上海宝山区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文

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上海宝山区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文 一、书信作文1．（2022·上海宝山·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假设你的好朋友李华最近沉迷于电脑游戏，无心学习。他的父母和老师都非常担心，作为他的好朋友，请你给他写一封信：表达你对他的担忧，告诫他沉迷电脑游戏的危害以及摆脱目前这种状况的方法。（信件格式已给）The following is for reference only1. lose oneself in ...2. be worried about ...3. communicate with ...___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、话题作文2．（2021·上海宝山·统考一模）Write at least 60 words about the topic “ An act of kindness”.(以“一个善意的举动”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）“ 赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。 意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同赠人一只玫瑰般微不足道， 但它带来的温馨都会在赠花人和爱花人的心底慢慢升腾、弥漫。因此，善待他人也是善待自己，请结合生活中的一次真实经历，谈一谈你对善良的看法。（注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，2. 照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。）The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考）have trouble with/doinggive a help hand....treat sb with kindness..._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2020·上海宝山·统考一模）Writing.write at least 60 words about the topic“A thank-you letter to  ”.（以“给……的一封感谢信”为题写 一篇不少于 60 个词的短文。信件格式已给，标点符号不占格。）在日常的生活与学习中有许多人曾经帮助或鼓励过我们，令我们时常心存感激。请选择一个对象写一封感谢信，并结合你们之间的真实经历谈一谈你为何要感谢他/她，说一说你当时的感受以及此时此刻想对他/她说的话。（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息。）The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）have difficulty in…encourage me to…It was…of you to…___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：1．例文：An act of kindnessHere is a touching moment in my life that l will never forget.l still remember that was a rainy day. l failed an exam, and l felt very upset. What’s worse, I didn’t bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. When l looked up, l saw a big umbrella and my deskmate, Mike. He said , “An exam can’t stand for everything. l believe you can get good grades next time.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up . After that, l studied harder and made great progress.It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should treat others with kindness, when have trouble with something.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时结合题目要求，进行作答写作，第一段引出话题“善意的举动”；第二段记叙一次善意的举动；第三段说明自己对善意的看法。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；记叙善意的举动这件事情，时态采用一般过去时为主，说明自己对于善良的看法，采用一般现在时为主。需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。2．例文：Dear Li Hua,I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to computer games. Spending too much time and energy on games is harmful to your health. I’m worried about you. If you lose yourself in games, you may become isolated from the real world and ignore the beauty and love in life.You can try other things to distract your attention. You can play basketball or take part in other sports with your friends. It can not only help you keep healthy, but also strengthen your friendship. Besides, you can communicate with your parents and friends, sharing you happiness and sorrow with them. Last but not least, you can read some interesting books to expand your knowledge in your spare time.I will be happy if you get rid of the game. Look forward to your good news.Yours,Lily【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求写信讲述自己对朋友的担忧，讲述玩电脑上瘾的弊端，并讲述摆脱游戏的方法。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，讲述游戏的危害和摆脱游戏的方法及建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。3．例文Dear Mrs Wang,No word can describe my thanks to you, my English teacher.When I first came into the middle school, I was poor at my English. One day, you asked me to go to your office after school. You listened to my problem patiently and encouraged me to keep studying hard. We made a plan for my English study. After that, you started to help me from time to time. Finally, I made great progress in English.        I thank you very much for all the help you has given me.【详解】1.题干解读：本书属于记叙文，通过真实存在的一件事谈谈你为何要感谢她。描述过去曾经发生的事情时，用一般过去时。并灵活使用所学的单词、短语以及句型使文章出彩。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。3.高分亮点：单词短语：ask sb to do, encourage sb to do sth, keep doing, make a plan for, start to do, from time to time以及make great progress。高分句型：When I first came into the middle school, I was poor at my English中when引导的时间状语从句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如ask sb to do, encourage sb to do sth, keep doing, make a plan for, start to do, from time to time以及make great progress等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。