书面表达15篇(湖南名校模拟)-2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(湖南专用)

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书面表达15篇(湖南名校模拟)
1．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）俗话说：“读万卷书，行万里路。”你的英国笔友Jhn不明白这句话的意思，写信向你咨询。假如你是李华，请根据来信内容用英语给他写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
Recently I have read a bk abut China. In the bk, there is an ld Chinese saying “Read 10,000 bks and travel 10,000 miles.” What des it mean? Wuld yu please tell me abut it? D yu like reading? Culd yu tell me smething abut yur favrite bk?
I hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Jhn
要求：
(1) 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
(2) 80词左右 (开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(3) 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
(4) 卷面整洁，书写美观。
Dear Jhn,
Thanks fr yur letter. I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut the Chinese saying “Read 10, 000 bks and travel 10, 000 miles.”
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2．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）假如你是李华，将参加今年暑假的英国伦敦游学(study tur)活动。英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住，并征询你对游学活动的建议。请阅读以下信息，写一封电子邮件回复。
(1) 所写内容必须包括某一家所有信息及你选择的理由;
(2) 结合自身情况提出1–2点游学活动建议；
(3) 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(5) 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read the infrmatin abut tw families. And I have decided t live in_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2024·湖南邵阳·二模）学习成绩与学习习惯密切相关。你身边是否有一些同学不但聪明，而且还很刻苦，学习效率就是不高。不良的学习习惯，比如注意力不集中或不合理的时间安排等因素，都可能导致学习效率不高。请以Hw t develp gd study habits为主题，写一篇不少于80字的短文。注意结合自身情况分析原因，并给出合理可行的建议。
要点：
1. 说明你或周边的朋友是否存在学习效率不高的问题；
2. 分析出现学习效率不高的原因，并举例说明；
3. 给出建议。
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4．（2024·湖南娄底·二模）假设你是李华，你校将于下周举办“活动周”，“活动周”共有三个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息，写一篇英文短文，介绍“活动周”三个项目的内容与意义。
要求：
(1)表格已列出项目一和项目二，请补充项目三；
(2)文中不得出现真实校名和人名等；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)80词左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
The Activity Week
Our schl is ging t hld “The Activity Week” next week.
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5．（2024·湖南怀化·一模）假如你叫李华，是光明中学初三(1)班的一名学生，你校学生会(Student Unin)正在招募学生干部，你很想加入，请根据下面提供的信息用英语给学生会主席(Chairman)写一封自荐信。
提示：
1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student frm class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle Schl. I’d like t be a member f Student Unin.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
6．（2024·湖南株洲·一模）你校举办了主题为“Being thankful”的毕业晚会。请你根据以下的信息和提示为校报英语角写一篇报道。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
T celebrate ur graduatin and express ur thanks fr the past years, ur schl successfully rganized a graduatin party n June 25th.
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7．（2024·湖南湘西·一模）在新学期，学校打算增设一间学生活动室(student activity rm)，同学们纷纷就活动室的用途开展了讨论。假如你是校报记者，请综合同学们的建议和你自己的意向，写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
要求：（1）介绍下表中的设想，并联系实际或发挥想象，补充自己的观点；
（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
New Student Activity Rm
The new term is here. Our schl is ging t set up ne mre student activity rm. Different students have different ideas.
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8．（2024·湖南永州·一模）日本政府不顾国际社会的坚决反对，于2023年8月24日启动福岛核污染水排海，据统计，福岛核污水排海至少要持续30年，这将对全世界的海洋造成极大的污染。国际海洋日即将来临，假如你是李华，请根据以下表格和提示，以“Prtecting Our Oceans frm Pllutin”为题，写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家保护我们的海洋环境。
要求：
1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3. 不少于80个单词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：release排放 nuclear wastewater核污水 chemicals化学品
Prtecting Our Oceans frm Pllutin
Our cean is a vast and beautiful place, full f mysterius creatures and clrful cral reefs (珊瑚礁).
