高中考试英语11.应用文之慰问信

这是一份高中考试英语11.应用文之慰问信，共8页。试卷主要包含了未及时回信的原因；，你假期的打算等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tm一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：
1.未及时回信的原因；
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)
注意：1. 词数：120-150；
2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Tm,
Hw is everything ging? I feel terribly srry fr missing the chance f answering yur letter in time. Yu knw, I’ve been preparing fr the final exams these days, s I frgt t write back. In yur letter, yu asked me fr my plans n summer vacatin. Nw, I am writing t tell yu sme specific details.
Overall, three things will make my summer vacatin meaningful. T start with, ding a part-time jb is my dream and I intend t wrk as a salesman because nt nly can I earn mney by myself, but als it will braden my hrizns. In additin, it is a fabulus chice t visit sme famus scenic spts such as Munt Tai during the vacatin, in rder t enjy appealing scenery and make mre friends. What is mre, ding vluntary wrk, I think, will make a great cntributin t the sciety, which is able t enrich my life.
I sincerely aplgize again fr my mistake. By the way, what’s yur plan t spend yur summer vacatin? I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本书面表达考查提纲类作文。从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可询问Tm暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际性；而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用ding及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。
【范文点评】
此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：不定式作目的状语：T start with, ding a part-time jb is my dream and I intend t wrk as a salesman because nt nly can I earn mney by myself, but als it will braden my hrizns. 非谓语动词和定语从句：What is mre, ding vluntary wrk, I think, will make a great cntributin t the sciety, which is able t enrich my life.
【经典套路】
第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段：“假期安排”部分
第四段：补充说明+客套话
慰问信(含抗“疫”慰问信)
开头句型
1. I was (awfully) srry t hear that + 句子 (yur team lst the game.)
2. I was shcked t hear f + sth. (yur failure in the exam.)
3. I’m writing t tell yu hw srry I am t hear abut sth. (yur lss …)
4. Knwing yur situatin, I feel terribly srry abut sth.…
中间段句型
1. I quiet understand hw yu feel nw，but ...
我特别能理解你现在的感觉，但...
2. Yu have devted yurself t ...
你在...方面付出了大量的精力和时间
3. But as we all knw, it is extremely difficult t d ...
但是众所周知，做...本身就极其困难
4. T prepare ... , yu have made every effrt.
为了准备这次... ,你已经尽了最大努力
5. It’s nt yur fault t d ...
不是你的错
结尾句型
1. If there is anything yu need me t d, dn’t hesitate t let me knw.
2. If I can d anything fr yu, d let me knw.
3. Remember, we wn’t be far away if yu need any help!
4. I hpe yu can find my encuragement helpful. Best wishes.
必背模板
模板 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ①
Dear ,
I was very srry t hear that .(交代事由) It’s understandable fr yu t .(表明主要观点) Hwever, if yu can adpt different perspectives, .(提出建议)First, it’s nrmal t lse in a basketball match, fr yu can either win r lse. If yu’ve tried yur best, why nt lift yur spirits t face up t(直面)the result? Anyway, . Besides, yu can als . Therefre, if , yu will .I hpe yu can find my encuragement helpful.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
模板 = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ②
Dear______,
I am ______, I am very srry t have heard f yur present situatin that yu are s bitter after ________. / I am shcked at the news abut______________(引出具体实情，表示惋惜和同情)
At present,_________ decides that it will give yu________ when yu receive a letter. That will ffer yu s much curage. I hpe yu will make effrts t vercme all kinds f difficulty, n matter hw hard it is. Yu are sure t make it.(进一步安慰并鼓励对方)
I will try my best t________, which may help yu .It will give mre curage t live n.(表示自己意愿提供帮助)
May yu recver sn./Gd luck and best wishes t yu!(表达愿望与祝福)
Yurs sincerely,
__________________
思路点金
一、题型特点
慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。
二、写作思路
第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；
第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，预测未来；
第三步：表达愿望和祝福。
二、套用句式：
1. I was shcked at the news abut the earthquake in …
听闻……地震的消息我很震惊。
2. On…, an incredible and unknwn earthquake suddenly happened in…,…Prvince.
在……，……省……市突然发生了一场惊人的、未曾预知的地震。
3. We are s srry t hear the news abut the earthquake.
听到地震的消息我们很难过。
4.We are very srry t learn that …
我们非常遗憾地得知……
5.I just heard that yu’ve been n the sickness last week.
我无法告知你当你听到你发生事故我是多么难过。
6.I just can’t tell yu hw srry I was t learn f yur accident.
我刚刚得知上个星期你病了。
7.I was deeply cncerned when I learned that…
当我听说……时，我非常关心
8.I just wanted t let yu knw hw cncerned we are.
我只想要你知道我们是多么担忧。
9.I hpe yu are getting sme relief frm the pain.
我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。
10.We are hping fr yur quick return t health/early recvery/rapid recvery.
我们真心/祈祷你能很快完全康复。
11.We are lking frward t /hping and praying fr yur speedy and full recvery.
我们真心希望你早日康复。
12.Only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster.
我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。
13.Please extend ur deep sympathy t yur family.
请向你的家人转达我们最深切的同情。
14.If there is anything I can d t help yu, please let me knw.
如果需要我的帮助，请告知。
必背范文
假定你是高三学生李华，你的同学王平春节去武汉探亲因新冠状病毒肺炎疫情迅速扩散，他有发热症状而暂时滞留武汉，请你代表全班同学给此时处于焦虑和郁闷中的他写一封英文慰问信。要点如下：
1. 对其表示关心和同情。
2. 对其表示安慰并提供帮助。
3. 表达愿望和祝福。
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Pin,
Knwing that yu are delayed in Wuhan, I am really getting upset abut it. S are ur classmates. I'm writing t cnvey ur cncern t yu n behalf f the class.
Wrds came that Wuhan was in bad cnditin due t the spreading f nvel crnavirus. Hwever, dear friend, there's n sense wrrying abut it t much. Yu are suppsed t stay ptimistic. After all, yu merely have a bit f fever. Cllege Entrance Examinatin is arund the crner, yu knw. S precius is time that we can't affrd t waste it. As scheduled, ur nline class will be held n Feb. 8. All f the classmates have access t the Internet curses wherever yu are. It is cnvenient fr us t study, isn't it? Is there anything I can d fr yu? Feel free t cntact me.
I sincerely expect that yu can make a quick recvery and return t nrmal.
Yurs,
Li Hua