳动创造美好生活,劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生,请你根据下表要点,以“Labr is Glrius (劳动光荣)”为题,向校报“英语园地”栏目投稿。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Labr is Glrius
It’s well knwn that labr is glrius.
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【答案】例文
Labr is Glrius
It’s well knwn that labr is glrius. As a middle schl student, I ften d sme labr activities in everyday life. Fr example, I clean the classrm and playgrund with my classmates at schl. I ck dishes, wash clthes and tidy rms at hme. And in the cmmunity, I wrk as a vlunteer t help the ld r disabled.
By ding these, I’ve learnt sme basic life skills t take care f myself. Besides, I have nt nly gt the strng feeling f satisfactin but als becme mre and mre independent and respnsible.
All in all, labr creates a better life s let’s take an active part in ding the daily labr.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据表格内容介绍一些劳动实践;
第三步,介绍从劳动中的收获;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①wrk as充当
②all in all总的来说
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①And in the cmmunity, I wrk as a vlunteer t help the ld r disabled.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②All in all, labr creates a better life s let’s take an active part in ding the daily labr.(s引导的并列句)
(2022·甘肃甘南·统考中考真题)
某英语报社组织关于学生做家务的讨论,有人赞同,有人反对。请你根据提示,选择一个你同意的观点,用英语写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。
注意:
1.依据你选择的观点,将标题补充完整;
2.理由必须包括表中你所选择观点的相应内容,并补充一个理由;
3.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;
4.词数:80~100词。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
________ with ding chres
We’ve had a discussin abut ding chres. Sme students agree, while thers dn’t. I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 Agree with ding chres
We’ve had a discussin abut ding chres. Sme students agree, while thers dn’t. I think ding chres is gd fr us. First f all, ding chres can develp students’ independence. In this way, students can d many things by themselves. Secnd, ding chres can help students learn t lk after themselves. Last but nt least, ding chres can prmte the develpment f students’ brains and imprve their learning ability.
In a wrd, as students, we shuld d mre chres, which is gd fr urselves and ur families.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,将标题补充完整;
第二步,根据表格给出的理由描述你的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way以这种方式
②last but nt least最后但同样重要的
③in a wrd总之
[高分句型]
①ding chres can develp students’ independence.(动名词作主语)
②we shuld d mre chres, which is gd fr urselves and ur families.(which引导的非限制定语从句)
(2022·内蒙古鄂尔多斯·统考中考真题)
近日,教育部发布《义务教育劳动课程标准》,今年秋季,劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在生活中,做家务就是最常见的一种劳动。请以Let’s d husewrk为题写作,倡议更多的青少年加入到做家务的行列中来。
要点:
1.你能做的家务;
2.做家务的益处;
3.倡议更多的青少年加入到做家务的行列。
写作要求:
1.书写工整,卷面整洁,行文连贯,结构完整;
2.包含以上所有要点内容,可适当发挥;
3.词数:不少于 80 词;
4.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Let’s d husewrk
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【答案】例文
Let’s d husewrk
In ur daily life, ding husewrk is the mst cmmn kind f labr. I can d sme kinds f husewrk, such as ding the dishes, sweeping the flr, cking and making the bed.
Labr educatin has been included in the educatin f middle schls and primary schls in China. I think it’s necessary because it is gd fr ur health. We can relax frm the hard study by ding labr.
It’s als ur duty t share sme husewrk. Besides, ding sme hard husewrk is a kind f physical exercise. As teenagers, we shuld take actin t d what we can t help ur family!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:要求以Let’s d husewrk为题,结合提示要点进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己能做的家务;
第二步,介绍做家务的重要性和好处;
第三步,建议更多的青少年加入到做家务的行列中。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be gd fr对……有好处
③a kind f一种
④take actin采取行动
[高分句型]
①I think it’s necessary because it is gd fr ur health.(省略that的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
②As teenagers, we shuld take actin t d what we can t help ur family!(what引导的宾语从句)
(2022·四川资阳·统考中考真题)
假如你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Tm发邮件询问你对中学生做家务劳动的看法。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
1.赞成中学生做家务劳动,并阐述理由;
2.介绍你常做的家务劳动,并谈谈感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tm,
Glad t receive yur e-mail!
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tm,
Glad t receive yur e-mail! I think it is imprtant fr students t d husewrk in ur everyday life. On the ne hand, ding husewrk can help us learn sme basic living skills t lk after urselves. On the ther hand, we shuld d ur part in keeping the huse clean and tidy.
Fr me, I usually d the dishes, clean up my bedrm, take ut the rubbish and s n. It makes me very happy and I als feel prud that I am becming mre and mre independent.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行回复,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍对中学生做家务劳动的看法”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“赞成中学生做家务劳动,并阐述理由和介绍你常做的家务劳动,并谈谈感受”两个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①d husewrk做家务
②lk after照顾
③clean up清理,打扫
[高分句型]
①I think it is imprtant fr students t d husewrk in ur everyday life.(省略that的宾语从句和It固定句型)
②On the ne hand, ding husewrk can help us learn sme basic living skills t lk after urselves. On the ther hand, we shuld d ur part in keeping the huse clean and tidy.(On the ne the ther hand结构)
你对劳动教育的看法
be gd fr health; relax frm the hard study...
你自身的劳动经历及感受
at hme: d the dishes...
at schl: clean the classrm...
你对劳动教育课程的建议
ffer different kinds f labr classes; hld cmpetitins abut labr skills ...
We Shuld Help Parents D Husewrk
What husewrk d yu ften d at hme?
Hw d yu feel abut ding husewrk?
Why d we have t d husewrk?
Kinds f Labr
At hme
d the dishes, clean rms, ...
At schl
sweep flrs, water plants, ...
At cmmunity
help ld peple, visit sick kids, ...
Meaning f Labr
Imprve ur physical health...
劳动实践
在学校,和同学一起打扫教室和操场;
在家里,做饭、洗衣服、整理房间;
在社区,做志愿者,帮助老人或残疾人。
劳动收获
学到一些基本生活技能,学会照顾自己;
获得满足感,变得更加独立和有责任心。
发出倡议
……
Agree with ding chres
Disagree with ding chres
●develp students’ independence;
●learn t lk after themselves;
●...
●waste f students’ time;
●is the parents’ jb;
●...
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