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9．（2024·湖南岳阳·二模）请根据要点提示写一篇英文短文，给学校英文杂志社投稿。
要点提示：
1. What’s yur biggest prblem in the past year?
2. Hw did yu slve it? And what did yu get frm it?
3. What’s yur reslutins in the new year? (At least 2 reslutins. )
注意：1.词数80以上，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息。
Hw time flies!
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10．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）根据要求完成短文写作。学校参加了国际志愿者项目（Glbal Vlunteers），面向全校招募志愿者培养对象，请你结合以下提示，写一封申请邮件。
要求：
(1)短文必须包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)80词左右（给出的开头内容不计入总词数）；
(3)不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Sir r Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like t becme a member f Glbal Vlunteers.
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11．（2024·湖南长沙·一模）前任联合国秘书长安南指出，志愿精神的核心是服务、团结的理想和共同使这个世界变得更加美好的信念。这表达了人们对志愿服务的由衷赞美，同时也让志愿者的精神“奉献、友爱、互助、进步”深入人心。越来越多的中学生也加入到了志愿者的行列。在4月24日的“校园开放日”中，你非常幸运地与同学们一起担任了本次开放日的志愿者，参与了提前打扫校园、为来访的老师和家长们介绍学校、在课前引导他们去往公开课(pen classes)的教室等活动。请你以“An Unfrgettable Experience”为主题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你这次当志愿者的经历和收获，并呼吁同学们加入到志愿者行列为大家服务。写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实人名和校名）。
An Unfrgettable Experience
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12．（23-24九年级下·湖南常德·期中）初中生活即将结束，你会迎来一个轻松且漫长的暑假，你有什么打算呢？请根据下图提示，以“My Summer Vacatin Plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文， 谈谈你将如何安排假期，放松身心的同时，为将要到来的高中学习生活做准备。

要求：
1.短文必须包含图中的全部信息，并适当发挥；
2.词数：不少于80词（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
My Summer Vacatin Plan
The summer vacatin is cming. Here are my plans fr it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I’m lking frward t spending a happy summer vacatin.
13．（23-24九年级下·湖南长沙·期中）在春节热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，贾玲通过坚持不懈的努力，实现了自己的人生价值，过上了“热辣滚烫”的人生。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气。坚持做好每一件小事，成为更好的自己。请以“Hw t Imprve Myself”以题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
要求：
1.应包含思维导图提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、连贯；
2.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称等信息。
Dear classmates,
It’s my hnr t make a speech here ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu!
14．（23-24九年级下·湖南常德·期中）近日，学校Campus英语报正在举行以“My favurite pht taken in the schl”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你选择在校园中拍摄的一张照片，简要描述其内容，并谈谈该照片对你的重要意义。注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have cllected sme meaningful phts taken in the schl. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）作为中国人，我们理应学好汉语。随着中国国际地位的提高，有部分人认为现在学好汉语就可以了，没有必要再学习英语了。你认为还需要学英语吗？近日，你校校园网英语论坛上正在开展以“Is it necessary t learn English?”为主题的讨论。请你写一篇英语短文，结合现在的社会现状和自身的经历，谈谈你的看法并给出相关建议。
提示：
（1）Is it necessary t learn English?
（2）Why d yu think s?
（3）What advice can yu give t the peple wh want t learn English well?
要求：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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The Green family an ld cuple n children
tw dgs
 a flat, in the centre f Lndn
 Wi-Fi
 cst: 350 punds
The Black family a middle-aged cuple a junir schl by
a primary girl
 a huse, a little far frm Lndn
 a garden
 cst: 230 punds
Prject
A Sprts Day
A Vlunteer Day
A．
Activities
·play ping-png
·...
·clean the Hngshuiling Park
·...
·...
·...
Meanings
·keep healthy
·...
·prtect the envirnment
·...
·...
·...
Abilities
1. be gd at cmmunicating 2. ...
Hbbies
1. ding sprts 2. ...
Reasns
1. ...
Time
◆ frm 7:00 pm t 8:30 pm, June 25th
Place
◆ the schl music hall
Hsts
◆ Junjun and Yunyun
Tpic
◆ Being thankful
Headmaster speech
◆ Yu’re the future
Perfrmances
◆ Sng
Grwing up I’ll d like yu
◆ Pem reciting
Teachers, yu’re the diamnds in my heart
◆ Dance
Fill in the campus with lve
Feelings
◆ …
What were the prblems?
The cean was plluted. Mre and mre marine life (海洋生物) is dying frm pllutin.
What caused the prblems?
Plastic waste, ships’ waste il spills (泼洒) , chemicals frm factries, nuclear wastewater. . .
What shuld we d?
Dn’t thrw rubbish int the sea.
Stp factries frm puring chemical waste water.
. . . . . .
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Jhn,
Thanks fr yur letter. I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut the Chinese saying “Read 10,000 bks and travel 10,000 miles. “
It means that it is imprtant t read ten thusand bks and walk ten thusand miles. It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn mre knwledge. I like reading because I can learn a lt frm bks. I usually read after I finish my hmewrk r befre I g t bed. I als like travelling. The visit t Beijing last year was my favrite trip. I visited the places f interest in Beijing and learned abut its traditinal culture. I really understand the meaning f “He wh des nt reach the Great Wall is nt a true man.”
D yu like travelling? Have yu ever been t China? I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括来信中所提要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍回信的目的，从而引出话题；
第二步，解释“读万卷书，行万里路。”的含义，并回答笔友来信中的问题；
第三步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① places f interest 名胜古迹
② lk frward t 期待
［高分句型］
① I like reading because I can learn a lt frm bks. (because引导原因状语从句)
② It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn mre knwledge. (宾语从句)
2．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read the infrmatin abut tw families. And I have decided t live in the centre f Lndn with the Green family. I chse them because they have a flat with Wi-Fi, which is gd because I can use the internet t study and talk t my family at hme. The Green family seems quiet and nice because they are an ld cuple with n children but have tw dgs. I lve dgs!
I knw it csts mre t stay with them, but I think it’s wrth it because f the lcatin and the peaceful hme. This will help me fcus n my studies and enjy Lndn t.
Thank yu fr helping me with my chice!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：适当使用文中所给信息，做到逻辑合理，上下连贯，并且表述清楚理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山说明自己的决定并给出具体理由；
第二步，结合表格中所给信息，运用正确的句子表达表格中信息对于自身的某些发展有哪些好处；
第三步，解释选择价格更贵的的理由并给予对方所提供的帮助以感谢。
[高分词汇]
①seems quiet and nice 似乎是安静并好的
②it’s wrth it它是值得的
③fcus n my studies专注于我的学习
[亮点句型]
①I chse them because they have a flat with Wi-Fi, which is gd because I can use the internet t study and talk t my family at hme.（非限定性定语从句）
②I knw it csts mre t stay with them, but I think it’s wrth it because f the lcatin and the peaceful hme.（宾语从句）
3．例文
I have nticed that sme f my classmates are nt achieving high study efficiency, thugh they are intelligent and hardwrking. There are tw reasns why they have these prblems.
One pssible reasn fr lw study efficiency is the lack f fcus when they study. Fr example, sme students are easily distracted by their phnes r scial media while studying. Anther reasn is pr time management. Many students tend t leave their hmewrk r studying until the last minute. Althugh they always finish their hmewrk n time, they dn’t d it carefully. T develp gd study habits and imprve study efficiency, it is imprtant t address these issues. Firstly, it is crucial t create a suitable study envirnment. This can be dne by turning ff smartphnes r placing them in a different rm while studying. Additinally, planning specific study time each day and keeping it can help with time management. Breaking dwn tasks int smaller can als lead t better study habits. Seeking help frm teachers r classmates can further enhance understanding and imprve efficiency.
All in all, develping gd study habits is essential fr imprving study efficiency.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明你或周边的朋友是否存在学习效率不高的问题；
第二步，分析出现学习效率不高的原因，并举例说明；
第三步，最后给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
① be the lack f缺乏
② n time准时
③ seek help寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①One pssible reasn fr lw study efficiency is the lack f fcus when they study.（时间状语从句）
②Althugh they always finish their hmewrk n time, they dn’t d it carefully. （让步状语从句）
4．One pssible versin:
The Activity Week
Our schl is ging t hld “The Activity Week” next week. During the Activity week, we will be able t jin three prjects.
The first ne is A Sprts Day. In this prject, we can play ping-png, basketball and vlleyball, which will help us keep healthy and feel relaxed. The secnd prject is A Vlunteer Day, in which we will clean the Hngshuiling Park and the Renmin Street. It will help prtect the envirnment and make ur life better. The last prject is A Talent Shw Day. This prject can help imprve urselves by giving us a chance t sing and dance.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“活动周”共有三个项目；
第二步，具体介绍“活动周”三个项目的内容与意义。
[亮点词汇]
①be able t d能够做
②help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
In this prject, we can play ping-png, basketball and vlleyball, which will help us keep healthy and feel relaxed.（定语从句）
5．例文
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student frm class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle Schl. I’d like t be a member f Student Unin.
I like ding sprts, s I am quite healthy and fit. I like studying very much and ften help my classmates with their lessns. I get n well with thers, s I have many friends. Cmmunicating with thers is ne f my abilities. I think it’s very imprtant as a member f Student Unin. And I’d like t help thers, t.
If I can be a member f Student Unin, I’ll be able t make mre friends. And I can d mre fr thers.
I hpe I can be received. Lk frward t yur answer.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格提示介绍自己爱好和能力；
第二步，介绍自己想加入的原因；
第三步，最后表达希望和期待。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
② get n well with sb和某人相处很好
③ be able t d sth能够做某事
[高分句型]
If I can be a member f Student Unin, I’ll be able t make mre friends.（条件状语从句）
6．Pssible versins:
A
T celebrate ur graduatin and express ur thanks fr the past years, ur schl successfully rganized a graduatin party n June 25th. The event themed Being Thankful was hsted by Junjun and Yunyun in the schl music hall.
Frm 7:00 p.m. t 8:30 p.m., we enjyed several wnderful perfrmances. I will never frget the heartfelt sng, Grwing up I’ll D like Yu. The pem reciting called Teachers, Yu’re the Diamnds in My Heart, and the dance named Fill in the Campus with Lve made us cry. The headmaster’s inspiring speech, Yu’re the Future, filled us with hpe and encuragement.
As I watched the perfrmances, I felt a deep sense f appreciatin fr all the peple wh have supprted and guided me during my schl years. I will always remember where I came frm.
B
T celebrate ur graduatin and express ur thanks fr the past years, ur schl successfully rganized a graduatin party n June 25th. Its tpic was Being Thankful, which was frm 7:00 p.m. t 8:30 p.m. and was hsted by Junjun and Yunyun in the schl music hall.
At the beginning f the party, the speech, Yu’re the Future, was delivered by ur dear headmaster. Als, there were clrful shws. It was the sng Grwing up I’ll D like Yu that encuraged us t meet a better self. What’s mre, yu culd never imagine hw great the pem is, Teachers, Yu’re the Diamnds in My Heart. Fill in the Campus with Lve reminded us that the best things in life are free.
Behind these perfrmances lies the true meaning f the party: we shuld never fail t be thankful t the peple arund us.
C
T celebrate ur graduatin and express ur thanks fr the past years, ur schl successfully rganized a graduatin party n June 25th. Junjun and Yunyun hsted the party themed Being Thankful in ur schl music hall frm 7:00 p.m. t 8:30 p.m..
At first, ur headmaster gave a mving speech called Yu’re the Future, which tuched us all deeply. After that, there were sme amazing perfrmances. The sng, Grwing up I’ll D like Yu, and the pem reciting, Teachers, Yu’re the Diamnds in My Heart, reminded us f the imprtant lessns we had learned frm ur teachers. Finally, an energetic dance named Fill in the Campus with Lve ended the evening with a great cheer.
The party made us realize the value f ur schl memries and encuraged us t carry the spirit f being thankful int ur future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍晚会的主题、时间、地点和主持人；
第二步，具体介绍晚会的内容，例如校长的演讲、歌曲表演、诗朗诵和舞蹈表演等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达晚会给自己的触动，比如要懂得感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①inspiring speech 鼓舞人心的演讲
② 用……填满……
③encuragement 鼓励
④a deep sense f appreciatin 深深的感激之情
[高分句型]
①As I watched the perfrmances, I felt a deep sense f appreciatin fr all the peple wh have supprted and guided me during my schl years.（wh引导的定语从句）
②I will always remember where I came frm.（where引导的宾语从句）
7．例文
New Student Activity Rm
The new term is here. Our schl is ging t set up ne mre student activity rm. Different students have different ideas.
Sme students want t set up a Reading Crner because they want t read different kinds f bks and magazines. They think reading can pen up eyes and enrich the after-schl activities. Sme students wuld like t pen a Mini Wrkshp. They can design and make sme mdels by hand in the club. Mini wrkshp can imprve the practical abilities and learn t wrk with thers.
I think we’d better make it a Release Rm. Students may feel sad and helpless when meeting trubles in life. If these prblems aren’t slved well, they may bring serius results. S it is imprtant fr them t have a rm t release. Students can play enjyable games, sing their favrite sngs and chat with teachers in there.
I can’t wait t have a Release Rm in ur schl. I believe students are lking frward t it as well!
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头已经给出，注意内容的衔接，内容应该包括表中的同学们的设想和自己的意见，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤］
第一步，引出主题，建立一个新的活动室；
第二步，介绍同学们的建议；
第三步，介绍自己的设想；
第四步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇］
①set up建立
②want t想要
③by hand用手
④can’t wait t d sth. 迫不及待做某事
[高分句型］
①Sme students want t set up a Reading Crner because they want t read different kinds f bks and magazines. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②If these prblems aren’t slved well, they may bring serius results. (if引导的条件状语从句)
③I believe students are lking frward t it as well! (省略that的宾语从句)
8．例文
Prtecting Our Oceans frm Pllutin
Our cean is a vast and beautiful place, full f mysterius creatures and clrful cral reefs (珊瑚礁). But nw the cean is plluted. Mre and mre marine life is dying frm pllutin. Plastic waste, ship waste il, factry chemicals, nuclear wastewater have led t increasingly severe marine pllutin.
It’s ur duty t prtect the cean. First f all, we shuld nt pur the rubbish int the sea. Next, ur gvernment shuld take actin t stp factries frm puring chemical waste water.
Frm my pint f view, we shuld stp plluting the cean frm nw n. We all need t raise awareness f these prblems. It nw becmes necessary fr us t take actin nw.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“海洋是个美丽的地方”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述内容。介绍海洋环境被污染的原因及应采取哪些应对措施；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家保护海洋环境。
[亮点词汇]
①stp ding sth.停止做某事
②把……倒入
③take actin采取行动
[高分句型]
①It’s ur duty t prtect the cean.(it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语)
②But nw the cean is plluted.(一般现在时的被动语态)
9．例文
Hw time flies! My middle schl life is cming t an end.
During the three years, my biggest prblem was that I had t much hmewrk. Hmewrk seemed endless fr me, which made me stay up late and feel very tired every day. Hw can I deal with the prblem? I cncentrated mre n my study in class and made hmewrk plans. I did the hmewrk as quickly as pssible instead f being slw. As a result, I spent less time n hmewrk, and I wasn’t wrried any mre. As we knw, practice makes perfect. Cmplaining r waiting can’t help. Instead we shuld be active t face ur prblems.
In the new year, I’m ging t get a better grade in my study. The next reslutin has smething t d with imprving the relatinships with my parents. I will spend mre time with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般过去时与一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最大的问题；
第二步，介绍如何解决问题以及自己的收获；
第三步，最后介绍自己的新年决心。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up熬夜
②deal with应对
③cncentrated n专注于
[高分句型]
Hmewrk seemed endless fr me, which made me stay up late and feel very tired every day.（定语从句）
10．例文
Dear Sir r Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like t becme a member f Glbal Vlunteers.
I really enjy helping peple and think vlunteering is fun! I am gd at rganizing games and I lve t teach thers new things. At schl, I help my classmates with their hmewrk, and we ften play sprts tgether after classes. I think being a vlunteer will let me help even mre peple and make new friends.
I als want t learn abut ther cultures and hw kids in different cuntries live. I believe that being a part f Glbal Vlunteers will teach me a lt and help me grw up t be a kind persn wh cares abut the wrld.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my applicatin!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的四个主要内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好和能力；
②第二步，介绍自己的想法；
③第三步，说明自己希望加入的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd at擅长
②make friends交朋友
③learn abut了解
[高分句型]
I believe that being a part f Glbal Vlunteers will teach me a lt and help me grw up t be a kind persn wh cares abut the wrld.（宾语从句，定语从句）
11．参考范文：
An Unfrgettable Experience
Last April 24th, ur schl celebrated Open Day, and I had the wnderful pprtunity t vlunteer.
Starting early, my classmates and I cleaned and prepared ur campus, feeling prud t create a welcming envirnment. Later, I guided visiting parents and teachers, sharing ur schl’s histry and student life. The highlight was leading them t pen classes, witnessing their excitement and curisity.
This experience taught me the jy f vlunteering—it’s nt just abut helping thers but als enriching urselves. I encurage all my classmates t experience this fulfillment by jining vlunteer effrts. Tgether, we can make a big difference!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己做了4月24日的“校园开放日”中志愿者；
第二步，具体分享自己这次当志愿者的经历和收获；
第三步，最后呼吁同学们加入到志愿者行列为大家服务。
[亮点词汇]
① nt als...不但……而且……
② encurage sb t d sth鼓励某人做某事
③ make a difference起作用
[高分句型]
Starting early, my classmates and I cleaned and prepared ur campus, feeling prud t create a welcming envirnment.（现在分词作状语）
12．例文
My Summer Vacatin Plan
The summer vacatin is cming. Here are my plans fr it.
First, it’s imprtant t have healthy eating habits. I’ll eat mre fruit and vegetables, and try t eat less junk fd. At the same time, I’ll keep exercising and get enugh sleep every day. Secnd, I plan t take up sme hbbies, like taking phts r playing the guitar. Besides, I’ll spend mre time reading bks t imprve myself. And I’m ging t try my best t practice English listening and speaking by watching English mvies. If pssible, I’ll travel with my friends. Last, I am ging t help my parents with husewrk, such as ding the dishes, sweeping the flr and s n.
All in all, I’m lking frward t spending a happy and meaningful summer vacatin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己的暑假计划。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①and s n等等
②at the same time同时
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①First, it’s imprtant t have health y eating habits.（it’s adj. t d sth句型）
②I’ll eat mre fruit and vegetables, and try t eat less junk fd. （并列句）
13．例文：
Dear classmates,
It’s my hnr t make a speech here. The tpic f my speech is Hw t Imprve Myself.
As a ninth-grader, I believe we all have the desire t be better. Here are sme tips that might help us achieve ur gals. Firstly, make a plan. We shuld set specific and achievable gals fr urselves. Secndly, eat healthily. A balanced diet is essential fr ur physical and mental health. We shuld avid junk fd and sugary drinks and chse fruits, vegetables, and lean prtein instead. Lastly, take exercise. Exercise is nt nly gd fr ur physical health but als ur mental health. It can reduce stress and imprve ur md. We can jin sprts teams r g fr a run in the park.
In cnclusin, by making a plan, eating healthily, and taking exercise, we can imprve urselves in many aspects. Let’s take actin and becme the best versin f urselves.
Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明演讲主题，如何提升自己；
第二步，详细介绍如何提升自己的方法，包括制定计划、吃得健康、做运动等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①set gals设定目标
②be essential fr对……重要
③be gd fr对……有好处
④take actin采取行动
[高分句型]
①As a ninth-grader, I believe we all have the desire t be better. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Exercise is nt nly gd fr ur physical health but als ur mental health. (nt nly…but als…句型)
14．例文
1
I have cllected sme meaningful phts taken in the schl. Amng them, ne pht stands ut the mst. It shws a grup f students gathered arund a tree, having a gardening activity. In the pht, we are planting flwers and cleaning up the surrunding area.
This pht hlds significant imprtance t me. It reminds me f the imprtance f teamwrk and the influence we can make when we wrk tgether twards a cmmn gal. Mst imprtantly, this activity encurages us t make ur schl a greener and mre beautiful place.
Every time I lk at this pht, it fills me with a sense f pride and happiness, which brings me back t the mst meaningful mment.
2
I have cllected sme meaningful phts taken in the schl. Amng them, there is ne that hlds a special place in my heart. In the pht, I am surrunded by my classmates, all cheering and smiling.
This pht is imprtant t me because it reminds me f the strng cnnectin and teamwrk we share. It was a day filled with jy and excitement, and this pht is a beautiful memry f that time. It als reminds me f the imprtance f unity and supprt, bth n the sprts field and in life.
3
I have cllected sme meaningful phts taken in the schl. Amng them, there is ne that hlds special imprtance fr me. In the pht, my friends and I are gathered under a tree, laughing and chatting during a sunny afternn. It captures a mment f camaraderie and happiness, reflecting the strng bnd we share as classmates.
This pht is imprtant t me because it reminds me f the happy mments we’ve shared tgether in schl. It stands fr ur priceless friendships and unfrgettable memries. Whenever I lk at this pht, it brings a smile t my face and fills my heart with warmth.
In shrt, this pht is a valuable mment f my schl days, reminding me f the wnderful experiences and friendships that have enriched my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：结合题干介绍在校园拍摄的一张照片的内容，并阐述该照片对自己的意义；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，收集了一些在学校拍摄的有意义的照片；
第二步，介绍某一张照片的内容；
第三步，谈谈该照片对自己的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up 打扫
②remind sb. f ... 使某人想起……
③encurage sb. t d sth. 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It reminds me f the imprtance f teamwrk and the influence we can make when we wrk tgether twards a cmmn gal.（定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句）
②Every time I lk at this pht, it fills me with a sense f pride and happiness, which brings me back t the mst meaningful mment.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
15．例文
Is it necessary t learn English? With the rise f China’s internatinal status, I think it is imprtant t learn English well.
Learning English well can nt nly help yu get gd grades, but als help yu cmmunicate with freign friends. Take myself fr example. Last Saturday I met a freigner wh asked fr directins n the rad, but I culdn’t say exactly what I meant, s I culdn’t help him. Thrugh this, I understand the imprtance f learning English well. If yu want t learn English well, yu can d many things, such as making wrd cards, reading English textbks, studying with friends and s n.
Finally, I wish yur English is getting better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明学习英语很重要。
第二步，具体介绍为什么自己觉得学好英语很重要以及对学好英语的一些建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① it is imprtant t d sth.做某事很重要
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③d wrd cards做单词卡片
[高分句型]
①Learning English well can nt nly help yu get gd grades, but als help yu cmmunicate with freign friends.(nt als 不仅……而且……)
②If yu want t learn English well, yu can d many things, such as making wrd cards, reading English textbks, studying with friends and s n.(If 引导的条件状语从句)